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Nancy Exstead · 07-13-2001, 04:45 PM

In the division locker room at quitting time.
M: Hey, Jin! Want to come over for dinner? I wouldn't ask, except Ben begged me too. We're celebrating his straight A report card.
J: Thanks for asking and congratulations. But Teddy has a surprise for me, we're going out to dinner.
M: Wow! Wonder what it could be!?
J: Well, how about, I call you after our date and tell you!?
M: I'll wait up for that call.
J: How about I call by midnight.
M: Okay, talk to you then.
J: Bye.
They both leave.

*A really fancy restaurant
J: (picking at her food) So, why did you drag me to this place? (She smiled at Teddy)
T: Jinny, I'm old fashioned and want to do this right.
J: What are you talking about?
Teddy got down on one knee and Jinny gasped.
J: Oh… my…God.
T: Jinny?
J: Yes?!
T: Will you marry me?
J: Oh Teddy…YES, yes, yes!!!
He pulls out a ring and places it on her finger. It was a thin gold band, with a star shaped diamond on it. On each side of the star was a circular diamond, sitting on the band. Jinny started to cry and kneeled down to hug Teddy.
J: (whispers in his ear) Yes, thank you for asking.
T: (He holds her face in his hands and looks into her eyes) I'll make you as happy as you make me. Thank you for saying yes. (They laugh)
They stand up and sit down in their chairs.
T: I hope you like the ring, it was my grandmothers.
J: It's beautiful.
T: Hey, how about a walk?
J: Sure, I could stand a little fresh air.

*Walking along a dark street
Teddy looks over at Jinny and laughs
J: What's so funny?
They stop walking in front of an alleyway.
T: You've been smiling all night.
J: I can't help it, I'm so happy. I've never been this happy.
T: Jinny, I love you. I will try to keep you this happy, till the end of time.
Just then, 4 men with guns came out of the alley. Two of them grabbed Jinny and two of them grabbed Teddy. They both struggled a little, but couldn't get free. The two men pushed Teddy to knees. One of the other two men held Jinny, facing Teddy, as the other went to talk to Teddy.
(we'll call the man Z)
Z: Hello, Theodore. You probably don't remember me, but you put me away a couple of years ago. I'm out on bail, it took my 3 brothers here, two years to get my bail, but they got it.
T: What do you want?
Z: I want my 2 years of life back. I want you to fell the separation, the alone feeling, or the sadness? We want to take from you, the people you love, so you can feel those feelings. (He looks at Jinny)
T: Oh God, please don't hurt her. I'll give you anything you want…please, let her go. (tears fall down his cheeks)
J: Teddy (tears ran down her face, they both felt powerless) I love you.
Z: Shut up.
T: Leave her alone.
Teddy struggled to get free, but was unable to.
Z: (looks at Jinny's hand) What a beautiful ring. Did he give that to you as an engagement ring?
J: Yes.
Z: I could get a lot of money for that, give me it,
J: NO
Z: Then I'll take it.

Jinny struggled to keep the ring, but the man was surprisingly strong and she was unable to keep the ring. He tore it off her finger and put it in his pocket. Jinny burst into tears.
J: Give that back.
Z: Give what back? We'll be going now. If you follow us, we'll kill you. You haven't seen the last of us. This was just your warning.
The men ran away. Teddy and Jinny didn't dare follow them. They were still in shock. Jinny fell to her knees, crawled to Teddy, and held him.
T: Are you okay?
J: Yeah, I'm so sorry.
T: Why are you sorry.
J: I lost your ring.
T: (held her closer) It's okay, as long as you're okay. The ring doesn't matter, just you.
It was ten after midnight; Magda couldn't wait any longer. She had to know what Jin's surprise was.

Jinny's cell phone rang. She waited a couple of seconds, let go of Teddy, and answered the phone.
J: (sniffled) Hello?
M: Hey Jin, What's wrong?
J: Magda, there's been a crime, we need some cops at 868 and Hunter St.
M: (didn't hesitate, she knew it was an emergency) Sure thing, right away. Bye.
Jinny hung up her cell phone and turned to Teddy.
J: Helps on the way.
T: Good.

I'll type more later. Did you like it, please respond.

Joanna Marie_1 · 07-13-2001, 05:26 PM

I'm LOVIN it! PLEASE keep goin!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-13-2001, 06:37 PM

More please!!!! i beg you!

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From Billy Gilman-My Time On Earth:
So My Time on earth,
long as it seems,
is just a moment in the grand scheme of things,
a short refrain, to life's endless song, sung only once and then we're gone.

From Jessica Andrews-Who I Am:
I am rosemary's granddaughter the spitting image of my father and when the day is done my mama's still my biggest fan.

~~~Allison~~~

XoVanillaRain90oX · 07-13-2001, 08:11 PM

Post more!!!! Soon!!!! Please!!!!!

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Lisa

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

Esperanza · 07-13-2001, 09:54 PM

LUV IT!!! Post More!

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Wisdom had two parts:
1) having a lot to say, and
2) not saying it.

BlairandJo · 07-13-2001, 10:06 PM

More!!!!!This is gr8;o)

jo_24 · 07-13-2001, 10:10 PM

Post more soon!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Nancy is SLammin'!

Honey Angel · 07-14-2001, 06:42 PM

Very good! can't wait to read more.

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 07-14-2001, 11:08 PM

OMG, this is AMAZING...please continue1 I beg of you!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 07-15-2001, 03:29 PM

Please...this is soooo good!

Swimfan85 · 07-16-2001, 03:57 PM

post more, this is great!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Nancy Exstead · 07-18-2001, 03:04 PM

5 minutes later, cops were all over the scene looking for clues. Jinny and Teddy were talking to Captain and Magda.
M: Now Jinny, what's this all about?
Jinny told the whole story.
K: Man, what a way to end the night. Congrats on the engagement.
M: Yeah, we’ll get your ring back. Why don't you two go get some sleep.
K: Teddy, Look through your old cases tomorrow.
T: Thank you, I will.
Teddy and Jinny leave. When they get back to Jinny's apartment, the door is jammed. Jinny puts all her weight into the door and opens it. They enter the apartment, to find everything a mess.
J: OMG!
T: What the, I'll call 911
He ran into the kitchen. Jinny leans against the wall by the door and just stares in shock. She slides down the wall and starts to cry. Teddy finished the call in the kitchen. He walked around the corner and found Jinny in tears. He ran to her. He knelt down to the ground and hugged Jinny.
T: It's okay Jinny, we'll catch these guys.
J: (starts to calm down) Yeah, I know. But, what's ganna happen between now and that time?
T: I don't understand.
J: Darn it, they could kill you!
T: I'm not worried about that, I'm worried about you. If they try to hurt you, I don't know what I'd do.
J: I've never been happier in my life. You're the reason for that. I don't want to loose you.
T: Don't talk like that. We'll catch these guys.
Sirens are heard in the background.
J: I guess we should meet them outside.
T: Sure.
They go outside and meet two cop cars. They explain the story, then Jinny gets out her cell phone.
T: Who are you calling?
J: (Ignoring him) Hey Mag! Would you send a squad car to check out Teddy's apartment?
M: Sure thing Jinny. Why?
J: My apartments been broken into and I'm betting Teddy's was too.
M: Are you two alright?
J: Yeah. Just, tell whoever goes to be careful.
Teddy came behind Jinny and held her.
M: Do you two need a place to stay?
J: No, we don't want to put Ben or you in danger. We'll stay at Casey's or my dad's.
M: Okay, bye Jin, be careful.
J: Bye, we will. (Jinny hung up the phone and put it in her coat pocket)
T: Jin, should we call Casey before we go over? I mean, it is 1:15 in the morning.
J: Sure, we can call. (Takes out her phone)

Ring, ring, ring 5x, finally Casey wakes up and answers the phone.
C: (groggy) Hello? (He yawns)
J: Hi, Casey. Sorry to wake you, but Teddy and I need a place to stay.
C: You can stay over her. If you tell me what happened.
J: I'll tell you when we get there. Bye.
C: See ya soon.
They hang up the phones.

Later at Casey's place.
J: (Sitting at the table with a cup of coffee)…And that's when I called you.
C: Man, I'm sorry to hear that. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll be safe here. Since, they don't know where you are.
T: Thanks for letting us stay here.
C: You can stay as long as you want.
J: We better get some sleep. We've got files to go through in the morning.
C: You two take the bed, I'll take the couch.
J: Thanks Casey. (They hug)
C: You'd do the same for me, goodnight.
T&J: Good-night.(they all go to where they're going to sleep)

In the bedroom Teddy's cell phone rings.
T: Hello?
M: Yeah, Teddy? Ask Jin to see if her phone's on. The captain and I have been calling.
T: (turns to Jinny) Hey, check to see if your phone is on.
J: (pulls out her phone to check it.) Darn, the batteries dead. The chargers at my place. Oh well.
T: (on the phone) Her batteries dead, what's up?
M: Well, we checked your place and it looks like someone has been there.
T: Darn it! (slams his hand on the bed)
J: (She sounds worried) Teddy, what's wrong?
T: My place is trashed too.
M: There were no prints found at either place. See you tomorrow.
T: Bye.
J: Did they find anything?
T: (walks to Jin) No, not yet. (They hug, then kiss)
J: Let's just go to bed, okay?
T: Sure.
They both laid in bed, bur neither of them slept a wink.

The next morning at the division
T: Well, that's the last box of files, now lets start looking.
M: What are we looking for?
J: A male with 3 brothers, option for bail, tried about 2 years go. Plaintiff in the case was the state.
M: This should be fun.
They all started looking through files. Jinny hadn't eaten since dinner last night and she was getting hungry.
J: I can't do this on an empty stomach. I'm ganna drive down the street to the coffee shop. Anybody want anything? (she stands up and puts on her jacket)
T: Sure hun, just get me what ever you get.
M: Coffee for me Jin.
J: Alright, I'll be back soon.
She leaves, gets in her car, and takes off down the street. She reaches a coffee shop and goes in. She orders the coffee and rolls. She pays, then goes back to her car. A grey van pulls up behind Jins car, but Jin doesn't notice it. She puts the food on top of the car and searches for her keys, finally she pulls them from her coat pocket. They slip from her hand and they fall to the ground.
J: Oh man!
She reaches down to get them. As she bends down, two men jump out of the van and grab Jinny from behind. She reached for her cell phone, but can't use it, the battery is dead. They put a rag over her mouth and she passes out. They get in the van and drive away.
15 minutes later
At the station
T: Where is she, Magda? She should be back by now.
M: I don't know Teddy, but I'm getting worried. I'll go look for her.
T: I'm coming with you.
M: I think it would be better for you to stay and go through the files.
T: Yeah, she's probably just stuck in line.
M: (A worried tone) Yeah, probably.
Magda drove down the street to the coffee shop. She parked and right away noticed Jin's car. She ran to it and examined the food and car keys that were left out in the open. So was the phone.
M: Oh man! (she ran into the coffee shop just to see if Jin was there. She looked everywhere, but couldn't find her.) JINNY, JINNY where are you? (she pulls out her cell phone and dials the division)
K: McCafferty!
M: Captain, Jin's gone, her cars still here. She just vanished.

I hope you enjoyed it and please come back later. The search for Jinny is on.

NewsiesGurl229 · 07-18-2001, 03:15 PM

I love it!! Can't wait for more!

BlairandJo · 07-18-2001, 03:35 PM

More This is gr8 I have to know if Jinny's all right.MORE;o)

JJ · 07-18-2001, 03:43 PM

Please!! dON'T DO THIS TO ME!!!!! post more soon and thank-yoouuuuuu!

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"I know people too, and next time- don't screw with me,"

07-13-2001, 04:45 PM	#1
Nancy Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 09, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 42	"Horrible Sadness" A new story In the division locker room at quitting time. M: Hey, Jin! Want to come over for dinner? I wouldn't ask, except Ben begged me too. We're celebrating his straight A report card. J: Thanks for asking and congratulations. But Teddy has a surprise for me, we're going out to dinner. M: Wow! Wonder what it could be!? J: Well, how about, I call you after our date and tell you!? M: I'll wait up for that call. J: How about I call by midnight. M: Okay, talk to you then. J: Bye. They both leave. A really fancy restaurant J: (picking at her food) So, why did you drag me to this place? (She smiled at Teddy) T: Jinny, I'm old fashioned and want to do this right. J: What are you talking about? Teddy got down on one knee and Jinny gasped. J: Oh… my…God. T: Jinny? J: Yes?! T: Will you marry me? J: Oh Teddy…YES, yes, yes!!! He pulls out a ring and places it on her finger. It was a thin gold band, with a star shaped diamond on it. On each side of the star was a circular diamond, sitting on the band. Jinny started to cry and kneeled down to hug Teddy. J: (whispers in his ear) Yes, thank you for asking. T: (He holds her face in his hands and looks into her eyes) I'll make you as happy as you make me. Thank you for saying yes. (They laugh) They stand up and sit down in their chairs. T: I hope you like the ring, it was my grandmothers. J: It's beautiful. T: Hey, how about a walk? J: Sure, I could stand a little fresh air. Walking along a dark street Teddy looks over at Jinny and laughs J: What's so funny? They stop walking in front of an alleyway. T: You've been smiling all night. J: I can't help it, I'm so happy. I've never been this happy. T: Jinny, I love you. I will try to keep you this happy, till the end of time. Just then, 4 men with guns came out of the alley. Two of them grabbed Jinny and two of them grabbed Teddy. They both struggled a little, but couldn't get free. The two men pushed Teddy to knees. One of the other two men held Jinny, facing Teddy, as the other went to talk to Teddy. (we'll call the man Z) Z: Hello, Theodore. You probably don't remember me, but you put me away a couple of years ago. I'm out on bail, it took my 3 brothers here, two years to get my bail, but they got it. T: What do you want? Z: I want my 2 years of life back. I want you to fell the separation, the alone feeling, or the sadness? We want to take from you, the people you love, so you can feel those feelings. (He looks at Jinny) T: Oh God, please don't hurt her. I'll give you anything you want…please, let her go. (tears fall down his cheeks) J: Teddy (tears ran down her face, they both felt powerless) I love you. Z: Shut up. T: Leave her alone. Teddy struggled to get free, but was unable to. Z: (looks at Jinny's hand) What a beautiful ring. Did he give that to you as an engagement ring? J: Yes. Z: I could get a lot of money for that, give me it, J: NO Z: Then I'll take it. Jinny struggled to keep the ring, but the man was surprisingly strong and she was unable to keep the ring. He tore it off her finger and put it in his pocket. Jinny burst into tears. J: Give that back. Z: Give what back? We'll be going now. If you follow us, we'll kill you. You haven't seen the last of us. This was just your warning. The men ran away. Teddy and Jinny didn't dare follow them. They were still in shock. Jinny fell to her knees, crawled to Teddy, and held him. T: Are you okay? J: Yeah, I'm so sorry. T: Why are you sorry. J: I lost your ring. T: (held her closer) It's okay, as long as you're okay. The ring doesn't matter, just you. It was ten after midnight; Magda couldn't wait any longer. She had to know what Jin's surprise was. Jinny's cell phone rang. She waited a couple of seconds, let go of Teddy, and answered the phone. J: (sniffled) Hello? M: Hey Jin, What's wrong? J: Magda, there's been a crime, we need some cops at 868 and Hunter St. M: (didn't hesitate, she knew it was an emergency) Sure thing, right away. Bye. Jinny hung up her cell phone and turned to Teddy. J: Helps on the way. T: Good. I'll type more later. Did you like it, please respond.

07-13-2001, 05:26 PM	#2
Joanna Marie_1 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2001 Location: Sherwood, AR, USA Posts: 342	I'm LOVIN it! PLEASE keep goin! ------------------ (After the fake motorcycle accident) Jo:My head hurtz a lil Nat: A Concusion!!!!!! Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing! Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

07-13-2001, 06:37 PM	#3
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	More please!!!! i beg you! ------------------ From Billy Gilman-My Time On Earth: So My Time on earth, long as it seems, is just a moment in the grand scheme of things, a short refrain, to life's endless song, sung only once and then we're gone. From Jessica Andrews-Who I Am: I am rosemary's granddaughter the spitting image of my father and when the day is done my mama's still my biggest fan. ~~~Allison~~~

07-13-2001, 08:11 PM	#4
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	Post more!!!! Soon!!!! Please!!!!! ------------------ Lisa Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website! http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001 Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

07-13-2001, 09:54 PM	#5
Esperanza Hogwarts Head Girl Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 07, 2001 Location: Snowy Tundra of Minnesota Posts: 299	LUV IT!!! Post More! ------------------ Wisdom had two parts: 1) having a lot to say, and 2) not saying it.

07-13-2001, 10:06 PM	#6
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	More!!!!!This is gr8;o)

07-13-2001, 10:10 PM	#7
jo_24 ~* The Comedian ~ Occasional Poster* Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: NancKeonVille Posts: 73	Post more soon! ------------------ "You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!! Teddy: Jinny, my God. Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nancy is SLammin'!

07-14-2001, 06:42 PM	#8
Honey Angel Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 15, 2001 Location: Texas Posts: 44	Very good! can't wait to read more.

07-14-2001, 11:08 PM	#9
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	OMG, this is AMAZING...please continue1 I beg of you!

07-15-2001, 03:29 PM	#10
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Please...this is soooo good!

07-16-2001, 03:57 PM	#11
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	post more, this is great! ------------------ Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it? Max: The Bangles broke up. Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point. Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more. *~~!!kATie!!~~*

07-18-2001, 03:04 PM	#12
Nancy Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 09, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 42	5 minutes later, cops were all over the scene looking for clues. Jinny and Teddy were talking to Captain and Magda. M: Now Jinny, what's this all about? Jinny told the whole story. K: Man, what a way to end the night. Congrats on the engagement. M: Yeah, we’ll get your ring back. Why don't you two go get some sleep. K: Teddy, Look through your old cases tomorrow. T: Thank you, I will. Teddy and Jinny leave. When they get back to Jinny's apartment, the door is jammed. Jinny puts all her weight into the door and opens it. They enter the apartment, to find everything a mess. J: OMG! T: What the, I'll call 911 He ran into the kitchen. Jinny leans against the wall by the door and just stares in shock. She slides down the wall and starts to cry. Teddy finished the call in the kitchen. He walked around the corner and found Jinny in tears. He ran to her. He knelt down to the ground and hugged Jinny. T: It's okay Jinny, we'll catch these guys. J: (starts to calm down) Yeah, I know. But, what's ganna happen between now and that time? T: I don't understand. J: Darn it, they could kill you! T: I'm not worried about that, I'm worried about you. If they try to hurt you, I don't know what I'd do. J: I've never been happier in my life. You're the reason for that. I don't want to loose you. T: Don't talk like that. We'll catch these guys. Sirens are heard in the background. J: I guess we should meet them outside. T: Sure. They go outside and meet two cop cars. They explain the story, then Jinny gets out her cell phone. T: Who are you calling? J: (Ignoring him) Hey Mag! Would you send a squad car to check out Teddy's apartment? M: Sure thing Jinny. Why? J: My apartments been broken into and I'm betting Teddy's was too. M: Are you two alright? J: Yeah. Just, tell whoever goes to be careful. Teddy came behind Jinny and held her. M: Do you two need a place to stay? J: No, we don't want to put Ben or you in danger. We'll stay at Casey's or my dad's. M: Okay, bye Jin, be careful. J: Bye, we will. (Jinny hung up the phone and put it in her coat pocket) T: Jin, should we call Casey before we go over? I mean, it is 1:15 in the morning. J: Sure, we can call. (Takes out her phone) Ring, ring, ring 5x, finally Casey wakes up and answers the phone. C: (groggy) Hello? (He yawns) J: Hi, Casey. Sorry to wake you, but Teddy and I need a place to stay. C: You can stay over her. If you tell me what happened. J: I'll tell you when we get there. Bye. C: See ya soon. They hang up the phones. Later at Casey's place. J: (Sitting at the table with a cup of coffee)…And that's when I called you. C: Man, I'm sorry to hear that. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll be safe here. Since, they don't know where you are. T: Thanks for letting us stay here. C: You can stay as long as you want. J: We better get some sleep. We've got files to go through in the morning. C: You two take the bed, I'll take the couch. J: Thanks Casey. (They hug) C: You'd do the same for me, goodnight. T&J: Good-night.(they all go to where they're going to sleep) In the bedroom Teddy's cell phone rings. T: Hello? M: Yeah, Teddy? Ask Jin to see if her phone's on. The captain and I have been calling. T: (turns to Jinny) Hey, check to see if your phone is on. J: (pulls out her phone to check it.) Darn, the batteries dead. The chargers at my place. Oh well. T: (on the phone) Her batteries dead, what's up? M: Well, we checked your place and it looks like someone has been there. T: Darn it! (slams his hand on the bed) J: (She sounds worried) Teddy, what's wrong? T: My place is trashed too. M: There were no prints found at either place. See you tomorrow. T: Bye. J: Did they find anything? T: (walks to Jin) No, not yet. (They hug, then kiss) J: Let's just go to bed, okay? T: Sure. They both laid in bed, bur neither of them slept a wink. The next morning at the division T: Well, that's the last box of files, now lets start looking. M: What are we looking for? J: A male with 3 brothers, option for bail, tried about 2 years go. Plaintiff in the case was the state. M: This should be fun. They all started looking through files. Jinny hadn't eaten since dinner last night and she was getting hungry. J: I can't do this on an empty stomach. I'm ganna drive down the street to the coffee shop. Anybody want anything? (she stands up and puts on her jacket) T: Sure hun, just get me what ever you get. M: Coffee for me Jin. J: Alright, I'll be back soon. She leaves, gets in her car, and takes off down the street. She reaches a coffee shop and goes in. She orders the coffee and rolls. She pays, then goes back to her car. A grey van pulls up behind Jins car, but Jin doesn't notice it. She puts the food on top of the car and searches for her keys, finally she pulls them from her coat pocket. They slip from her hand and they fall to the ground. J: Oh man! She reaches down to get them. As she bends down, two men jump out of the van and grab Jinny from behind. She reached for her cell phone, but can't use it, the battery is dead. They put a rag over her mouth and she passes out. They get in the van and drive away. 15 minutes later At the station T: Where is she, Magda? She should be back by now. M: I don't know Teddy, but I'm getting worried. I'll go look for her. T: I'm coming with you. M: I think it would be better for you to stay and go through the files. T: Yeah, she's probably just stuck in line. M: (A worried tone) Yeah, probably. Magda drove down the street to the coffee shop. She parked and right away noticed Jin's car. She ran to it and examined the food and car keys that were left out in the open. So was the phone. M: Oh man! (she ran into the coffee shop just to see if Jin was there. She looked everywhere, but couldn't find her.) JINNY, JINNY where are you? (she pulls out her cell phone and dials the division) K: McCafferty! M: Captain, Jin's gone, her cars still here. She just vanished. I hope you enjoyed it and please come back later. The search for Jinny is on.

07-18-2001, 03:15 PM	#13
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	I love it!! Can't wait for more!

07-18-2001, 03:35 PM	#14
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	More This is gr8 I have to know if Jinny's all right.MORE;o)

07-18-2001, 03:43 PM	#15
JJ Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 14, 2001 Posts: 123	Please!! dON'T DO THIS TO ME!!!!! post more soon and thank-yoouuuuuu! ) ------------------ "I know people too, and next time- don't screw with me,"