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NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 06-29-2001, 03:36 PM

~**The Division**~

Kate: Good morning everyone!

Jinny: Who is everyone...the only people u called here this early is Mag and me!

Kate: Well, ne way! I had an important case that was just called in and i thought u 2 would like a case with people since u have had dog case for the last 4 times *laughs*

Magda: How gernerous of you! *smiles and looks at jinny and crosses her eyes*

Kate: Your case is there is a stepfather who has had this kid which isn't really his, but his wifes. His wife died 17 years ago. The daughter is 16...17 in 3 months. She was rapped and called 911 and we got the case. She is sleeping in ur car Jinny! And..*interupted*

Jinny: WHAT!?!?!?

Kate: She has no other family. Her mother killed herself and she left her husband and 3 kids. We are tring to find them, but until then..she needed to sleep somewhere. Now u can go get her and question her and i will do more reasearch on her family. okay?

Magda: Okay, poor thing!

**Outside standing at Jinnys Car**

Jinny: She better not drowel on my car seats.

Magda: *hits Jinny* Shut-up.

*Girl sits up. Magda opens opens the door*

Magda: Hello, whats ur name?

Girl: Carly.

Jinny: Okay...

Carly: Yeah my mom named my odler brother and sister with "J" and my younger brother with "C" . Jinny, John and Casey and Carly!

Magda: and jinny: *look at eachother in shock*

Should i continue??????

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 06-29-2001, 03:41 PM

Ooooooh, don't leave us haning, come on!!!

hockeychiC518 · 06-29-2001, 04:18 PM

awesome post more as sooon as possible!

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-29-2001, 05:49 PM

Why'd ya stop?

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 06-29-2001, 06:34 PM

okay...thanx guys!

Carly: So, neway! On with the questions!

Magda: Did ur Mother ever show u a picture of your father, sister, and brothers?

Carly: nope, as soon as i was born she killed herself and then my step-father took care of me. He did a great job, so far...didn't he? *sarcasticly*

Jinny: Well, come on inside and we will talk..i mean do the question thing...i mean u know!

Carly: *gives her a look*

**~The Division~**

(Kate comes running out)

Kate: Jinny, Magda, and Carly i found your family. They were right under my nose.

Jinny: We really should question her before she forgets what happened.

Carly: I won't forget...who are they? Are they still alive? When can i see them?

Kate: They are living right here is San Fran, yes they are alive, and you can see one of them right now! Met your sister "Miss Jinny Exstead"

Carly: OMG, my last name is Exstead also!!!

Jinny: Yup...i guess that makes me ur sister...*gives a fake smile*

Magda: This is so cute!!!

Jinny: *glares at her*

Carly: so, now i don't have to go up for adoption...i am only 16 and can't go out on my own by law...as u should know! Oh, i am so excited! I have always wanted to meet you! *runs up to Jinny and gives her a hug*

Jinny: *feels uneasy but pats her on the back*

Kate: Good, Jinny you take her for tonite after you question her. Then we will dicuss this in the morning.

Magda: *looks at her watch which says 3:09 a.m.* Um, it is morning!

**~Small room in the Division~**

Magda: So tell us what happened?

Carly: Well, he came into my room at 11:00pm and said "Take off your clothes". I didin't understand because he was my father and i loved him. He was so good to me. He then took me by the shoulders and started ripping my clothes off....u know...he raped me. He was so strong...*crying*

Jinny: What a sick bast***!

Magda: Jinny can i see you outside for a minuete?

Jinny: Sure...*looking angry*

~**Outside**~

Magda: Now Jinny we have to take this like a regular case!

Jinny: *not listen and shaking her head* Do you believe that someone whould have the nerve to do this...

Magda: Jin, this kind of thing happens all the time!

Jinny: But, this time it happened to my sister!

Magda: Jinny: Well, we will try extra hard for this case.

Jinny: That isn't enough!

Magda: Then what is enough????*looks a lil scared*

The title kicks in later in the fan fic...shall i go on?

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-29-2001, 07:34 PM

PLEASE CONTINUE!!! Hey Kerrin, what happened to Sister Sister 2?

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 06-29-2001, 07:45 PM

Kenzie, i didn't think that neone liked it? also, continue on our fan ifc! Thanx for the response!

hockeychiC518 · 06-29-2001, 10:46 PM

awesome post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-29-2001, 11:24 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by NancyMcKeonFan8976:
Kenzie, i didn't think that neone liked it? also, continue on our fan ifc! Thanx for the response!

This ain't kenzie, This is Allie...ya know the one who you are doin' the fan fic where oh wait when I finish up what I was sayin' it'll give it away. But yeah, This is Allie, AND I LOVE SISTER SISTER 2!

BlairW_1 · 06-30-2001, 01:34 AM

Yeah, Kenzie is Teddys_Angel_Jinny, the one you're mad at for not writing more on the fanfic, remember?

Great fic, ya gotta write more!!!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

*¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ *
<3 ya!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 06-30-2001, 07:00 PM

thanx, and sorry Allie! I didn't get ur E-mail? what is it please?

Jinny: I don't know what i am talking about. it just a lot is happening at once.

Magda: I understand.

*hugs Jinny*

Magda: should we go after the step-father?

Jinny: yeah...lets tell Carly that she can stay at my apartment while we are out!

(They tell Calry drop her off and go after the step DAD)

**~Carly's House~**

Jinny: *knocks* Well, this is it!!!!!!

Step-father: *opens the do0r*

Magda: He satyed home*laughs*

Stepfather: i wouldn't have a reason not to! my name is Howard...u?

Jinny: SFPD...Inspector Exstead and this is Inspector Rameriz..*interupted*

Howard: Hey, thats my daughter and wife last name!

Jinny: Yeah, i am her daughter and Carlys sister.

Howard: how nice...now leave me alone!

magda: Sir, we have a warrent to seach ur house....*walks inside and looks around*

Howard: Hey, u can't just *jinny pushes past him*

(Magda wgoes into Carlys room to see a nigh gown hanging on the fan anf the sheets torn apart)

Magda: Jinny! come in here!

Howard: She left...

Magda: What?

Howard: she left...

(Magda walks out)

Magda: what did u do with her?

Howard: the same thing i am going to do to u! (holds up a crow bar adn hits Magda over the head)

Continue........

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-30-2001, 08:05 PM

KERRIN *In a really high squeeky voice* YOU LITTLE!!! How could you stop that isn't nice of you. *starts crying well not really crying LOL*

BlairW_1 · 06-30-2001, 09:28 PM

:::chivers::: HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?!?!?!?!? Err... Excuse me, how could you do this! Please. There, that's more polite! :P WRITE MORE!!! Oh... Please. There, that's better!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

*¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ *
<3 ya!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 06-30-2001, 09:58 PM

sorryt people.....*devilish smile*, bu thanx for replying and enjoying the fic!

~**Small dark Room~**

(Magda waks up and touches her head. Wet blood touches her skin and gives her a shiver down her spine.)

Magda: Jinny??

*no answer*

Magda: Jinny? Please be in here with me! *feels around and bumps her hand against someone (Jinny) 's hand.*

Magda: Jinny!!! (Shakes the body and it groans.)

jinny: Ouch....what?

Magda: Jinny! *hugs her*

jinny: my head. *feels the same blood head*

Magda: where are we?

Jinny: Howards lome...

Magda: Shut-up...(They here heavy footsteps)

*The door opens.*

(Carly was standing there in her huge rain boats)

Jinny: Carly what are you doing here? i told u to stay home!

Carly: I had to save u!hurry up...Howard only sleeps an hour...and we have 7 min left before he wakes up!!!

*Mag and Jin get up and Jinny falls down with Magda.*

Jin and Mag: Wooooooah!

*Get up again and walk out.*

Howard: You thought all ur problems were solved didn't u?

Jinny: Shhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiipppppp!

Magda: FFFFFUUUUUDDGGEE!

Carly: Oh, man!

Howard: So, whos first?

Jinny: Run, everyone run!

*Magda Carly and Jinny run down the hall with Howard close behind! They get to the elevator and Jinny, Magda get in Carly goes to get in and Howard grabs her and the doors shut. All the sudden there is a power outige. The elevator stops and goes dark.*

Howard: How did that happen? Perfect Bob, nice work!!!!

Carly: JINNNYY!!!!!

continue................

BlairW_1 · 07-03-2001, 11:09 PM

No, Magda does not shiver, she chivers!!! (Which I will not do for a while, I have a MAJOR sunburn... Almost as bad as my other burn... ouch...) Great story!!! :P I wanna have more!!!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

*¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ *
<3 ya!

06-29-2001, 03:36 PM	#1
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	"Girls Just Wanna Have Fun" ~The Division~ Kate: Good morning everyone! Jinny: Who is everyone...the only people u called here this early is Mag and me! Kate: Well, ne way! I had an important case that was just called in and i thought u 2 would like a case with people since u have had dog case for the last 4 times laughs Magda: How gernerous of you! smiles and looks at jinny and crosses her eyes Kate: Your case is there is a stepfather who has had this kid which isn't really his, but his wifes. His wife died 17 years ago. The daughter is 16...17 in 3 months. She was rapped and called 911 and we got the case. She is sleeping in ur car Jinny! And..interupted Jinny: WHAT!?!?!? Kate: She has no other family. Her mother killed herself and she left her husband and 3 kids. We are tring to find them, but until then..she needed to sleep somewhere. Now u can go get her and question her and i will do more reasearch on her family. okay? Magda: Okay, poor thing! Outside standing at Jinnys Car Jinny: She better not drowel on my car seats. Magda: hits Jinny Shut-up. Girl sits up. Magda opens opens the door Magda: Hello, whats ur name? Girl: Carly. Jinny: Okay... Carly: Yeah my mom named my odler brother and sister with "J" and my younger brother with "C" . Jinny, John and Casey and Carly! Magda: and jinny: look at eachother in shock Should i continue??????

06-29-2001, 03:41 PM	#2
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	Ooooooh, don't leave us haning, come on!!!

06-29-2001, 04:18 PM	#3
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	awesome post more as sooon as possible!

06-29-2001, 05:49 PM	#4
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Why'd ya stop?

06-29-2001, 06:34 PM	#5
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	okay...thanx guys! Carly: So, neway! On with the questions! Magda: Did ur Mother ever show u a picture of your father, sister, and brothers? Carly: nope, as soon as i was born she killed herself and then my step-father took care of me. He did a great job, so far...didn't he? sarcasticly Jinny: Well, come on inside and we will talk..i mean do the question thing...i mean u know! Carly: gives her a look ~The Division~ (Kate comes running out) Kate: Jinny, Magda, and Carly i found your family. They were right under my nose. Jinny: We really should question her before she forgets what happened. Carly: I won't forget...who are they? Are they still alive? When can i see them? Kate: They are living right here is San Fran, yes they are alive, and you can see one of them right now! Met your sister "Miss Jinny Exstead" Carly: OMG, my last name is Exstead also!!! Jinny: Yup...i guess that makes me ur sister...gives a fake smile Magda: This is so cute!!! Jinny: glares at her Carly: so, now i don't have to go up for adoption...i am only 16 and can't go out on my own by law...as u should know! Oh, i am so excited! I have always wanted to meet you! runs up to Jinny and gives her a hug Jinny: feels uneasy but pats her on the back Kate: Good, Jinny you take her for tonite after you question her. Then we will dicuss this in the morning. Magda: looks at her watch which says 3:09 a.m. Um, it is morning! ~Small room in the Division~ Magda: So tell us what happened? Carly: Well, he came into my room at 11:00pm and said "Take off your clothes". I didin't understand because he was my father and i loved him. He was so good to me. He then took me by the shoulders and started ripping my clothes off....u know...he raped me. He was so strong...crying Jinny: What a sick bast**! Magda: Jinny can i see you outside for a minuete? Jinny: Sure...looking angry* ~Outside~ Magda: Now Jinny we have to take this like a regular case! Jinny: not listen and shaking her head Do you believe that someone whould have the nerve to do this... Magda: Jin, this kind of thing happens all the time! Jinny: But, this time it happened to my sister! Magda: Jinny: Well, we will try extra hard for this case. Jinny: That isn't enough! Magda: Then what is enough????looks a lil scared The title kicks in later in the fan fic...shall i go on?

06-29-2001, 07:34 PM	#6
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	PLEASE CONTINUE!!! Hey Kerrin, what happened to Sister Sister 2?

06-29-2001, 07:45 PM	#7
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Kenzie, i didn't think that neone liked it? also, continue on our fan ifc! Thanx for the response!

06-29-2001, 10:46 PM	#8
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	awesome post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

06-30-2001, 01:34 AM	#10
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Yeah, Kenzie is Teddys_Angel_Jinny, the one you're mad at for not writing more on the fanfic, remember? Great fic, ya gotta write more!!! ------------------ I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me! ¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ <3 ya!

06-30-2001, 07:00 PM	#11
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	thanx, and sorry Allie! I didn't get ur E-mail? what is it please? Jinny: I don't know what i am talking about. it just a lot is happening at once. Magda: I understand. hugs Jinny Magda: should we go after the step-father? Jinny: yeah...lets tell Carly that she can stay at my apartment while we are out! (They tell Calry drop her off and go after the step DAD) ~Carly's House~ Jinny: knocks Well, this is it!!!!!! Step-father: opens the do0r Magda: He satyed homelaughs Stepfather: i wouldn't have a reason not to! my name is Howard...u? Jinny: SFPD...Inspector Exstead and this is Inspector Rameriz..interupted Howard: Hey, thats my daughter and wife last name! Jinny: Yeah, i am her daughter and Carlys sister. Howard: how nice...now leave me alone! magda: Sir, we have a warrent to seach ur house....walks inside and looks around Howard: Hey, u can't just jinny pushes past him (Magda wgoes into Carlys room to see a nigh gown hanging on the fan anf the sheets torn apart) Magda: Jinny! come in here! Howard: She left... Magda: What? Howard: she left... (Magda walks out) Magda: what did u do with her? Howard: the same thing i am going to do to u! (holds up a crow bar adn hits Magda over the head) Continue........

06-30-2001, 08:05 PM	#12
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	KERRIN In a really high squeeky voice YOU LITTLE!!! How could you stop that isn't nice of you. starts crying well not really crying LOL

06-30-2001, 09:28 PM	#13
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	:::chivers::: HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?!?!?!?!? Err... Excuse me, how could you do this! Please. There, that's more polite! :P WRITE MORE!!! Oh... Please. There, that's better! ------------------ I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me! ¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ <3 ya!

06-30-2001, 09:58 PM	#14
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	sorryt people.....devilish smile, bu thanx for replying and enjoying the fic! ~Small dark Room~ (Magda waks up and touches her head. Wet blood touches her skin and gives her a shiver down her spine.) Magda: Jinny?? no answer Magda: Jinny? Please be in here with me! feels around and bumps her hand against someone (Jinny) 's hand. Magda: Jinny!!! (Shakes the body and it groans.) jinny: Ouch....what? Magda: Jinny! hugs her jinny: my head. feels the same blood head Magda: where are we? Jinny: Howards lome... Magda: Shut-up...(They here heavy footsteps) The door opens. (Carly was standing there in her huge rain boats) Jinny: Carly what are you doing here? i told u to stay home! Carly: I had to save u!hurry up...Howard only sleeps an hour...and we have 7 min left before he wakes up!!! Mag and Jin get up and Jinny falls down with Magda. Jin and Mag: Wooooooah! Get up again and walk out. Howard: You thought all ur problems were solved didn't u? Jinny: Shhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiipppppp! Magda: FFFFFUUUUUDDGGEE! Carly: Oh, man! Howard: So, whos first? Jinny: Run, everyone run! Magda Carly and Jinny run down the hall with Howard close behind! They get to the elevator and Jinny, Magda get in Carly goes to get in and Howard grabs her and the doors shut. All the sudden there is a power outige. The elevator stops and goes dark. Howard: How did that happen? Perfect Bob, nice work!!!! Carly: JINNNYY!!!!! continue................

07-03-2001, 11:09 PM	#15
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	No, Magda does not shiver, she chivers!!! (Which I will not do for a while, I have a MAJOR sunburn... Almost as bad as my other burn... ouch...) Great story!!! :P I wanna have more!!! ------------------ I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me! ¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ <3 ya!