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Jinnyis#1 · 07-29-2001, 11:15 PM

i'm sorry if the title sux jo_24, but it's all i could think of! here goes:

***Jinnys Apartment***

"Oh god" was the first thing Jinny thought when she woke up that morning. She felt absolutely horrible, and it didn't make any sense. She didn't drink last night... well, not after 9pm... and she was almost sober before she went to bed. Getting out of bed, she barely got to the bathroom before an overwhelming nuasea hit her.

***30 minutes later***

Jinny walked out of the bathroom, hair wet. She still felt sick, but she knew that if she called off work they would all think she had a hangover. Gathering her clothes for the day, Jinny wondered why she was sick. 'I didn't even eat anything weird last night either..maybe it's just a virus.' When she was finished getting dressed, Jinny walked out the door hoping she'd feel better soon.

***The Division***
Magda sat at her desk looking at a casefile the Captain had just gave her. Looking up, she saw Jinny come in and knew immediately something was wrong.

M: Jin, you okay?

J: No.

M: Why'd you come in? You look horrible....

J: Thanks Mag... real nice of you.

'Great' Jinny thought.. she probably still thinks i drank too much last night. Jinny took off her coat and hung it over her chair, then sat down.

M: Long night last night?

Jinny glared at Magda.

J: No. In fact, I went to bed at 10:30. And NO.. before you ask I wasn't drunk.

Magda was taken aback. When Jinny had some in she had just assumed she had been drinking and had a hangover. Now she was worried. Getting up from her desk she walked over and sat on Jinny's.

M: Hey.. I didn't mean it that way I just...

Magda was interupted by Jinny doubling over and screaming. Clutching her stomach, Jinny could barely stand the pain, and she couldn't do anything but whimper.

M: OMG... Jinny! Are you ok?!

Jinny shook her head.

M: I'm taking you to the hospital.

YOUR TURN!

i hope it was okie

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-29-2001, 11:49 PM

can't wait for more! this is great!

BlairandJo · 07-30-2001, 12:17 AM

OOOOOOOOOO I like;o)post more soon this is gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sue z q · 07-30-2001, 12:49 AM

Marvelous idea
Outstanding writing
Rapturous plot
Exciting action

What's that spell? MORE!

Joanna Marie_1 · 07-30-2001, 12:56 AM

4-real! We need some more!

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"As any of the local bartenders can tell ya, I'm a sympathetic ear" ~ Jinny Exstead

"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

"People...isnt that just the craziest word u ever done heard?" ~ me *LOL*

jo_24 · 07-30-2001, 08:20 AM

Great job so far Jenn!
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-At the Division-

J: Mag, I'm fine, really!

Jin gasps for air and grabs her stomach.

M: Jinny, come on now! Come on!

They get into Magda's car and drive to the hospital. Jinny see's a doctor while Mag reads a magazine in the waiting room. Magda has a worried look on her face, she's almost in tears every time she remembers Jin. She sees Jin grabing her stomach in tears about to pass out. 'I hope she's ok. Please God, let her be ok.'= Magda thinks. She starts praying silently.

-In the Doctor's office-

D: Jinny, how long have you been feeling this way?

J: Well, about 2 weeks, but it never was this bad.

D: You never told anyone??

J: Sorry! If I missed work again they would all think I was hung-over.

D: Well, it hasn't been that long since you got this, so there are posible alternatives... Jin, you...

-In the Waiting Room-

After Jin agreeing she would tell Magda, She leaves the Doctor's "office" crying. Magda senses that Jin may not want to talk about it, but she's her best friend! She has to find out! Maybe she could help! (Mag is thinking this)

M: Jin, you ok?

J: Yeah, I'm fine. (she tries to smile, but the smile is croked (sp?) and she starts sobbing softly.)

M: What to get some lunch or something?

J: No, can you take me home, I want to tell you there.

Magda gets really worried. But she drives Jin home. They walk into her apartment, which as usual is messy.

M: Jin, please tell me. I'm here for you, whatever it is you have...

J: Magda, I think you need to sit down,... I ... I...

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Sorry! I know that part was horrible!
Here ya go Jenn!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter... it doesn't change anything... Yeah, that's what I thought!

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"Basically people are who people are. You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!

Jo_Po · 07-30-2001, 03:46 PM

Great job so far- Post more soon!!

~Steph

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-30-2001, 03:58 PM

more more more

BlairandJo · 07-30-2001, 04:17 PM

MORE!!MORE Give Me MORE!!!!!;o)

Jinnyis#1 · 07-30-2001, 06:41 PM

GOOD JOB!!

Magda looked at Jinny, concerned.

M: Jinny.. what is it?

J: I... I'm... pregnant.

The words hit Magda like a slap across the face. Jinny was pregnant. She remembered when she had found out about Benjamin... how she felt, and she imediately knew what Jinny was going through. Moving closer to Jinny, she gathered her in her arms and hugged her.

M: Jin... it'll be alright...

J: Alright?! I.. I don't even know who the father is! What am I supposed to do...

Jinny got up and started pacing around her living room. She couldn't sit still, this was all still a shock to her. There were only two possibilites for who the father was. Teddy and... whatshisname. 'Oh god, I don't even know his name!' she thought.

M: Jinny... relax, ok? It's not the end of the world... and well.. I mean... isn't Teddy the father?

J: I.. don't know. (Jinny pauses) Mag.. PLEASE don't tell anyone about this, ok?

M: Of course.

Magda looked at Jinny sympathetically. She knew that Jinny led a lifestyle that wasn't exactly healthy... but she had always thought she was safe. Getting up from the sofa, she crossed over to where Jinny was standing and rubbed her back.

M: It'll be okay...

YOUR TURN!

sorry it sucked,but i couldnt think

BlairandJo · 07-30-2001, 08:14 PM

Three things.

One it did not suck.
Two post more soon.
Three I love it;o)

Honey Angel · 07-31-2001, 06:35 PM

This is getting good! I definatley have to find out what's going to happen next.

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Nancy: I'm drawn to very flawed characters, because I have so many myself. And my friends are my friends because they seem to look beyond these flaws and love me anyway.

"War doesn't decide who's right, just who's left." -Source Unknown

Jinnyis#1 · 08-01-2001, 07:15 AM

hey jo_24! where are ya? lol. i know u have to get up early and everything everyday... but i'm waitin'... and aparently so are others. (isn't that cool?!) okies...

~*~jenn~*~

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"give me life, give me pain, give me myself again" ~Tori Amos
IM me: JoandBlair4ever

ISmellFine · 08-01-2001, 02:11 PM

This is really good!

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NaNcY rOx!

-Jinny

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha!

Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.

Jinny: If you think for one minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me, your out of your damn minds.

Jinny: Oh, come on, folks, please, don't be shy. Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight, so please, step right on up!

Jinny: And you actually paid for this assassination, huh? Really, how much? I mean, how does that work? Is it like chippin' in for the Christmas party, huh? Where are the hats? Where are the noise makers? God, I'd really love a damn party favor!

Check out my Nancy McKeon Supersite!

BlairW_2 · 08-01-2001, 02:17 PM

Great Job!!! I love it so far!!!

07-29-2001, 11:15 PM	#1
Jinnyis#1 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: quakertown, pa Posts: 202	"More Than She Bargained For" -mine and jo_24's fanfic i'm sorry if the title sux jo_24, but it's all i could think of! here goes: *Jinnys Apartment* "Oh god" was the first thing Jinny thought when she woke up that morning. She felt absolutely horrible, and it didn't make any sense. She didn't drink last night... well, not after 9pm... and she was almost sober before she went to bed. Getting out of bed, she barely got to the bathroom before an overwhelming nuasea hit her. *30 minutes later* Jinny walked out of the bathroom, hair wet. She still felt sick, but she knew that if she called off work they would all think she had a hangover. Gathering her clothes for the day, Jinny wondered why she was sick. 'I didn't even eat anything weird last night either..maybe it's just a virus.' When she was finished getting dressed, Jinny walked out the door hoping she'd feel better soon. *The Division* Magda sat at her desk looking at a casefile the Captain had just gave her. Looking up, she saw Jinny come in and knew immediately something was wrong. M: Jin, you okay? J: No. M: Why'd you come in? You look horrible.... J: Thanks Mag... real nice of you. 'Great' Jinny thought.. she probably still thinks i drank too much last night. Jinny took off her coat and hung it over her chair, then sat down. M: Long night last night? Jinny glared at Magda. J: No. In fact, I went to bed at 10:30. And NO.. before you ask I wasn't drunk. Magda was taken aback. When Jinny had some in she had just assumed she had been drinking and had a hangover. Now she was worried. Getting up from her desk she walked over and sat on Jinny's. M: Hey.. I didn't mean it that way I just... Magda was interupted by Jinny doubling over and screaming. Clutching her stomach, Jinny could barely stand the pain, and she couldn't do anything but whimper. M: OMG... Jinny! Are you ok?! Jinny shook her head. M: I'm taking you to the hospital. YOUR TURN! i hope it was okie

07-29-2001, 11:49 PM	#2
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	can't wait for more! this is great!

07-30-2001, 12:17 AM	#3
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	OOOOOOOOOO I like;o)post more soon this is gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07-30-2001, 12:49 AM	#4
sue z q funger agger LOL Senior Member Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: CA Posts: 1,687	Marvelous idea Outstanding writing Rapturous plot Exciting action What's that spell? MORE!

07-30-2001, 12:56 AM	#5
Joanna Marie_1 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2001 Location: Sherwood, AR, USA Posts: 342	4-real! We need some more! ------------------ "As any of the local bartenders can tell ya, I'm a sympathetic ear" ~ Jinny Exstead "Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead "People...isnt that just the craziest word u ever done heard?" ~ me LOL

07-30-2001, 08:20 AM	#6
jo_24 ~* The Comedian ~ Occasional Poster* Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: NancKeonVille Posts: 73	Great job so far Jenn! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -At the Division- J: Mag, I'm fine, really! Jin gasps for air and grabs her stomach. M: Jinny, come on now! Come on! They get into Magda's car and drive to the hospital. Jinny see's a doctor while Mag reads a magazine in the waiting room. Magda has a worried look on her face, she's almost in tears every time she remembers Jin. She sees Jin grabing her stomach in tears about to pass out. 'I hope she's ok. Please God, let her be ok.'= Magda thinks. She starts praying silently. -In the Doctor's office- D: Jinny, how long have you been feeling this way? J: Well, about 2 weeks, but it never was this bad. D: You never told anyone?? J: Sorry! If I missed work again they would all think I was hung-over. D: Well, it hasn't been that long since you got this, so there are posible alternatives... Jin, you... -In the Waiting Room- After Jin agreeing she would tell Magda, She leaves the Doctor's "office" crying. Magda senses that Jin may not want to talk about it, but she's her best friend! She has to find out! Maybe she could help! (Mag is thinking this) M: Jin, you ok? J: Yeah, I'm fine. (she tries to smile, but the smile is croked (sp?) and she starts sobbing softly.) M: What to get some lunch or something? J: No, can you take me home, I want to tell you there. Magda gets really worried. But she drives Jin home. They walk into her apartment, which as usual is messy. M: Jin, please tell me. I'm here for you, whatever it is you have... J: Magda, I think you need to sit down,... I ... I... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry! I know that part was horrible! Here ya go Jenn! ------------------ "You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!! Teddy:God, Jinny Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter... it doesn't change anything... Yeah, that's what I thought! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Basically people are who people are. You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead Nancy is Slammin'!

07-30-2001, 03:46 PM	#7
Jo_Po Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 29, 2000 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 96	Great job so far- Post more soon!! ~Steph

07-30-2001, 03:58 PM	#8
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	more more more

07-30-2001, 04:17 PM	#9
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	MORE!!MORE Give Me MORE!!!!!;o)

07-30-2001, 06:41 PM	#10
Jinnyis#1 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: quakertown, pa Posts: 202	GOOD JOB!! Magda looked at Jinny, concerned. M: Jinny.. what is it? J: I... I'm... pregnant. The words hit Magda like a slap across the face. Jinny was pregnant. She remembered when she had found out about Benjamin... how she felt, and she imediately knew what Jinny was going through. Moving closer to Jinny, she gathered her in her arms and hugged her. M: Jin... it'll be alright... J: Alright?! I.. I don't even know who the father is! What am I supposed to do... Jinny got up and started pacing around her living room. She couldn't sit still, this was all still a shock to her. There were only two possibilites for who the father was. Teddy and... whatshisname. 'Oh god, I don't even know his name!' she thought. M: Jinny... relax, ok? It's not the end of the world... and well.. I mean... isn't Teddy the father? J: I.. don't know. (Jinny pauses) Mag.. PLEASE don't tell anyone about this, ok? M: Of course. Magda looked at Jinny sympathetically. She knew that Jinny led a lifestyle that wasn't exactly healthy... but she had always thought she was safe. Getting up from the sofa, she crossed over to where Jinny was standing and rubbed her back. M: It'll be okay... YOUR TURN! sorry it sucked,but i couldnt think

07-30-2001, 08:14 PM	#11
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	Three things. One it did not suck. Two post more soon. Three I love it;o)

07-31-2001, 06:35 PM	#12
Honey Angel Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 15, 2001 Location: Texas Posts: 44	This is getting good! I definatley have to find out what's going to happen next. ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nancy: I'm drawn to very flawed characters, because I have so many myself. And my friends are my friends because they seem to look beyond these flaws and love me anyway. "War doesn't decide who's right, just who's left." -Source Unknown

08-01-2001, 07:15 AM	#13
Jinnyis#1 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: quakertown, pa Posts: 202	hey jo_24! where are ya? lol. i know u have to get up early and everything everyday... but i'm waitin'... and aparently so are others. (isn't that cool?!) okies... ~~jenn~~ ------------------ "give me life, give me pain, give me myself again" ~Tori Amos IM me: JoandBlair4ever

08-01-2001, 02:11 PM	#14
ISmellFine Zim Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Apr 13, 2001 Posts: 4,886	This is really good! ------------------ NaNcY rOx! -Jinny On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha! Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. Jinny: If you think for one minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me, your out of your damn minds. Jinny: Oh, come on, folks, please, don't be shy. Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight, so please, step right on up! Jinny: And you actually paid for this assassination, huh? Really, how much? I mean, how does that work? Is it like chippin' in for the Christmas party, huh? Where are the hats? Where are the noise makers? God, I'd really love a damn party favor! Check out my Nancy McKeon Supersite!

08-01-2001, 02:17 PM	#15
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	Great Job!!! I love it so far!!!