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TheGreatTDFan · 11-14-2001, 03:47 AM

ok I have some other places and ones I've written by myself but this is my first for the public.
Also, jinny has a different boyfriend some people may not like him, but I do so I use him.

*The Division 9am*
Jinny walks through the door and sits at her desk expecting the cap to be all over her about being late. The cap comes out of her office and looks at jinny for a minute. "Exstead you're late." Cap then goes back in her office and sits down. Jinny just sits there glaring at the door then gets to work on the papers that are on her desk. As they are sitting there a man with blue eyes, light blonde hair, and a strong build walks in and goes over to jinny's desk. Jinny looks up at the hot guy standing at her desk "Can I help you with somethin?"
"I was wondering what to do with these?" the man replies holding up 2 parking tickets. Jinny tries not to laugh and says "down the hall on your right." The man walks down the hall and takes care of his tickets.
Jinny looks after him and gets back to work thinking 'nice a**'. Magda notices. "Who's that?" Jinny looks over at Mag "I have no clue he had some parking tickets to pay." Mag laughs "he's cute though."
Jinny thinking 'yeah I know' but says "yeah whatever I got work to do."

*Anchorside 6pm*
Jinny walks in and sits at the bar ordering a scotch as she sat down. She looks around and sees no cute guys so gives up and concentrates on the drink that is being set in front of her. Josh walks through the door. He walks over and sits on a stool near jinny, not noticing he's sitting next to the officer he talked to hours before. Jinny takes a sip of her drink and looks over at her new found friend. She starts to think 'hey haven't I seen him somewhere?' She turns to talk to him "Did you come to the police station today?"

TheGreatTDFan · 11-14-2001, 03:52 AM

should I do this? I'm not really sure if I should continue. If no one tells me if it's good or not I'm not going to continue.

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 11-14-2001, 04:02 AM

This fan-fiction is good so far. You write really well.
For all the Teddy Fans just come on over to my fan-fiction. lol I'm joking. This is a good story so far even without Teddy being in it. Sorry I'm a Major Theodore fan.

Talk to you later. Keep Writin. I'll read it as long as it doesn't get dysfunctional.

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"See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny

"Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny

TheGreatTDFan · 11-14-2001, 04:06 AM

I'm a huge teddy fan too but I also love this guy. wait till you get to know him. he's alot like teddy. I'm going to bed now but I'm going to continue the story tommorrow.

Ewan's My Man · 11-14-2001, 03:54 PM

This is soooooo good!!!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

sue z q · 11-14-2001, 08:18 PM

This is a great start!! I'm a Teddy fan, but hey, I'm keeping my options open...hehehe...LOL

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TheGreatTDFan · 11-15-2001, 12:48 AM

thanks for responding all you happy people! since everyone that responded is gonna at least read this part I'll write.

*Anchorside 6:05pm*
"Did you come to the police station today?" Josh looks around and realizes Jinny is talking to him. He looks over at Jinny. "Yeah I did I. Aren't you the officer I talked to?" Jinny smiles, "yeah Jinny Exstead. And you are?" Josh looks down and then looks back up saying quietly "Josh Cooper" Jinny realizes he must be shy so decides to back off a little. "So how long have you lived here?" she decides as a reasonable question. Josh looks down at his watch looking very nervous. "About six years. Look I have to go." He gets up quickly and walks out looking upset about something. Jinny shrugs and goes back to drinking.

*Jinny's Apartment 6:30am*
Jinny wakes up and looks at her clock deciding she won't have to rush today. She rolls out of bed and rubs her eyes walking into the closet. After she gets dressed she walks out of the closet and into the hall towords the kitchen. As Jinny walks down the hall the phone starts to ring. She walks over and picks it up with a sleepy "hello?" The man on the other line replies "uh hi I'm Josh I met you yesturday at the police station and then at the bar..." Jinny opens her eyes. "Oh hi... I didn't expect you to call so early... or at all really." Josh looks at his clock. "Oh I'm sorry I didn't realize it was so early. Tori usually wakes me up later." Jinny looks confused. "Who's Tori?"

Ok those of you who know this character DON'T TELL WHO TORI IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 11-15-2001, 01:03 AM

Cool Story so far. I don't know who the character is,but hm..Him mentioning a Tori so obviously it's a girl..and since he seems to be interested in Jinny it's not a girlfriend,and Tori wakes him up early..I'm betting it's....Hmm. His Daughter?? Little kids get up early. *Shrugs* Post more.

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"See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny

"Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 11-15-2001, 05:15 PM

I dunno either...I'm thinking maybe.............arf arf!! No clue!

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~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

*************************
DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

Ewan's My Man · 11-15-2001, 05:40 PM

This is really swell(I sound like a Brady kid...hehe). Scratch the swell and put great...no scratch great and put terrific(no I still sound like a Brady kid.) Great?...Excellent?...Wonderful?...Spectacular?...Ok..I could go on for days but I will shut up...just finish ok? Or else you will have me rambling on and on and on and on and I will be like the ENERGIZER BUNNY! Ok...can NEone tell I m dilarious(sp?)? I m gonna stop talkin now!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

[This message has been edited by #1JoFan (edited 11-15-2001).]

sue z q · 11-15-2001, 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by NancyRulz24:
I dunno either...I'm thinking maybe.............arf arf!! No clue!

LOL, that's what I'm thinking...or a daughter...hmm...the question of the day...lol

MMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEE!!!!

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 11-15-2001, 08:45 PM

cow.

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~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

*************************
DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

TheGreatTDFan · 11-15-2001, 09:13 PM

ok it's NOT a cow!!! lol I'm writing more now just give me a few more minutes to finish it up.

TheGreatTDFan · 11-15-2001, 09:47 PM

ok I'm really happy about this cause people are reading it and everyone at my school (except my teachers) says I'm a bad writer.

*Jinny's apartment*
Jinny is on the phone talking to Josh. "Who's Tori?" she says confused. Josh laughs. "oh that's right I never told you she's my..." Just then the phone gets disconnected. Jinny realizes he's gone and hangs up, then walks into the kitchen. She grabs a bagel and eats it. She then walks into her room wondering what happend with Josh to make him hang up. Jinny grabs her gun, holster, badge, and bag and leaves for work.

*Josh's Apartment Right before he hung up*
"oh that's right I never told you she's my..." Just then Tori ran in and accidently tore the cord out of the wall as she came. Josh kept talking before he realized Jinny was gone and looked down at Tori. "You just HAD to do that didn't you?" Tori just tilted her head to one side and looked cute.

ok so what do you think Tori is NOW???

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 11-15-2001, 10:11 PM

ARF!! ARF!!!

hehe MOO

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~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

*************************
DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

11-14-2001, 03:47 AM	#1
TheGreatTDFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 14, 2001 Posts: 24	My first fanfic on this board ok I have some other places and ones I've written by myself but this is my first for the public. Also, jinny has a different boyfriend some people may not like him, but I do so I use him. The Division 9am Jinny walks through the door and sits at her desk expecting the cap to be all over her about being late. The cap comes out of her office and looks at jinny for a minute. "Exstead you're late." Cap then goes back in her office and sits down. Jinny just sits there glaring at the door then gets to work on the papers that are on her desk. As they are sitting there a man with blue eyes, light blonde hair, and a strong build walks in and goes over to jinny's desk. Jinny looks up at the hot guy standing at her desk "Can I help you with somethin?" "I was wondering what to do with these?" the man replies holding up 2 parking tickets. Jinny tries not to laugh and says "down the hall on your right." The man walks down the hall and takes care of his tickets. Jinny looks after him and gets back to work thinking 'nice a*'. Magda notices. "Who's that?" Jinny looks over at Mag "I have no clue he had some parking tickets to pay." Mag laughs "he's cute though." Jinny thinking 'yeah I know' but says "yeah whatever I got work to do." Anchorside 6pm* Jinny walks in and sits at the bar ordering a scotch as she sat down. She looks around and sees no cute guys so gives up and concentrates on the drink that is being set in front of her. Josh walks through the door. He walks over and sits on a stool near jinny, not noticing he's sitting next to the officer he talked to hours before. Jinny takes a sip of her drink and looks over at her new found friend. She starts to think 'hey haven't I seen him somewhere?' She turns to talk to him "Did you come to the police station today?"

11-14-2001, 03:52 AM	#2
TheGreatTDFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 14, 2001 Posts: 24	should I do this? I'm not really sure if I should continue. If no one tells me if it's good or not I'm not going to continue.

11-14-2001, 04:02 AM	#3
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	This fan-fiction is good so far. You write really well. For all the Teddy Fans just come on over to my fan-fiction. lol I'm joking. This is a good story so far even without Teddy being in it. Sorry I'm a Major Theodore fan. Talk to you later. Keep Writin. I'll read it as long as it doesn't get dysfunctional. ------------------ "See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny "Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny

11-14-2001, 04:06 AM	#4
TheGreatTDFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 14, 2001 Posts: 24	I'm a huge teddy fan too but I also love this guy. wait till you get to know him. he's alot like teddy. I'm going to bed now but I'm going to continue the story tommorrow.

11-14-2001, 03:54 PM	#5
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	This is soooooo good!!! ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

11-14-2001, 08:18 PM	#6
sue z q funger agger LOL Senior Member Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: CA Posts: 1,687	This is a great start!! I'm a Teddy fan, but hey, I'm keeping my options open...hehehe...LOL ------------------ Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. Check out my Nancy McKeon Links site! http://www.geocities.com/nancymckeonlinkssite Or my Site for Christian Teens! http://www.geocities.com/christianteenssite And from your vice president of the "I Live on the Internet Club" and the co-off-topic queen: ^^~~~God Bless~~~^^

11-15-2001, 12:48 AM	#7
TheGreatTDFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 14, 2001 Posts: 24	thanks for responding all you happy people! since everyone that responded is gonna at least read this part I'll write. Anchorside 6:05pm "Did you come to the police station today?" Josh looks around and realizes Jinny is talking to him. He looks over at Jinny. "Yeah I did I. Aren't you the officer I talked to?" Jinny smiles, "yeah Jinny Exstead. And you are?" Josh looks down and then looks back up saying quietly "Josh Cooper" Jinny realizes he must be shy so decides to back off a little. "So how long have you lived here?" she decides as a reasonable question. Josh looks down at his watch looking very nervous. "About six years. Look I have to go." He gets up quickly and walks out looking upset about something. Jinny shrugs and goes back to drinking. Jinny's Apartment 6:30am Jinny wakes up and looks at her clock deciding she won't have to rush today. She rolls out of bed and rubs her eyes walking into the closet. After she gets dressed she walks out of the closet and into the hall towords the kitchen. As Jinny walks down the hall the phone starts to ring. She walks over and picks it up with a sleepy "hello?" The man on the other line replies "uh hi I'm Josh I met you yesturday at the police station and then at the bar..." Jinny opens her eyes. "Oh hi... I didn't expect you to call so early... or at all really." Josh looks at his clock. "Oh I'm sorry I didn't realize it was so early. Tori usually wakes me up later." Jinny looks confused. "Who's Tori?" Ok those of you who know this character DON'T TELL WHO TORI IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

11-15-2001, 01:03 AM	#8
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Cool Story so far. I don't know who the character is,but hm..Him mentioning a Tori so obviously it's a girl..and since he seems to be interested in Jinny it's not a girlfriend,and Tori wakes him up early..I'm betting it's....Hmm. His Daughter?? Little kids get up early. Shrugs Post more. ------------------ "See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny "Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny

11-15-2001, 05:15 PM	#9
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	I dunno either...I'm thinking maybe.............arf arf!! No clue! ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Amy~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com AIM- MacNCheeze565 SFPDInspectorCD "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and bth-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head. ************************* DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

11-15-2001, 05:40 PM	#10
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	This is really swell(I sound like a Brady kid...hehe). Scratch the swell and put great...no scratch great and put terrific(no I still sound like a Brady kid.) Great?...Excellent?...Wonderful?...Spectacular?...Ok..I could go on for days but I will shut up...just finish ok? Or else you will have me rambling on and on and on and on and I will be like the ENERGIZER BUNNY! Ok...can NEone tell I m dilarious(sp?)? I m gonna stop talkin now! ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! [This message has been edited by #1JoFan (edited 11-15-2001).]

11-15-2001, 08:45 PM	#12
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	cow. ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Amy~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com AIM- MacNCheeze565 SFPDInspectorCD "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and bth-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head. ************************* DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

11-15-2001, 09:13 PM	#13
TheGreatTDFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 14, 2001 Posts: 24	ok it's NOT a cow!!! lol I'm writing more now just give me a few more minutes to finish it up.

11-15-2001, 09:47 PM	#14
TheGreatTDFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 14, 2001 Posts: 24	ok I'm really happy about this cause people are reading it and everyone at my school (except my teachers) says I'm a bad writer. Jinny's apartment Jinny is on the phone talking to Josh. "Who's Tori?" she says confused. Josh laughs. "oh that's right I never told you she's my..." Just then the phone gets disconnected. Jinny realizes he's gone and hangs up, then walks into the kitchen. She grabs a bagel and eats it. She then walks into her room wondering what happend with Josh to make him hang up. Jinny grabs her gun, holster, badge, and bag and leaves for work. Josh's Apartment Right before he hung up "oh that's right I never told you she's my..." Just then Tori ran in and accidently tore the cord out of the wall as she came. Josh kept talking before he realized Jinny was gone and looked down at Tori. "You just HAD to do that didn't you?" Tori just tilted her head to one side and looked cute. ok so what do you think Tori is NOW???

11-15-2001, 10:11 PM	#15
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	ARF!! ARF!!! hehe MOO ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Amy~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com AIM- MacNCheeze565 SFPDInspectorCD "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and bth-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head. ************************* DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com