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AllIWantIsYourClutch · 08-07-2001, 04:45 PM

OK This is my VERY first fan fic so it's really bad, but oh well...

After Jinny gets home from her intervention:

Jinny walks into her apartment and takes a good look around. She notices that all of her bottles are completely gone “Oh great,” she says to herself, “That’s wonderful! They took it all!” She walks into her bedroom, lifts up the mattress, and takes out the small bottle of vodka. She smiles and adds, “Well, not all of it!” As she unscrews the cap, the phone rings. She sighs, “Perfect timing.” Jinny ignores the phone and drinks a large sip of the vodka, and then she puts it back under the mattress. She grabs her coat and heads for Anchorside, while the phone continues to ring.

At Anchorside….

As Jinny enters Anchorside, she notices CD standing by the bar. “Oh great….” she mumbles, and heads for the door. CD stops her, “Jinny, we need to talk!” Jinny says, “Oh, CD, I think we’ve done enough talking for one night, don’t you?” CD replies, “Ok Jinny, that’s fine. Just tell me one thing. What are you doing here? You told all of us that you were going to try to stop, and here you are, walking into a bar! Not even an hour later…” Jinny smiles and shakes her head. “God, nobody trusts me anymore, do they? I came here to have some dinner. I haven’t eaten all night, and I’m hungry! Is that OK with you? Do you want to sit here and watch me eat?” “Jin, I’m sorry. I-I- don’t know what to say…” “How about goodbye?” Jinny snaps.

More later....Sorry that sucked...

Swimfan85 · 08-07-2001, 05:20 PM

Omg!!!! dont say that, it did not suck!!! it was awesome in fact!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~
"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Jinny_Extead · 08-07-2001, 05:44 PM

Keep going!!

BlairandJo · 08-07-2001, 06:26 PM

One:It did not "suck"
Two:I love it!!!!!
Three:Post more soon;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
"Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl."
-Good Girl.

BlairW_1 · 08-07-2001, 08:54 PM

Great fic so far!!! Ya know, I've been wondering... Why is it that all y'all's first fics are so good, when mine sucked? I just don't get it! :X Write more soon, plz!!!

buh-byezies now!

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My mouth runs like the Energizer battery: It keeps going and going and going and going...

Visit my site, <A HREF="http://www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished" TARGET=_blank>www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished</A> fanfics: "The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill", "Wounded Pride", and "Blair Gets Hooked".

Fanfics in production:
"Blair's Secret", "Love Conquers All: Jinny's Story", "Second Chance on Love", and "Is That Your Final Answer?".

<3 you, Jacob!

~*Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, Susan, and trainee, Teddys_Angel_Jinny!*~

BlairW_1 · 08-07-2001, 08:56 PM

BTW, excuse your lil self for saying it sucked, uh, me thinks not?

okay, I'm really gonna leave now. buh-byezies. But if I come back again, don't blame me! (That's why I'm the off topic queen, lol!)

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My mouth runs like the Energizer battery: It keeps going and going and going and going...

Visit my site, <A HREF="http://www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished" TARGET=_blank>www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished</A> fanfics: "The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill", "Wounded Pride", and "Blair Gets Hooked".

Fanfics in production:
"Blair's Secret", "Love Conquers All: Jinny's Story", "Second Chance on Love", and "Is That Your Final Answer?".

<3 you, Jacob!

~*Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, Susan, and trainee, Teddys_Angel_Jinny!*~

NewsiesGurl229 · 08-07-2001, 08:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BlairW_1:
Great fic so far!!! Ya know, I've been wondering... Why is it that all y'all's first fics are so good, when mine sucked? I just don't get it! :X Write more soon, plz!!! buh-byezies now!

Ditto, mine ALL suck, yours don't BlairW_1 but all of mine do!

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 08-07-2001, 09:14 PM

Hehehehehe thanks people!

CD walks out the door as Jinny watches. When Jinny was sure that CD had left, she walked to the bar. She laid her head down on the bar and sighed. Sean, the bartender, came over to her, “Rough day?” he asked. “Oh God, you don’t want to know,” and as much as her conscious told her not to, she added, “Just give me something strong; 3 of ’em.” Sean set 3 small shot glasses in front of her. “5 bucks,” he said. Jinny pulled out a ten and said, “Keep the change.” She drank the first 2 in quick gulps, but took her time with the third one. Sean came back over. “Wow! That was fast, Jin.” Jinny replied unsteadily, “Sean…? Ya know that ten I gave you before?” “Yeah….” “Well give me 3 more of whatever those were.” “Are you sure, Jin?” She nodded

I'll post more later!

BlairandJo · 08-07-2001, 09:21 PM

OOOOOOOO I LOVE.This is great!!!!!!!;o)

Jinny_Extead · 08-07-2001, 10:41 PM

This is great!! Keep Going!

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Esperanza

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 08-07-2001, 11:36 PM

Ok here's more:

A half an hour later, Jinny stumbled off of her bar stool and out of Anchorside. She got in her car, put the key in the ignition, and began to drive home.

After driving for about an hour, she realized that she was lost. Jinny now found her self driving on a nearly empty highway, with trees lining the road. She found herself feeling woozy. Like she was gonna pass out. She tried to fight it as much as she could, but she lost control of her car. She passed out as her car swerved into a tree.

Sorry it wuz short butim workin on it

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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folk, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right up!"~ Jinny Exstead

NewsiesGurl229 · 08-08-2001, 12:20 AM

HOW DARE YOU STOP!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A CRIMINAL, IT'S AGAINST THE LAW TO STOP ON THIS FAN FIC!!!!!! Okay, well at least it SHOULD be!

disturbed child · 08-08-2001, 01:00 AM

I love this! It's so gr8. Can't wait for more!

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~* glitterbabie *~

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Carter: So... what do you, er, think about tonight?

Abby: I think it’s the least I could do... no-one should be alone after killing a clown.

Dave: You killed the clown?

Carter: No.

Abby: Didn’t save him.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Carter: You know what? Stop it.

Abby: What?

Carter: Don’t talk to me about Luka. I’m not your girlfriend and I shouldn’t really even be here with you.

Abby: Why not?

Carter: (Pausing) Because I don’t want to wish bad things for you and Luka. And I don’t want to sit on the sidelines waiting for you two to break-up. (Pauses) And I don’t want to be your friend. (Smiles gently) It might be convenient for you but it isn’t doing much for me.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Britt is a Jineddy and Dana is a JinMag. I'm a Carby and a Jinanybody!

*Me, Britt, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 08-08-2001, 07:21 PM

LoL thanks people! Heres more:

As Jinny opened her eyes, she found herself in a hospital room. Magda was sitting in a chair next to her bed. “W-w-what happened, Mag?” Jinny asked. Magda quickly rose from her chair. “Jin, you were in an accident,” Magda replied, “You were drunk. A truck driver found your car smashed into a tree with you inside. I came over as soon as I heard.” Jinny groaned and sat up in her bed, “You mean, you left Ben and came to see me? God, it must be like midnight.” “It’s 4 am, Jin,” Magda said, “You passed out because you were drunk and because of the accident.” Jinny choked back tears. “Does anyone else know?” she asked. Magda replied, “We tried to get ahold of your dad and Casey, but there was no answer.” Just then, the doctor came in. “Ah…Jinny…I see your awake. You must be in a lot of pain!” Jinny nodded. The doctor continued, “Well…I’m afraid I have some news for you.”

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~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folk, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right up!"~ Jinny Exstead

Swimfan85 · 08-08-2001, 08:30 PM

"look buddy i got pms and a gun any questions?" so add more wait no i dont have a gun nor do i have pms so that doesnt work hmmm JUST ADD MORE THIS IS AWESOME!!(That works though)

08-07-2001, 04:45 PM	#1
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	My First Fan Fic (I can't think of a name for it...) OK This is my VERY first fan fic so it's really bad, but oh well... After Jinny gets home from her intervention: Jinny walks into her apartment and takes a good look around. She notices that all of her bottles are completely gone “Oh great,” she says to herself, “That’s wonderful! They took it all!” She walks into her bedroom, lifts up the mattress, and takes out the small bottle of vodka. She smiles and adds, “Well, not all of it!” As she unscrews the cap, the phone rings. She sighs, “Perfect timing.” Jinny ignores the phone and drinks a large sip of the vodka, and then she puts it back under the mattress. She grabs her coat and heads for Anchorside, while the phone continues to ring. At Anchorside…. As Jinny enters Anchorside, she notices CD standing by the bar. “Oh great….” she mumbles, and heads for the door. CD stops her, “Jinny, we need to talk!” Jinny says, “Oh, CD, I think we’ve done enough talking for one night, don’t you?” CD replies, “Ok Jinny, that’s fine. Just tell me one thing. What are you doing here? You told all of us that you were going to try to stop, and here you are, walking into a bar! Not even an hour later…” Jinny smiles and shakes her head. “God, nobody trusts me anymore, do they? I came here to have some dinner. I haven’t eaten all night, and I’m hungry! Is that OK with you? Do you want to sit here and watch me eat?” “Jin, I’m sorry. I-I- don’t know what to say…” “How about goodbye?” Jinny snaps. More later....Sorry that sucked...

08-07-2001, 05:20 PM	#2
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	Omg!!!! dont say that, it did not suck!!! it was awesome in fact! ------------------ Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~ "I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why." ~~~~ Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it? Max: The Bangles broke up. Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point. Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more. *~~!!kATie!!~~*

08-07-2001, 05:44 PM	#3
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	Keep going!!

08-07-2001, 06:26 PM	#4
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	One:It did not "suck" Two:I love it!!!!! Three:Post more soon;o) ------------------ Its my life!This is who I am!And you tell me it does'nt matter! -Jinny ~~~~~~~ If you want something bad enough you go after it no matter what the outcome may be -My Quote ~~~~~~ "Love beliver So take the love He's giving to you A love receiver Cause everything He's Promised is true Love beliver Listen to the song that I sing You are the child of the King" -Love Beliver. ~~~~~~~ "Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl (why be a good girl?)she is a see-saw seeing if it matters she is a game of Chutes and Laders. be a good girl (why be a good girl?) she needs the one who wrote the definition of a love without condition be a good girl." -Good Girl.

08-07-2001, 08:54 PM	#5
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Great fic so far!!! Ya know, I've been wondering... Why is it that all y'all's first fics are so good, when mine sucked? I just don't get it! :X Write more soon, plz!!! buh-byezies now! ------------------ My mouth runs like the Energizer battery: It keeps going and going and going and going... Visit my site, <A HREF="http://www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com! Finished" TARGET=_blank>www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com! Finished</A> fanfics: "The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill", "Wounded Pride", and "Blair Gets Hooked". Fanfics in production: "Blair's Secret", "Love Conquers All: Jinny's Story", "Second Chance on Love", and "Is That Your Final Answer?". <3 you, Jacob! ~Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, Susan, and trainee, Teddys_Angel_Jinny!~

08-07-2001, 08:56 PM	#6
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	BTW, excuse your lil self for saying it sucked, uh, me thinks not? okay, I'm really gonna leave now. buh-byezies. But if I come back again, don't blame me! (That's why I'm the off topic queen, lol!) ------------------ My mouth runs like the Energizer battery: It keeps going and going and going and going... Visit my site, <A HREF="http://www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com! Finished" TARGET=_blank>www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com! Finished</A> fanfics: "The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill", "Wounded Pride", and "Blair Gets Hooked". Fanfics in production: "Blair's Secret", "Love Conquers All: Jinny's Story", "Second Chance on Love", and "Is That Your Final Answer?". <3 you, Jacob! ~Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, Susan, and trainee, Teddys_Angel_Jinny!~

08-07-2001, 09:14 PM	#8
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	Hehehehehe thanks people! CD walks out the door as Jinny watches. When Jinny was sure that CD had left, she walked to the bar. She laid her head down on the bar and sighed. Sean, the bartender, came over to her, “Rough day?” he asked. “Oh God, you don’t want to know,” and as much as her conscious told her not to, she added, “Just give me something strong; 3 of ’em.” Sean set 3 small shot glasses in front of her. “5 bucks,” he said. Jinny pulled out a ten and said, “Keep the change.” She drank the first 2 in quick gulps, but took her time with the third one. Sean came back over. “Wow! That was fast, Jin.” Jinny replied unsteadily, “Sean…? Ya know that ten I gave you before?” “Yeah….” “Well give me 3 more of whatever those were.” “Are you sure, Jin?” She nodded I'll post more later!

08-07-2001, 09:21 PM	#9
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	OOOOOOOO I LOVE.This is great!!!!!!!;o)

08-07-2001, 10:41 PM	#10
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	This is great!! Keep Going! ------------------ Esperanza

08-07-2001, 11:36 PM	#11
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	Ok here's more: A half an hour later, Jinny stumbled off of her bar stool and out of Anchorside. She got in her car, put the key in the ignition, and began to drive home. After driving for about an hour, she realized that she was lost. Jinny now found her self driving on a nearly empty highway, with trees lining the road. She found herself feeling woozy. Like she was gonna pass out. She tried to fight it as much as she could, but she lost control of her car. She passed out as her car swerved into a tree. Sorry it wuz short butim workin on it ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead "Oh please, folk, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right up!"~ Jinny Exstead

08-08-2001, 12:20 AM	#12
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	HOW DARE YOU STOP!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A CRIMINAL, IT'S AGAINST THE LAW TO STOP ON THIS FAN FIC!!!!!! Okay, well at least it SHOULD be!

08-08-2001, 01:00 AM	#13
disturbed child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: In denial. Posts: 823	I love this! It's so gr8. Can't wait for more! ------------------ ~* glitterbabie ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Carter: So... what do you, er, think about tonight? Abby: I think it’s the least I could do... no-one should be alone after killing a clown. Dave: You killed the clown? Carter: No. Abby: Didn’t save him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Carter: You know what? Stop it. Abby: What? Carter: Don’t talk to me about Luka. I’m not your girlfriend and I shouldn’t really even be here with you. Abby: Why not? Carter: (Pausing) Because I don’t want to wish bad things for you and Luka. And I don’t want to sit on the sidelines waiting for you two to break-up. (Pauses) And I don’t want to be your friend. (Smiles gently) It might be convenient for you but it isn’t doing much for me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Britt is a Jineddy and Dana is a JinMag. I'm a Carby and a Jinanybody! Me, Britt, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!

08-08-2001, 07:21 PM	#14
AllIWantIsYourClutch peaceout. Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 02, 2001 Location: Illinois. Posts: 53,424	LoL thanks people! Heres more: As Jinny opened her eyes, she found herself in a hospital room. Magda was sitting in a chair next to her bed. “W-w-what happened, Mag?” Jinny asked. Magda quickly rose from her chair. “Jin, you were in an accident,” Magda replied, “You were drunk. A truck driver found your car smashed into a tree with you inside. I came over as soon as I heard.” Jinny groaned and sat up in her bed, “You mean, you left Ben and came to see me? God, it must be like midnight.” “It’s 4 am, Jin,” Magda said, “You passed out because you were drunk and because of the accident.” Jinny choked back tears. “Does anyone else know?” she asked. Magda replied, “We tried to get ahold of your dad and Casey, but there was no answer.” Just then, the doctor came in. “Ah…Jinny…I see your awake. You must be in a lot of pain!” Jinny nodded. The doctor continued, “Well…I’m afraid I have some news for you.” ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead "Oh please, folk, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right up!"~ Jinny Exstead

08-08-2001, 08:30 PM	#15
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	"look buddy i got pms and a gun any questions?" so add more wait no i dont have a gun nor do i have pms so that doesnt work hmmm JUST ADD MORE THIS IS AWESOME!!(That works though)