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baffledee · 08-16-2001, 03:58 PM

-this takes place right after the intervention, and how Jinny is dealing with the whole no drinking issue. Hopefully this will be a seris of episodes like the show, but it will mainly focus on Jinny and her personal life at least how interperet it. I have the first two episode written if you care. Tell me If you want me to stop.

The Uncovered Pain(episode one)
Chapter One
"84 more days." Jinny Exstead sighed as she added another tally to the list. The list was just a blank peice of white computer paper with six tallys under the words 'Days I've been sober' Jinny didn't look well. She had dark bags under her eyes as sign of no sleep. She looked thin, almost too thin. Her apartmwnt was a mess as usual, except it wasn't dirty clothes and empty bottles laying around, it was papers and boxes. "Why can't I sleep? Why am I talking to myself? I've been sober six days aren't I supposed to feel better? I can't sleep, I barely want to eat and drink.Urrrrrrrrrgggg!"
She took a deep breath and crawled into bed. After a few hours of tossing and turning she got out of bed and went straight for her bookcase. "aha"she yawned as she found the perfect book. The book was an old eighteenth century classic by Charles Dickens. Great Expectations put Jinny to sleep before the light could magically go out.
It was 8:00 am sharp and the division was already active.
"oh really Cd, see I don't beleive you, No no I can't can not believe you, That is the stupidest thing I have ever heard." Angela laughed as she poured the coffee.
"Hi guys" Magda greeted sounding a little down .
"Whats wrong?" asked Cd as she led the other two inspectors to her desk.
"Jinny, That's whats wrong! Jinny.She doesn't answer my calls, and when I ran into her she looked terrible...Im worried. What if she is sick, or dying or..."
"or drunk" Cd interupted.
"she probablly isn't speaking to you because she's still upset about the intervention." Angela said trying to put some comforting words in.
"well if your that worried, just drop by for lunch" Cd said.
"Guys wannna come?"
Angela and Cd looked at eachother, then shook their heads 'no'.
"come on moral support? Do I have to bribe you into seeing OUR friend?"
"okay, okay we'll go" Cd answered for both of them.
-Stay tunned for chapter two

Do you like?

Divisionbabe05 · 08-16-2001, 04:13 PM

This is GREAT! Keep up tha good work!

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I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting!

*People* Isnt that the craziest word u ever done heard? *LOL*

*Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

nancysbiggestfan · 08-16-2001, 04:18 PM

This is good! Keep goin'.

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
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Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Wild Child · 08-16-2001, 05:27 PM

I really like this so far.Keep going please.

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

FOL_lover · 08-16-2001, 05:36 PM

i love this already!! it's great!! u know i was gonna write a fanfic sorta like this but ur's is much better. i need more, more, more!!! Please!!!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 08-16-2001, 07:02 PM

more!

Swimfan85 · 08-16-2001, 09:04 PM

awesome!

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Comeback-
Man: "If I could see you naked, I'd die happy:
Woman: "Yeah, but if I saw you naked, I'd probably die laughing".
***********
Sarcastic Remark-
Ohhh, let me turn on the part of my brain that gives a damn.
***********
A thing that Pisses me Off-
When people ask "Can I BORROW a piece of paper?" Sure, but please don't return the favor! It's on g-d damn piece of paper!
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

baffledee · 08-17-2001, 05:01 PM

Thanks for the Kind replies
Chapter 2
Jinny continued packing. She didn't know why she was, she wasn't moving. "Urrrrrrrggg!!!!!Why does my life have to be this way? Why do I have to have caring friends and family?Why do I care? URG! Here I go again talking to myself again, not making sense again. I need something new, something new...." Jinny raced around her apartment searching through boxes until she found a small silver gun with the insciption 'Congradulations Inspector Jinny Exstead, Love Dad' She wiped her eye before the tear could form. She opened the barrel and took out five silver bullets. She studied them carefully. She flashedto the memory of her first scary movie.
"Mommy, Daddy Can I sleep with you tonight? I'm scared."
Her father shook his head no. "It's just a movie Jinnygirl, Now go to bed."
A seven year old Jinny looked up at her mom with tearful eyes.
"John, she's our daughter and she's scared, she can sleep with us if she wants to, if you have a problem with that then help yourself to the couch."
"Look Jinny your what...six"
"seven" Jinny interupted holding up seven fingers.
"Not for two more days faucet face" John Jr. Teased. " We'll get you a gun with real silver bullets." He continued.
"Mom johns being mean"she taddled.
Her mother smiled gently and kissed her oldest son goodnight.
"jinny why don't you go get ready , while I check on Casey."
"Alright mommy, Night daddy." She ran up to him an d hugged him.She pulled him down and whispered in his ear. "There no monsters up there right?"
John couldn't help but laugh. "no sweetie, see you in a bit." He said as he saw his daughter scamper up the stairs then turned to an angry wife.
"John I told you she is too young to see that werewolf movie How could you?"
"Baby you geard her she's 'seven'" He said mocking his daughter.
"And to not let hersleep with us! How could you?"
"I just want more little Jinny's.I want another daughter. Don't you?"
"Yes but this one already exisits, I think she should have more attention, and besides your just horny." She turned to the stairs and heard little footsteps scurry up; to the master bedroom. She glanced at her husband and said "I think our daughter wants to ba a detective, be ready for interrogation." And she walked up the stairs to the youngests room.
Jinny's face was covered in tears. The thought of her mother was too much. She spun the barrel to the first position and loaded it. 'I only need one' she thought. She closed the barrel and placed the other four bullets on the coffee table. Her hand began to shake tremendously as she pulled the off the safety. she managed to get the gun inside her mouth. The tears kept flowing out of her eyes, she didn't want to and it was obvious. Her finger began to move back towards the trigger. In a matter of seconds she'd be dead. The trigger moved back and then there was a knock. 'Now or Never' she thought. The was suddenly dropped on the table next to the bullets. "coming..." she yelled. Her voice trembling and cracking. 'I'm crying' she thought.

-I hope you liked it

Divisionbabe05 · 08-17-2001, 05:13 PM

OMG I know u didnt just stop there! I know u didnt! Ok so u did, but u hafta post more NOW! Pwease?!?!?!?!?

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I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting!

*People* Isnt that the craziest word u ever done heard? *LOL*

*Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

[This message has been edited by Divisionbabe05 (edited 08-17-2001).]

nancysbiggestfan · 08-17-2001, 07:01 PM

See you DID NOT just leave me there! MORE I need MORE! PLEASE????

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Jinny Girl · 08-17-2001, 09:47 PM

OH

PULEEZE

POST

MORE

SOON

!

Adele · 08-18-2001, 04:04 PM

If you highlight those little faces, they look really weird......Anywayz this is really good.

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~<3~

~*Adele*~

nancysbiggestfan · 08-18-2001, 07:50 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Adele:
If you highlight those little faces, they look really weird......Anywayz this is really good.

I just noticed that. They do look really weird.

Sry, off topic...

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Jinny_Extead · 08-18-2001, 11:18 PM

Post More NOW!!! Please!

baffledee · 08-20-2001, 01:32 AM

OKay here it goes. Warning:This contains some swear words
Chapter 3
Jinny opened the door slightly, then turned for her bedroom.
"Jin, Is everything okay?" Magda asked while pushing the door open. When she heard no answer she dropped the bags of Chinese food on the floor and ran to Jinnys bedroom, followed by CD and Angela who were also equally concerned.
Jinny just laid on her bed staring at the celing. 'Thank god I have friends like them' she thought as another tear left her eyes. 'I should tell them, I need to tell them, they won't understand, or will they.URRRGGG! I'm so confused. No wonder I want to die.' She couldn't help but turn face down and bury her head in her pillow. 'Good maybe I'll suffocate' With that she began to cry even harder, purposely not taking a breathe. moments later she gasped out for air.
The three friends just stood there watching the scene unfold. It was depressing. They had absolutly no idea why she crying yet at the same time knowing completly. 'Maybe she needs a good cry' CD thought not wanting to interfer. 'The problem is with herself...That can't be good.'she continued to think.
"Jinny?" Angela whispered breaking the silence.'I hope she's okay' she thought. She opened her mouth to said something but got interrupted by Magda Rameriz.
"Are you okay?What's wrong?" Magda questioned. Her eyes were so full of concern and love. She cared so much for Jinny, her bestfriend, and yet could not find any words of comfort. She gently placed her hand on Jinny's shoulder. 'She's so cold' In attempt to warm her up she rubbed her shoulder softly. "Come on Jinny, whats wrong?"
'Why is she doing this? I don't deserve comfort. I tried to kill myself bitch! Leave me alone. You're only wasting your damn time. Back off. Leave me alone. LEAVE ME ALONE. UG! I hate myself. Why would anyone want to be my friend.HOW CAN THEY? Why won't she stop, I'm not worth it!!!!!!!!!!' Jinny thought in frustration. She jerked away from Magda's warmth, and stared at worried eyes.
"WHAT'S WRONG? WHAT'S WRONG YOU ASK. NOTHING I'M JUST FINE.NEVER BEEN BETTER. CAN'T I CRY IN PEACE? JUST LEAVE. JUST LEAVE ME ALONE. I HATE YOU ALL, I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN.GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT OF MY LIFE. I DON'T NEED YOU, I NEVER DID. LEAVE!!!!" Yelled a very angry Jinny Exstead. She was known for her outbursts of anger but they never expected this. Magda was close to tears. Jinny had never wished for anyone to leave her life. She didn't believe it for a second, but it stilled scarred. She felt CD tug on her arm and whisper in her ear "Don't worry! Let's go."
Once she heard the door close she relized she had just alienated herself from everything good. She was left with only her suicidal thoughts. She grabbed her gun and left.

-Don't you love to hate me?

08-17-2001, 09:47 PM	#11
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	OH PULEEZE POST MORE SOON ! ! !

08-16-2001, 03:58 PM	#1
baffledee Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 08, 2001 Location: Novato, Ca, USA Posts: 28	The uncovered Pain -this takes place right after the intervention, and how Jinny is dealing with the whole no drinking issue. Hopefully this will be a seris of episodes like the show, but it will mainly focus on Jinny and her personal life at least how interperet it. I have the first two episode written if you care. Tell me If you want me to stop. The Uncovered Pain(episode one) Chapter One "84 more days." Jinny Exstead sighed as she added another tally to the list. The list was just a blank peice of white computer paper with six tallys under the words 'Days I've been sober' Jinny didn't look well. She had dark bags under her eyes as sign of no sleep. She looked thin, almost too thin. Her apartmwnt was a mess as usual, except it wasn't dirty clothes and empty bottles laying around, it was papers and boxes. "Why can't I sleep? Why am I talking to myself? I've been sober six days aren't I supposed to feel better? I can't sleep, I barely want to eat and drink.Urrrrrrrrrgggg!" She took a deep breath and crawled into bed. After a few hours of tossing and turning she got out of bed and went straight for her bookcase. "aha"she yawned as she found the perfect book. The book was an old eighteenth century classic by Charles Dickens. Great Expectations put Jinny to sleep before the light could magically go out. It was 8:00 am sharp and the division was already active. "oh really Cd, see I don't beleive you, No no I can't can not believe you, That is the stupidest thing I have ever heard." Angela laughed as she poured the coffee. "Hi guys" Magda greeted sounding a little down . "Whats wrong?" asked Cd as she led the other two inspectors to her desk. "Jinny, That's whats wrong! Jinny.She doesn't answer my calls, and when I ran into her she looked terrible...Im worried. What if she is sick, or dying or..." "or drunk" Cd interupted. "she probablly isn't speaking to you because she's still upset about the intervention." Angela said trying to put some comforting words in. "well if your that worried, just drop by for lunch" Cd said. "Guys wannna come?" Angela and Cd looked at eachother, then shook their heads 'no'. "come on moral support? Do I have to bribe you into seeing OUR friend?" "okay, okay we'll go" Cd answered for both of them. -Stay tunned for chapter two Do you like?

08-16-2001, 04:13 PM	#2
Divisionbabe05 GO HOGS!!!! Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: Arkansas-Hog Country-WOOOOO PIG SOOIE RAZORBACKS!!! Posts: 1,065	This is GREAT! Keep up tha good work! ------------------ I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting! People Isnt that the craziest word u ever done heard? LOL Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!

08-16-2001, 04:18 PM	#3
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	This is good! Keep goin'. ------------------ ²Tiffany² LYLAS or LYLAB Peace Out! Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse. Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

08-16-2001, 05:27 PM	#4
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	I really like this so far.Keep going please. ------------------ "You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

08-16-2001, 05:36 PM	#5
FOL_lover Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 04, 2001 Location: OH Posts: 392	i love this already!! it's great!! u know i was gonna write a fanfic sorta like this but ur's is much better. i need more, more, more!!! Please!!!

08-16-2001, 07:02 PM	#6
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	more!

08-16-2001, 09:04 PM	#7
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	awesome! ------------------ Comeback- Man: "If I could see you naked, I'd die happy: Woman: "Yeah, but if I saw you naked, I'd probably die laughing". ********* Sarcastic Remark- Ohhh, let me turn on the part of my brain that gives a damn. ******* A thing that Pisses me Off- When people ask "Can I BORROW a piece of paper?" Sure, but please don't return the favor! It's on g-d damn piece of paper! ~~!!kATie!!~~**

08-17-2001, 05:01 PM	#8
baffledee Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 08, 2001 Location: Novato, Ca, USA Posts: 28	Thanks for the Kind replies Chapter 2 Jinny continued packing. She didn't know why she was, she wasn't moving. "Urrrrrrrggg!!!!!Why does my life have to be this way? Why do I have to have caring friends and family?Why do I care? URG! Here I go again talking to myself again, not making sense again. I need something new, something new...." Jinny raced around her apartment searching through boxes until she found a small silver gun with the insciption 'Congradulations Inspector Jinny Exstead, Love Dad' She wiped her eye before the tear could form. She opened the barrel and took out five silver bullets. She studied them carefully. She flashedto the memory of her first scary movie. "Mommy, Daddy Can I sleep with you tonight? I'm scared." Her father shook his head no. "It's just a movie Jinnygirl, Now go to bed." A seven year old Jinny looked up at her mom with tearful eyes. "John, she's our daughter and she's scared, she can sleep with us if she wants to, if you have a problem with that then help yourself to the couch." "Look Jinny your what...six" "seven" Jinny interupted holding up seven fingers. "Not for two more days faucet face" John Jr. Teased. " We'll get you a gun with real silver bullets." He continued. "Mom johns being mean"she taddled. Her mother smiled gently and kissed her oldest son goodnight. "jinny why don't you go get ready , while I check on Casey." "Alright mommy, Night daddy." She ran up to him an d hugged him.She pulled him down and whispered in his ear. "There no monsters up there right?" John couldn't help but laugh. "no sweetie, see you in a bit." He said as he saw his daughter scamper up the stairs then turned to an angry wife. "John I told you she is too young to see that werewolf movie How could you?" "Baby you geard her she's 'seven'" He said mocking his daughter. "And to not let hersleep with us! How could you?" "I just want more little Jinny's.I want another daughter. Don't you?" "Yes but this one already exisits, I think she should have more attention, and besides your just horny." She turned to the stairs and heard little footsteps scurry up; to the master bedroom. She glanced at her husband and said "I think our daughter wants to ba a detective, be ready for interrogation." And she walked up the stairs to the youngests room. Jinny's face was covered in tears. The thought of her mother was too much. She spun the barrel to the first position and loaded it. 'I only need one' she thought. She closed the barrel and placed the other four bullets on the coffee table. Her hand began to shake tremendously as she pulled the off the safety. she managed to get the gun inside her mouth. The tears kept flowing out of her eyes, she didn't want to and it was obvious. Her finger began to move back towards the trigger. In a matter of seconds she'd be dead. The trigger moved back and then there was a knock. 'Now or Never' she thought. The was suddenly dropped on the table next to the bullets. "coming..." she yelled. Her voice trembling and cracking. 'I'm crying' she thought. -I hope you liked it

08-17-2001, 05:13 PM	#9
Divisionbabe05 GO HOGS!!!! Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: Arkansas-Hog Country-WOOOOO PIG SOOIE RAZORBACKS!!! Posts: 1,065	OMG I know u didnt just stop there! I know u didnt! Ok so u did, but u hafta post more NOW! Pwease?!?!?!?!? ------------------ I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting! People Isnt that the craziest word u ever done heard? LOL Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are! [This message has been edited by Divisionbabe05 (edited 08-17-2001).]

08-17-2001, 07:01 PM	#10
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	See you DID NOT just leave me there! MORE I need MORE! PLEASE???? ------------------ ²Tiffany² LYLAS or LYLAB Peace Out! Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse. Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

08-18-2001, 04:04 PM	#12
Adele Member Forum Regular Join Date: May 02, 2001 Posts: 634	If you highlight those little faces, they look really weird......Anywayz this is really good. ------------------ ~<3~ ~Adele~

08-18-2001, 11:18 PM	#14
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	Post More NOW!!! Please!

08-20-2001, 01:32 AM	#15
baffledee Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 08, 2001 Location: Novato, Ca, USA Posts: 28	OKay here it goes. Warning:This contains some swear words Chapter 3 Jinny opened the door slightly, then turned for her bedroom. "Jin, Is everything okay?" Magda asked while pushing the door open. When she heard no answer she dropped the bags of Chinese food on the floor and ran to Jinnys bedroom, followed by CD and Angela who were also equally concerned. Jinny just laid on her bed staring at the celing. 'Thank god I have friends like them' she thought as another tear left her eyes. 'I should tell them, I need to tell them, they won't understand, or will they.URRRGGG! I'm so confused. No wonder I want to die.' She couldn't help but turn face down and bury her head in her pillow. 'Good maybe I'll suffocate' With that she began to cry even harder, purposely not taking a breathe. moments later she gasped out for air. The three friends just stood there watching the scene unfold. It was depressing. They had absolutly no idea why she crying yet at the same time knowing completly. 'Maybe she needs a good cry' CD thought not wanting to interfer. 'The problem is with herself...That can't be good.'she continued to think. "Jinny?" Angela whispered breaking the silence.'I hope she's okay' she thought. She opened her mouth to said something but got interrupted by Magda Rameriz. "Are you okay?What's wrong?" Magda questioned. Her eyes were so full of concern and love. She cared so much for Jinny, her bestfriend, and yet could not find any words of comfort. She gently placed her hand on Jinny's shoulder. 'She's so cold' In attempt to warm her up she rubbed her shoulder softly. "Come on Jinny, whats wrong?" 'Why is she doing this? I don't deserve comfort. I tried to kill myself bitch! Leave me alone. You're only wasting your damn time. Back off. Leave me alone. LEAVE ME ALONE. UG! I hate myself. Why would anyone want to be my friend.HOW CAN THEY? Why won't she stop, I'm not worth it!!!!!!!!!!' Jinny thought in frustration. She jerked away from Magda's warmth, and stared at worried eyes. "WHAT'S WRONG? WHAT'S WRONG YOU ASK. NOTHING I'M JUST FINE.NEVER BEEN BETTER. CAN'T I CRY IN PEACE? JUST LEAVE. JUST LEAVE ME ALONE. I HATE YOU ALL, I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN.GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT OF MY LIFE. I DON'T NEED YOU, I NEVER DID. LEAVE!!!!" Yelled a very angry Jinny Exstead. She was known for her outbursts of anger but they never expected this. Magda was close to tears. Jinny had never wished for anyone to leave her life. She didn't believe it for a second, but it stilled scarred. She felt CD tug on her arm and whisper in her ear "Don't worry! Let's go." Once she heard the door close she relized she had just alienated herself from everything good. She was left with only her suicidal thoughts. She grabbed her gun and left. -Don't you love to hate me?