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Old 07-11-2001, 01:19 PM   #1
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Post mine and hockeybabe528's fanfic

It was early afternoon at the divison. CD Delorenzo and Angela Reide sat at their desks eating a late lunch. Magda walks in an sits at her desk, an angry look on her face.

CD: Ohh.. someone having a bad day?
M: Knock it off, CD. I'm not in the mood.

Just then Jinny Extead stormed into the division.

J: Mag! I SAID I was sorry! Look... I didn't mean to...

M: You know, Jin, forget it ok? (Magda gets up and walks towards the captain's office).

J: What are you doing?! (Jinny gets a look of panic on her face.)

M: Jinny, this isn't working. (Magda looks at Jinny's stricken face). I'm sorry. (Magda knocks on Captain's door and after hearing a "Come in!" she opened the door and walked in)

Jinny stood there watching the door close in her face.

A: Jinny, you ok?

Jinny whirled around and walked out the door to the division angrily.

CD sighed and looked at Angela.

CD: I guess I'd better make sure she's ok.

CD walked out the door and down the stairs to the locker room, looking for Jinny...

YOUR TURN!!!
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Old 07-11-2001, 01:58 PM   #2
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ooo great start!! heres more

Jinny stormed into to the locker room and angerliy opened her locker and looked around to make sure no one was around. She took out a bottle of tequilla but hidding it in a way..

Just then CD walked and saw Jinny facing her locker..

CD: hey Jinny are you alright, wht just happened between you and magda?

(Jinny trys to stuff the bottle in her locker but CD notices it)

Jinny: uhh ya i am fine*poping piece of gum in her mouth*

CD: Jinny what was that?

Jinny: what was what?

CD: Jinny i am not an idoit, what did you just throw back in your locker, like i did not see..

Jinny: ummm nothing, water, thats all, you see it was nothing...

CD: lemme me see it

SRY that was messed up but once we get rolling it will be better by me~

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***
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Old 07-11-2001, 02:06 PM   #3
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it wasn't messed up! twas good. more:

Jinny slammed her locker door shut so CD couldn't see in it and turned to face her.

J: Look, it's MY locker, ok?!

C: Yeah, but it's in police headquarters!! And besides, if you didn't have anything to hide you wouldn't be so paranoid about it.

Jinny rolled her eyes and stared at CD.

J: Are you gonna leave now?

C: No. Not until you show me what's in your locker!

Jinny got a look of panic on her face and looked down at the ground.

C: Jinny? (CD looked concerned)

J: Look, this is MY locker MY life and MY problem, okay?!?!

Just then, Magda walked in...

YOUR TURN

(sorry it sucked.. lol)
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Old 07-11-2001, 02:11 PM   #4
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no it doesnt post more soon please!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-11-2001, 02:13 PM   #5
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It didnt suck it was AWESOME!!!!!!!! PLEASE ADD MORE VERY SOON!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
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Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
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Old 07-11-2001, 02:22 PM   #6
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It doesn't suck! Mooooore.

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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Old 07-11-2001, 03:02 PM   #7
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NO JENN THAT WAS AWESOME!! heres more!
and thanks for the comments

Just then Magda entered

Magda: You guys what is going on and here and Jin Capt. wants to speak to you in her office

Jinny: damn, nothing is going on here

CD: Jinny has something in here locker that she wont show me..

Magda: Jinny....

Jinny: As I said before, my life, my problems..

*Jinny tries to leave but CD blocks the doorway*

Jinny: Come on' CD get outta the way

CD: I am not leaving till you show whats in your locker..

*Jinny sorta gives a shove to CD*

CD: you did not just do that...


LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!!! haha sry had to say that...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***
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Old 07-11-2001, 03:14 PM   #8
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YOU ROCK! k.. here's more:

J: I think i just did.

Jinny tries to manuver her way around CD, but CD grabs Jinny's arm and hold her.

CD: Mag, open her locker.

M: CD... I don't think...

CD looks at Magda and holds Jinny tighter.

CD: Do it, Mag!

Magda looks at Jinny now, who is crying hysterically and screaming "let me go, damnit!" over and over again. Then she opens Jinny's locker and finds the bottle of tequilla.

M: Jin?

Magda looked back at Jinny with disbelief in her eyes.

J: I... I...

Jinny kicks CD just then, throwing her offgaurd and ran out of the locker room, leaving Magda and CD staring after her.
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Old 07-11-2001, 03:20 PM   #9
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uh-oh theres gonna be troooouuuuble! This is GR8 so please post more really soon!

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Old 07-11-2001, 03:23 PM   #10
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Moooooooooore.

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Old 07-11-2001, 03:44 PM   #11
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omg that was awesome, dont know how i am going to top that wait i am not o well heres more

Jinny rushes back to her desk

*capt comes out of her office*

Captain: Exstead, can I see you in my office now?

Jinny: In a minuet*says it really mean and pissy voice

Capt.: Exstead, what did you just say? In my office now...

*Jinny takes her coat off the back off her chair and head for the door*

Capt: Exstead I believe my office is this way..

Jinny ignores her and walks right on past CD and Magda for the door...

Magda: Jinny we need to talk..

Jinny: just leave me alone

*CD and Magda sorta follow her and see she gets in her car leaves and capt. just stands there dumbfounded

well that sucked but add more so i can do better next time around..



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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***
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Old 07-11-2001, 03:54 PM   #12
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don't you even tell me that wasn't good! BAH! MORE:


Jinny drove away for a couple blocks not knowing where she was going. She was starting to cry again and it was blurring her vision so she pulled over to the side of the road and cried.

*******

Magda and CD walked back into the Division, CD holding Jinny's bottle of tequilla.

Capt: Alright.. what's going on here?!

M: Captain.. Jinny....

CD: (cutting her off) THIS is what's going on.

CD slammed the bottle down on a nearby desk and crossed her arms. The captain just stared at the bottle and looked up at the ceiling.

Capt: Oh god...

M: It's my fault.. why she did this...

CD: No it's not! Jinny is an alcoholic, Magda! For crying out loud... get her some help.

With that CD walked over to desk and sat down.

Capt: She does need help. I mean... you requesting not to be her partner this morning was because of drinking.

Magda just stared at her captain. All she wanted to do was go and find Jinny.

Capt: Magda.. you said it yourself... she was hungover.

YOUR TURN!!!!! bwhahaha

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Old 07-11-2001, 04:13 PM   #13
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agghh how dare u leave me hanging here!!! k heres more and everyone should read, "the day the world went weird"

Jinny pulled over to the side of the road not know where the heck she was. She was alone-there were no cars around and no house, no nothing. She was balling with tears and wondering at which point did here life come tumbling down...she just sat in her car and her cell started to ring but she just kept crying

(back at the division)

Magda: shes not answering her cell

Capt: should I send people out looking for her?

Magda: I know Jinny, just give her space and eventually she will come back..but capt. whats gonna happen to her?

Capt: she will mostly not get arrested but will be placed in a rehab center and go through counsling...

CD: capt. are you going to fire her?

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***
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Old 07-11-2001, 04:28 PM   #14
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Capt: No... I won't fire her.

Captain sighs and heads back to her office, closing the door after her. Magda looks at CD.

M: Are you happy now?!

CD: WAIT JUST A MINUTE!!! WHAT THE HELL DID I DO?!! It's JINNY who screwed up, not CD!

M: I'm sorry... it's just... I don't want anything to happen to her, is all.

A: So what exactly happened this morning anyway? (Angela wheeled her chair over towards Magda's desk)

Sighing, Magda began to relate the mornings events....

YOUR TURN! heehee
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Old 07-11-2001, 05:41 PM   #15
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okk thanks for leaving me there!

Magda: Well Jinny was suppose to come by and pick me up and drop ben off at school because my care was in the shop and when jinny was here on time i called Gaberial to take ben and me to Jinny cuz i still needed a ride so when we got to Jinny's her apartment was a mess and you could see the scattered bottles of beer and there jinny was lying on the couch asleep and looked like she drank a lot the night before...I had to lie to ben about what was wrong with Jinny and what was in the bottles...I mean we werent on the job and she was disappointing and if she can not even mantain our friendship i did not see how our partnership is gonna work out..

Angela: o my...

CD: that girl has serious problems..

*back to jinny*

she is still driving and has no idea where she is but she decides to call casey

Jinny: hey Casey I have a problem...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***
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