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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 07-29-2001, 03:50 AM

Okay..I know I'm not finished with the Engagement or the Wedding Dress Shopping Fan-Fictions yet,but be sure I WILL finish them. Soon. Here it goes.

~Believe~ The Wedding Story~
Series 1,Story(n/a).
By, #1_Nancy_McKeon

She reached for the doorknob, turns it , and opens the door. Once she steps foot into the bedroom in her Father's house that had belonged to her many years before. Jinny felt her body ease and made her feel more calm about what the day had in store,once she looked around her room. Yet, all the memories of her mother came floating back. She took a breath, shook her head ,and continued into the room carrying her garment bag containing her wedding dress. Once she arrives at her bed she lies it down. Jinny looks down at the bag.
"Hey Jin." a voice sprang from behind her. Jinny turns around quickly to see her partner standing in the doorway of the room. She looks at Magda for a moment and moves her bangs to the side out of her face. "Oh hey,Mag." she reply's. "Don't sound too excited now,Jinny." Magda says a bit sarcastically back as she looks around the room then proceeds in,and sets the garment bag on the bed next to Jinny's. Jinny watches Magda do so,nervously. Magda looks to the side of her at the bride-to-be and flashed her a smile knowing she was nervous, "I'm so happy for you,Jin." she adds and walks over to her and wraps her arms around Jinny. "Everything's going to be great. It's your and Teddy's day. You're getting married." she says encouragingly to Jinny as she lets go of her and looks at her. "I know." Jinny nods forcing a nervous smile at her partner. "It's going to work out,Jin. You just watch." Magda reply's patting Jinny's shoulder. "Don't jinx it,Mag." Jinny laughs alittle. Beginning to feel better now. Like she wasn't alone to worry about all that could go wrong.

More to Come! What do you think?

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Jeanie · 07-29-2001, 03:55 AM

I like the story. I have said it before and I will say it again you are a very talented writer . I also liek the pic there you have done a awesome job.Keep up the good work and more soon please.

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Jeanie

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

InspectorDeLorenzo · 07-29-2001, 03:55 AM

I like! *thumbs up* Keep going

WRite more!

- C.D. The Omniscient

sue z q · 07-29-2001, 11:00 AM

Coooooool!!!!!!!!!! Now if only we could have an actual ep of Jinny and Theodore getting married! Although, I would imagine it would probably be like this fanfic, cause you're such a great writer.

MORE!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 07-29-2001, 02:01 PM

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Originally posted by sue z q:
Coooooool!!!!!!!!!! Now if only we could have an actual ep of Jinny and Theodore getting married! Although, I would imagine it would probably be like this fanfic, cause you're such a great writer. MORE!

Ditto!

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Jo_Polniaczek · 07-29-2001, 03:02 PM

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Originally posted by InspectorDeLorenzo:
I like! *thumbs up* Keep going WRite more!

- C.D. The Omniscient

Yea, ya better write more!! Aaah, I'm actually agreeing with her? Ahhh! Okay, umm. Hurry up!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-29-2001, 06:58 PM

great story! can't wait for more....and I love the pictures, so cute!!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 07-30-2001, 03:05 AM

Thanks Everyone! Glad you enjoyed the Picture and the fan-fiction.

Here's more..

Theodore walked down a long line of tables to the side of the park located across the street from Jinny's Father's House. Where they are going to hold the wedding. Mr. Blumenthal comes up from behind Theodore and puts his arm around him. "Everything is set and ready to go,Son. Now just whenever you and your bride are ready." Theodore laughs alittle at his Father, "I know. I was just double checking. Besides Dad the guests aren't even all here yet. We still have-" Theodore looks down at his watch. "Another two hours,22 minutes,and 6 seconds to go." he says looking up to his father with a smile. "So you think you're ready for this big step,Teddy?" Mr. Blumenthal asks his son. Before Theodore could answer his father started again. "You really have something special,Son." "Of course I'm ready,Dad. I've been ready since the day I proposed. Before that even. Jinny may have her flaws. As do everyone,but I don't care about any of that. We can work through whatever comes in our way." Theodore says. "I'm glad. I wish you two the most of luck. If you care so much for Jinny,I say...Go get her." Mr. Blumenthal says with a laugh.

"Hey Jinny, Captain is here!" Casey hollers up the stairs to Jinny. Kate reaches over and puts her hand on Casey's shoulder. "You can call me Kate today,Casey." she reply's politely.

jo_24 · 07-30-2001, 08:27 AM

Great! Keep posting! I luv it!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter... it doesn't change anything... Yeah, that's what I thought!

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"Basically people are who people are. You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-05-2001, 04:37 AM

Here's more if anyone is still reading. haha :

Jinny looks over to Magda who's across the room once she hears her brother. Magda had slipped on her Violet Bridesmaid Dress,and was looking at herself in the mirror. The dress was form fitting until her hip began,then cascaded down loosly. "Okay,Send her up." Jinny shouts downstairs to her brother. "So what do you think,Jin? Magda asks when she turns around and faces Jinny in the dress. "It looks really nice,Mag." Jinny reply's. "Thanks. It's a great color." Magda smiles.
There's a knock on the open door. Jinny looks over and standing in the doorway was Captain. She motions for her to come in.. Magda glances over, "hey Cap." Kate reply's, "Hey Magda." .."Jinny." she adds aswell. "Jin,could you zip this up for me?" Magda asks turning around,moving her curly hair to the side revealing the half zipped zipper. Jinny stands up, "Sure." she reply's and walks over to Magda.

The door to John Exstead (senior)'s house had been left open. Theodore and his father walk up the front steps and across the porch to the front door. Instead of just walking in Theodore leans in slightly and knocks on the already opened door. John (senior) walks into the living room, "Hey Teddy. Come in,the door's open." he motioning them to come in. "Thanks John." Mr. Blumenthal reply's as he enters the house. All three men already dressed for the wedding in their Tuxedos. "You nervous yet?" John (senior) asks as he takes a seat in his chair. Theodore shakes his head. Putting his bottom lip out slightly when he does so, "Not a bit." he reply's as he sits down aswell. He thinks a minute then looks back at the two older men, "I don't know,uh,should I be?" he asks confused. "All I know,Son. Is when I got married to your mom my knees were shaking. I was so nervous." Mr. Blumenthal informs. "Oh God,that's nothing." John (senior) swats the air and raises his voice. "When I got married to my Wife.." he begins. "Jinny's Mom." he reply's in a slightly lower voice before he continues again as he raises it again. "I was sick as a dog two days leading up to it." Theodore listens to each man reminising. He shakes his head not knowing 'why' they were so nervous. He didn't feel that way at all. Then there was a sound of heels walking across the porch.

Angela stops as she walks across the porch,turns around,and looks back to the front steps where she had somehow lost C.D. on the way up. "Hurry Up,C.D." Angela remarks. "I'm coming!" she reply's right before she arrives at the top of the stairs,barefoot holding her high heels in her hand. "Real nice." Angela laughs as she softly pats her belly when she sees C.D. "What?" her partner asks with a smirks as she bends down and slides her heels back on.

Swimfan85 · 08-05-2001, 12:13 PM

this is awesome, cannot wait for more and dont worry, i am still reading! wwell actully since i was at camp this is the first day i read this but i wanna know what happens next cuz u are a very talented writer so please continue with this great story

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-06-2001, 03:10 AM

Thanks a lot. I appreciate it. Here's more:

Facing the mirror Jinny turns around with her long beige wedding dress on,and waits for Kate and Magda's response. "Oh Jinny,it's beautiful!" Magda stands from the bed and walks over to Jinny. "Yeah,you look real nice,Exstead." Captain nods,as she stands to the left of Jinny and Magda. "Thanks." Jinny reply's with a smile as she looks back at herself in the mirror. 'knock knock knock.' "Come in." Jinny says looking toward the closed bedroom door. The door opens and C.D. and Angela step in already dressed in their bridesmaid dresses. "Wow,Jinny in a proper dress. Never thought I'd see the day." C.D. jokes. Angela gives her partner a look,then looks back to Jinny. "You look really great." Angela says politely. "Thanks Guys." she reply's with a grin. "So uh how does that one saying go?" Jinny asks. C.D. gives a look saying she's lost. "You know the one..Something old.." Jinny begins making hand motions not knowing the rest. "Something new,something old,something borrowed,and something blue." Kate reply's as she walks over to the side of the room in sits in a chair. "Okay,let's see...." Jinny drifts off. "I have my wedding dress. That's new." she puts one finger up. "That counts right?" "Sure it does,Jin." her partner responds. Jinny nods, "Ok." she continues, "Something old." she taps her foot as she things and unconciously looks in Kate's direction. "Don't say it,Jinny." Captain reply's when she notices this. "What?" Jinny asks not realizing what her actions were a moment before. She shrugs, "Something borrowed." the Inspector continues and walks over to the bed to Sit. Her friends look amongst themselves. "I've got a pair of earrings in my car." Kate speaks up. "You mind?" Jinny asks as she looks at Captain. "No." she shakes her head. "I'll be right back." Kate says and stands. "Okay,Cap." Magda reply's and watches Captain leave. "What was the last one?" Jinny asks. "Something blue." Angela responds. "Right." Jinny reply's,rubs her forehead,and gets up.

Two Hours go by in a flash...........................

The many chairs set up under the large Canapes were beginning to fill. With Theodore and Jinny's friend's and family. Theodore took a last stroll around the park filled with tables,chairs,and a band. Among other things. Just to make sure everything was perfect for his and Jinny's wedding.

XoVanillaRain90oX · 08-06-2001, 09:30 AM

WOW! This is such a good story! Oh I LOVE the picture! Post More!

Jinny_Extead · 08-06-2001, 11:01 AM

I love it!!!

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Esperanza

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Swimfan85 · 08-06-2001, 11:02 AM

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Originally posted by Division_Fan_Lisa:
WOW! This is such a good story! Oh I LOVE the picture! Post More!

very well said!!! please continue!!!!

07-29-2001, 03:50 AM	#1
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Believe-The Wedding Story (Fan-Fiction) Okay..I know I'm not finished with the Engagement or the Wedding Dress Shopping Fan-Fictions yet,but be sure I WILL finish them. Soon. Here it goes. *~Believe~ The Wedding Story~* Series 1,Story(n/a). By, #1_Nancy_McKeon She reached for the doorknob, turns it , and opens the door. Once she steps foot into the bedroom in her Father's house that had belonged to her many years before. Jinny felt her body ease and made her feel more calm about what the day had in store,once she looked around her room. Yet, all the memories of her mother came floating back. She took a breath, shook her head ,and continued into the room carrying her garment bag containing her wedding dress. Once she arrives at her bed she lies it down. Jinny looks down at the bag. "Hey Jin." a voice sprang from behind her. Jinny turns around quickly to see her partner standing in the doorway of the room. She looks at Magda for a moment and moves her bangs to the side out of her face. "Oh hey,Mag." she reply's. "Don't sound too excited now,Jinny." Magda says a bit sarcastically back as she looks around the room then proceeds in,and sets the garment bag on the bed next to Jinny's. Jinny watches Magda do so,nervously. Magda looks to the side of her at the bride-to-be and flashed her a smile knowing she was nervous, "I'm so happy for you,Jin." she adds and walks over to her and wraps her arms around Jinny. "Everything's going to be great. It's your and Teddy's day. You're getting married." she says encouragingly to Jinny as she lets go of her and looks at her. "I know." Jinny nods forcing a nervous smile at her partner. "It's going to work out,Jin. You just watch." Magda reply's patting Jinny's shoulder. "Don't jinx it,Mag." Jinny laughs alittle. Beginning to feel better now. Like she wasn't alone to worry about all that could go wrong. More to Come! What do you think? [This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 07-29-2001).]

07-29-2001, 03:55 AM	#2
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	I like the story. I have said it before and I will say it again you are a very talented writer . I also liek the pic there you have done a awesome job.Keep up the good work and more soon please. ------------------ Jeanie Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

07-29-2001, 03:55 AM	#3
InspectorDeLorenzo ~ :D ~ Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 23, 2001 Location: California, USA Posts: 51	I like! thumbs up Keep going WRite more! - C.D. The Omniscient

07-29-2001, 11:00 AM	#4
sue z q funger agger LOL Senior Member Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: CA Posts: 1,687	Coooooool!!!!!!!!!! Now if only we could have an actual ep of Jinny and Theodore getting married! Although, I would imagine it would probably be like this fanfic, cause you're such a great writer. MORE!

07-29-2001, 06:58 PM	#7
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	great story! can't wait for more....and I love the pictures, so cute!!

07-30-2001, 03:05 AM	#8
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks Everyone! Glad you enjoyed the Picture and the fan-fiction. Here's more.. Theodore walked down a long line of tables to the side of the park located across the street from Jinny's Father's House. Where they are going to hold the wedding. Mr. Blumenthal comes up from behind Theodore and puts his arm around him. "Everything is set and ready to go,Son. Now just whenever you and your bride are ready." Theodore laughs alittle at his Father, "I know. I was just double checking. Besides Dad the guests aren't even all here yet. We still have-" Theodore looks down at his watch. "Another two hours,22 minutes,and 6 seconds to go." he says looking up to his father with a smile. "So you think you're ready for this big step,Teddy?" Mr. Blumenthal asks his son. Before Theodore could answer his father started again. "You really have something special,Son." "Of course I'm ready,Dad. I've been ready since the day I proposed. Before that even. Jinny may have her flaws. As do everyone,but I don't care about any of that. We can work through whatever comes in our way." Theodore says. "I'm glad. I wish you two the most of luck. If you care so much for Jinny,I say...Go get her." Mr. Blumenthal says with a laugh. "Hey Jinny, Captain is here!" Casey hollers up the stairs to Jinny. Kate reaches over and puts her hand on Casey's shoulder. "You can call me Kate today,Casey." she reply's politely.

07-30-2001, 08:27 AM	#9
jo_24 ~* The Comedian ~ Occasional Poster* Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: NancKeonVille Posts: 73	Great! Keep posting! I luv it! ------------------ "You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!! Teddy:God, Jinny Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter... it doesn't change anything... Yeah, that's what I thought! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Basically people are who people are. You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead Nancy is Slammin'!

08-05-2001, 04:37 AM	#10
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Here's more if anyone is still reading. haha : Jinny looks over to Magda who's across the room once she hears her brother. Magda had slipped on her Violet Bridesmaid Dress,and was looking at herself in the mirror. The dress was form fitting until her hip began,then cascaded down loosly. "Okay,Send her up." Jinny shouts downstairs to her brother. "So what do you think,Jin? Magda asks when she turns around and faces Jinny in the dress. "It looks really nice,Mag." Jinny reply's. "Thanks. It's a great color." Magda smiles. There's a knock on the open door. Jinny looks over and standing in the doorway was Captain. She motions for her to come in.. Magda glances over, "hey Cap." Kate reply's, "Hey Magda." .."Jinny." she adds aswell. "Jin,could you zip this up for me?" Magda asks turning around,moving her curly hair to the side revealing the half zipped zipper. Jinny stands up, "Sure." she reply's and walks over to Magda. The door to John Exstead (senior)'s house had been left open. Theodore and his father walk up the front steps and across the porch to the front door. Instead of just walking in Theodore leans in slightly and knocks on the already opened door. John (senior) walks into the living room, "Hey Teddy. Come in,the door's open." he motioning them to come in. "Thanks John." Mr. Blumenthal reply's as he enters the house. All three men already dressed for the wedding in their Tuxedos. "You nervous yet?" John (senior) asks as he takes a seat in his chair. Theodore shakes his head. Putting his bottom lip out slightly when he does so, "Not a bit." he reply's as he sits down aswell. He thinks a minute then looks back at the two older men, "I don't know,uh,should I be?" he asks confused. "All I know,Son. Is when I got married to your mom my knees were shaking. I was so nervous." Mr. Blumenthal informs. "Oh God,that's nothing." John (senior) swats the air and raises his voice. "When I got married to my Wife.." he begins. "Jinny's Mom." he reply's in a slightly lower voice before he continues again as he raises it again. "I was sick as a dog two days leading up to it." Theodore listens to each man reminising. He shakes his head not knowing 'why' they were so nervous. He didn't feel that way at all. Then there was a sound of heels walking across the porch. Angela stops as she walks across the porch,turns around,and looks back to the front steps where she had somehow lost C.D. on the way up. "Hurry Up,C.D." Angela remarks. "I'm coming!" she reply's right before she arrives at the top of the stairs,barefoot holding her high heels in her hand. "Real nice." Angela laughs as she softly pats her belly when she sees C.D. "What?" her partner asks with a smirks as she bends down and slides her heels back on.

08-05-2001, 12:13 PM	#11
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	this is awesome, cannot wait for more and dont worry, i am still reading! wwell actully since i was at camp this is the first day i read this but i wanna know what happens next cuz u are a very talented writer so please continue with this great story

08-06-2001, 03:10 AM	#12
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks a lot. I appreciate it. Here's more: Facing the mirror Jinny turns around with her long beige wedding dress on,and waits for Kate and Magda's response. "Oh Jinny,it's beautiful!" Magda stands from the bed and walks over to Jinny. "Yeah,you look real nice,Exstead." Captain nods,as she stands to the left of Jinny and Magda. "Thanks." Jinny reply's with a smile as she looks back at herself in the mirror. 'knock knock knock.' "Come in." Jinny says looking toward the closed bedroom door. The door opens and C.D. and Angela step in already dressed in their bridesmaid dresses. "Wow,Jinny in a proper dress. Never thought I'd see the day." C.D. jokes. Angela gives her partner a look,then looks back to Jinny. "You look really great." Angela says politely. "Thanks Guys." she reply's with a grin. "So uh how does that one saying go?" Jinny asks. C.D. gives a look saying she's lost. "You know the one..Something old.." Jinny begins making hand motions not knowing the rest. "Something new,something old,something borrowed,and something blue." Kate reply's as she walks over to the side of the room in sits in a chair. "Okay,let's see...." Jinny drifts off. "I have my wedding dress. That's new." she puts one finger up. "That counts right?" "Sure it does,Jin." her partner responds. Jinny nods, "Ok." she continues, "Something old." she taps her foot as she things and unconciously looks in Kate's direction. "Don't say it,Jinny." Captain reply's when she notices this. "What?" Jinny asks not realizing what her actions were a moment before. She shrugs, "Something borrowed." the Inspector continues and walks over to the bed to Sit. Her friends look amongst themselves. "I've got a pair of earrings in my car." Kate speaks up. "You mind?" Jinny asks as she looks at Captain. "No." she shakes her head. "I'll be right back." Kate says and stands. "Okay,Cap." Magda reply's and watches Captain leave. "What was the last one?" Jinny asks. "Something blue." Angela responds. "Right." Jinny reply's,rubs her forehead,and gets up. Two Hours go by in a flash........................... The many chairs set up under the large Canapes were beginning to fill. With Theodore and Jinny's friend's and family. Theodore took a last stroll around the park filled with tables,chairs,and a band. Among other things. Just to make sure everything was perfect for his and Jinny's wedding.

08-06-2001, 09:30 AM	#13
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	WOW! This is such a good story! Oh I LOVE the picture! Post More!

08-06-2001, 11:01 AM	#14
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	I love it!!! ------------------ Esperanza [This message has been edited by Jinny_Extead (edited 08-06-2001).]