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BlairW_2 · 07-30-2001, 10:31 AM

Wedding Bells

Madga Ramirez stood in her bedroom, staring into a stand up mirror. She was wearing a beautiful white wedding gown. Her hair was up and she looked simply beautiful for her wedding day. Kate, CD, Jinny, and Angela were all standing behind her and her mother and aunt were also behind her. "Madga..you don't know how proud of you we all are.", said Kate as she put her hand on her sholder. Madga smiled back. "Thank you.", she replied. "I've been waiting for this day for who knows how long..and now it has finally come." Madga spoke as she continued to stare into the mirror. Jinny then walked up to Madga. "Hey..Mag..can I talk to you in the other room for a sec?" she asked. Madga nodded and the two walked in the living room.

"Listen, I've stopped drinking. For good." Jinny said boldy. Madga smiled and hugged Jinny. "Jinny I'm just afraid that you may start doing it again." Madga said. "Madga I won't. I promise you. I've learned to do without it." Jinny continued. "Well, if its true.." Madga said when she was suddenly interrupted by Jinny. "It is true, Mag. It's true." Jinny said. Madga then continued. "Then..thank you." she said as smiles formed across both their faces. The two hugged and Jinny then said, "Oh, and..Happy Wedding Day". "Thank you. Oh, do the others know you stopped? Madga asked. "Yeah, I told 'em." Jinny answered. "Good." Madga said and they both smiled once again. They then walked back into Madga's bedroom.

Meanwhile, Gabriel Hererra was in his apartment tieing his bow tie for the wedding. Benjamin was sitting on his bed and three or four of his friends were also getting ready, while his brother, who was his best man, was standing next to him. "I just wish dad could be here.", said Gabriel to his brother. "Well I know that he would of been very proud of you if he were." his brother said to comfort him. Gabriel smiled to his brother when Bejnamin stood up. "Well?? How's my tux???" he asked. They all laughed. "Perfect." Said Gabriel. "Will there be lots of dessert at the reception thingie??" Benjamin asked. "Yes there will. Lots of it. Cake, ice cream, everything." Gabriel said as he began laughing from Benjamin's childish point of view. "Well, we better get going. The weddings gonna start soon." Continued Gabriel. Everyone was ready and they proceeded out of Gabriel's room and they got into Gabriel's Jeep. They then drove off to the church.

Guys, sorry but I gotta go..I will write more later..do you like it so far??

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Love Always and Forever, .Cassie.
* * * * * * * *
..Always Believe in Yourself..
* * * * * * * * *
<3 I Love NSYNC <3
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Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!!

FOL_lover · 07-30-2001, 10:46 AM

this is really good. Keep going!!

ISmellFine · 07-30-2001, 02:48 PM

OMG this is good!!! Post more!!!!!!

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NaNcY rOx!

-Jinny

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha!

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.

Jinny: What was she expecting? The welcome wagon?

Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.

Check out my Nancy McKeon Supersite!

BlairW_2 · 07-30-2001, 02:52 PM

Here is a little more for you guys:

Gabriel Hererra drove with his man of honor, Benjamin, and his four other friends to the church while Madga and the girls were preparing the leave her apartment. "Well..I think we are all ready to go.", said Madga's mother. The girls, dressed in dresses, proceeded outside the door when Jinny stopped Madga. "Madga..wait." said Jinny. "Here..this is from me." she continued. "A small wedding gift..we all got you a bigger one though." Jinny said. Madga took the small box and opened it, revealing a bracelet saying "World's Best Friend". Madga looked up at Jinny "Jinny.." she said but Jinny interrupted her. "If it weren't for you I would never of stopped drinking. Now THAT is a true friend." she said. The two hugged. "Thank you." Madga said. The two then quickly left the room.

The church was decorated with all sorts of flowers and decorations. Everything was beautiful for the wedding. Gabriel was standing on the alter with his best man and his family was seated. All of the sudden the music played and the girls walked up the alter. When all the girls finished walking up, Madga began to walk. She shined in beautifulness. Her mother cried, as well as herself. She finally made it to the alter and faced Gabriel.

When it was time, the priest spoke. "Do you, Madga Ramirez, take Gabriel Herrera to be your lawful wedded husband? To cherish and hold until the day which you shall each depart?" she priest asked. Madga said, "I do." Then Gabriel said his vow, and the priest said: "In the name of God, I pronounce you husband and wife. Mr. and Mrs. Gabriel Hererra." Everyone clapped and Gabriel and Madga proceeded back down the isle, when all of the sudden..Jinny collapsed.

That's all for now guys, I'll write more later. Like it??

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Love Always and Forever, .Cassie.
* * * * * * * *
..Always Believe in Yourself..
* * * * * * * * *
<3 I Love NSYNC <3
* * * * * * * * *
Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!!

ISmellFine · 07-30-2001, 03:31 PM

Post more!!!!!

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NaNcY rOx!

-Jinny

Check out my Nancy McKeon Supersite!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha!

Jinny: Oh, come on, folks, please, don't be shy. Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight, so please, step right on up!

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.

Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-30-2001, 03:38 PM

Jinny collapsed?!? Jinny collapsed?!? yOu leave me hanging there.....MORE!!

JoExstead · 07-30-2001, 04:09 PM

WOW!! This is really good! Keep it going

BlairW_2 · 07-30-2001, 04:15 PM

Here's more:

Madga gasped and ran towards Jinny, along with nearly everybody else at the wedding. "Someone call an ambulence!" Madga yelled. Gabriel ran to the nearest telephone and dialed 911. "It's clear shes unconcious. We have to do something quick." CD said. "Does anyone know CPR?" Madga's mother yelled. "Mam, CPR is only used when the person isn't breathing. She's breathing but shes unconsious, thats the problem." Angela replied. "How could this happen at my wedding?!" Madga explained. Katie turned to comfort her. "Mag itll be okay. This doesn't seem that serious, she just must of blacked out or something." Kate said. "She was probably drinking!!! She probably drank before the wedding alot and then she finally got the side effects now!" Madga insisted. The ambulence then arrived, attacked Jinny to a stretcher and driving off with her in the ambulence.

The four girls, Madga's mother, Benjamin and Gabriel rushed in Gabriels car to the hospital, following the ambulence. "Mommy, Daddy whats happening?" Benjamin asked, it was clear he was scared to death. Gabriel then realized it was the first time Benjamin had called him "daddy"."Hunny, we just have to go the hospital. Something happened to Jinny." Madga said, trying to calm him down. "Will she be alright?" Benjamin asked. "I hope so." Madga replied.

At the hospital, they all ran into the waiting room and sat down. They wondererd how Jinny was and what had happened. She was currently in ER. "What do you think happened to her?" Angela asked Kate, who was sitting next to her. "I don't know but if she drank even one time before this wedding shes fired permanently. We gave her a second chance." Kate stated. All of the sudden the doctor came out. Madga stood up. "What's wrong with Jinny??" she asked. "Well it was obvious she blacked out." the doctor said. "But why?" Madga asked. "She fell over because of how much achohol was in her body. It was seen that she had been drinking very heavily before the wedding." He said. Madga went pale and ran out of the room, remembering what Jinny promised her. Gabriel follows her.

"What's wrong hun?" Gabriel asked. Madga turned to him with a face streaming of tears. "Gabriel she promised! She promised she hasn't be drinking and won't drink! She promised and now look!!!" she said. Gabriel hugged her in his arms. "Hunny don't worry." Gabriel said. "Yes I am going to worry because our wedding has been ruined because of that little peice of crap!" Madga yelled so the waiting room could hear her. "Hunny its her life you have to learn that if she is going to not care then you can't!" Gabriel said. "But I care about her!!!" Magda replied. "Well then she doesn't care about herself if she keeps on drinking!" Gabriel said as he cuddled her.

Back in the waiting room, Kate was furious. "She's fired." Kate said. Angela and CD looked at her. "Seriously this time?" CD asked. "Yes. She is permanently fired. That girl should be forced into life time rehab if there was such a thing. Ruining a wedding, ruining her life and other peoples, what is this? Doesn't she care?" Kate continued. "I have to agree this time. She deserves to be gone. If she wants to drink her life away then let her because I don't care anymore. No more interventions. I am just letting her go. We all should." Angela said. "I agree." replied CD. Madga's mother sat there stunned as tears streamed down her cheeks. "My daughters wedding is ruined.." she insisted. Kate comforted her. "Don't think that alright? Serious actions will be taken on Jinny for sure. No more suspension, its more like expellsion. Magda then walked back in the room and ran into the ER. "Madga!!!" Gabriel yelled.

Madga, still practically sobbing, saw Jinny awake. "Mag??" Jinny said weakly. "Don't give me any Mag's alright Jinny!???" she shouted, sobbing. "What the heck are you talking about??" Jinny asked. "You know damn well what I'm talking about! You ruined my wedding and you promised you haven't been drinking!!!!" she continued. "Mag I haven't been drinking." Jinny insisted. "Yes you have you damn liar you have! My wedding is now a scar in my life because of YOU Jinny!" she yelled. Jinny sat up and shouted. "Madga shut the heck up okay?! I didn't ruin any wedding!" She yelled. "Damn you Jinny to heck alright! You did!!! You promised and now you can get out of my life cause I'm throwing you out of mine as a friend!!!" she yelled and barged out of the room.

Okay I am going to the mall now so I'll post more later, do you like it?

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Love Always and Forever, .Cassie.
* * * * * * * *
..Always Believe in Yourself..
* * * * * * * * *
<3 I Love NSYNC <3
* * * * * * * * *
Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!!

Ags2000 · 07-30-2001, 06:22 PM

Oh wow!!! that is really good. Let me know when you post some more. Love the cliff hangers.

D

KerriBerri687 · 07-30-2001, 07:07 PM

i like it so far...keep going!

BlairW_2 · 07-30-2001, 09:43 PM

Here is the end:

Magda sat sobbing in the waiting room, not wanting to see Jinny after what had happened. Being comforted by her mother, friends, and Gabriel, Magda Hererra held Benjamin on her lap. "Mommy..don't cry." Benjamin said. Magda tried to smile. "Hunny you don't understand." she said, not wanting to talk any further. "Don't understand what?" he continued. Magda shook her head. "Nevermind..Everything will be just fine." she said. "Okay." Benjamin finished. Jinny then slowly walked out of the room and stared at the group. "Jinny get away." Magda said, holding back her tears. "Listen.." Jinny tried to say, as Kate inturrupted. "Jinny I want your gun, badge and ammunition. You are no longer part of the Division and no longer a cop." She stated.

Jinny went pale. "What the hell are you talking about?" she said. "We know you've been drinking. The doctors said so." Kate said. "I haven't been damn drinking alright?!" she said as tears start rolling down her cheeks. "Something has to be wrong and I know it is." she insisted. "Jinny you excpect us to believe you over them?" CD said. "Yes I do!!" she said, and ran out of the room. A doctor then came back out. "Mam I'm sorry." he said. "The tests were wrong. It was not the achohol." he said. They were all relieved, but upset. "What the hell? What was it then?" Magda asked. "Exhaustion. She hasn't slept in days. There was only a little achohol detected from a couple months ago which was still left." They all stared.

They all left, apologized to Jinny, and made up for it. Magda and gabriel were able to have a wedding in a private small church, though the reception wasnt as good. They were now.....*MR AND MRS GABRIEL FERERRA AND SON*

The End

I am so sorry if it was rushed..I got a new idea and I just wanna start it..thanks!!!

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--C (Cassie)

My two role models are Lisa Whelchel and Lisa Vidal.

Come to my Division Webpage at: http://www.the-division-webpage.cityslide.com

Bang A Gong · 07-30-2001, 11:19 PM

That was excellent!

sue z q · 07-31-2001, 12:41 AM

That was so cute! I agree with you Sourbabie, happy endings are the best!

NancyJoJinny · 08-02-2001, 12:13 AM

Great Job! if I were Jinyn I would have..... SHot them, but good endings are nice,,, and rare.. nice job!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

07-30-2001, 10:31 AM	#1
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	"Wedding Bells" - My new fan fiction Wedding Bells Madga Ramirez stood in her bedroom, staring into a stand up mirror. She was wearing a beautiful white wedding gown. Her hair was up and she looked simply beautiful for her wedding day. Kate, CD, Jinny, and Angela were all standing behind her and her mother and aunt were also behind her. "Madga..you don't know how proud of you we all are.", said Kate as she put her hand on her sholder. Madga smiled back. "Thank you.", she replied. "I've been waiting for this day for who knows how long..and now it has finally come." Madga spoke as she continued to stare into the mirror. Jinny then walked up to Madga. "Hey..Mag..can I talk to you in the other room for a sec?" she asked. Madga nodded and the two walked in the living room. "Listen, I've stopped drinking. For good." Jinny said boldy. Madga smiled and hugged Jinny. "Jinny I'm just afraid that you may start doing it again." Madga said. "Madga I won't. I promise you. I've learned to do without it." Jinny continued. "Well, if its true.." Madga said when she was suddenly interrupted by Jinny. "It is true, Mag. It's true." Jinny said. Madga then continued. "Then..thank you." she said as smiles formed across both their faces. The two hugged and Jinny then said, "Oh, and..Happy Wedding Day". "Thank you. Oh, do the others know you stopped? Madga asked. "Yeah, I told 'em." Jinny answered. "Good." Madga said and they both smiled once again. They then walked back into Madga's bedroom. Meanwhile, Gabriel Hererra was in his apartment tieing his bow tie for the wedding. Benjamin was sitting on his bed and three or four of his friends were also getting ready, while his brother, who was his best man, was standing next to him. "I just wish dad could be here.", said Gabriel to his brother. "Well I know that he would of been very proud of you if he were." his brother said to comfort him. Gabriel smiled to his brother when Bejnamin stood up. "Well?? How's my tux???" he asked. They all laughed. "Perfect." Said Gabriel. "Will there be lots of dessert at the reception thingie??" Benjamin asked. "Yes there will. Lots of it. Cake, ice cream, everything." Gabriel said as he began laughing from Benjamin's childish point of view. "Well, we better get going. The weddings gonna start soon." Continued Gabriel. Everyone was ready and they proceeded out of Gabriel's room and they got into Gabriel's Jeep. They then drove off to the church. Guys, sorry but I gotta go..I will write more later..do you like it so far?? ------------------ Love Always and Forever, .Cassie. * * * * * * * * ..Always Believe in Yourself.. * * * * * * * * * <3 I Love NSYNC <3 * * * * * * * * * Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!!

07-30-2001, 11:19 PM	#12
Bang A Gong Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jun 16, 2001 Posts: 545	That was excellent!
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07-30-2001, 10:46 AM	#2
FOL_lover Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 04, 2001 Location: OH Posts: 392	this is really good. Keep going!!

07-30-2001, 02:48 PM	#3
ISmellFine Zim Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Apr 13, 2001 Posts: 4,886	OMG this is good!!! Post more!!!!!! ------------------ NaNcY rOx! -Jinny On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha! Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. Jinny: What was she expecting? The welcome wagon? Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. Check out my Nancy McKeon Supersite!

07-30-2001, 02:52 PM	#4
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	Here is a little more for you guys: Gabriel Hererra drove with his man of honor, Benjamin, and his four other friends to the church while Madga and the girls were preparing the leave her apartment. "Well..I think we are all ready to go.", said Madga's mother. The girls, dressed in dresses, proceeded outside the door when Jinny stopped Madga. "Madga..wait." said Jinny. "Here..this is from me." she continued. "A small wedding gift..we all got you a bigger one though." Jinny said. Madga took the small box and opened it, revealing a bracelet saying "World's Best Friend". Madga looked up at Jinny "Jinny.." she said but Jinny interrupted her. "If it weren't for you I would never of stopped drinking. Now THAT is a true friend." she said. The two hugged. "Thank you." Madga said. The two then quickly left the room. The church was decorated with all sorts of flowers and decorations. Everything was beautiful for the wedding. Gabriel was standing on the alter with his best man and his family was seated. All of the sudden the music played and the girls walked up the alter. When all the girls finished walking up, Madga began to walk. She shined in beautifulness. Her mother cried, as well as herself. She finally made it to the alter and faced Gabriel. When it was time, the priest spoke. "Do you, Madga Ramirez, take Gabriel Herrera to be your lawful wedded husband? To cherish and hold until the day which you shall each depart?" she priest asked. Madga said, "I do." Then Gabriel said his vow, and the priest said: "In the name of God, I pronounce you husband and wife. Mr. and Mrs. Gabriel Hererra." Everyone clapped and Gabriel and Madga proceeded back down the isle, when all of the sudden..Jinny collapsed. That's all for now guys, I'll write more later. Like it?? ------------------ Love Always and Forever, .Cassie. * * * * * * * * ..Always Believe in Yourself.. * * * * * * * * * <3 I Love NSYNC <3 * * * * * * * * * Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!!

07-30-2001, 03:31 PM	#5
ISmellFine Zim Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Apr 13, 2001 Posts: 4,886	Post more!!!!! ------------------ NaNcY rOx! -Jinny Check out my Nancy McKeon Supersite! On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha! Jinny: Oh, come on, folks, please, don't be shy. Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight, so please, step right on up! Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.

07-30-2001, 03:38 PM	#6
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	Jinny collapsed?!? Jinny collapsed?!? yOu leave me hanging there.....MORE!!

07-30-2001, 04:09 PM	#7
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	WOW!! This is really good! Keep it going

07-30-2001, 04:15 PM	#8
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	Here's more: Madga gasped and ran towards Jinny, along with nearly everybody else at the wedding. "Someone call an ambulence!" Madga yelled. Gabriel ran to the nearest telephone and dialed 911. "It's clear shes unconcious. We have to do something quick." CD said. "Does anyone know CPR?" Madga's mother yelled. "Mam, CPR is only used when the person isn't breathing. She's breathing but shes unconsious, thats the problem." Angela replied. "How could this happen at my wedding?!" Madga explained. Katie turned to comfort her. "Mag itll be okay. This doesn't seem that serious, she just must of blacked out or something." Kate said. "She was probably drinking!!! She probably drank before the wedding alot and then she finally got the side effects now!" Madga insisted. The ambulence then arrived, attacked Jinny to a stretcher and driving off with her in the ambulence. The four girls, Madga's mother, Benjamin and Gabriel rushed in Gabriels car to the hospital, following the ambulence. "Mommy, Daddy whats happening?" Benjamin asked, it was clear he was scared to death. Gabriel then realized it was the first time Benjamin had called him "daddy"."Hunny, we just have to go the hospital. Something happened to Jinny." Madga said, trying to calm him down. "Will she be alright?" Benjamin asked. "I hope so." Madga replied. At the hospital, they all ran into the waiting room and sat down. They wondererd how Jinny was and what had happened. She was currently in ER. "What do you think happened to her?" Angela asked Kate, who was sitting next to her. "I don't know but if she drank even one time before this wedding shes fired permanently. We gave her a second chance." Kate stated. All of the sudden the doctor came out. Madga stood up. "What's wrong with Jinny??" she asked. "Well it was obvious she blacked out." the doctor said. "But why?" Madga asked. "She fell over because of how much achohol was in her body. It was seen that she had been drinking very heavily before the wedding." He said. Madga went pale and ran out of the room, remembering what Jinny promised her. Gabriel follows her. "What's wrong hun?" Gabriel asked. Madga turned to him with a face streaming of tears. "Gabriel she promised! She promised she hasn't be drinking and won't drink! She promised and now look!!!" she said. Gabriel hugged her in his arms. "Hunny don't worry." Gabriel said. "Yes I am going to worry because our wedding has been ruined because of that little peice of crap!" Madga yelled so the waiting room could hear her. "Hunny its her life you have to learn that if she is going to not care then you can't!" Gabriel said. "But I care about her!!!" Magda replied. "Well then she doesn't care about herself if she keeps on drinking!" Gabriel said as he cuddled her. Back in the waiting room, Kate was furious. "She's fired." Kate said. Angela and CD looked at her. "Seriously this time?" CD asked. "Yes. She is permanently fired. That girl should be forced into life time rehab if there was such a thing. Ruining a wedding, ruining her life and other peoples, what is this? Doesn't she care?" Kate continued. "I have to agree this time. She deserves to be gone. If she wants to drink her life away then let her because I don't care anymore. No more interventions. I am just letting her go. We all should." Angela said. "I agree." replied CD. Madga's mother sat there stunned as tears streamed down her cheeks. "My daughters wedding is ruined.." she insisted. Kate comforted her. "Don't think that alright? Serious actions will be taken on Jinny for sure. No more suspension, its more like expellsion. Magda then walked back in the room and ran into the ER. "Madga!!!" Gabriel yelled. Madga, still practically sobbing, saw Jinny awake. "Mag??" Jinny said weakly. "Don't give me any Mag's alright Jinny!???" she shouted, sobbing. "What the heck are you talking about??" Jinny asked. "You know damn well what I'm talking about! You ruined my wedding and you promised you haven't been drinking!!!!" she continued. "Mag I haven't been drinking." Jinny insisted. "Yes you have you damn liar you have! My wedding is now a scar in my life because of YOU Jinny!" she yelled. Jinny sat up and shouted. "Madga shut the heck up okay?! I didn't ruin any wedding!" She yelled. "Damn you Jinny to heck alright! You did!!! You promised and now you can get out of my life cause I'm throwing you out of mine as a friend!!!" she yelled and barged out of the room. Okay I am going to the mall now so I'll post more later, do you like it? ------------------ Love Always and Forever, .Cassie. * * * * * * * * ..Always Believe in Yourself.. * * * * * * * * * <3 I Love NSYNC <3 * * * * * * * * * Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!!

07-30-2001, 06:22 PM	#9
Ags2000 Red 2/13/90 -1/5/06 Forum Veteran Join Date: May 02, 2001 Location: Candyland Posts: 5,544	Oh wow!!! that is really good. Let me know when you post some more. Love the cliff hangers. D

07-30-2001, 07:07 PM	#10
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	i like it so far...keep going!

07-30-2001, 09:43 PM	#11
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	Here is the end: Magda sat sobbing in the waiting room, not wanting to see Jinny after what had happened. Being comforted by her mother, friends, and Gabriel, Magda Hererra held Benjamin on her lap. "Mommy..don't cry." Benjamin said. Magda tried to smile. "Hunny you don't understand." she said, not wanting to talk any further. "Don't understand what?" he continued. Magda shook her head. "Nevermind..Everything will be just fine." she said. "Okay." Benjamin finished. Jinny then slowly walked out of the room and stared at the group. "Jinny get away." Magda said, holding back her tears. "Listen.." Jinny tried to say, as Kate inturrupted. "Jinny I want your gun, badge and ammunition. You are no longer part of the Division and no longer a cop." She stated. Jinny went pale. "What the hell are you talking about?" she said. "We know you've been drinking. The doctors said so." Kate said. "I haven't been damn drinking alright?!" she said as tears start rolling down her cheeks. "Something has to be wrong and I know it is." she insisted. "Jinny you excpect us to believe you over them?" CD said. "Yes I do!!" she said, and ran out of the room. A doctor then came back out. "Mam I'm sorry." he said. "The tests were wrong. It was not the achohol." he said. They were all relieved, but upset. "What the hell? What was it then?" Magda asked. "Exhaustion. She hasn't slept in days. There was only a little achohol detected from a couple months ago which was still left." They all stared. They all left, apologized to Jinny, and made up for it. Magda and gabriel were able to have a wedding in a private small church, though the reception wasnt as good. They were now.....MR AND MRS GABRIEL FERERRA AND SON The End I am so sorry if it was rushed..I got a new idea and I just wanna start it..thanks!!! ------------------ --C (Cassie) My two role models are Lisa Whelchel and Lisa Vidal. Come to my Division Webpage at: http://www.the-division-webpage.cityslide.com

07-31-2001, 12:41 AM	#13
sue z q funger agger LOL Senior Member Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: CA Posts: 1,687	That was so cute! I agree with you Sourbabie, happy endings are the best!

08-02-2001, 12:13 AM	#14
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Great Job! if I were Jinyn I would have..... SHot them, but good endings are nice,,, and rare.. nice job! ------------------ On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too. Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!! Teddy: Jinny, my God. Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy:Stop! What are you... Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! long pause Yeah... Thats what I thought. ~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~ The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.