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Ok, this has nothing to do with any of my other fanfics....just so you know. Ok, hope you like it.
Jinny sat at her desk while her eyes wandered. She tapped her pen back and forth on her desk, while her partner just stared at her in interest. Jinny's eyes kept wandering until she noticed a shadow creep up to her. She slowly stopped tapping the pen, and turned around. "I was just thinking...." Jinny tried to make up and excuse, but Cap, who was the mean looking shadow, just looked sternly at her. "Listen, Exstead, you can either stay here and work, or go home and "think"! Which is it!" Cap yelled, as Jinny blew air up to her bangs, and made sway. "Alright, Alright, I'll stay and work. But we need some "work" to do!" Jinny answered with a smirk on her face. Cap just gave her a quick look, and then turned to face everyone. "Ok, I have cases. CD, Angela, you get to ride the desk today.." Cap started, smirking at the two Inspectors. "Great!" Angela's sarcasium was starting to show, and CD liked it. However, all she could do was moan at the assinment. Cap cleared her throat and continued. "Exstead, Ramirez, some officers spotted that kid buying beer again. They followed him and now you get to go pick him up...." Jinny and Mag smiled at each other in excitment. A 17 year old kid ran from the corner store, to a homeless shelter with a 6 pack of beer. When he got into the building, he went straight to a 15 year old girl. The girl had brown hair, blue eyes, and ratty clothes. Her light blue baggy jeans had rips and stains, and her plain black t-shirt was also ripped and stained. The girl smiled at the sight of the older boy, and slowly walked over to him. "Here you go..." The boy smiled, and pulled the 6 pack back out from under his ratty, long, brown, rain coat. All he had on besides the rain coat was a pair of jeans, a little too small for him. "Thanks, Brad" The girl smiled back at him, and took the beer. The two of them slowly walked into another room, and closed the door. The room was completely empty except for the two of them. They walked into the middle of the room, and sat down. Brad took a beer, and then so didnt the girl.... Jinny and Mag slowly walked into the shelter. They looked around only to see homeless people everywhere. They were on the floors, on the balcones, and even on each other. Jin and Mag couldn't believe what a mess the place was. It was dark, and smoky from all the fires, it was cold and scary from all the people, and it was just plain wrong. "People shouldnt live like this" Mag sadly looked around, as all the people stared at the two women. "This makes my life look good!" Jinny answered, trying to lightin things up. The two women continued walking through the shelter, looking for the boy. They noticed a parcily well dressed man, standing by a pole. "He looks guilty" Jinny joked, as the two walked over to the man. "What can I do for you two lovely ladies?" The man asked, with a little additude while he studied them up and down. Jinny just rolled her eyes, as Mag approached the man. "Have you seen a kid, about 17, with a pack of beer?" Mag asked sternly. The man smirked a little and held out his hand. "For 10 bucks I have..." Jinny and Mag looked at each other. Finally Mag pulled out her wallet, and handed the guy a 10. "There...he's in there with a girl" The man smiled, and looked down at his money. "Now that wasn't so hard, was it" Jinny stared at the man and raised her eyebrow. "Nope!" The man answered, still smiling as he walked away. Jinny and Mag pulled out their guns and walked over to the door. "Well, lets get'em" ........ ok, how do you like it so far? If you dont like it I wont go on, but if you do I will! ------------------ ><Ray>< "In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead |
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*funger agger* LOL
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*I* like it, so keep it coming, girl!
------------------ Beverly Ann: *hears phone ring and looks in drawer* Oh, I found the cat! Jo: There's two kinds a people in this world, people who get shoved around, and people who do the shoving. Blair: Turn BLUE! And from your two resident off-topic queens, Danielle and I, and our trainee, K, who are still looking for that 12 step program by the way: *^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^* |
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keep going this is awesome!!!!
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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MORE THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!;o)
------------------ Visit My Fol Website click above^. Last updated:August 29 2001. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Its my life!This is who I am!And you tell me it does'nt matter! -Jinny ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Love beliver So take the love He's giving to you A love receiver Cause everything He's Promised is true Love beliver Listen to the song that I sing You are the child of the King" -Love Beliver. ~~~~~~~ "Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl (why be a good girl?)she is a see-saw seeing if it matters she is a game of Chutes and Laders. be a good girl (why be a good girl?) she needs the one who wrote the definition of a love without condition be a good girl." -Good Girl. |
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Glad you like it, here's some more:
The two cops kicked the door down and barrged in. Brad and the girl quickly stood up...a little stunded. "This can't be good..." The girl took one big gulp of the beer, crushed the can, and threw it on the ground. "You know, littering is illeagle in this state, and doing it while two cops have guns pointed at you is not the smartest thing you'll ever do..." Jinny looked sternly at the girl, hoping to scare her. But for some reason, it didn't work. "You are cops?" The girl started to laugh, which was new to Jinny and Mag. "You think thats funny?" Jinny asked madly. The girl just cleared her throat and stopped laughing, but didnt stop smiling. "You wont think it's too funny in jail, I bet" "Your probably right, but the thing is I'm not going to jail!" The girl picked up a beer and quickly threw it at Jinny. And then before Jinny and Mag knew it, she was out the door. Mag started to go after her, but was stopped by the mad voice of her partner. "You take him in, I'll get that little brat!" Jinny bolted out the door, whipping her coat the best she could while she was running. The girl ran out into the street, which was exstremly crowded. Jinny followed her to the street, but took one look at all the people and paused. "Damit!" She yelled, putting her gun back in it's holster. Mag walked out with Brad in hand cuffs, and put him in the car. Jinny slowly wipped more of the beer off her jacket, and headed for the car. "We'll get her, dont worry!" Mag assured her friend. But Jinny wasn't worried about that. There was something about her...but Jinny couldn't put her finger on it... Ok, i gotta go pack for camp, but i'll write more tonite! |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Ok.... But Hurry up and post more soon!!!;o)
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come on ray! screw packing for camp, post more!!!!!!!!! this is awesome!~
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*funger agger* LOL
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OOOOOOOOO, I can't wait to see what happens! Post more so I can find out!
About whether police officers would break down a door over illegal possession of alcohol, I don't really know or anything, but they probably do that just to scare the people or take them by surprise so they don't have enough time to get out a weapon or run or defend themselves, but then again, I'm no expert. |
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OMG, dis is SOOOO good!!! don jus leave me hangin like dis!!!! POST MORE B4 I GO INSANE!! lol
ttyl, lylas n lylab, ![]() ------------------ ~Jinny (wel, muh real name is Jamie, but muh nickname is Jinny) some time in the year 2007, My best friends Kiera (PA),Jessica (NC wit me), n Ana (NC wit me 2) r goin to Cali 2 meet Nancy McKeon!!!! i pikked the year 2007 cause thats wen I'm turnin 18, I CANT WAIT, oh ya, sry but nobody else can cum please visit muh site at: http://www.jamies-nancy-mckeon-site....nts.cfm/780316 Ima Nancy McKeon n TD fanatic, u gots a problem wit dat? WELL SHOVE IT!!~Me I am who I am, dont eva try 2 change me~Me the truth hurts, but since wen did i say u cudn't still tell me it?!?!~Me ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ puleez, e-mail or IM me at WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com or Jamiegirl2006@aol.com |
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YOU GOTTA POST MORE!! I CAN'T WIAT FOR THE REST!!!!!! |
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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ya know that is the weirdest word.I think I know what's gonna happen but I'm gonna keep my mouth shut!!post more soon.
------------------ The Facts Of Life reunion will air on my B-Day November 18!!!!! Michael J. Fox on acceptinghis fate with Parkinson's. "It's made me stronger.A million times wiser.And more compassinate,I've realized I'm vulnerable,that no matter how many awards I'm given or how big my bank account is I can be messed with like that.The end of the story is you die.We all die.So,accepting that,the issue becomes one quility of life." ~Michael J. Fox "I don't really think that way.If I were to croos the river tomorrow,I'd think I had as good a time here [on earth] as people could have.I'm enjoying the day and watching how things evolve." ~Nancy McKeon *God Bless* |
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Thanks for your compliments and I will add more Tomorrow! Thanks again!
------------------ ><Ray>< "In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead |
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Mag and Jinny got into the car, and started to drive away. But just as they started to leave, Jinny saw the girl running down and alley. Without even thinking, she stopped the car, and ran out after the girl. The girl didin't realize it until it was too late and she was up against the wall while Jinny was holding her gun out at her.
"Hey, hey, there is no need to get violent!" The girl put her hands up half way. "Ya, well you through beer on my jacket! As much as I may like to DRINK beer, I DO NOT ON ANY OCCATION LIKE TO WEAR IT! ESPCIALLY ON MY LEATHER!" Jinny yelled, backing up a little. Of course the girl thought this was the best time to escape, and started to turn to climb up the wall. Without even thinking, Jinny shot her gun at the girl and hit her in the arm. For some reason, Jinny felt she was allowed to do that...even though she wasnt. But it didn't matter, the girl turned back around to face Jinny, and looked at her right arm. About 2 inches abover her elbow, she saw the hole where she had been shot, and sat blood dripping down her arm. But, she didn't seem bothered by it. She looked back up at Jinny and smirked. "Alright, we're goin to the hospital, then the station!" Jinny pulled out her handcuffs and put them on the girl gently. Jinny didn't seem to notice that the girl wasn't in pain...she was just consintrated on getting her to the station.... Jinny had insited in the car that Mag take Brad to the station, and that she let her take the girl, to the hospital. Finally Mag agreed and dropped them off. Jinny took the girl, still in handcuffs, to the front desk. "Excuse me, I'm Inspector Exstead she has been shot!" Jinny shoved the girls arm in the nurses face, who jumped back a little. "Um, ok...sign these forms while we take your daughter to get some stiches!" Jinny opened her mouth and was about to correct the nurse, but figured it wasn't nessacary at the time, and started to fill out the forms. About 5 minutes later, the nurse came back out and walked over to Jinny. "Excuse me, Inspector, but your daughter is refusing to have any novicane! She keeps saying she doesnt need it!" Jinny got up and looked at the nurse. "First of all, she's not my daughter, and second of all...." Jinny paused for a second. "Well, there is no second of all, just show me where the room is." the nurse nodded and showed Jinny to the room. "Thank god!" The girl sighed as she saw Jinny. "Now cop lady, tell them not to give me novicane!" "Why don't you want it?" Jinny questioned a little confused. She wasn't sure if the girl was acting tough, or really was tough! Hell, she didn't even know the girls name. "About a year ago, I got into this fight with this bad dude...unexpectingly, he pulled out a knife, and stabed me little below the right shoulder..." The girl took her left hand, and showed Jinny and the doctor the spot she was talking about. "Ever since then, I've had no feeling in my right arm. Thats why the bullet didn't hurt." Jinny and the doctor looked at each other a little confused. They didn't seem to believe her. "I dont need it! Watch..." She yelled, as she stuck one of her fingers in the wound and moved it around. Both Jinny and the doctor closed their eyes at the sight. "Well...." the doctor said, looking at Jinny, as the girl wipped her bloddly finger on her pants. Jinny nodded at the doctor, meaning to just forget the novicane and go right to the stiches. But Jinny decided while he was stiching her up, it was the best time to find out more about her. "So, who are you?" Jinny asked, as the girl sat on the table, not paying any attention to the doctor stiching her. "People call me Ex..." She answered, knowing what Jinny was gonna ask next. "X? as in the letter X?" Ex laughed at the question as she shook her head. "No, X as in E-X" Jinny raised her eyebrow and thought for a minute. "Ok, so whats your real name?" Ex laughed again, and again she shook her head. "I dont have a real name. I dont have a real family. I dont have a real anything" she answered, her laugh fading to a frown. "What?" Jinny was now more confused then ever. "I was put up for adoption when I was 3. Since I wasn't a baby, no one wanted me and I traveled from Fostor home to fostor home. They all gave me different names...and they were all bad. But for some reason I always like the name EX....so finally when I was 11, I ran away, and kept the name Ex! I've been on the street ever since" Ex looked at Jinny, awaiting a response. But Jinny just looked down at the floor in shock and said nothing. So Ex decided to continue. "Well, I'm 15 now, and let me tell ya, life on the street sucks! I mean SUCKS! I'm lucky if I get 2 meals a day...thats why I went to the shelter. And thats where I met Brad. He told me everything he had done in the past, and how you and your partner have been after him for a while." Jinny finally looked up at Ex...and Ex stared at Jinny. "He killed at store clerk just to get a 6-pack of beer. He's also done many armed robbery's, and just plain robbery's, all for beer." Jinny watched as Ex nodded to everything she was saying. "So, whats your name? I didn't catch it last time cuz I was too busy trying to loosen these...I cant feel my hands" Ex moved her arms quickly to show Jinny the handcuffs that were too tight. "Hey!" The doctor looked down at Ex, who was completely cluless on what she had done. "You can't move like that, or things like THIS happen!" The doctor pointed to the needle with the stich, but it wasn't near her wound. Because she had moved, it was now through the middle of her arm. "Thats not right!" Ex yelled, looking at her arm. "Fix it!" "Fine, but you cant move!" The doctor yelled back, as he continued working on her arm. Jinny held back her laughter, but let out a smile. "So..." Ex was still waiting for Jinny's name. "Exstead, Inspector Exstead" Jinny answered, as Ex looked at her funny. "Is that X as in the letter X..S-T-E-A-D" Ex mocked the Inspector, who luckily found it amusing. "No, X as in E-X...S-T-E-A-D" Jinny laughed, and Ex did too....it was the first time Ex had laughed happily in a long time, a real long time, and she was glad it was with THAT Inspector.... Ok, I g2g now, but will add more as soon as I can! Tell me what you think! ------------------ ><Ray>< "In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead |
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i already told u on aim this kicks ass now hurry up and add more, please!!
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NMK fan forever
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Please hurry this is so GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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