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JoExstead · 07-19-2001, 12:19 AM

It was 9am and all four Inspectors were at their desks. Fianlly Cap came out and gave them their assiments.
"Ok, Jinny and Mag, desk duity. Sort out all the files buy catagory. For example, Homiside, robbery, you get the picture" Cap said, as Jinny moaned and looked at Mag. "Delorenzo, Reid, suside case" Cap said, as she handed CD a folder. "13 year old girl, slit her writs last nite and now you get to find out why" Cap said, as CD looked at the ground.

::Flashback::

CD had a knife and was holding it at her wrists. She was also crying very heavily..

::End Flashback::

CD jumped a little and shook her head at the memory.
"Are you ok?" Angela asked, as all her co-workers stared at CD.
"Ya, lets go" CD said, as she grabbed her coat and the two left.....

ok, you go on!

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-19-2001, 12:27 AM

Nice start!

When the two of them got out to the car Angela knew something was wrong with CD. Though she didn't want to force CD to talk about it she figured she'd ask.
"CD, why'd you jump and act kinda weird when Cap assigned us this case?"
"I'm fine, don't ask. This is my life...I don't have to tell you anything I don't want to tell you."
"Sorry. I just thought I'd ask."

Angela felt bad about asking CD. But she did want to know what was wrong. She wasn't going to force CD to tell her though. When they got to the girls house they went and knocked on the door.
"Hi, I'm Inspector DeLorenzo, this is my partner Inspector Reide. We're here to talk to you about your daughter."
"Yes, come in."

Back at the station, Magda and Jinny were sitting there looking at the files.
"Geez I hate this." Jinny told Magda.
"Oh shut up and do your job Jin." Magda told her.

Your turn.

JoExstead · 07-19-2001, 12:34 AM

Great!! Ok, now here's the rest i'll do for tonite....u can add some tonite too if u want, but i'll add more in the morning!

Jinny just shot Mag a look and continued going through the files.

CD and Angela walked into the house. It was nice and cozy and it seemed like a nice place to live.
"So ma'am, was you daughter acting weird before she..." Angela asked, as she looked at the lady. She got tears in her eye's and lead the Inspectors to her couch.
"Yes, actually." She started "Oh, by the way you can call me Mrs.King. Anyway, a couple of days ago she came home from school awfully mad. I kept asking her what was wrong, but she wouldn't take to me. And then last nite...." Mrs King broke down and started to cry. She looked down and put her head in her hands. CD moved over to her and started to rub her back. Angela was very taken by this. This wasn't CD's normal behavior......

ok, you can add more

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-19-2001, 12:43 AM

K, I'll add this for tonight, and then I'll be on tomorrow.

CD continued to comfort her. Angela just wasn't used to seeing this, CD never did this, at least not very often. It wasn't her normal behavior. Now Angela knew that something was up. And she was determined to figure out what.

When Mrs. King finally calmed down CD stopped rubbing her back.
"Are there any teachers or friend's we could talk to about your daughter? Maybe find out why she was mad?" CD asked her.
"Well, maybe her teacher's at school who she saw every day, Probably Mr. Hoffman and Mrs. Colver. Then you could also talk to Mrs. Stemper and Mrs. McCallum. Those are the ones she's around the most." Mrs. King told them.
"Thank you Mrs. King." Angela told her as the two of them got up.

Mrs. King showed them to the door and they left. When they got in the car Angela looked at CD.
"What was that in there? I've never seen you rub someone's back because they started crying before." Angela looked at her.
"Maybe it's none of your business." Was all CD said.

Okay. We'll add more tomorrow.

ssgoalie8 · 07-19-2001, 01:19 AM

great i like it so far. keep going

------------------
-colleen-
**************
jinny: who in the hell are you?
***************
JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

BlairandJo · 07-19-2001, 02:07 AM

I love it!!!!!Please add more.

BTW one of you said that you wanted to write
and or read about a suside.Well if you like
reading FOL fanfics I am writting a FOL Reuion where someone kills themself.Just thought I should tell you.

------------------
Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
"Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl."
-Good Girl.

Swimfan85 · 07-19-2001, 09:56 AM

this is awesome so far, i cant wait for more~!

------------------
Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
I'm jaded and judgemental, and you wonder why
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

JoExstead · 07-19-2001, 05:49 PM

Angela just shook her head, as they drove off to the school. When they got there, they went into the principles office.
"Hey, I'm Inspector Delorenzo, and this is my partner Inspector Reid. Where here to talk to the teachers of...." CD paused. She didn't know the girls first name. "A King. A girl with the last name King." CD said, as Angela looked at her.
"Oh, yes, Veronica King" (sorry, first name that came to mind)The secretary said as she looked at the Inspectors. "Most of her teachers would be on the next floor" She said, as she smiled and went back to typing. CD shrugged, and the two Inspectors went to the next floor.
"Excuse me, are you a teacher of Veronica King?" CD asked a lady she saw coming down the hall.
"Yes, I'm Mrs. Colver" The lady said "Can I help you? Did Veronica do something wrong?" she asked, very courious.
"Thats what we're here to find out..." Angela said, as the teacher led them to her class room....

ok, add on when ever you can!

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-19-2001, 10:22 PM

Okay I've been passing out stupid flyers all night, my feet hurt and I sprained my ankle

. But I figure I can add on.

When they got to the room Mrs. Colver told them they could take a seat.
"So why do you want to talk to me about Veronica?" She asked the inspectors.
"Well, Veronica commit suicide yesterday, we need to find out why. Was she acting peculiar in any way?" Angela asked her.
"Oh my, I'm sorry to hear that." She told the two inspectors, "But I don't remember her acting any different than normal. I do remember that her grades were dropping though. I don't know why."
"Okay, well do you know was she mad or anything?" Angela asked her, trying to find out if she was telling them all of the story.
"Yes, that's it. Veronica was a very good student until about a month ago. Her grades slowly started decreasing, at least in my class. She wasn't concentrating as well as she was before." Mrs. Colver told them.
"Thanks Mrs. Colver. THat should be all for now." CD told her.

Angela and CD went out of the room. Angela still knew that something was up with CD. But again she didn't want to pust it.

Okay, your turn.

[This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 07-19-2001).]

JoExstead · 07-20-2001, 04:29 PM

Just as CD and Angela walked into the hall, they saw another teacher.
"Excuse me, were you a teacher of Victoria King?" Angela asked, as the man turned around.
"Yes, but what do you mean were? Are u firing me?" The man looked paniced.
"Uh, no Sir, Victoria killed herself and we were wondering if you could help us find out why?" CD said, as he studied the man. For some reason, the man's expersion didn't change. He didn't seem to be surprised.
"Oh, I'm sorry. But I'm Not surprised" The man said, as he lead them into his class room.
"Excuse me?" Angela asked
"Well, she had been acting weird the last couple of days. Her grades were dropping and she was never happy anymore" The man said, as he sat down at his desk.
"Do you know why?" CD asked, trying not to think of her past.
"Well, I have an idea......"

ok, u can add more

BlairandJo · 07-20-2001, 06:19 PM

"Well I have an Idea...." Thats where you leave me.GGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRR.(LOL)Post more
soon I love it

JoExstead · 07-23-2001, 01:10 AM

Are u gonna post more or do u want me too?

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-23-2001, 01:21 PM

g Sry, I've been kinda busy the last couple a days. and two days ago I had a clinic appointment and got really sick after my chemo.

"Sir, may I ask why you think this happened?" CD asked him. She was still trying not to think about her past.
"Well I'm not positive, but I do think that her mother or father abused her. Everyday at school I saw several bruises on her. I could be wrong though. Maybe she just plays a lot of sports."
"Thank you sir." CD told him as she got up to leave the room. Angela got up and followed her but she didn't think that they were done. She thought they needed to ask a few more questions.

When they got in the hall CD was trying hard not to cry. Flashbacks of her past were in her head. She didn't want to remember this. She just wanted to forget.

Okay, I know that sucked, but I gotta go.

JoExstead · 07-23-2001, 10:07 PM

"Are you ok?" Angela asked, noticing there was something wrong with her friend.
"Huh, ya" CD assured her "I'm fine. Lets go talk to Mrs. King again!" She said, as she took a deep breath.

::Flashback::

16 year old CD studdied the knife carefully.
"I can't believe he would do that to me.." She said, crying hard. She sniffled a little, and started to run the knife across her wrist.

::End Flashback::

ok, i know that wasn't a lot, but i PROMISE after u write I'll write alot!

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-24-2001, 12:38 PM

Awesome, I can only do a little bit, then I'll write a bunch tonight.

Angela looked at CD, she could tell that something was wrong she just wasn't telling her. "CD are you sure your okay? Because you aren't acting like yourself..." Angela looked at her waiting for a response. CD wasn't talking, she wasn't acting normal at all.
"I'm fine, okay. Why do you even care about why I'm acting different today anyway?" CD said getting very uptight. She knew she'd have to tell her someday.
"I don't know, maybe because I care about you and this is effecting our job." Angela was getting impatient with CD. She was sick of her not telling what was wrong.

The two of them got out to the car. They got in. At this point CD was fighting back tears. She didn't want to lie to her partner, but she didn't want to tell her about her past either.

Your turn. I've got company. Bye bye peoples I'll talk to you all later.

07-19-2001, 12:19 AM	#1
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	My and Hug-A-Tree's Fanfic It was 9am and all four Inspectors were at their desks. Fianlly Cap came out and gave them their assiments. "Ok, Jinny and Mag, desk duity. Sort out all the files buy catagory. For example, Homiside, robbery, you get the picture" Cap said, as Jinny moaned and looked at Mag. "Delorenzo, Reid, suside case" Cap said, as she handed CD a folder. "13 year old girl, slit her writs last nite and now you get to find out why" Cap said, as CD looked at the ground. ::Flashback:: CD had a knife and was holding it at her wrists. She was also crying very heavily.. ::End Flashback:: CD jumped a little and shook her head at the memory. "Are you ok?" Angela asked, as all her co-workers stared at CD. "Ya, lets go" CD said, as she grabbed her coat and the two left..... ok, you go on!

07-19-2001, 12:27 AM	#2
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Nice start! When the two of them got out to the car Angela knew something was wrong with CD. Though she didn't want to force CD to talk about it she figured she'd ask. "CD, why'd you jump and act kinda weird when Cap assigned us this case?" "I'm fine, don't ask. This is my life...I don't have to tell you anything I don't want to tell you." "Sorry. I just thought I'd ask." Angela felt bad about asking CD. But she did want to know what was wrong. She wasn't going to force CD to tell her though. When they got to the girls house they went and knocked on the door. "Hi, I'm Inspector DeLorenzo, this is my partner Inspector Reide. We're here to talk to you about your daughter." "Yes, come in." Back at the station, Magda and Jinny were sitting there looking at the files. "Geez I hate this." Jinny told Magda. "Oh shut up and do your job Jin." Magda told her. Your turn.

07-19-2001, 12:34 AM	#3
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	Great!! Ok, now here's the rest i'll do for tonite....u can add some tonite too if u want, but i'll add more in the morning! Jinny just shot Mag a look and continued going through the files. CD and Angela walked into the house. It was nice and cozy and it seemed like a nice place to live. "So ma'am, was you daughter acting weird before she..." Angela asked, as she looked at the lady. She got tears in her eye's and lead the Inspectors to her couch. "Yes, actually." She started "Oh, by the way you can call me Mrs.King. Anyway, a couple of days ago she came home from school awfully mad. I kept asking her what was wrong, but she wouldn't take to me. And then last nite...." Mrs King broke down and started to cry. She looked down and put her head in her hands. CD moved over to her and started to rub her back. Angela was very taken by this. This wasn't CD's normal behavior...... ok, you can add more

07-19-2001, 12:43 AM	#4
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	K, I'll add this for tonight, and then I'll be on tomorrow. CD continued to comfort her. Angela just wasn't used to seeing this, CD never did this, at least not very often. It wasn't her normal behavior. Now Angela knew that something was up. And she was determined to figure out what. When Mrs. King finally calmed down CD stopped rubbing her back. "Are there any teachers or friend's we could talk to about your daughter? Maybe find out why she was mad?" CD asked her. "Well, maybe her teacher's at school who she saw every day, Probably Mr. Hoffman and Mrs. Colver. Then you could also talk to Mrs. Stemper and Mrs. McCallum. Those are the ones she's around the most." Mrs. King told them. "Thank you Mrs. King." Angela told her as the two of them got up. Mrs. King showed them to the door and they left. When they got in the car Angela looked at CD. "What was that in there? I've never seen you rub someone's back because they started crying before." Angela looked at her. "Maybe it's none of your business." Was all CD said. Okay. We'll add more tomorrow.

07-19-2001, 01:19 AM	#5
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	great i like it so far. keep going ------------------ -colleen- ************ jinny: who in the hell are you? *********** JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

07-19-2001, 02:07 AM	#6
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	I love it!!!!!Please add more. BTW one of you said that you wanted to write and or read about a suside.Well if you like reading FOL fanfics I am writting a FOL Reuion where someone kills themself.Just thought I should tell you. ------------------ Its my life!This is who I am!And you tell me it does'nt matter! -Jinny ~~~~~~~ If you want something bad enough you go after it no matter what the outcome may be -My Quote ~~~~~~ "Love beliver So take the love He's giving to you A love receiver Cause everything He's Promised is true Love beliver Listen to the song that I sing You are the child of the King" -Love Beliver. ~~~~~~~ "Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl (why be a good girl?)she is a see-saw seeing if it matters she is a game of Chutes and Laders. be a good girl (why be a good girl?) she needs the one who wrote the definition of a love without condition be a good girl." -Good Girl.

07-19-2001, 09:56 AM	#7
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	this is awesome so far, i cant wait for more~! ------------------ Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm jaded and judgemental, and you wonder why ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it? Max: The Bangles broke up. Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point. Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more. *~~!!kATie!!~~*

07-19-2001, 05:49 PM	#8
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	Angela just shook her head, as they drove off to the school. When they got there, they went into the principles office. "Hey, I'm Inspector Delorenzo, and this is my partner Inspector Reid. Where here to talk to the teachers of...." CD paused. She didn't know the girls first name. "A King. A girl with the last name King." CD said, as Angela looked at her. "Oh, yes, Veronica King" (sorry, first name that came to mind)The secretary said as she looked at the Inspectors. "Most of her teachers would be on the next floor" She said, as she smiled and went back to typing. CD shrugged, and the two Inspectors went to the next floor. "Excuse me, are you a teacher of Veronica King?" CD asked a lady she saw coming down the hall. "Yes, I'm Mrs. Colver" The lady said "Can I help you? Did Veronica do something wrong?" she asked, very courious. "Thats what we're here to find out..." Angela said, as the teacher led them to her class room.... ok, add on when ever you can!

07-19-2001, 10:22 PM	#9
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Okay I've been passing out stupid flyers all night, my feet hurt and I sprained my ankle . But I figure I can add on. When they got to the room Mrs. Colver told them they could take a seat. "So why do you want to talk to me about Veronica?" She asked the inspectors. "Well, Veronica commit suicide yesterday, we need to find out why. Was she acting peculiar in any way?" Angela asked her. "Oh my, I'm sorry to hear that." She told the two inspectors, "But I don't remember her acting any different than normal. I do remember that her grades were dropping though. I don't know why." "Okay, well do you know was she mad or anything?" Angela asked her, trying to find out if she was telling them all of the story. "Yes, that's it. Veronica was a very good student until about a month ago. Her grades slowly started decreasing, at least in my class. She wasn't concentrating as well as she was before." Mrs. Colver told them. "Thanks Mrs. Colver. THat should be all for now." CD told her. Angela and CD went out of the room. Angela still knew that something was up with CD. But again she didn't want to pust it. Okay, your turn. [This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 07-19-2001).]

07-20-2001, 04:29 PM	#10
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	Just as CD and Angela walked into the hall, they saw another teacher. "Excuse me, were you a teacher of Victoria King?" Angela asked, as the man turned around. "Yes, but what do you mean were? Are u firing me?" The man looked paniced. "Uh, no Sir, Victoria killed herself and we were wondering if you could help us find out why?" CD said, as he studied the man. For some reason, the man's expersion didn't change. He didn't seem to be surprised. "Oh, I'm sorry. But I'm Not surprised" The man said, as he lead them into his class room. "Excuse me?" Angela asked "Well, she had been acting weird the last couple of days. Her grades were dropping and she was never happy anymore" The man said, as he sat down at his desk. "Do you know why?" CD asked, trying not to think of her past. "Well, I have an idea......" ok, u can add more

07-20-2001, 06:19 PM	#11
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	"Well I have an Idea...." Thats where you leave me.GGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRR.(LOL)Post more soon I love it

07-23-2001, 01:10 AM	#12
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	Are u gonna post more or do u want me too?

07-23-2001, 01:21 PM	#13
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	g Sry, I've been kinda busy the last couple a days. and two days ago I had a clinic appointment and got really sick after my chemo. "Sir, may I ask why you think this happened?" CD asked him. She was still trying not to think about her past. "Well I'm not positive, but I do think that her mother or father abused her. Everyday at school I saw several bruises on her. I could be wrong though. Maybe she just plays a lot of sports." "Thank you sir." CD told him as she got up to leave the room. Angela got up and followed her but she didn't think that they were done. She thought they needed to ask a few more questions. When they got in the hall CD was trying hard not to cry. Flashbacks of her past were in her head. She didn't want to remember this. She just wanted to forget. Okay, I know that sucked, but I gotta go.

07-23-2001, 10:07 PM	#14
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	"Are you ok?" Angela asked, noticing there was something wrong with her friend. "Huh, ya" CD assured her "I'm fine. Lets go talk to Mrs. King again!" She said, as she took a deep breath. ::Flashback:: 16 year old CD studdied the knife carefully. "I can't believe he would do that to me.." She said, crying hard. She sniffled a little, and started to run the knife across her wrist. ::End Flashback:: ok, i know that wasn't a lot, but i PROMISE after u write I'll write alot!

07-24-2001, 12:38 PM	#15
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Awesome, I can only do a little bit, then I'll write a bunch tonight. Angela looked at CD, she could tell that something was wrong she just wasn't telling her. "CD are you sure your okay? Because you aren't acting like yourself..." Angela looked at her waiting for a response. CD wasn't talking, she wasn't acting normal at all. "I'm fine, okay. Why do you even care about why I'm acting different today anyway?" CD said getting very uptight. She knew she'd have to tell her someday. "I don't know, maybe because I care about you and this is effecting our job." Angela was getting impatient with CD. She was sick of her not telling what was wrong. The two of them got out to the car. They got in. At this point CD was fighting back tears. She didn't want to lie to her partner, but she didn't want to tell her about her past either. Your turn. I've got company. Bye bye peoples I'll talk to you all later.