no regular day at work a day at work (by me, NancysBiggestFan, and Tomboyjo11)

[NancyMcKeonsnum1fan4life]

hey yall, hope ya like dis, hopefully it aint corny, he he he

*at the Division*

Kate: Exstead, Ramirez, in ma office.

*Jinny n Magda walk in da Cap.'s office*

Magda: Wut is it Cap.?

Kate: *hands em a folda* this

Jinny: *opens it* Whoa, wut happened 2 her? *hands the folda 2 Magda*

Kate: as far as i know of, the women in the pic. was a 23 year old white female and apparently was stabbed in the back 3-4 times, and left 4 dead

Magda: well, wut kind of person wud do dat?

Kate: well, das wut ur in here 4 now isn't it

Jinny: uuuhh,yeah


UR TURN KIERA

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some time in the year 2007, My best friends Kiera (PA) and Jessica (NC wit me) r goin to Cali 2 meet Nancy McKeon!!!! i pikked the year 2007 cause thats wen I'm turnin 18, I CANT WAIT, oh ya, sry but nobody else can cum

u r wat u r, n thas good enough 4 me~Jo P.

"If you touch my ass one more time.. I'll kick yours." ~Jinny

Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven~JINNY

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!"-Jinny

(The Division)Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like ya unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me, yeah I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter. Doesn't change anything. *long pause* Yeah, that's what I thought!!

Jo On Herself: You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl

Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~Jinny

Patients don't speak spanglish either~Lu~Rosa Blasi~Strong Medicine

okie dokie, thanks~Lu Rosa Blasi n Janine Turner[]

OUCH!!!! []

LOL []

[NancyMcKeonsnum1fan4life]

ay yall, sry bot da topic, it was suppost 2 be "a day at work (by me, NancysBiggestFan, and Tomboyjo11)" HOPE YA STILL READ IT

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some time in the year 2007, My best friends Kiera (PA) and Jessica (NC wit me) r goin to Cali 2 meet Nancy McKeon!!!! i pikked the year 2007 cause thats wen I'm turnin 18, I CANT WAIT, oh ya, sry but nobody else can cum

u r wat u r, n thas good enough 4 me~Jo P.

"If you touch my ass one more time.. I'll kick yours." ~Jinny

Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven~JINNY

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!"-Jinny

(The Division)Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like ya unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me, yeah I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter. Doesn't change anything. *long pause* Yeah, that's what I thought!!

Jo On Herself: You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl

Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~Jinny

Patients don't speak spanglish either~Lu~Rosa Blasi~Strong Medicine

okie dokie, thanks~Lu Rosa Blasi n Janine Turner[]

OUCH!!!! []

LOL []

[Nancy Exstead]

This is awesome, keep going.

[tomboyjo11]

Originally posted by Nancy Exstead:
This is awesome, keep going.

ok, seein as though jamie obligated me ta write more of this i will. but don't blame me if it sux cuz i'm just thinkin of this stuff off the top of my head, hope ya like it and here goes nothin(by the way i barely eva use capital lettas, sorry! ):

so they get in jinny's car and drive to this girls's house.( and since we are the authors i'm gonna use us in the story as well

so they get to jamie's house and they get out of the car.

jinny: well this is the place.
magda: yep let's go.
jinny:i wonder if there's anyone around?
magda: ya there's a girl in the back yard.
jinny: hello?
kiera: hi.
magda: what is your name?
kiera: kiera, you?
jinny: i'm inspector extead and this is inspector rameriez, is jamie home?
kiera: sorry ya just missed her.
magda: do ya have any idea where she could have went?
kiera: well maybe would ya like me ta try and call her?
jinny: if ya could.
kiera: okay follow me.

they follow kiera inta the house and she dials a number.

magda: excuse me, kiera?
kiera: ya?
magda: who are ya callin?
kiera: our friend, jessica. i figured she might be ova there.
magda: oh.

none answers at jessica's house.

kiera: sorry inspectors, no one is answering.
jinny: ok well then i guess we'll be goin, can we have your number, just in case?
kiera: sure, i guess.

(goes to get some paper then comes back and writes down the numba.)

kiera: here ya go inspectors.
magda: thanx.
kiera: n/p. bye.

kiera shuts the door then goes to go work back outside. the inspectors leave the house and go to jinny's car.

jinny: well she seemed nice.
magda: ya but don't ya think we should go to that girl jessica's too?
jinny: i dunno, lets just break for lunch

JAMIE,!!! IT'S YOUR TURN!!!

-Kiera by the way i hope ya'll like it!!!

[NancyMcKeonsnum1fan4life]

nuh uh, it's Tiffany's turn

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some time in the year 2007, My best friends Kiera (PA) and Jessica (NC wit me) r goin to Cali 2 meet Nancy McKeon!!!! i pikked the year 2007 cause thats wen I'm turnin 18, I CANT WAIT, oh ya, sry but nobody else can cum

u r wat u r, n thas good enough 4 me~Jo P.

"If you touch my ass one more time.. I'll kick yours." ~Jinny

Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven~JINNY

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!"-Jinny

(The Division)Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like ya unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me, yeah I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter. Doesn't change anything. *long pause* Yeah, that's what I thought!!

Jo On Herself: You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl

Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~Jinny

Patients don't speak spanglish either~Lu~Rosa Blasi~Strong Medicine

okie dokie, thanks~Lu Rosa Blasi n Janine Turner[]

OUCH!!!! []

LOL []

[tomboyjo11]

Originally posted by NancyMcKeonsnum1fan4life:
nuh uh, it's Tiffany's turn

o ok well then it's tiffany's turn!!!!!!!!! post girl post!!! lol
-Kiera

[NancyMcKeonsnum1fan4life]

ok, since Tiffany aint on-line yet, i am gonna cont. it
he he he


*afta lunch*

*gettin in Jinny's car 2 go 2 Jessica's house*

Jinny: well i wonda if anyone's home

Magda: i dunno, lets find out

*knocks on the door*

Jessica: who is it??

Jinny: SFPD, we need to ask u sum questions bout ur friend Ana's murder

Jessica: ok, jus a second

*opens the door*

Magda: hi, im Inspector Ramirez and dis is my partner, Inspector Exstead

Jinny: hi

Jessica: hi, please do cum in

*in the living room*

Jinny: so wut do u remember frum yesterday?

Jessica: well,ana, kiera, jamie, n i were just walkin n walkin down the street wen dis guy jus walks up 2 us n tells us 2 giv em all our money, n ana said, "NO" n which he didn't like dat!! so he took ana by the arm, n told us 2 leave, or she wud get it. n as we were leaving, i heard screaming!!

Magda: did u get a good look at the guys face?

Jessica: no, i am very sry, but if i eva here his voice, i will definetly(sp?) look up 2 see his face

Jinny: well, dis is our numba at The Division *hands Jessica da card*, if u see him again, please call us

Jessica: sure will

Magda: o yes, can u tell us where we can find Jamie at?

Jessica: well, she lives here wit me, but she is at work now, well, u can go to her work, she works down at the Anchorside Bar & Grill

Magda: *in a really low voice* uh oh

Jinny: tanks 4 all ur help

Jessica: ur welcome

*Jin n Mag leave n r on der way 2 Anchorside Bar & Grill*

*walks in*

Jinny: *looks at all dat alchohol* Mag, i may need u 2 stick by me in dis place!!!


NEXT PERSON

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some time in the year 2007, My best friends Kiera (PA) and Jessica (NC wit me) r goin to Cali 2 meet Nancy McKeon!!!! i pikked the year 2007 cause thats wen I'm turnin 18, I CANT WAIT, oh ya, sry but nobody else can cum

u r wat u r, n thas good enough 4 me~Jo P.

"If you touch my ass one more time.. I'll kick yours." ~Jinny

Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven~JINNY

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!"-Jinny

(The Division)Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like ya unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me, yeah I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter. Doesn't change anything. *long pause* Yeah, that's what I thought!!

Jo On Herself: You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl

Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~Jinny

Patients don't speak spanglish either~Lu~Rosa Blasi~Strong Medicine

okie dokie, thanks~Lu Rosa Blasi n Janine Turner[]

OUCH!!!! []

LOL []

[This message has been edited by NancyMcKeonsnum1fan4life (edited 07-24-2001).]

[IcePrincessBlair]

This is really good. Keep writing.

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[nancysbiggestfan]

Sry it took me so long. But here goes. And dont blame me if this stinks!

Jinny: I need you to stick by me here.

Magda: Oh, dont worry.

Jinny starts looking around trying to find Jamie.

Jinny: Ummm. I dont think i have ever seen her here before. Maybe thats her.

Magda: Well, you should know if she has worked her long. *Magda says kinda laughin*

Jinny: Yea, yea. Thanks for the support Mag. *Jinny says half joking and half serious*

Magda: Forget it. Lets just go and see if its her.

Jinny: k.

Magda: Hi, are you Jamie?

Jamie: Yea. Why?

Jinny: Im Inspector Exstead and this is Inspector Remirez. We wanted to ask you some questions about Ana's death.

Jamie: O ok. *she says sorta nervous like*

Magda: Is something wrong?

Jamie: Oh, no. Its just that im still kinda shook up about all this.

Jinny: Oh, we see. We know this must be hard for you, but this is very important.

Jamie: I understand. I will try to be of as much help as i can.

Magda: Ok. We really appreciate it. * magda says looking over at Jinny*

Jinny starts looking over at some of the drinks. She spins her head around to find Magda looking at her*

Hope Ya'll liked it.

NEXT!

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
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Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

[tomboyjo11]

Originally posted by nancysbiggestfan:
Sry it took me so long. But here goes. And dont blame me if this stinks!

Jinny: I need you to stick by me here.

Magda: Oh, dont worry.

Jinny starts looking around trying to find Jamie.

Jinny: Ummm. I dont think i have ever seen her here before. Maybe thats her.

Magda: Well, you should know if she has worked her long. *Magda says kinda laughin*

Jinny: Yea, yea. Thanks for the support Mag. *Jinny says half joking and half serious*

Magda: Forget it. Lets just go and see if its her.

Jinny: k.

Magda: Hi, are you Jamie?

Jamie: Yea. Why?

Jinny: Im Inspector Exstead and this is Inspector Remirez. We wanted to ask you some questions about Ana's death.

Jamie: O ok. *she says sorta nervous like*

Magda: Is something wrong?

Jamie: Oh, no. Its just that im still kinda shook up about all this.

Jinny: Oh, we see. We know this must be hard for you, but this is very important.

Jamie: I understand. I will try to be of as much help as i can.

Magda: Ok. We really appreciate it. * magda says looking over at Jinny*

Jinny starts looking over at some of the drinks. She spins her head around to find Magda looking at her*

Hope Ya'll liked it.

NEXT!

okay well me and tiffany did this really cool thing where we act out this stuff so we won't hafta write it and since jamie is not here right now i shall go on. hope ya like it!!!

(sees magda lookin at her)
jinny: what?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
magda ya know what!!!!
jinny: ok ok!! geeze!!!! i won't do it again!
magda: hmmmm mmmm. now lets get back to askin jamie the questions. ok?
jinny: fine.

(they go ova and ask her some ques)

ok i wana work on this more w/ tiffany or jamie so byez!!!

-Kiera

[nancysbiggestfan]

Jinny: (sees Magda lookin at her)
Jinny: what!?!?!?!?!?!?
Magda: You Know what!
Jinny: okay okay?!?! Geez!
Magda: Mmm Hmm. Now lets get back to asking Jamie the questions. OK?
Jinny: fine
(they go ova and ask her some ques.
Magda: So, Jamie, have you seen this guy before?
Jamie: No, not that I recall.
Jinny: can ya identify him?
Magda: So, Jamie, have you seen this guy before?
Jamie: No, not that I recall.
Jinny: do ya think ya could identify him??
Jamie: That would be really hard
Jinny: it would really help us if ya could try?
Jamie: Well, I do remember he had black hair.
Magda: Anything else?
Jamie: No.
Magda: OK Thanks.
(they get in Jinny's car and head back ta the division and they are talkin ta
Kate)
Magda: Captain, we talked to Jamie about what happened.
Kate: and?
Jinny: well we think she is lyin ta us bout what happened.
Kate: and why do ya say that?
Magda: Well, I'm pretty sure there was another person with them.
Magda: that she isn't telling us about.
Kate: and how do ya know this?
Magda: Well, I think it was Jessica that said Kiera was with them.
Kate: and did ya meet this girl?
Magda: but I don't know why she would lie about that. What was the purpose?
Jinny: well she is obviously hidin somethin.
Jinny: but what? I mean she was there w/ them so why would she lie?
Magda: Yea. So...what should we do
Kate: well look at the cases again.
Kate: and see if ya and find somethin out.
Magda: OK
Magda: we'll give it a try.
(Jinny and magda leave)

Hope Ya'll like it!

[IcePrincessBlair]

Hey, ya gotta post some more on this story, I like it. so post more.