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this takes place after jinny and teddy break up
it was a tuesday night jinny did not have work the next day she wanted to go to the bar or have a drink but did not she finally fell asleep the next day laying in her bed jinny woke up and turned on her scanner to see what was going on police officer:yes we have a report of a shooting on 125 main a woman jinny h my gosh mag!want more |
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Borderline Amazing
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uuhhh...yeah! i want more...NOW
------------------ §*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§ and Karli is Karli Chica Bungalo Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!! Crazy bitch~Magda **LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren) Don't mess with crazy people!!~Me Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!! GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO My newNancy McKeon site..Check it out! *singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out) ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ please e-mail or IM me at: Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com |
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jinny quickley pulls on her clothes grabs her badge and gun gets in her car and speeds with her cop lights on to mags house she arrives she sees only one police car is there no ambulence she calls an ambunce it arrives and after it leaves with magda jinny starts to question cap arrives
cap:jinny what are you doin here howd ya know jin:i was listening to my scanner cap:hows mag jin:I dont know im still quetioning omg ben runs up to the police wheres her kid police:kid? there is no kid jinny runs in mags apartment and looks around and found a ransome note whatchathink |
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Borderline Amazing
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wow! this is great! ok, i have a question...could you PLEASE use periods and capital letters at the beginning and ending of sentences...it is really easy to lose me..just ask people i talk to online
![]() ------------------ §*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§ and Karli is Karli Chica Bungalo Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!! Crazy bitch~Magda **LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren) Don't mess with crazy people!!~Me Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!! GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO My newNancy McKeon site..Check it out! *singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out) ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ please e-mail or IM me at: Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com |
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i'll try no guarentees
(jinny runs out) cap heres a ransome note it says i need 1 million or the deal is off i kill little boy. cap h gosh where do we drop off the ransome?jin:it says he will contact the sfpd.i am goin to see how mags doin. cap:me to ill callthe station. tell them to call me if this guy calls, by the way any prints? jinny:no want more? please visit my webpages on nancy http:home.talkcity.com/route66/aeysh/ www.nancy-mckeon-rocks.cityslide.com sorry i did not use capitals ill try next time.if you reply ill post more tonight.probably |
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Borderline Amazing
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More!
------------------ §*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§ and Karli is Karli Chica Bungalo Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!! Crazy bitch~Magda **LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren) Don't mess with crazy people!!~Me Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!! GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO My newNancy McKeon site..Check it out! *singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out) ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ please e-mail or IM me at: Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com |
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in the hospital
jin:magda remeraz nurse:3rd floor room 12 jinny runs for the steps |
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I'll Cover You
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This is good...like Nancy McKeon Forever said...periods and all that is good...I get lost allllll the time!
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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cap:thanx (yells to jinny )there is an elevator
jinny:steps are faster (and runs up the steps) they both get upstairs and go in mags room nurse rry no one inn while i injectjinny holds up her badge jin:will she be alright nurse:ya, shell be fine in a few weeks. just dont say anything upsettin to her. patients like this are more likely to suffer deppression and it will slow down her healing |
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A and J
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Lets go for longer sectiosn!! Yaya....but other than that! GREEEEAATTTTTTT!! oh, and periods and captial letters are great!
quotes would be cool too......lol
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jinny:hey mag
mag:jin wheres ben jin:he uh well he cap:uh jin:he said he was going to stay with gabriel today mag h, okaycap how ya holdin up mag:they gave me some pills to knock the pain outyhe problem is they knock me out jinny:hey look on the bright side you wont have to hear the caps voice for awhile cap:jinny jin:well.. mag:jin stop while your ahead mag:this is so boring jinny well here i brought you a present mag:the tv remote |
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*¤*SHANE WEST FAN*¤*
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More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
------------------ people are who people are..youre born and you die pretty much the same person-all the rest is just window dressing-Jinny01 Nancy McKeon rulz |
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jin
laughs)well ben wants you to feel better. i got a case i think ya know which one. ill be back tonightcap:i have togo to get some rest station...... phone rings jinny:sfpd jinny extead man:i hear your that wamans partner that got shot jinny:ya man:is she gonna be alright jin:yes man k i am the one that shot her dont bother tracing me im on a stolen cell phonejinny:what do ya want is ben ok (motion to the cap she puts her speaker on and listens) man:he will be if ya get my stough here ill give ya 30 seconds to talk to him man:get over here come on ben crying) he....hellojin:ben its me jinny ben:jinny jinny:yeah your moms fine we'll gety ya outta there soon let me talk to that man ben:his names richard jin:THANKS ben jin:whatdo ya want man:look i got nothin against your friend its against you hang up......jinny pacing in caps office jin:richard richard i cant think of a rich thats mad at me |
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cap:it might not be his real name
jin:i still should check around do ya have that cell phone number cap:yeah here richard:what do ya want jin:why ya angry with me richard:i cant tell that will give it away jin:WHERE DO YA WANT THE MONEY? WANT MORE? |
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