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The day after the intervention;Jinny was at home sitting on the couch thinking about
Teddy."I wonder why he wasn't there" she thought."My family and friends claim they were there because they care about me"."If that's the case,Teddy doesn't seem to care about me very much"."He didn't even show up!" "Hmm.Maybe he's the ONLY one who cares".Just then,when Jinny least expected it,she got a call from her beloved Teddy."Hello?" she said."Hi,Jinny"."Teddy? I haven't talked to you or seen you in god knows how long"."I know...I...I've missed you" said Teddy."I've missed you too" said Jinny as tears streamed down her cheeks."How are you,Jin?" "as well as could be exepected,I suppose" said Jinny reverently"."I know about the intervention". "I'm glad you didn't come" said Jinny."Don't you want to know why I didn't?" inquired Teddy."yes" repied Jinny."I...was...afraid you wouldn't want me there" said Teddy hesitantly."Teddy! I didn't want anyone there"."I wish they'd all leave me the hell alone!" "Jinny,you know they're all concerned about you and they were just trying to help". "Anyway,Jinny...I...was afraid you'd shun me away if I came" said Teddy in a shaky voice. "It seems like u don't WANT me to love you or care about you"."What do you MEAN Teddy?!" said Jinny in frustration."You always tell me these things about your past as if you're trying to scare me away"."None of it matters to be,Jinny." I LOVE you! emphasized Teddy. "I...love you too" said Jinny passively. "You have to go to a twelve step program" said Teddy demandingly."No...I can't".said Jinny stubbornly."Dammit,Jinny! you need help"."I want us to be together".Jinny hangs up the phone,gets in her car,and heads over to the bar.Teddy drops to his knees and burries his face in his hands. |
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Join Date: Apr 22, 2001
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Good start! Add more soon!
------------------ *!*Caitlin*!* *!* Queen Of The Sluts*!* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IM Address: Bixbabe926 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WARNING: I have an extreme attitude problem and I'm very sarcastic. Just think about what you're getting yourself into before you try to pick a fight with me! YOU'VE BEEN WARNED! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I Do, And Aways Will, Love Darren! We've Been Through So Much Already, And We Will Go Through So Much More. Side By Side, Hand In Hand! ~*<3*~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rumors are just a person's way of trying to make you feel down about yourself. You just have to accept the fact that people will talk behind your back and you need to ignore it. That which doesn't kill you will make you stronger! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Don't you wish You could go to sleep And when you wake up Everything was normal again?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One day a policeman saw a man speeding so he took a picture of his license plate. The next day, the man received a ticket and a photograph of his license plate in the mail. So he sent the police a photo of the money he was supposed to pay for his fine. Two days later, the man received a picture of a pair of handcuffs. *Tell me that that isn't the funniest thing that you eva heard!* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead. ----------------------- |
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youre RAD <3<3
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2001
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More!!!!!!!!!!
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Join Date: Sep 21, 2001
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Thanks but I think it sucks.It's my first time writing a fan fic.Here's more though...
The next morning;Jinny woke up with a hangover (as usual) so she felt like ****.She couldn't believe what she did. "After all the people who supposedly care for me poured their hearts out by telling me how my excessive drinking affects them and I,this is what I do". "I go out to a bar and drink until I'm intoxicated"."I'm sick EVERY morning!" "What the hell kind of life is this?!" said Jinny to herself."Dammit! I even hung up on Teddy to go to the bar because he kept talking drinking and I couldn't resist the temptation".Just then,once again,when Jinny least expected it,Teddy called."Hello?" said Jinny (knowing it was Teddy since he always seems to call when she's thinking of him)."Jinny,get your stuff together.I'll be over in 20 minutes to help you pack"."Teddy,what the hell are you talking about?" said Jinny,who was confused and disorientated"."You're going to live with me" said Teddy sincerely."Says who?" "ME! Who else?" said Teddy impatiently". "I don't believe this!" shouts Jinny,who was getting frustrated."Look,Jinny...I love you too much to let you die.If you keep drinking, that's exactly what's going to happen"."Maybe I don't care" said Jinny without any emotion. "Dammit,Jinny! I DO care"."You're being very self-centered.There's so many people who care about you and you're going to let yourself die because YOU don't care"."Have you even considered how anyone else would feel if anything happened to you?! inquired Teddy in an angry but concerned manner."Yes!" cried Jinny."All the time"."If that's true,you'll get your stuff together and come with me" said Teddy."Jinny,If you won't go to a program,I'll dedicate myself to making sure you get sober"."Maybe I don't know what I'm doing but I'll sure as hell try" said Teddy. "OK,Teddy...I'll give it a shot"."Great! I'll be over in a few" said Teddy more enthusiastic than ever". |
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Join Date: Sep 21, 2001
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I'll post the rest later
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youre RAD <3<3
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c'mon post more!!!
------------------ Nancy's #2 Fan, Lisa *I say number 2 cuz everyone says to be her #1!!* C'mon and ZOOM! ZOOM rocks! So does The Division! But ZOOM comes first! *Sorry heh heh* |
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*funger agger* LOL
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MORE!
Yup, that sums it up...lol ------------------ Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. Check out my Nancy McKeon Links site! http://www.geocities.com/nancymckeonlinkssite And from your resident off-topic queens and royalty: *^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^* |
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Join Date: Sep 21, 2001
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Does anyone want to finish my fanfic? I'm too lazy...heh heh.No,I'm kidding.I just
happen to have writer's block.I can't think of anything else to write and I don't really have the time to write anymore.I'm sorry... I won't write any more fanfics unless I plan on finishing them.This was my first attempt at writing one and I couldn't handle it.My life is kind of crazy right now and time is something I can't afford to waste.Take care, everyone.I apologize for the inconvenience. hehe.
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