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Old 05-28-2001, 09:01 PM   #1
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Arrow Surprisingly Enough (Fan-Fiction)

Here is the Second Half of "Every Moment". Well actually it's just my Story that takes off from that Story. Call it whatever. lol

Every Moment~ Surprisingly Enough
Series 1,Story 5.

**Division**
Jinny walks back into the Division. "Thanks for covering for me,Mag." she smiles and walks to her desk. "No Prob,Jinny." Magda glances at Jinny then back at her paper. She thinks for a second and looks back at Jinny. Who is still beaming,but trying to consentrate. C.D. and Angela looks at Jinny aswell. Magda gets up and walks over to Jinny's desk, "My my. You're sure happy,and I know it's not because I covered for you for 5 minutes. Spill it,Jin." Magda says. C.D. and Angela turn around to listen aswell. Jinny looks at the three and grins. "Come on Jinny." Angela reply's. "Yeah,We're all friends here." C.D. says waiting. Jinny smiles, "Fine Guys." Jinny smirks, " I'm engaged." she grins and looks down at her ring. "I'm assuming it's Theodore." Angela says giving Jinny a look. "You know the guy who "Wasn't Happening"." C.D. adds with a smirk.. Jinny laughs, "Yeah,That'd be the one." she grins. "Congratulations,Jin. I'm happy for you." Magda says with a big smile. Jinny nods with a smile. "Yeah so am I." Angela says sitting back down at her desk. C.D. nods, "Uh-huh,Wasn't happening." C.D. says with a laugh. "I wish you luck." she adds. "Thanks Guys." Jinny says. "Why don't we all go to Anchorside tonight and Celebrate?" Magda asks. "Sounds Good." C.D. says. "Yeah, I have alittle news myself." Angela adds. Magda gives Angela a look. "You can't be getting married." she laughs. Angela laughs,"No not quite." Captain walks out of her office. "Can there be alittle more Gossip and more work?" She asks. "You're invited too." Angela says looking at Cap. "What?" Cap asks confused. "We're all going out to celebrate Jinny's engagement tonight,Cap." Magda says. "Oh Okay." Cap says with a nod. "So who are you marrying,Jinny?" Cap asks. "Teddy Blumethal you know the guy I've been going out with for awhile now." Jinny says giving Cap a look. "Oh well then Congratulations!" Captain says walking to the Coffee Pot. The four Inspectors give a look between them and then look toward Cap.
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Old 05-28-2001, 09:10 PM   #2
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GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-28-2001, 11:35 PM   #3
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Keep up the good work. Please post more soon.

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Old 05-29-2001, 06:07 PM   #4
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Did I spell more right? It doesn't look right. Really, just stare at it a while, and it looks weird! Someone tell me, cuz I feel awful, I made an 89 in spelling on the acheivement test... That's my best subject! Ok, that's enough from me now. BTW, MORE!

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Old 05-29-2001, 08:08 PM   #6
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Did I make myself clear? Thought so.

I couldn't have said it better myself!


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Old 05-31-2001, 05:49 PM   #8
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Here is some more. There are more interesting scenes coming up..lol

**Division Later**
Magda's phone rings, "Ramirez." she Answers. C.D. and Angela gets up from their desks, "Well,We better go let Mrs.Balbadero know we caught the guy who did this to her husband." C.D. says grabbing her coat from the hanger. "What time tonight,Jinny?" Angela asks while she puts on her coat. "After work." Jinny says. "Okay see you Later." Angela says walking out the door. "Bye Guys." C.D. says walking by Magda's desk. Magda waves, "Sure we'll be right down." Magda hangs up the phone. "What was that all about?" Jinny asks. "They found some evidence at the scene of the fire." Magda says getting up. "Great" Jinny says grabbing the case folder.

**Mrs. Balbadero's House**
Angela and C.D. walk down the hall lead by Mrs. Balbadero. "Please sit down." she says as they reach the Living Room. "Would you like anything to drink?" the woman asks. "No thanks." C.D. reply's in a low voice. "I'm okay." Angela adds as both Inspectors sit. The woman nods and sits aswell. "So um what did you find out about my Husband's murder?" she asks. "Mrs. Balbadero we caught your husbands murderer yesterday. He admitted killing your husband." C.D. says. The woman begins to cry, "Did he say why?" the Woman asks leaning over and grabbing a tissue from the box on her desk near the couch. "He didn't have a motive,Ma'am." Angela adds.
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Old 06-02-2001, 07:38 AM   #9
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Here is Some more. If anyone is still reading! haha

**Scene of the Fire**
The Two Inspectors walk over to the officers on the scene, "Whatcha got?" Jinny asks. "We found a gas can two buildings down in a alley way. Stranded." the officer fills her in. Magda asks, "Did it get taken in for finger prints?" "On it's way in now." he reply's. Jinny nods and walks off looking around at what used to be the Law Offices. She shakes her head, "Who would have done this?" Magda walks over, "Who and Why?" she asks in a low voice looking around.

**Back at the Station**
Jinny and Magda walk back into the Division. Captain walks out of her office ," Exstead Ramirez may I see you in my office?" Kate says walking back into her Office,Around her desk,and sits down. "May she?" Jinny asks sarcastically toward Magda. Magda smirks and walks to Captain's office with Jinny behind her. "Yes Captain?" Magda asks when she arrives in the office. Kate motions for Jinny to close the door. Jin turns around and closes it behind her and lean on the door frame still holding the Case Folder. Magda sits down. "I spoke to Allen O'Conner." Captain says. "Well?" Jinny asks. "Well it's definitely arson. We faxed the sketch over to him,and he said the man was in a few days ago. He rejected his case." Kate reply's. "Any particular Reason?" Magda asks sitting back in her chair. "It was a case that he felt he couldn't bring the proper defence to. So he turned it down." Kate reply's. "Which was the right thing to do. He have a name?" Jinny asks opening up the folder. Captain shakes her head, "Allen was going to check his files to see if he has the name anywhere. If not it was in the office." "Which is now nothing but ashes." Jinny says closing the folder and looking at Captain. "Maybe that was the point." Magda adds. "But why risk getting caught. When he could have just as easily stolen it?" Jinny reply's. "To get Even." Captain says taking off her glasses and looking at the two Woman. Jinny reaches up to her earring and turns it,thinking.

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Im still reading and i love it! Post more soon!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

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I'm still readin'! MORE!! Otherwise I'll get C.D. to tell me where ya live!! *evil laugh*
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Here is some more. I wouldn't want C.D. to give out valuable Information. lol

Jinny and Magda get back to their desks. "They going to call when the Warrants in?" Magda looks at Jinny and asks. "Yeah." Jinny nods. Jinny's phone begins to ring. "That's probably it now." She adds as she reaches toward the phone. "Exstead." Jinny answers. "Yeah, Sure! I'd love to,Teddy" she says with a smile. Just then Theodore walks in the door quietly.Magda looks over and Smiles at him. Jinny not knowing he was there. For she has her back turned toward him, "Anytime really." she reply's. Theodore walks over to her and puts his hand on her shoulder, "How about now?" he asks hanging up his phone. Jinny turns around with a grin on her face, "Yeah that could work." she says with a laugh looking at Theodore. C.D. looks over at Jinny and mouths,"Not Happening." then laughs quietly. Angela smirks. "Have fun you two." Magda says looking at them. "Thanks,Mag. I'll be back. Want me to pick you guys anything up?" Jinny asks. "Nah, Actually Angela is going to pick up Chinese." C.D. reply's looking at Angela who nods. "In a matter of Fact,I better get going." Angela reply's looking at her watch.

**Anchorside**
Theodore and Jinny are sitting across from eachother in a booth toward the back of the Bar & Grill. Jinny picks up the water in front of her and takes a sip. Theodore smiles and shakes his head. She looks at him,Squints her eyes and Smiles, "What?" she asks. "I uh just can't believe you said yes. " he says moving his glass in a circular motion. "Teddy, I said yes. It's done and over. I love you. We're going to have a great relationship,Together." She says with a laugh. Theodore smiles at her. The waitress walks over,"You ready to order?" she asks.
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Hpmh, I wanted that address...Oh well, I can still try to weasle it outta C.D...Nah, I wouldn't do that, would I? BTW, MORE!!
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Here's Some More. (Jo- You'll never get it out of C.D...lol)

**Station**
Angela walks back in with three white stirofoam food container. Puts one on Magda's desk, "Thanks Angela." Magda says looking up. "You're Welcome." Angela says walking to C.D.'s desk and putting one down on hers. "Thanks." C.D. says without looking up from what she is writing. Angela puts her food down on her desk and sits. She opens the container and begins to eat. C.D. looks up, "So uh what's your news you have to tell us?" she asks as she opens the contrainer and looks at her food. Magda picks up a peice of her food with her fingers,puts it in her mouth,"Yeah good Question,C.D." she reply's turning her chair around. Angela takes a bite of her food, "That's for me to know and you to find out, tonight." Angela says with a smirk.

The Elevator opens and Theodore and Jinny walks out into the hallway. "I'll see you later tonight?" Theodore asks. "I'm going to Anchorside tonight, You know with the girls." Jinny reply's. "Oh okay. You don't have to explain." Theodore smiles. "Okay, Well I uh better be going." Jinny says pointing behind her down the hall. "Yeah, Of Course. So should I." he reply's looking down at his watch. "Okay Bye Teddy." she says giving him a last hug. "Bye" he says letting go of her. He turns around and pushes the button on the elevator.
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(Oh, c'mon! I can at least try.. ) MORE! (No, Jinny I'm not asking for more from you. I'm asking for more of the fanfic. There's a biiig difference!)
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