Unexpected-new fanfic

[Jinnyis#1]

NOTE: This is a post-Teddy fanfic. Please read my "fanfic preview PLEASE READ" before this because then you'll understand this more and won't start flaming me right away. <g> okay.. enjoy!

**Interior of Captain Kate McCafferty's Office**

K: Well, Rachel, it looks like you would be a great help with the clerical stuff around here.

KAte McCafferty took off her glasses and leaned across the desk, smiling at the girl sitting across from her. Rachel was 21, about 5'3", with shoulder-length auburn hair. She was nicely dressed and only had a subtle hint of makeup on. She didn't really need it, though, because Rachel was quite attractive, and her smile was her best asset.

K: So, Rachel, you're hired. When can you start?

R: Right away. (Rachel smiled) Actually, that's preferred.

K: Well then, why don't I introduce you to some of my inspectors.

Kate got up from her desk and crossed over to her door, opening it. Rachel followed, taking everything in. Kate first walked over to CD and Angela.

K: Rachel, this are inspectors CD Delorenzo and Angela Reide.

Rachel extended her hand to both of the inspectors, taking each of them in. 'CD's tough" she thought, 'And Angela... hmm.. I have no clue.'

R: Nice to meet you.

K: Rachel is going to be doing some clerical work for us.

CD: Thank god. I was getting a little tired of the mess. (CD cracked a smile.)

A: Nice to meet you too, Rachel. Welcome aboard. (Angela smiled warmly then looked back to what she was doing.)

Kate walked over towards Magda's desk and tapped Magda on the shoulder.

M: Hey cap. What's up?

K: Magda, I'd like you to meet our new clerical support, Rachel.

M: Hey Rachel. (Magda smiled) Having fun yet?

Rachel looked at Magda and knew she would enjoy working with her. She was very sensible and much more relaxed than the other two inspectors.

R: Of course. (Rachel beamed)

Magda laughed and smiled back.

M: Good choice cap. She's got spunk.

K: Oh yeah. (Kate smiled, then realizing someone was missing, frowned a little.) Where's Jinny?

M: Bathroom.

Jinny walked in.

J: Nope, here.

Jinny sat down at her desk and looked through the paper work piled on her desk.

K: Uh.. Jinny, I'd like you to meet Rachel. She's going to be doing some clerical work.

J: Hey Rach. Mind if I call you Rach? Anyways, welcome. (Jinny smiled and added with sarcasm) You'll LOVE it here.

Rachel laughed as the Captain gave Jinny a glare.

R: I already do.

M: See, cap, I told ya... spunk.

Captain rolled her eyes and pointed to Jinny and Magda.

K: You're working with them today. They have a whole lot of things for you to do. Come see me if you have any questions.

With that, Captain Kate McCafferty walked back to her office and shut the door behind her. Jinny looked over at the closed door and made a face.

J: I can't say anything without her getting on my case.

M: Yeah, well, that's the cap for you. Hey.. I'll be right back. (Magda gets up and leaves through the division doors.)

J: So Rach, how old are you?

R: 21. Thank god. (Rachel smiled and sat down in an empty chair next to Jinny.)

J: Yes... the wonderful age we all aspire to get to... and stay at.

R: Yeah. So... how long have you been a cop?

J: 7 years... and counting, if she (pointing to captian's office) doesn't do anything about that.

R: Why would she?

J: She doesn't like me, honestly. I mean, I joke, but she really doesn't.

R: Well, I don't see why anyone wouldn't like you. (Rachel blushed and figeted in her seat.)

J: Thanks.

Jinny looked up and noticed Rachel acting a little weird.

J: You okay?

R: Yeah, I'm fine. Just... nevermind.

J: Okaay..

Magda walked back in and sat at her desk, sighing.

M: You ladies ready for some exicting paper-work? (Magda smiled and handed Jinny a stack of papers.)

J: (groaning) I really HATE this. (She turned to Rachel) See, the cap DOES hate me. (Jinny walked away towards the coffee machine.) Be back.

Rachel studied Jinny as she walked way and then turned to Magda, who was carefully studying the papers on her desk.

R: Magda, um... can I ask you a question?

M: Sure. (Magda looked up from her desk and right at Rachel).

R: Jinny. Is she.. well... I mean... is Jinny.... does she... well...

Magda looked at Rachel quizzically, wondering what the girl was trying to ask her, and then she got her answer.

R: ...like girls?

Magda just stared in shock at Rachel and didn't answer her. She couldn't. She was almost frozen to the spot. Jinny walked back over before Magda could even start to regain her composure.

J: Ok... what did I miss? (Jinny slid back down in her chair and looked from Magda to Rachel expecting and answer.

M: (quickly) Nothing.

J: Uh huh.. right. (Jinny fished through her papers and came out with a stack marked "completed.") Here ya go, Rach, you know how to file?

Rachel sat there looking like a deer in headlights, when Jinny's voice snapped her back to reality. Blushing, she took the papers from Jinny, and ran off to the filing room without saying a word.


TO BE CONTINUED.

[sue z q]

Ooooooooooooo! I'm liking it! You're a good writer! Post more soon!

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

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[JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo]

this is pretty good, i can't wait to see how it develops! Keep it up!

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[JoExstead]

Keep going! This is really interesting!

[NewsiesGurl229]

Originally posted by JoExstead:
Keep going! This is really interesting!

I agree I agree!

[Jinnyis#1]

**about 3 hours later**

Jinny stared at Magda waiting for a response. All morning Magda had been acting strange, and Rachel had been acting stranger. Now Magda refused to tell Jinny what was wrong, no matter how much she insisted.

J: Magda... what is WRONG?! I've asked you about a dozen times this morning and you always say nothing, but then you act even stranger! (Jinny pauses, getting mad) What did I do?!

It was really hard for her to think, but Magda needed to. What Rachel had asked her about Jinny this morning was still bothering her, and she didn't want to upset Jin with anything.

M: Jin, I'll... I'll tell you later. Promise, okay?

'At least that's a start' Jinny thought, as Rachel walked back to her desk, ready for some more papers.

J: (sighing) Ok, Mag. (Jinny looked at Rachel.) Rach, I don't have anything else done. You're too fast. (Jinny cracked a smile and raised her eyebrows, motioning for Rachel to sit down.) Take a break... none of us work this hard.

M: Speak for yourself. (Magda smiled) Okay guys, I'm off to meet Gabriel for lunch. (pause) This should be interesting.

J: Mag, relax. It's cute.

M: Cute?! He left me when I was pregnant, remember?

J: I was just saying that it was cute that he wanted to see you, geez! Don't have a heart attack!

M: Don't worry Jin, I already had one this morning (glances at Rachel) I don't need another one.

Magda walked out the door to the division as Jinny stared after her wondering what she meant by that last comment when she remembered that Rachel was still sitting there waiting for work.

J: (to herself) Work... work. No, screw work. (to Rachel) Hey.. wanna grab a bite to eat? I'm starving!

Rachel looked at Jinny and her heart skipped a little. Had Jinny just asked her out to lunch? 'Wait girl,' she thought 'People go out to lunch at work all the time.' Rachel sighed and shrugged her shoulders.

R: Sure. Where to?

J: There's this great deli right down the street. We can walk there.

Grabbing her coat, Jinny started for the door to the division, while Rachel followed her. 'I'm gonna find out what's going on... even before Mag tells me' she thought as they exited the building.

***At the Deli***

Rachel and Jinny sat across from one another at the outside deli waiting for their food to arrive.

R: So, Jinny, tell me about... um.. yourself.

J: Not much to tell. I'm a cop, but you know that. I have two brothers and a dad who are also cops. Mag is my best friend. That's.. about it.

R: No boyfriend? Husband?

Jinny laughed and shook her head.

J: Nope. Neither.

R: So, you're single, then?

Jinny gave Rachel a quizzical look.

J: That's what I just said.

R: Right. (Rachel fiddled with her hands.) WERE you in a relationship.

Jinny felt uncomfortable. She had just broken up with Teddy, and she didn't want to get into the details of it with this girl she hardly even knew.

J: Yeah.. I just broke up with someone. (Jinny looked down and avoided Rachel's eyes, hoping that would deter her from asking any more questions.)

R: Oh, so, what happened?

J: We just... broke up... end of story.

R: I'm sorry.

J: Don't be. These things happen.

Rachel didn't know what to do. She folded and unfolded her hands. She wished that Magda had answered her question earlier, and she also wished she knew why she was so attracted to Jinny almost instantly. Usually it took weeks to get this far.

R: Well, whoever they were... they were stupid for breaking up with you. You're great really.

Jinny looked at Rachel and something suddenly seemed strange. She didn't know what it was yet, but she definitely felt awkward around this girl.

J: Uh... thanks.

R: Don't thank me, I'm serious. I think anyone would be crazy not to go out with you. I mean... I would, geez.

'Oh my god' Jinny thought as it finally hit her. This was what seemed off-kilter. Rachel liked her? Jinny looked down at the table and then back up at Rachel who seemed to be regretting what she had just said.

J: Rachel?

R: Yeah?

J: I.. um... well, I don't know if this is what you were saying but... (pause) I don't like girls.

Rachel felt as if she'd been slapped in the face. 'I can't believe it. I can't believe I even said something.' she thought as tears started to well up in her eyes.

R: No, I wasn't... no... (Rachel put her hand up to her eyes hoping that Jinny wouldn't see the tears.)

Not prepared for Rachel to start to cry, Jinny was in a panic. She didn't know what to do, and therefore stayed silent, staring at somewhere just past Rachel.

Waitress: Food's here, ladies!!

J: Uh.. thanks... (Jinny glanced at her sandwich as it was lowered in front of her.)

R: Jinny?

J: (mouth full) Yeah?

R: Forget I said anything, ok? (Rachel tried to smile.)

J: Sure. (Jinny's thoughts raced as she methodically ate her food.)

TO BE CONTINUED

sorry it sucked so much, guys, but i was having mental block. lol.

[sue z q]

Sucked?! How can you say that sucked?! That was good! I liked the heart attack line. Post more soon!

[Jinnyis#1]

thanks sue z q! anyways, i'm on a writing binge, so here's more:

**At the divison, after lunch**

When Magda walked in, she could already sense that something was wrong. Jinny didn't look up when she walked in and was completely silent until Magda said hi to her. Rachel, on the other hand, looked like a zombie if she ever saw one.

M: Hey Jin.

J: Hey.

M: So... what's up?

Jinny didn't want to talk to Magda. She didn't want to talk to anybody. All she wanted to do was hear back from Casey... because HE was one person she WOULD talk to.

J: Nothin.

The phone rang and Jinny picked it up. Rachel walked over to Magda and handed her some more papers. Magda groaned and looked at Jinny.

J: Exstead. (pause) Casey.. yeah... I wanted to talk to you. (pause) Yes. (pause) 5? Hold on. (Jinny covers the mouthpiece) Hey Mag, mind if I get out of here a little early? I gotta go talk to Casey.

M: Sure Jin, we're not on a case, it's cool.

J: Thanks. (Jinny uncovers the mouthpiece.) Casey? Five is good. (pause) Alright.. see ya then. (Jinny hangs up the phone and turns her attention back to the file she was workign on.)

M: Problems with Casey?

J: (Angrily) No.

Magda, taken aback, sat silently. She sighed to herself and wondered what was going on. Then she remembered what Rachel had asked her this morning and wondered if that had anything to do with it.

**Divison 4:50pm**

The day had been the same since after lunch, with Jinny snapping at people, and Rachel walking around in a daze. Magda looked at her watch for the fifth time in five minutes. The day was certainly dragging.

J: Ok Mag, I'm outta here. Gotta go meet Casey.

M: Ok... have fun!

J:...Yeah....

Jinny grabbed her coat and walked towards the door.

CD: Hey Jinny! Don't forget... we're all meeting at Anchorside at 10 tonight!

J: Do I ever forget? (Jinny walked out the door absentmindedly)

Rachel came over to Magda's desk and stood there, waiting for more papers to file. She looked around the Division. Everything was such a mess. She couldn't believe that she had said anything to Jinny at all.

R: Hey Mag... who's Casey?

M: Jinny's brother.

R: Oh.

Magda could sense that whatever was going on was really bothering Rachel now, so she decided to broach the subject from this morning.

M: Rachel... we need to talk.

R: There's no need... I already know the answer to the question I asked you this morning.

M: (shocked) You just went and asked her?

R: (angrily) NO! (more calm now) I mean... sorta. It's just. (Rachel starts to cry and puts her hands up to wipe away the tears.) Don't worry about me. (She grins a little.) I cry about everything.

M: Okay... hey, it's 5, you're done for the day, aren't you?

R: Yeah... I'll see you tomorrow I guess. Bye everyone! See you tomorrow!

CD was over by the coffee machine when she heard the new girl, Rachel, she thought her name was, say goodbye.

CD: Hey... why don't you join us at anchorside tonight? You're over 21, aren't you?

R: I am 21. But... I don't think...

A: (interupting) Oh, come on, it's always fun! Besides, me and CD didn't get to hardly talk to you today.

Rachel looked at Magda who smiled back at her, encouragingly.

R: Ok. At 10, right?

CD: Yeah

Magda got up and stood next to Rachel.

M: Here, I'll walk you to your car.

When they were outside Magda turned to Rachel with sympathy in her eyes. She couldn't even imagine what the girl was going through. It was tough enough when you were 21 to find a decent man.

M: Rachel, it'll be ok. Jinny will be fine with it, ok?

R: She didn't seem that way today. (pause) I'm SO stupid... I shouldn't have said anything. I'm just too... impulsive.

M: (laughing) Hmmm... sounds familar.

R: What's that supposed to mean?

M: Jinny is too. Hey.. come to Anchorside tonight. By then Jinny will be ok with it... I'm sure.

R: Ok Magda. See you then.

Rachel got into her car and drove away, leaving Magda standing in the parking lot. 'I hope I'm right about Jinny' Magda thought as she made her way back to the building.

**Park Bench**

Casey sat on a bench waiting for his sister. It was rare that Jinny would want to talk to him. It was usually the other way around. Looking up, he saw her dark hair coming towards him and he stood up to greet her.

C: Hey stranger.

Jinny smiled. Casey always made her feel loved. After hugging him, she sat down on the bench and ran her fingers through her hair.

C: So what's up? (sits)

J: Well... I... have a problem.

Casey got a concerned look in his eyes and scooted closer to Jinny.

J: Her name is Rachel. (pause) And before I tell you this, remember that I really do feel like a creep right now, but... well... here goes.... This morning this clerical girl, Rachel, came to work for us and since me and Mag were on desk detail, she got to work with us. (pause) Anyway, when Mag went out to lunch me and Rachel went out to lunch. It was at this point when I found out Rachel likes me. Get what I mean?

Jinny finally looked up into her brother's eyes. She felt awful for letting this get to her. Being open-minded all her life, she didn't even understand why it would matter this time.

C: So... she likes you? And?? (Realization hit Casey and he frowned) You're having a problem with it?

Jinny saw the look of hurt in her brother's eyes. This had nothing to do with him, but in essence she supposed it did.

J: Yeah. I mean... I don't understand why I am, though.

Casey struggled with his inner feelings and his sense of reason. Most likely, Jinny had never encountered someone of the same sex liking her before and so it was completely new territory. But Jinny was always so open-minded about this sort of thing.

C: Well... I... don't know what to tell you, Jin, except don't stop talking to her and well... you're comfortable with your sexuality enough to know where you stand, so... it'll be ok.

Jinny listened to her brother and her head was swimming. She didn't know where she stood, that was the whole problem.

TO BE CONTINUED.

PLEASE tell me what you think and let me know if ur reading.. thx

~*~jenn~*~

[NewsiesGurl229]

I love it...I just haven't been home much today...

But I think it's gr8 can't wait for more!

[Jinnyis#1]

okie... i'm obviously having brainstorms cause i never write this fast... here's more:

**Anchorside 10:06pm**

Rachel walked into the Anchorside bar and glanced around, looking for the inspectors. She spotted three of them sitting at a table across the restaurant. Wondering where Jinny was, she made her way to Magda and the others. Then she saw Jinny. Or rather... bumped into Jinny.

J: Watch it!

Jinny looked up, annoyed that someone had bumped her with a drink. When she saw who it was, she froze.

J: Oh, Rachel, I'm sorry.. didn't mean to yell...

R: That's ok, I should've watched where I was going.

Quickly, looking away from Jinny, Rachel made her way to the table with everyone else, and smiled in greeting. Jinny followed right behind her, wondering what Rachel was doing there.

M: Hey Rach! Welcome!

R: Hey. Thanks.

CD: Whatcha drinking?

R: Oh.. Parrot Bay and Coke.

J: Coming right up...

Jinny walked back over to the bar as Rachel sat down in an empty chair.

A: I wonder why Jinny has this need to get everyone's drinks for them?

CD: (laughing) You know her true calling was to be a bartender.

Everyone at the table laughed except for Rachel, who just cracked a little smile.

CD: Rachel, what's wrong? No humor tonight?

R: Oh.. um... no. I'm a funny person, really.

M: THAT was an interesting statement. Let's hear some funny.

Rachel smiled big and shook her head. These girls were amazingly accepting, and that's what she needed right now. Regardless of Jinny, she was going to have fun tonight.

R: Funniness has to come from the soul, people, one just can't make it happen.

Jinny returned with Rachel's drink, catching the last part of Rachel's statement. Setting the drink down in front of Rachel, Jinny sat down.

J: What did I miss?

M: Rachel failing at being funny. (Magda smiled and mouthed "just kidding" in Rachel's direction.)

Jinny picked up her drink and starting thinking about today. Drowning out the conversation around her, she didn't realize she had already drank the three shots she had sat in front of her at the beginning of the evening.

R: ... so we were sitting in the Diner and my friend Darla kept putting those little jelly packets into John's coke. And John, see, he's SO well... let's say flamboyant... and would FREAK out like this...

Rachel grabs the edge of the table and gets this horribly exaggerated expression on her face.

Magda couldn't hold it in anymore. She burst out laughing, which in turn let CD and Angela know they could too. The laughter woke Jinny up from her thinking and she looked around and her coworkers cracking up.

TO BE CONTINUED.

sorry guys... i was gonna write more, but i have to go sing for company... gee, my dad is so proud of me. lol

~*~jenn~*~

[Bang A Gong]

Hey Jenn! I FINALLY got to read it. This is gr8! It kicks ass. I'm so freaking glad you decided to write it and post it. Can't wait for more!!

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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[XoVanillaRain90oX]

Ohhhhh post more!!!!!!

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[sue z q]

Originally posted by Division_Fan_Lisa:
Ohhhhh post more!!!!!!

Ditto! And sing well for company!

[Jinnyis#1]

thankie thankie. and yeah, sourbabie, i'm glad i did too. <g> oh... and this section kinda is well, there's something mentioned about jinny that i didn't think i would incorporate, but i decided to anyway. i really don't care, either... it's how i see jinny, so.... here's more:

M: Hey Jin, you with us?

Jinny looked over at Magda and smiled a little. No, she wasn't with them. She was already losing a bit of control.

J: Suure...

CD: Oh boy, here we go.

J: What's that supposed to mean?!

Rachel noticed the change in the atmosphere almost immediately. No longer were Magda, CD, and Angela laughing, and she could tell that Jinny was starting to get drunk. 'I hope I'm not driving her to drink' she thought as she sat there not saying a word.

M: Oh Jin, you know CD's just kidding. Lighten up!

J: Yeah yeah.. okay.

Jinny smiled and raised her beer into the air ready to say something, but then brought it back down as if she was rethinking what she was going to say.

J: You know... I was thinking... and I think that you guys are the best people...

A: Thanks Jinny.

CD: Uh... yeah.

M: Yup. Thanks.

Rachel just sat there not knowing what, if anything she should say, when Jinny turned to her.

J: What? No compliments from the Rach-ster? No "I love you Jinny"s?!

Horrified, Rachel could feel tears stinging her eyes even though she tried to hold them back. Realizing everyone's eyes were on her, she finally burst into tears.

R: Excuse me.

Getting up from the table, Rachel felt nausous. All she wanted to do was leave and never see any of them again. Embarrassment wasn't one of her favorite things.

**back at the table**

M: What the HELL was that, Jinny?!?!

Magda stared at Jinny, not believing what had come out of her friends mouth. CD and Angela looked thoroughly confused, and Magda couldn't blame them.

J: What do you mean, Mag? I was just tryin to get her to talk...

M: No, you just practically shoved it back in her face that she's attracted to you and made her feel horrible!

J: Yeah... well YOU aren't the one she likes!

M: So what?! Does it matter?! She understands that you AREN'T interested... at least treat her like a human being!

Jinny got up from the table and walked to the bar. Tears were starting to form in her eyes now. Magda just didn't understand. There was more to it than that. She just.... doesn't understand. Jinny asked the bartender for another beer and was headed back to the table, when she changed her mind and went to the bathroom to look for Rachel.

**bathroom**

Rachel stood looking at herself in the mirror. Her eyes were red and puffy from crying and the little mascara that she had on was running down her cheeks. Sighing, she picked up a paper towel and started to wipe up the makeup. Hearing a noise, she turned around and saw Jinny walking into the bathroom.

When Jinny saw Rachel she knew she had made a mistake out at the table. Walking slowly over to the girl with auburn hair, she thought about what she was going to say.

J: Rachel...

R: No, Jinny, that's ok. So you hate me now, big deal, right? (Rachel managed a choked laugh and looked back at the mirror.)

J: I don't hate you. (she paused, thinking of what to say next.) My brother's gay. You know... Casey. (Rachel turned to look at her.) And when I was younger I thought I was too. Well... no, that's not totally true... let's say I was... exploring the possibility.

Rachel didn't know what to say. Jinny was sitting here telling her all these things, yet she had just insulted her in front of everyone. Rachel just stared back at Jinny, waiting for her to continue.

J: SO... I found that I wasn't. I don't like girls. Trust me. But the thing is, when you brought that up I just got SO scared. I didn't... I didn't know what to do.

By this point in time Jinny was slurring her words a little more, and Rachel was concerned.

R: Jinny... ok. It's cool. But... you didn't have to insult me out there.

J: I know... I feel... bad....

Jinny slumped down onto the floor of the bathroom and knocked her head on the tiles. She lay there motionless.

R: JINNY?!?! (walks over to Jinny and shakes her, getting no response) JINNY!!!!!!!!!! Oh my god... HELP!!!!! HELP!!!!!

Rachel ran out of the restroom and into the bar area.

R: Somebody HELP! There's a woman in the restroom! She passed out and hit her head on the floor!!!

The bartender immediately sprung into action, picking up the phone and dialing 911. The three inspectors that were sitting at the table rushed over to Rachel to find out what was going on.

R: Jinny! (she pointed into the bathroom just before she fainted.)

TO BE CONTINUED.

what do you think? honest opinions

~*~jenn~*~

[Bang A Gong]

OMG!!! You better write more. This rox!!!!