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*¤*SHANE WEST FAN*¤*
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Okay this is my first time so tell me how you guys like it okay?
It's been three months and Jinnys suspention (sp) is finally over. Jinny walks into the S.F.P.D. happy that shes back, but sad for another reason... CD-Hey Jin! *gives her a hug* welcome back! Jinny-Thankz CD. Magda-Jinny your back! How have ya been? Are you over with the..you know drinking? Jinny-As a matter of fact, yes i am. Its been three months. I was bored so i figured that i'd get my act together..for once. Magda-Thats great!!! CD-Yeah..i knew that you could do it... Angela-Hey, Jinny I see that you're back! Jinny-Yeah and im sober..3 months! Angela-Thats wonderful!!! Jinny-Hey, you guys...there is something that i wanna say even though you might be sick of hearing it.. CD-What? You need a drink? Jinny-Haha im cracking up. No thats not it.. i....kinda miss Teddy... Magda-Seriously? I had a feeling that you would sooner or later Jinny-Well, over these past few months..ive been thinking just how much i hate myself for doing that and missing him. I know that he doesnt feel this way about me for obvious reasons but..i cant help myself! Angela-Well, how do you know that? He might be thinking the same exact think rite this second. *In Kate's office* Kate-Well, I called you in today because there is a double murder commited last nite that we can't piece together and they need some ADA advice..maybe you might know something Teddy-Um..okay i think at least i hope that i can help. Who am I with? Kate-Um..you're with.. *switches Angela and CD's case with Jinny and Magda so Jinny and Teddy might be able to work things out.* Jinny and Magda. Teddy-*looks happy* Well, im fine with that but will Jinny be? Kate-Oh, yeah! I overheard Jinny talking about you. Teddy-Really? Kate-I wouldnt lie. And, shes been sober for 3 months so possiblities that she will pick up another man are slim to none. Teddy-Wow..3 months..thats great. *Kate walks out of her office with Teddy behind her.* Kate-Jinny, Magda, you have a double murder up on 14th street..Mr. Greene and his daughter..apparently the mother and son were out. Where they were, we don't know yet. You'll be working with Teddy on this case because we need some ADA advice. Jinny-YES! Kate-Uh, Jinny comments to yourself please? Jinny-Yeah, sure, sorry! *Everyone starts to go back to work and Teddy walks over to Magda and Jinny. Teddy-Well, i think that we should go and talk to the mother and son, first and see where they were. Jinny-Fine with me. Teddy-Oh, uh Jinny.. Can i-can i see you in the hall for a second? Jinny-*perks up* sure. *Jinny and Teddy walk out of the division into the hallway* Jinny-So, uh...what did you want to talk about? Sorry that REALLY sucked but tell me if you liked it..thankz for listening..it gets better!!!!! |
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Join Date: Sep 09, 2001
Location: Damascus, Maryland, USA
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No that didn't suck. U need to post more... NOW. LoL. J/K
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The One and Only
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Awesome fan-fic so far. I'm for anything that has Jinny and Theodore together. As long as nothing seriously bad happens to neither of them...(Ex. Jeanie and My Latest fan-fiction 'A Routine') Anyway, so far so good! Keep it up!
------------------ "See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny "Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny |
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*¤*SHANE WEST FAN*¤*
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Join Date: Nov 01, 2001
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Thankz! im glad that you guys liked it! Heres more...
Teddy-Well, about us, actually... Jinny-Well, is that good or bad? Teddy-Oh, no its good..actually believe it or not i cant...i cant stop thinking about you.. Jinny-No way..actually i feel the same way and i was afraid that if i told you that that you would just say "its over, b*tch. Teddy-Oh, Jinny..i would never say that to you. Jinny-And believe me..the drinking thing..its over im okay now and i will never hurt you like that ever again. I'm really sorry about that nite. I never meant to hurt you..i wasnt myself. Teddy-I know and i should have went back and asked you about it instead of storming out of there like that. Jinny-So, do you want to try this again? Teddy-Of course. How about we go out to dinner tonite at Ancho-wait lets- *Jinny cuts him off* No its okay Teddy.. ive been there before and haven't even thought about a drink. Teddy-thats good im proud of you. *They hug and then go back into the division *Jinny enters smiling* Magda-And wat are you so happy about? Jinny-Me and Teddy are back together.. Magda-Oh thats great, Jin!! Jinny-Thankz, Mag..but to tell you the trutH, im kinda nervous tonite about our date.. Magda-Oh, its only Teddy. Theres nothing to be worried about.. You've been with him before. Jinny-I know but it feels, i dunno different. I dont wanna make a fool out of myself in front of him. Magda-You wont! *Magda,Jinny and Teddy finish up the day with questions in their heads still and Jinny goes home and gets ready for her date* *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* At her house *Jinny flips through clothes in her clothes while talking to herself What should i wear i dont own anything nice! Okay, Jin pull yourself together here... finally, she picks something out and the doorbell rings. She walks to answer it... Should i continue???? I hope you liked it!! ------------------ people are who people are..youre born and you die pretty much the same person-all the rest is just window dressing-Jinny01 Nancy McKeon rulz |
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youre RAD <3<3
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2001
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YES!!!!! Continue!!!!!!! Im l
king foward to more!!!
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*funger agger* LOL
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ANYWAY ...lol This is so cute, I'm loving it! MORE! ![]() ------------------ Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. Check out my Nancy McKeon Links site! http://www.geocities.com/nancymckeonlinkssite Or my Site for Christian Teens! http://www.geocities.com/christianteenssite And from your resident off-topic queens and royalty: *^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^* |
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*¤*SHANE WEST FAN*¤*
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Im glad you guyz really liked it..heres more...
*Jinny opened the door to see Teddy dressed in a suit and looking a little nervous.* Teddy-Are you ready? Jinny-*sighs* Yeah...justa little nervous.. Teddy-You're not the only one. *Jinny laughed. I guess things are going to go better than i planned, she thought. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ At Anchorside Teddy-So, uh...what have you been up to since..well, you know...we broke up.. Jinny-Well, actually, with you go, everything kinda went downhill..i almost got my partner killed because i was drinking and i got...well, raped and- Teddy-Wait..you got raped? I'm so sorry, Jinny! Is there anything I ca- Jinny-Its no big deal...im fine now.. and anyway and you know about my suspention and my intervention so... Teddy-Wow..i didnt think that i meant that much to you for all that to go wrong! Jinny-How could you think that?! I loved you and well, still do so much! Teddy-Well, ever since i saw you...over there with...whatever his name is i figured that...well u didnt love me and never did. Jinny-Oh, Teddy..i thought that about you! I thought that since you got that raise, you didnt want to go to Napa with me..i was really stupid..but lets not bring up the past now that its all cleared up.. Teddy-Yeah, um...so... Jinny-What have you been up to since...then? Teddy-Work, work, work..and Jenny, you know my ex..well it didnt work out with her and Bob so she tried to get me to go out with her again but i just..couldnt after you. Jinny-Yeah, I couldnt go out with another man either..it just felt..wrong... Teddy-Yeah. Hey, do you wanna catch a movie now since we are done with dinner? Jinny-Sure... *They go and see some romantic movie and he drives Jinny home...* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ In front of her apartment Jinny-Thankz, Teddy i had a great time.. Teddy-Yeah..me too...I- *Jinny cuts him off by kissing him* Teddy-Wow..ive missed that. Jinny-Me too *They kiss again* Teddy-So..do-do you wanna go out again tomorrow nite? Jinny-sure! umm..i dont care where we go...um do u wanna decide tomorrow at work? Teddy-sure.. *they kiss one more time.* Jinny-Well, ill see you tomorrow! Teddy-Okay bye...i-i l-love y-y-you. Jinny-I love you, too... *Jinny closes the door and leans on it for a second and smiles.* YES! hes back.. Should i continue? ------------------ people are who people are..youre born and you die pretty much the same person-all the rest is just window dressing-Jinny01 Nancy McKeon rulz |
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youre RAD <3<3
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You need to post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I
love this..Memories ::sighs::
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Join Date: Apr 01, 2001
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Sure, post more! This is great.
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I love PartyLite
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Join Date: Sep 06, 2001
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yes continue. i think its good.
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*funger agger* LOL
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Oh, I'm love it!
It's great! Can't wait 4 more!!!!!
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I'll Cover You
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This is really good...post more!!!
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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*¤*SHANE WEST FAN*¤*
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Okay sorry guys that i havent posted in a while. I havent really been on. Im glad that you like it here is more...
The next day, Jinny walks into the SFPD with a big smile on her face. Magda notices her smiling and askes her how it went. Magda-Hey Jin. So uh how did it go last nite? CD-How did what go? What did ya do? Relapse and hook up with some bum at the bar? Jinny-Haha..very funny. No, I didnt. Actually, i went on a date with Teddy last nite. Angela-So you guys are back together? Jinny-Well, i guess you can say that. CD-Well, im happy for you, Jin. Magda-And here comes loverboy now... *Teddy walks through the Division doors.* Teddy-Hey, Jinny. Jinny-Hi Teddy! How are you today? Teddy-Better than ever CD-Whoo! What is this? Sex and the City? Jinny-No...its not. So, Teddy, did you find anything new about the murder? Teddy-Uh..no...i was thinking that we should talk to your captain and see wat we should do next.] Magda-Sounds good to me... *They finish up working all morning and decide to break for lunch* Magda-Hey, you guys, we should break for lunch. I know im hungry Teddy-Good, im starved. Where do you guys wanna go? i dont care. Jinny-Why dont we go to Anchorside. Magda-Okay. Teddy-Fine with me. *they walk out the doors and right before Jinny and Teddy leaves, Teddy grabs Jinny by the arm* Teddy-Im glad that we are back together. I missed you so much. Jinny-Yeah me too. *They quickly kiss on the lips and walk out the door, hold hands. So, should i post more??
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defying gravity
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Join Date: Jan 13, 2001
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anything that has Jinny and Teddy in it!!! (well together i mean...) this is gr8! post more s n!! (whoever was the 1st person to do the eyes..u inspired me lol)
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youre RAD <3<3
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2001
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Yes!! ADD MORE!!
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