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Jinny Exstead woke up to a loud screaming noise in her ear, "Jinny girl get up!! you have to finish packing!" Jinny rolled over and turned to face her father who was yelling for to get to finish preparing for the long day that was ahead of her. Today she was going to the police acadamy hoping to follow in her father's footstep and her older brother, who was about to be a cop, footsteps and become a cop. Jinny reluctantly rolled over once more and dragged her self out of bed. She slowly moved her way to the bathroom and passed her younger brother Casey, who was 15 on the way and he had a warm greeting for her,"Hey Jin!! are you ready for the big day?" Jinny looked back at her brother and responded with not as much enthusiasm as him,"Thrilled."
After a nice hearty breakfast, the Exstead's packed up their car and headed on the road. Jinny was still groggy from her sleep but her father was trying to have one last bonding moments. She was a seventeen year old girl and to her sleep was more important but she tried to seem a little interested in what her father was saying just so they could part on a good note. After a LONG car ride the Exstead's finally pulled into the parking lot of the Acadamy. Jinny had woken up more and seem confident on the outside but in the inside she was flooded with nervousness. She thought to her self she was a 3rd degree blackbelt, that would help a lot right? Jinny followed her eager brother and father as she carried her duffle bag to the check in area. She met the commanding officer of the area and tried to be polite but she knew it was all a lie. She got a few last tips from her father before bidding goodbye as she walked to her dorm area. She put her duffle down on her bed and then some tapped her on came in and said, "Hi I am Magda and I'm C.D." Magda was a short Puerticran girl with her hair tied back in a ponytail and she was sleeping on the bunk below Jinny. C.D. was a tall girl who had blonde hair and they both looked like they were in great shape. C.D. had a single bed across the room. Jinny responded with a smile and said,"Hi, I am Jinny." sorry not interesting...its just a start~ ------------------ -Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs. 6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising ~~!!~~**~~!!~~**~~ Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket -keightee! |
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Join Date: Sep 11, 2001
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Not interesting! That was like the opposite of not interesting! Keep it up!
------------------ Ray Rachel: (talking about a bag) Joey, it's unisex. Joey: Maybe you need sex, but I had some last night! Rachel: No, U-N-I sex Joey: Well, who can say no to that! You're a Peach! -Jinny Exstead |
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The One and Only
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Ever Going to add more to this? It's definitely interesting, well written ,and I've enjoyed it so far. I just found it today..haha... Keep going!!!!
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"See I know people too. Next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny Magda: "Listen, people from my Country" Jinny: "Oh Magda Please, your country, you're from the mission district." ---------------- Jeanie & My Websites: Division S.F.P.D In Honor of Nancy McKeon Jay’s Fan Connection |
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*funger agger* LOL
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Oh, I remember reading this ages ago!! C'mon, Katie, finish this!!!! LOL
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Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. ![]() MY GREAEST TYPO YET!!... TypoQueen85: Have you and Christ talked? Divisionbabe05: what the hell are u talkin bout? TypoQueen85: LMBO!!!!!!! TypoQueen85: OOPS!!!!! TypoQueen85: I meant Chris...LMBO Check out my Nancy McKeon Links site ! Or my Jay Harrington Site ! And from your vice president of the "I Live on the Internet" Club, co-off-topic queen, TypoQueen, Sprout, Mag (LOL, Jamie), Suzaboo, hoe (LOL, Britt), and last but not least funger agger: *^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^* |
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wow i didnt think anyone liked so i jus ended but i guess i could continue sometime this week, thanks miranda and susan for the replys!! (haha ray since urs was in oct. it doesnt matter jk...)
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The One and Only
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No problem. I just read it the other night, and was like damn she hasn't posted any after the first, and probably won't unless she gets more replies. So ta-da..I replied. Imagine that.. lol Keep going. It's good so far.
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ill add some more tomorrow gotta think whats goin happen, i was going to post my other fic tonight, but my e- i me this guy *clears thoart* called so we watched a movie...soo umm i never got a chance...but i will tomorrow!(after i make my mom cookies
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first before i can continue, forget that jinny has introduced herself because i added a part into my story and its weird, and i cant get onto that name, sooo and Casey is 14 not 15
well heres more, thanks for the replys!!"Hey C.D. and Magda I'm J-" but Jinny was cut off short by her younger brother Casey who came into the run panting and said, "Hey Jin, this is from dad, it is what he says a "Survival Kit" "Jinny and Casey ebraced together and she said, "Bye Casey, I am going to miss you." Casey turned to C.D. and Magda and said,"Later ladies." Jinny turned so she was now facing C.D. and Magda and said, "Ya I am Jinny, and that was my younger brother Casey." Over the next half and hour they all talked to one and other if they had been friends forever. When a geeky looking guy came to their door and said, "Ladies theres a meeting in the dining hall and sergent told me to tell the girls on floor B, which I am presuming is you and the other girls on this floor..." C.D. and Magda gave him "wtf looks" while Jinny spook up and said,"Thanks wiseass, you can go tell your daddy that we will be there at 6 o Clock sharp." The scrany, pale, male took out a pen and pad and pointed a finger at Jinny and said, "You, whats your name..?" Jinny responded with a little more then a hint of sarcasm in her voice and responded, "Jinny Exstead, thats E-X-S-T-E-A-D and dont forget to dot the "I" in Jinny" The Kid continued to stare at Jinny and said, "I am guessing you are Johns sister, o great jus what the police force needs another Exstead, you, I will be watching you..."Magda and C.D. exchanged looks thinking 'whoa she does not take any crap'. At 6 o clock sharp as Jinny had promised she and Magda and C.D. entered the Dining Hall and the comanding officer was a stern looking figure said, "O Ms. Exstead I am so glad you were here promtly, we would not want you to miss anything." Jinny did not care what rank the man was and simply said, "Oh yea, what good is a party without me here." There were a few muffled laughs from the all rookies in camp and the officer was flaming with furry and said, "Exstead drop and give me 20!" he turned to face the crowd and said,"This is what happens when you are a wise ass." Jinny was not through and she said, "If you said so, this is not boot camp, but one handed or two handed....ahh im feeling good tonight so one handed." Jinny dropped down and did 20- one handed push ups in record timing, giving everyone a shock and the commanding officer said, "That is good, take your seat Ms. Exstead." The rest of the meeting was boring and while everyone was falling asleep Jinny was wide awake and pretended to be intrested. At the end of the meeting the officer on the top of his lungs yelled,"Everyone Dismissed, back to your quarters." As Jinny left a rather hot guy slipped her a note which said, "S. Poker game tonight, 9, my room (4 Dorm C)" Jinny looked it over and said,"I be there...." ok i add more later there will be serious issues addressed in this fic mostly because they are girls in the 80's and in the police academy... |
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GO HOGS!!!!
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YAYZZZZZ You added more!!!!!!!!!!! This is GREAT!! MORE NOW!!!!
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The One and Only
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Yay, you added more. That's cool. Interesting! I enjoyed it!! Add more soon. :- )
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Hey, u posted more!
now, can you post some more again???
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MUST HAVE MORE FAN FIC !!!!!
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*funger agger* LOL
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Oh, this is great!! MORE PLEASE!
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coool people replyed ill try and add tomorrow but i jus got home and im too umm "out of it" to add!! soo cya tomorrow
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Well, I hope you're "into it" today, cuz if you aren't, I'm gonna hunt you down & shove some anti-depressents down your throat!!! Well, probably not literally, but I'll be thinking about it, cuz this story is too good to be left alone for this long!!!
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Last edited by BlairW_1; 12-29-2001 at 12:41 PM. |
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