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It WAS CHRISTMAS EVE
it had actually snowed mag could not believe it jinny was working that day but mag was not she woke up mag:gosh i forgot bens present (she had hidden it at work so he would not find it so she dropped ben off at gabriels. and went to the division the cap saw her and came out cap:you dont have work today mag:i know i forgot bens present . cap hmag:wheres jin cap:i was so supprised she did not show up today shes never late(sarcastically)i called her house no answer just then caps phone rang maybe thats her mag waited to see cap flicked the switch so they both could here jins excuse police:we found a car in the river the id was in it it slipped on the ice jinny extead we did not find the body the window was open so the body could have came out the window but with how cold it is she probably is not alive police ?cap:yeah........um thanx jinny was floting down the river her head bleeding she woke up grabbed a log floting in the water to hold her she was in and out of conciesness as she floted down some back waters mag h my gosh cap (mag starts crying)cd:whats wrong cap:the police found a carin the river its jinnys angela h my goshcd:did they find a body cap shook her head no mag starts walking out cap:where are you going mag:to look for jin she would do the same for me(she leaves what do u think |
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You stopped...it's against the law to stop on fan fics you know...now I must go find your favorite tree and hug it to death.
In other words more please! Oh and the hug it to death comes from my nickname at school...Hug-A-Tree. Yes I do hug trees! ------------------ From "There's A Hero" by Billy Gilman-- "Go on and trust yourself, you can ride the wind, your gonna take your dreams, where you've never been" Kate-Billy Gilman's Best Fan EVER!!! AIM-LuDelgado3434 IM me any time. MSNIM-billy_gilman_obsessed_freak@hotmail.com |
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ill post more now
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jinny finally was awake enough to know atleast where she was but was to weak and cold to swim to shore she had hit her head so hard it wa snot looking goodshe knew mag would come looking for her she pulled out her badge and threw her identidy card on the shore of the water she passed out again
i promise i will write more in 15 min. [This message has been edited by aeysh1 (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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i'm waiting!!!! lol
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i am back ready to listen to more?
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mag got in her car and drove alongside the river she could not see anything sinse jin was in backwaters
cap:cd angela i want you to question the whittnesses see if they saw a body come up then help mag look jinny snapped out of it again and tried to make herself stay awake and think what she was going to do the cap called up a hilicopter pilot and told him to circle the area a few times i am still writing more right now but what do u think |
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jinny remembered her cell phone she pulled it out did not work she took off the battery wiped it dry the bestshe could and let it sit on the log to dry a little
dont worry ill post more in 10 min |
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as mag was looking for jin she started crying thinking eather she had frose to death
or was freazing which earged her to keep looking then jinny remembered her gun she pulled it out took out the cartridge and dried it off she shot the gun up in the air once magda thought she heard somethin but could not be sure so she called the cap to get her a rescue boat jinny did not know how bad she was she was sure hypothermia would set in soon she got to a calm part of the water and tryed to paddle to shore she made it after awhile of laying there she shot her gun again more to come tonight [This message has been edited by aeysh1 (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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c'mon I'll seriously find your favorite tree and hug it to death...at least if you don't post more...and by the way, what is your favorite tree's name? My favorite tree's name is Allison (joking...)
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this time magda was sure she heard somethin.
the cap showed up with the boats cap:anything? mag:i heard two gunshots cap:lets go jinny heard a car a little further down river she figured it was not LA but another city so she crawled back on her log and went in the river then her cell phone started working again the battery was low though jinny dialed up the caps number cause she figured mag would not answer cap:mckafferty jinny:hey cap its jinny (weak voice) cap:are you ok jin:what do u think i am on a log floatind down some backwaters listen cap i am doin so well but its beangreat maybe youll see me around tell mag goodbye if you dont find me mag:who is that cap:jin mag grabs the phone its dead jinny passed out she woke up by bumping into a boat at a harbor she crawled up on the deck and saw a bar crawled in and said someone help me call a doctor a man walked over a doctor he set jinnys head on his knees doc meone call an ambulence i need blankets you get over hear you to rub her legs or arms with your hands we need to warm her up itll take the ambulence awhile (the road was icey)get somethin clean to put on her headdoc:whats your name jin:jinny im going to sleep doc:no you need to stay awake he shook her a little to help her stay awake doc:where do you work jinny:call this number tell them you found me the bartender called cap:mckafferty bartender:yeah we found a jinny we dont know her last name cap:is she alright bartender:shes over half dead if thats what you mean we have a doc in here gives her the address an ambulence is on its way [This message has been edited by aeysh1 (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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magda angela cap and cd junped in a car and were on their way the saw an ambulence coming from the place and figured jinny so they followed it at the arrival to the hospital they saw the emts pull jinny out on a stretcher she did not look good they followed in when they saw a doctor come out they asked how she was doing doc:well the cut on her head is pretty bad she lost allot of blood we have not looked for other injuries yet although i think she pinched a nerve or somethin she did not move her legs at all
maG:can that be cured it depends on the patients will physical theropy will help we are stitching up her hand she must have punched through the window nurse:doctor we need you in the or doctor leaves captain sighs and sits on the chair |
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peaceout.
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Oh and more fan fic please! |
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