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10-03-2001, 04:36 PM
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Try And Be A Mother
Prologue
July 4th, 1994 *Hospital* The frighted,tired, and scared 13 year old girl could not believe this had happened to her, she was not lying in this hospital bed and she did not just give birth to a baby girl. But she knew that it was true she really had given birth. She knew she was lucky to be alive since a lot of girls her age die, and she also knew she lucky that her baby girl was alive and healthy. But she also knew that that the father will want nothing to do with the baby and that her and her mother was not ready for it. Just as she was thinking of giving that baby up the nurse walked in and handed her, her little girl. The moment Kelly held her baby she knew she was going to keep it no matter how hard she had to work. No matter if the baby was going to only have one parent she was going to keep it, if her mother let her. Chapter One May 4th, 2001 Jinny groaned and got out of the bed knowing that she, once again, would be late for work. She took a quick shower and then got dressed and was about to leave when the phone rang. "Exstead." "Hey mom, would you mind watching Americus tonight?" "I was going to go over to Madga's tonight since she invited me for dinner." ------------------ no matter how your week or day had been if you can still laugh or even make someone who is having a bad day laugh, then your day is alittle bit better. |
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10-03-2001, 04:42 PM
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WOW! All, I can says is that there had better be a chapter 2! This is REALLY good so far.
------------------ *!*Caitlin*!* *!* Queen Of The Sluts*!* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IM Address: Bixbabe926 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I ~<3~ Nick!!! ¤°What's 4 Years Between A Girlfriend And Her Boyfriend?°¤ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rumors are just a person's way of trying to make you feel down about yourself. You just have to accept the fact that people will talk behind your back and you need to ignore it. That which doesn't kill you will make you stronger! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead. ----------------------- |
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10-03-2001, 04:53 PM
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okay here is the rest of chapter one sorry i forgot to put it in (hehe) oops.
Well couldn't you bring Americus over there? She could play with Ben." " I don't know, I'll have to ask Madga." "Alright." "Where are you going tonight Kelly?" "It's James birthday, so I’m going to take him to dinner." "Okay I’ll ask Madga and then call you later at work and while we are talking about work I have to go cause I’m going to be late. "Okay, byes." "Bye." please reply!! ------------------ no matter how your week or day had been if you can still laugh or even make someone who is having a bad day laugh, then your day is alittle bit better. |
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10-03-2001, 04:53 PM
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write more or die this weekend (i'm sure i could find some kind of ride to push you off).
****Cammie Lynn**** ------------------ SweetBlairJinny@aol.com And you will hear of wars and rumors of wars.See that you are not troubled; for all these things must come to pass, but the end is not yet.For Nation will rise against nation and kingdom against kingdom and there will be famines, pestilences, and earthquakes in various places.All these things are the beginning of sorrows. Matthew 24:6-8 |
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10-03-2001, 04:57 PM
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I don't I have 2 say anything. You already know that I WANT MORE!
------------------ *!*Caitlin*!* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IM Address: Bixbabe926 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I ~<3~ Nick!!! ¤Whats 4 Years Between A Girl And Her Boyfriend?¤ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead. ----------------------- |
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10-04-2001, 06:20 AM
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Chapter 2
*The Division* Jinny walked in and put all her things on her desk and sat down, hoping no one noticed that she was late. She started moving things around her desk, trying to find her folder about the case that Madga and her had just finished. “Well look who finally joined us.” Jinny turned around and gave Madga a look. “Shut up where did the folder about our case go?” “Well I got bored and finished writing the report about the case, and I gave it to the cap.” “Alright. Oh yeah I need to ask you a favor.” “What?” “Well Kelly asked me if I could watch Americus tonight but since I’m going to your house for dinner, I was wondering if I could bring Americus too.” “Yeah sure, ya know I think Ben has alittle crush on her anyway.” “Ha, I bet he does.” Just then the Cap walked out of her office. “Jinny, Madga, my office.” “Great and off to see the witch we go.” Jinny says getting and Madga just laughed and walked into the caps office. “So cap, what are we doing today?” “Jinny just shut up and listen for once would ya?” “Yes, Mommy.” Jinny says just so Madga can hear. “Okay I’m giving you a case about a guy in his early 20’s that goes around killing pregnant teenagers and women.” “How many has he killed.” “10, he had started killing girls about a month ago.” “Right so are we done?” “Yes, now get out of here.” Jinny and Madga walked out of the cap office and went to their desk. “So where do we start?” “I don’t know. I guess we should go questions some of these people’s family.” “Alright. Let’s go.” “Hold on, let me make a quick call to Kelly and tell her everything is fine for tonight.” “Alright. I’ll look over the folder while you are.” Jinny picked up her phone and waited for Kelly to answer. “Hello?” “Hey James. Let me talk to Kelly.” “Sure Jinny.” “Hello mother.” “Hey, I talked to Madga and she said that everything was okay for tonight.” “Alright I gotta go.” “Okay bye.” “Bye.” Madga and Jinny both got up and started walking towards their car. “Who’s James?” “The same guy she has been dating for a couple of years.” “Oh, Mr. Boyband?” “Yep.” “I thought his name was Pance or Chance or something weird like that.” “His middle name is Lance, I think, but Kelly calls him James.” “Alright anyway we better get this case started.” “So were are we going?” “We are going to see the first victim, Laura Beth, father-to-be.” Fun.” “Yep.” About half an hour later they pulled up to the driveway. After knocking on the door for what seemed like forever (but was really only 5 minutes) the door open. “Yes, what can I do for you two lovely ladies?” “SFPD, were here to ask you some questions.” “What about?” “The mother of you baby boy, a Miss Laura Beth Cook.” “Oh, I alright. Come on in, would you like something to drink or eat?” “No.” “So Matt, when did you and Laura Beth first meet?” “In 6th grade.” “How old are you know?” “18.” “How old was Laura Beth when she got pregnant?” “13.” “Was it a one night stand or were you two going out?” “It was a one night stand, but once she told me about her being pregnant I made sure to be there for her.” “How old was your son?” “Five.” “Do you have any of her things?” “Yeah, they are in the basement I will show you where.” “Okay.” Matt got up and walked down to the basement and showed them five boxes that were Laura Beth’s and five boxes that belonged to their son. It took Madga and Jinny 15 minutes to get all ten boxes into their car promising Matt that they would bring everything back. They went back to the division and put everything in a basement room and took all the boxes and put everything in the boxes around the floor and started looking at everything trying to find any clues. please post more replys so i know ya'll like it! [This message has been edited by BrattyChickMadga (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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10-04-2001, 02:35 PM
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Wait, Did you get the Americus name from the book "Where The Heart Is"? Oh ya, this is GREAT btw!
------------------ *!*Caitlin*!* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IM Address: Bixbabe926 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I ~<3~ Nick!!! ¤Whats 4 Years Between A Girl And Her Boyfriend?¤ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead. ----------------------- |
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10-04-2001, 03:34 PM
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I've never even read the book, I saw the movie. U know the woman that plays Rizzo in Grease(Stockard Channing), she's in it. She plays ummm, god i can't remember her name, she had gray hair and she took novalee in when she had nowhere to go.
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10-04-2001, 03:39 PM
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Ammie Sue this is EXCELLENT!!!! Well I can answer the question about the name cuz the name was my *brilliant idea*. I told her to use it, cuz I had gotten in from the movie "Where the heart is" at least i think it's what it's called. Well I'm not sure if she'll be posting anymore until Sunday, cuz we're going away this weekend, but she may post tonight.
****Cammie Lynn**** P.S.-The story gets better. ------------------ SweetBlairJinny@aol.com And you will hear of wars and rumors of wars.See that you are not troubled; for all these things must come to pass, but the end is not yet.For Nation will rise against nation and kingdom against kingdom and there will be famines, pestilences, and earthquakes in various places.All these things are the beginning of sorrows. Matthew 24:6-8 |
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10-04-2001, 06:21 PM
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10-05-2001, 06:39 AM
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Hey everyone. sorry but i won't be posting until sunday or monday because i'm leaving for a trip this weekend and i didn't have enough time to type up chapter3. but i will up date as soon as i get back!
 ****Ammie Sue**** ------------------ no matter how your week or day had been if you can still laugh or even make someone who is having a bad day laugh, then your day is alittle bit better. |
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10-06-2001, 01:19 PM
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k....but post SOON!! dis is gettin' GOOD
------------------ ~Jamie M. AKA Jinny Exstead or Jamie Nancy McKeon, or bung holeo NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!! My Motto:Jinny: If you think for 1 minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me...your out of ur dang minds!! please visit muh site at: Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! LOL..nah, u should change ur name 2 "NANCY MCKEON ROCKS"  YOU 'TARD ~me ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ please e-mail or IM me at: Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com |
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10-06-2001, 01:34 PM
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*funger agger* LOL
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10-09-2001, 06:22 AM
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okay here is more
Chapter 3 *3 hours later at the Division* Madga and Jinny had everything spread out and where in a basement room. “So do you really think we will beadle to find anything since most things are almost one month old.” “We can try.” “Well how about you stay here and look, while I go talk to other victim’s family.” “You should talk to mother of Laura Beth and also to the mother of Cara since Cara was the one that was killed two days ago.” “Alright.” An hour later Jinny walked out of Laura Beth’s mother house with a box full of useful things, hopefully. Then Jinny got into her car and headed for Cara Wimmer’s mother house. Jinny took a deep breath and knocked on the door. A woman in her early 30’s answered the door. “Hello?” “Hello, Mrs. Wimmer?” “Yes.” “I’m Jinny Exstead with the SFPD. I’m here to ask you questions about your daughter’s death.” “Alright, come have a set.” “How old was Cara?” “17.” “Did she have a boyfriend?” “Not to what I know of.” “Did you know she was pregnant?” “Yes.” “Do you know who the father is?” “No, she never got a chance to tell me.” “Do you know if she told the father?” “Yeah she had told him the day before her death.” “Where was she killed?” “Don’t you know?” “My partner has the case folder so I didn’t get to look over Cara’s case.” “Oh alright. She was killed in her bedroom here.” “Mind if I go look?” “Nope its downstairs.” “Alright thank you.” Jinny got up and went downstairs and spent about thirty minutes looking around the house and leaves with a box full of things to hopefully help with Cara case. please reply!! ------------------ no matter how your week or day had been if you can still laugh or even make someone who is having a bad day laugh, then your day is alittle bit better. |
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10-09-2001, 04:56 PM
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Excellent Excellent Excellent Excellent Excellent Excellent Excellent Excellent
Excellent Excellent Excellent Excellent and so on...i'm lazy. write more now. ****Ammie Sue**** ------------------ SweetBlairJinny@aol.com And you will hear of wars and rumors of wars.See that you are not troubled; for all these things must come to pass, but the end is not yet.For Nation will rise against nation and kingdom against kingdom and there will be famines, pestilences, and earthquakes in various places.All these things are the beginning of sorrows. Matthew 24:6-8 |
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