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It was a few days after Christmas and everyone was all back at work. "I can't believe were back at work again" Jinny said. Magda looked over "Well New Years is coming up soon and we have the next day off...I think" Magda says confused. Jinny shakes her head and sits down. " I'm glad to be at work" Angela said while looking at some files. "Your glad to be at work?" Jinny said.Angela nodded then shruged. "Well, how did your Christmas go everyone?" Kate said as she came out of her office. " I spent mine with Casey, John and Dad. For once there was no 'cat and dog' fight!" Jinny said. "Me, Ben and Gabriel went out for Christmas Eve Dinner" Magda said. CD responded " I just stayed home alone with Paul" Angela looked at CD and then said "Me and Daniel stayed home and opened presents" The Captain nodded "It seems like you all had a good Christmas"
Sorry if it stinks...Well lets see what ya can add! ![]() ------------------ Lisa Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website! http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001 Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts.... |
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I just got up so my eyes are fuzzy.I'll post more at 4e/3c.
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Sorry it took longer then I said.My mom got
on the phone at 3 and just got off. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kate looks down at her watch then back up.”Well we have cases,Cd, Angela Murder. Jinny ,Magda Murder.”said Kate as she handed out the case files.Cd and Angela leave. I need a drink,No No I cant drink on the job,Well one sip wont hurt.Thought Jinny to herself.Magda taps Jinny on the shoulder.”Earth to Jinny.”said Magda.”What.”said Jinny comming back into reality.”Cases.”said Magda waving the case file at Jinny.”Oh Yeah..I ..Um..Forgot something..In my locker I’ll met you in the car.”said Jinny as she leaves. Jinny walks into the bathroom and over to her locker she bends down on the ground then looks around to see if anyone was behind her.Jinny opens the locker then takes out a bottle of licker.Jinny looks at the bottle for a minute.I should not be doing this but I never get drunk on only one sip.Thought Jinny to herself as she opens the bottle and takes one small sip then puts the lid back on then shoves it back into her locker and walks out of the room. “Sir could you tell me what happened?”asked Cd as she takes out her notepad.”Yes this guy came up from behind me grab me and said if I moved he’d shoot,Well then my wife, God rest her soul,Came to see what was going on well when the guy saw her he shot her five times.”said a guy about mid 40’s tall with bule eyes and blond hair.”could you tell me what these guys looked liked.”I dont know they were wearing masks.”Could you come down to the station around 2?”asked Angela.”Yes.”said the guy as Cd and Angela leave. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ok Lisa your next. |
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Jinny and Magda have arrived at the crime scene. "Now can you tell us all that happened" Jinny asked a woman. "Well I was coming out of that store over there when I heard some shots. Sounded like it was from a gun" The woman responded. "Anything else?" Magda asked. "Then I looked over there and saw my son on the floor!" the woman said while starting to cry a little. It was now 2:00 and the man arrived at the station. "I'm here" the man said. "Okay, great" C.D said --------------------------------------------- So sorry it's not a lot. I came home from a block party at 12:00 am and Im still half asleep here cause I didnt get to bed 'till one. (sorry. off topic) Well your turn! |
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CD and Angela walk into a room to talk.Cd opens the door and walks in the others soon
follow.”Please sit down.”said Angela as she points to a chair and he sits.”First whats your name?”asked Cd.”Kent Stone.”said Ken.”Well could you work with an Artist?”asked Cd. “Yes.”said Kent.”Very well,Take this note and go down to the first floor.”said Cd as she hands the man the note then he leaves. Later that night at The Division Kate is going over a case with Cd and Angela.Magda is doing some paper work at her desk and Jinny lost deep in thought.Magda looks at the clock then stands up and walks over to Jinny’s desk.”Jinny time to leave.”said Magda. Jinny does not answer.”Hey Jin.”said Magda touching Jinny on the shoulder.”huh.”said Jinny looking up at Magda.”Time to go.”said Magda.”Oh Yeah.”said Jinny.”Hey Jin you ok?”asked Magda.”Yeah Yeah Im fine.”said Jinny as she leaves. An hour later Jinny walks out of a bar drunk and can bearly walk straight.Jinny turns a corner when..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ok Your turn.I thought you could decide what happens to Jinny next. |
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awww you leave me with the cliffhanger!! LOL
--------------------------------------------- An UN-known man grabbed her and pushed her up against the wall. 'Stay and nobody will get hurt' he said. 'Who are you?' Jinny said while stumbling over to him. 'I told you to stay there Exstead' the man said while pulling something out of his pocket. 'Whatcha got there?' Jinny said as she leans over him. But before anything else happened the un-known man pulled the trigger and hit Jinny in the leg and arm. She fell down. The alcohal was starting to wear off a little and she now noticed she was hit, on the floor,and bleeding...a lot! Then a woman was passing by and she saw Jinny on the floor. 'Oh my, oh my!! Somebody call the ambulance!!' the woman yelled. 'Oh heck! I'll do it!'. She pulled out her cell phone and called 911. Within 5 minutes the ambulance was there and they took away Jinny....... --------------------------------------------- You decide what happens next! [This message has been edited by Division_Fan_Lisa (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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Before I add more later today I have one question.Is anyone reading this?Anyone at all?
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I was wondering that too... ANY TAKERS?? LOL. But really, anyone at all?
------------------ Lisa Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website! http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001 Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts.... [This message has been edited by Division_Fan_Lisa (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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LOL, i am and i love it!!!!!!! sorry i didn'trespond sooner! Aweseom please continue!!!
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I am so reading this and so loving it. Post More As Soon as You can
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Lisa Gr8 cliffhanger I think you'll like my
cliffhanger.He He He(Devil horns stiking up on my head) LOL;o) ********************************************* Later that night at The Division Kate is in her office looking over a case file when the phone ring.Kate picks up the phone.”McCafferty,Yes.What is she alright?I’ll be right there thank- you doctor.”said Kate as she hangs up the phone.Jinny what did you get yourself into now.Thought Kate as she picked up her phone to call Magda,Cd and Angela to meet her at the hospital. Magda runs through the hospital till she spots the Captain and the others over in the waitting room.Cd is sitting down on a sofa sipping some coffee,Kate keeps looking at the clock on the wall then down at her watch and Angela is reading a book.”How’s Jin?” asked Magda while catching her breath.”We haven’t heard anything yet.”said Angela looking up from reading her book.”What happened?”asked Magda as she sits down next to Cd on the sofa.”She was shot.”said Cd as she takes a sip of coffee. Two hours later they have still heard nothing.Magda looks at her watch then back up. “Well its 12:00am.”said Magda.”Its new year’s eve only 12 hours till the new year.”said Angela.”Yeah I only hope Jinny gets to live to see it.”said Magda as she leans her head back on the sofa.”What could be taking so long?”asked Cd.Just as she says that a doctor comes over to them.”Exstead.”he said.”Yes.”said Kate.”How is she?”asked Magda.”Well her blood alcohol level was above what its suppose to be.”said the doctor as he looks down at his clipboard.”Well is she alive?”asked Magda getting impatient.”Jinny Exstead is..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ K your next [This message has been edited by BlairandJo (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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OMG!!! post more soon. I can't wait any longer.
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that was great!! Heres my part:
--------------------------------------------- "Jinny Exstead is still alive, her only problem is her drinking. She has to stop if she wants to live. And I do mean she HAS to STOP" The doctor continued as he shook his head. Magda sighs "Well at least shes still alive." "Now her only problem is to stop all of this drinking! It really is ruining her life" Kate said. "She will be released in 3 days okay?" The doctor said. "That will be fine" Kate said as she rubbed her forhead and sat down. The doctor slightly smiled and went back into Jinny's room. --------------------------------------------- Sorry its not alot...k ur turn |
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I could have been killed.Thought Jinny to herself as she sits up in her bed.”Ouch.”said
Jinny as she slowly sat down.”Well I’d say ouch too.”said Magda as she walks into the room.”Hey.”said Jinny as Magda walks over to Jinny’s bed.”Jin we need to talk.”said Magda.”About what?”asked Jinny.”Your drinking,Now Jin listen the doctor said....”said Magda getting cut off.”Mag I’ve been thinking sence its New Years eve That my New Years Resolution should be to get some help to stop drinking.”Said Jinny as Magda’s face lights up.”Jin thats great.”said Magda they here some clapping comming from outside. Kate,Cd and Angela walk into the room.”I think I could find you some help,They might even have something at the hospital.”said Kate.”When do I get out of here?”asked Jinny. “In three days.”said Anglea.”I think we should all leave and let you get some rest.”said Magda as she leaves.Cd and Angela follow.”Jinny im proud of you,I never thought I’d say that but I am,You saying you have a problem then doing something about it.”said Kate as Jinny looked at her in shock.”Thanks.”said Jinny as Kate leaves.I only hope I can do it.Thought Jinny to herself. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ok your turn;o) |
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Jinny lays back in her bed and thinks about what has happened. The only thing she remembered was when the ambulance was taking her away and waking up here in her room.
After three days it was time for Jinny to leave. "Okay, your ready to go now Ms. Exstead. You will need somebody to take you home though" the doctor said as Magda walked into her room. "Hey" Magda said. Jinny smiled weakly. "She's taking me home, is that okay doc?" Jinny asked. "Thats fine" the doctor replied. Jinny slowly got up and walked out with Magda.They both got into her car "I really am happy that you are going to stop drinking that is, if you keep your promise" Magda siad while starting the car. "Hopefully" Jinny said. "Jinny, do you want to know what the doctor told us?" Magda asked as she got up to a red light. "Okaaaay" Jinny said as she looked at Magda. "You have to stop drinking if you want to--"Magda got cut off by Jinny "Live" Jinny added... --------------------------------------------- Your turn!
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