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(this takes place a few days after intervention)
Jinny sat in her house trying to make herself stay away from that bar other thoughts came through her head some of the other reasons for her problem (which u will hear about later) finally she decided to go get her mail it was Monday on friday had been the intervention. she got the mail and when she came back up to the house she dropped 1 letter on her kitchen floor she picked it up it was from the government she ripped it open inside it read dear miss extead we are sending you this letter to notify you that the man in wich you witnessed the crime he and his partners are in custody.you are now able to return to your previous identidy joana merrie polniazek. she could not believe what she was reading. she quickley packed and wanted to get there as soon as possible she wrote a note and left it in her appartment incase they got wooried enough theyed search and left it with the letter on the counter she figured she would call them on her cell phone on the way she got in her car and left once she got out on the rode she realized she forgot the cigarett car lighter charger and her battery was dead . all the women were having a hard time concentrating on their work thinking about jinny even the captain(they still dont know)cd had filled the captain in.magda kept wanting to call jinny but was afraid jinny would be really mad at her so she decided to wait awhile for jinny mto cool down.but all through the day she kept thinking to herself what if jinny got in a car crash what if she went to the bar but still did not call.then the captain called her in askjed her about her case the said hows jinny holding up.Magda:i dont know i have not called her cap h well then go keep working on the case jinny decided to stay the night at a hotel magda finally decided to call when jinny mwas not home she told herself not to worry but that night she did not get much sleep tuesday afrernoon at lunch at ancorside magda asked the bartender when he last saw magda.bartender:well last thursday i think he said magda got some food to go go in har car and drove past jins place no car.she was starting to worry she had checked that morning too she also checked after work no jinny jinny arrived there and decided just to pretend she was a customer and see if they recogniized her she went in right away mrs.g came over how can i help you? jinny had to stopher self from hugging mrs g no just browsing mrs g looked at her strange like she recognized her then she saw natilie and tootie and blair looking at the new fashion wear she had she was going to wait till they were all together while she waited she noticed her section was still there. that day magda said to the captain i have been calling jinny since mon. night no answer cap:maybe she just does not want to Mag:i have also drove by her house three times a day no car i asked the landlord if he had seen her he said she gave him her rent check early on monday morning cap:hmm mag:cap i am to worried for hmm where could she be? cap:well that would make her missing for over 24 hours wait have you talked with her dad and brothers mag:yeah they have not seen or talked with her cap:cd angela come here cd:yeah cap cap:i want you 2 to search jinnys house no one has seen her since monday morning angela :we are on it finally they were all speaking together jinny walks up dont you know who i am she pulls her hair back and holds it so its up blair:j......no Jinny:yeah nat:what are u doin here your not sposed to be here jinny :yeah i can i got the letter mrs.g hugs her should i go on? |
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well i go on since i am bored
cd and angela came back into the divisaion we found this by her open window cap:what is it? cd:a note cap:well angela:hey i guess u got worried i was going to call u anyway the letter laying by this note should explain it see ya! jinny mad:wheres the letter cd:thats the thing there was no letter since it was laying by an open window it might have blown out cap did u look angela:yes we could not find it cap:well i guess we will wait a little and see if she calls jinny or jo:i cant believe you are still livin together blair;WE ARE NOT STILL i am married jo:what kind of a air hea....... mrs.g:dont start now you just got here jinny;MRS.G can i use your phone mrs.g:but you just go here we should talk mrs g:its just that i kinda left without telling anybody mrs.g:then you better jinny:thanx she dialed magdas number no answer she dialed the division cap:mckafferty(the reason she did not dial magdas is that she had got a new line) jINNY:hey cap this is jinny cap:jinny where have you been we searched your house there was no letter magda cd and angela heARD jinnys name and came in. mag:is that jinny captain shook her head yes mag:well is she alright cap gave her the phone and flicked the switch so all of them could hear mag:jinny where have you been where are you?! jinny:i am in peaksgill mag eeksgiljinny:its in ny mag: what r you doing there jinny:well i was put in wittness protection when i was 20 and i just got a letter that those people are in custody and i am jo polniazek again if you want to drive down and check up on me go ahead cause i know u would anyway heres the address______________ got to go bye mag:wait jinny she hung up welli do have off the next three days pluss the weekend that gives me plenty of time cd:well so do angela and me what do you say angela want to see this angela:i am there they all look at the captain well that other police captain is taking over the next few days i was going to visit amanda but she has other plans mag:is that a yes cap:why not cd:well after the shifts over lets all go home pack and meet back here at1:00pm cap:1:00? oh yeah i forgot we only have half shift dont we ok wanna here more |
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It's an interesting concept. I can't wait to see where it heads.
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ok heres more
they checked the number to see where in peeksgill she was calling from.they got it at 1 o they met back at the station aND TOOK the 2:30 plane to nynat:jo or jinny or whatever guess what my job is jinny:working here nat:and on the peeksgill paper mrsg:whats your job jo jinny:i am inspector blair:figures tootie oo, tell us about some of your cases jinny k heres a funny one to gross blair outok this guy calls up and says he has just killed his wife but he cant find the body until we look in the refrigarator nicely carved blair:thats hidious jinny:i think its hillarious mrs.g:lets move on re you married jinny:no way! on the plane _______________________ mag:i wonder what jins doing right now cap robably laghing that we are stuck on a crummy plane like thiscd:well we are getting off in ten minutes then we dont get on the next plane for another1/2 hour mag:im going to call jinny pilot:we r now landing please remain seated they got off magda took out her cell phone and called mrsg ?mag:hi is jinny there mrsg:are you a friend of hers mag:actually i am her partner mrsg h r you coming down to see her yes mrsg:great we can tell eachother stories about jo i meen jinnymag:laughs cani speak with her mrsg:sure jo or jinny or whatever jinny mag:hey jin its mag we will be down there around 7:00 okay jinny k see u thencd says somethin jinny:was that cd mag:yeah she angela and the cap.....i meanher and angela jinny :the caps coming with you oh well just tell her to keep her distencemag:laughs a little see you then jinny:bye blair:well jinny:well aparently they are coming down here blair:they jinny:shut up already tootie:whos they jinny me peopleblair:i got to get my hair reset my makeup be back in 1 hour or so jinny:they wont care if your hairdo and face matches your brain mrsg:jo......thats enough blair marches upstairsblair:well i guess even without my makeup i wont look half as scaryasyouandgoes to put on her makeup WANT MORE? |
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aesh? I recognize that name, ur a memeber of the board where I posted that stupid little thing about Jo going into the... oooooh... Now I know why we have the same idea... funny thing, I was gonna suggest that someone were to write this... Cant wait to see what happens!!!! MORE MORE MORE!
------------------ ~co-Queen Dana Jinny Exstead of the Asparagus Bobs, Pigs, Penguins, Coke, Insanity, Cows, and Dam Lugers-- (not offiliated with Anthony, Monkeyman, or Juicy Juice)~ Well since Britt is a Jineddy (Jinny and Teddy) and Morganne is a Jinanybody (Jin and Anybody) I'm a JinMag, now you can figure that one out on your own... OH! And Jenn is a JinKate! Isn't that the most interesting tidbit of information ever? *Me, Britt, and Morganne are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators... You know who you are!* On April 24, 2008, Kaley and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha! DaDanceGirl88@aol.com Dana Jinny Exsteads Web Profile... I live in a town, with this street, named Hoe Avenue. Seriosly. |
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mrsg:well i better start getting food reddy those planes have the worst food
blair:thats why i take first class i have never ever gone on anything lower mag:well cap we are almost there it is five thirty our plane lands at 6. cd:i wonder who that lady was you were talking too mag:me to but i cant wait to hear her stories angela:stories? mag:laughs she said we could tell eachother stories about jin angel:i wonder what she was like there cap:we will soon find out pilot:this plane will be landing in 20 minutes blair:well i got my hair and makeup ready now jo give me a straight answer how many people are coming more important are they men that way i can decide on my wordrobe jinny:you will never change will you still so spoiled the date on your carton would read bc blair h........turn..blueif your on tonight check back tonight i will post more! ps thanks for the idea |
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magda:finally we are here 6
o accoarding to this it will take a little over 20 minutes to get to peeksgillangela:good i just want to sit down and listen to the lady tell us stories mag:if jinny will lett her magdas cell phone rings magda ![]() jinny h hey mag are you off the plane mag:yeah just getting our luggage we cant wait to sit down the food on the plane was so gross i did not eat much jinny:well mrs g is making you guys somethin to eat right now it will be ready at 7 mag:you guys they have food waiting for us cd:good mag:whose mrs.g shes the lady u talked to earlier got 2 go bye mag k we all got our bags lets hit itin the rented car angela:gosh i cant wait to get their mag:here it is they park the car get out and ring the doorbell blair you must be uh........jinnys friends mag:yep jinny:blair get out of the way come in u guys so nice of u to show up cap jinny:u guys get out here so u can meet them jinny:well first off this is (points to mrs g) blair:blair warner jinny:natilie green,tootie ramsey,mrs.g you guys this cap. kate mckafferty (says it in a discusted voice) my partner magda remeraz,angela reide,cd lorenzo short for candice de.well thats enough talk lets eat blair:dont blame me for the hamburgers i wanted something more goremea jinny:yeah that will give you stomoch pump magda giggles mrs.g:i had my handfull with those two jinny:well if blair had not been such a bad faker we wouldnt of had to live together cap:what do u mean mrs.g:thefirst day jo came she was going to punch blair out i dont know how many times i had to stop her anyway jo is from the bronx u know well blair was teasing her that no guy would ever go out with jo and blair was going to prove it to her and jo made fake ids to get them into the bar then she hotwired the school van and tootie and nat came with to watch through the window anyway their was a guy they were talking to and he was police but they di not know he guessed blair was in secritearial school the way she dressed and she got mad i came in to get them and they go caught were put on probation and hd to work in the kitchen to pay it off blair:jo did u know i bought eastland our generosoty never ends jinny:arent u all hearts well u guys we had better talk tonight i am going to be gone tommorrow to settle somethin at home angela:your going back to LA jinny:no the bronx cap:what do u mean settle somethin jinny h nevermind ill be right back she goes upstairsmrs.g:i know what she means right before she went to be jinny someone beat up her friend really bad i remember how mad she was she does not lay empty threats one day she almost put a bomb in the school we have to stop her blair:u know jo mrs.g she can beat up langlys wrestlers jinny comes down jinny:i am going to borrow a motorcycle from my friend i have to get it tonight he will be gone tommorrow she grabbed a hamburger and left she was back a 1/2 hour later mag:jin you were mjust as bad then as you are now we heard the stories jinny:cap have you ever rode a bike mag:well no but jinny:good come on i'll give you a ride cap:no jinny:come on you chicken :fine jinny tosses here a helmet from inside they hear jinny start the |
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mag:i cant believe the captain went
they hear her scream they go outside to see the captain holdin on for dear life and screaming angels:come on you guys get in the car lets follow them they ended up at an old parking lot where a gang was leaning against a porsh jinny lets the cap off mag and everyone get out of the car cap:we should stop them jinny: they have guns jin:i know how to get the car she walks up to them hey guys i am with the police dont worry i wont report youbut i dare you a race your harleymy bike on that field(the field was very rocky and hilled) mag:are you crazy jin:shut up i get the car if i win and i wont report you but if i loose i help you keep the car so are you afraid to race a girl gangmember1:your on jinny:say go gang member2:go! they took the path around the field the member 1 kept bumping her bike with his trying to tip it then jin did the same he hit a rock hard with his tire his front tire slammemed into jinnys bike causing hers to tumble and tip over a few time on the rocks although her arm was hurt and her leg was too she go back on faster and won before the one with the gun (he racer) could pull his gun jinny kicked her leg under him and grabbed the gun she told mag to drive the porsh and follow her they returned the car and went home but could not change jins mind |
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so that nightthey tried to convince jin not to go to the bronx but couldnt
that night she grabbed a root beer out of the fridge (it was the kind that is in those bottles that look like beer bottles)she took it upstairs sat on the bed and while looking at a magazine drank some magda cd angela and the cap came upstairs to get ready to go to bed mag saw jinny in there but jin did not see her after she snd angela and everyone else saw her take a drink she walked in jinny put the soda behind her mag:jinny u know your not sposed to have beer jin:what beer cap h stop trying to fool us we saw you drink it pulls it out from behind jinnys backjinny h i didnt know i couldnt have thatmag:no beer not any kind jinny:not even root beer? mag grabs the bottle from the cap mag:steel horse root beer jinny:i thought you had more faith in me than that and even if i was having a beer 1 never hurt nobody infact ill probably have ONE tommorrow at the party in the bronx im going to after i finish my business im goin to sleep on the couch tonight(go downstairs) next morning everyone was getting dressed when they heard her bike start up they quickley finished piled into 2 cars and followed her |
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jinny arrived at the house in the bronx
mag:jinny mplease you could get hurt jinny ut it the other way around and you will have it just about rightjinny knocks on the door he answers jinny:you hurt my friend have any final words jake:well if it is not polniazek havent seen you around still remember how to fight jinny punches him hard accross the face his nose is bleeding mrs g cringes they start wrestling jinny keeps punching him in the stomoch over and over his friend sees them and grabs a gun out of the house and shoots her in the stomoch they think shes dead and are talking jinny ran up behind him put him in a choke lock grabs the gun get off and points it at them then hands the gun to mag goes up and punches the other in the face and the stomoch they are both kneeling on the ground holding their stomochs in pain jinny walks over to the cap and everybody in pain jinny:well i got him (stops thye cap) dont arrest them but take me to the hospital she says cringing and gets in the car and holds a towel on her wound |
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i will right more but first is anyone reading this?
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yes im reading this and it is AWESOME!!!!!!
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in car
cap:jin they are going to ask if the shooter was caught jin: say he was and leave the rest to m (passes out) mag:shes losing to much blood finally thay arrive the doctor takes her to the emergency room after awhile he comes out doc olniazekthey stand up doc:well she has a ruptured splean but i think we can save it their is some other tissue damage and she needs blood are you guys giving mrsg:i will mag:me to blair:does it hurt everyone else:i nat:i think i can say we all will comes out after blood test doctor:well more? |
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more? how can you ask that. Yes MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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doc:kate mckafferty was a match are you willing
cap auses........sighs.........i guessdoctor comes out doc:well they are both resting kate should rest another 1/2 hour okay magda nods her head)can we see them?doc:yes jinny is awake she should be out of here in 5 days or so but shell have to take it easy mag:how many people at a time doc:well no one seems to be around so ill let you all in mag:thanx what do you think is anyone reding this |
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