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Old 06-18-2001, 05:40 PM   #1
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Backround Info:
Jinny abd Teddy are still together, and living with each other and also engaged
Magda got married to gabriel and Ben's also doing really well
CD and her husband Bailey are doing really well
Angela and her fiance Peter are also doing well Kate is still dating her boyfriend Tom
-I haven't watched the show for a long time so I just made up a lot of characters-

M: Hey everyone are you all ready for Christmas....I'm so excited
J:yeah yeah, alright shut up Mrs. Cheerful!
M:You're in a good mood....what's wrong with you
CD:Yeah what's wrong with you?
J:I don't know what to get Teddy, I'm not good with these gift giving stuff, and being nice.....uhhhh
A:don't worry as long at it comes from the heart and you put thought into it he'll love it!
J: Alright thanks
(Kate walks in)
K:Are you all ready for the Christmas party, have you all done what I've told you to do?
J,M,CD,A: yeah!!!
K: Alright just checking! You all can go home now, you're shifts are over
j: Thank god! Bye everyone
M:Yeah byebye (They leave together)
M: Are you ready for party at Teddy's house?
J: Yeah I guess, but considering I'd rather die than go there!
M Laughs) I'm sure it can't be that bad, what did you get him, to give to him tonight
J:I got him a colateral (SP) ring, I don't know if he's going to like it, but I still have to get him stuff for Christmas day......I hate shopping, you just wanna buy him something?
M:no Way but I'll go out with you tomorrow, and we can look for something
J:Alright thanks Mag (They both go to their cars)
(Back in office)
CD:Jinny semms really uptight
A;Yeah I don't think she likes all these family events cause she never really had a family
CD: Yeah I do feel bad for her, she's so nice, she just doesn't want to let it out
A:Yeah oh well
(Jinny arrives home, and is opening the door)
J:Teddy......Teddy are you home
T:Yeah Hun....I'm in the bed room
(Jinny walks towards the bedroom, and sees Teddy watching TV, and he's already dressed and ready to go)
J:Hey Sweetie (They share a qucik kiss)
T:Hey, hun, how waas your day??
J:It was good.......not bad
T:Well hurry up and get dressed so we can go hun
J:Alright (Jinny leave to go in the shower) (You hear the shower going, and Teddy is still watching Tv laying down on the bed)
(Go to Magda, walks in her house)
M:Hey Gab
G;hey how was you day hun
M: Good Good
B:Hey Mommy
M;hey Sweetie how was school today
B:It was good Mom......I got an A on my math test!
M:Oh good job.....also remember we're going to the Christmas party at the station tomorrow
G;How could i forgot you tell me everyday!
M:Sorry I'm excited
(Back at Jinny's, she walks out of the bathroom, with a kahki skirt, and a black sweater, and a towel wrapped around her head)
J:Teddy Hun, Im almost done (Then she sees him sleeping)(So she lightly kisses him)
T:I'm awake, I sware!
J:haha, I'm just gonna dry my hair, and then we can leave (Jinny comes out 5 minutes later) K, I'm done!
T:Wow that was quick, but we still have about 1/2 hour before we have to go, you wanna watch some Tv with me??
J: sure....she lies down with him on the bed, and they watch friends.


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Old 06-18-2001, 06:00 PM   #2
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This is good! KEEP GOIN'!

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Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

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Old 06-18-2001, 08:21 PM   #3
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Write more, girl, this thing gotta get done! Aah, the power of fanfics...

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Old 06-18-2001, 08:46 PM   #4
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This is really good!!! Keep goin'!

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JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha!

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Old 06-18-2001, 09:20 PM   #5
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MUST write more...and soon! I can't take the suspense!!!

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Old 06-18-2001, 11:37 PM   #6
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alrighty here's a little more!
(At Magda's house, it's dinner time)
M:So Ben you excited about christmas?
B: Yep I sure am, and since I was really good this year do you think I could get a lot of present
G: Why are you asking us, you should be asking Santa
B:How old do you think I am, of course you guys get me the present and write from santa, duuuhhhhh!
M:hahah yeah I keep on forgeting you're growing up, I remember holding you in my arms right after you were born, it was the best day
B:Oh Mom!
M:Well it was
G: Hun this chicken is really good!
M: Thanks, and I rented a movie for after dinner if you wanna watch it?
B:Which one?
M:Miss Congeniality
G: Oh that looks really good
B: It's a girly movie, isn't it
G: Not really it's suppose to be really funny
(They finish and go to the couch after they clean the dishes, and start watching the movie)
(Back at Jinny and Teddy's)
J:haha that was really funny, I love that Chandler Bing he's so funny!
T:yeah he is, alrighty, hun we have to leave now
J:Why don't we watch some more TV
T:Jin, no we have to leave in order not to get there to late
J:Fine, but I'm bringing my bullet proof vest cause your whole family will be there!
T:You'll be fine
J:well remember what happened last time I met your parents, it wasn't very pretty
T: yeah I know, lol, but it'll be better cause I'll stay right with you the whole time,and I won't let you go, k sweetie
(They leave and get in the car, and Jinny turns on the radio)(Hanging by a moment by life House comes on)
(Jinny looks over at Teddy and Teddy looks at Jinny, you can tell they're in love)
(Lyrics)
*There's been for a changin Starving for the truth I'm closer then where I started I'm chasing after you I'm falling even more in love with you letting go of all I've held onto I'm standing here until you make me move I'm hanging by a moment here with you for getting all I'm lacking completley and complete, I'll take your invitaion, you take all of me, I'm fallin even more in love with you letting go of all I've held onto I'm standing here until you make me move I'm hanging by a moment here with you, there's nothing else to loose there's nothing else to find, there's nothing in ,the world that can change my mind, there is nothing else, there is nothing else, there is nothing else, I'm fallin even more in love with you holding onto all I've held onto I'm standing here until you make me move hanging by a moment here with you*
T:Jinny hunny, I'm here for you
J:Thanks Teddy, I'm here for you too
(They finally pull up to Teddy's parents house)(They both get out of the car)
J o I look alright
T: No you don't look alright.... you look amazing!
J Blushs) thanks sweetie (gives him a quick kiss) as ready as I'll ever be
T: Alright lets go in
J:K,(They hold hands as they knock on the door)
TeddysMom:Why Hello, Teddy (gives him a kiss)
and Hello Jinny (give her a hug, and you can tell Jinny feels out of place when so goes in)
(Teddy and Jinny are still holding hands, and he introduces Jinny to everyone)

-How is it.....be honest.......also sorry fans of CD and Angela, and kate, they're really not going to be in this that much
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Old 06-19-2001, 10:51 AM   #8
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(Jinny and Teddy are sitting on the couch talking to one another)
T:So far so good
j:yeah
T:I told you it wasn't going to be that bad
J:Yeah it actually hasn't been that bad
T:I'm really thristy, do you want a drink
J:Sure
T:What do you want
J:Um I don't know suprise me
T:alright, I'll be back in just a minute
(Teddy hasn't left Jinny's side the whole night, so Jinny gets a little nervous)
(Teddy's sister Nikki sits down next to Jinny)
N:Hey you must be Jinny
J a little nervou) Yeah that's me
N:I'm Nicole Teddy's sister, but everyone calls me Nikki
J:Nice to meet you (gets a little more at ease)
N: So you're the cop....what's it like being a cop....is it like always suspenseful, and stuff
J laughs a little) yeah it is, I really love my job, and I work with a lot a great people, and my best friend
N h that must be fun......so are you and Teddy going to be visiting your family as well?
J Gets a sad look) umm....no we're not
(Nikki sees this and quickly changes the subject)(Teddy comes back)
T:Hey Nikki, get lost
N:Bite Me (Nikki leaving) Nice meeting you byebye Jinny, Bye jerkface (waves good bye)
T: don't mind my annoying sister
J:No she's nice
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(Jinny and Teddy are sitting on the couch talking to one another)
T:So far so good
j:yeah
T:I told you it wasn't going to be that bad
J:Yeah it actually hasn't been that bad
T:I'm really thristy, do you want a drink
J:Sure
T:What do you want
J:Um I don't know suprise me
T:alright, I'll be back in just a minute
(Teddy hasn't left Jinny's side the whole night, so Jinny gets a little nervous)
(Teddy's sister Nikki sits down next to Jinny)
N:Hey you must be Jinny
J a little nervou) Yeah that's me
N:I'm Nicole Teddy's sister, but everyone calls me Nikki
J:Nice to meet you (gets a little more at ease)
N: So you're the cop....what's it like being a cop....is it like always suspenseful, and stuff
J laughs a little) yeah it is, I really love my job, and I work with a lot a great people, and my best friend
N h that must be fun......so are you and Teddy going to be visiting your family as well?
J Gets a sad look) umm....no we're not
(Nikki sees this and quickly changes the subject)(Teddy comes back)
T:Hey Nikki, get lost
N:Bite Me (Nikki leaving) Nice meeting you byebye Jinny, Bye jerkface (waves good bye)
T: don't mind my annoying sister
J:No she's nice
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Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

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JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha!

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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(Teddy's mom comes over to the two)
TM: Hey you two, are you doing??
J:very good
T: yes, very well mom
TM: so Jinny are you going to your parents house for a party or something of that nature
J:Umm...no actually we're not
TM h why, doesn't your mom cook home made Christmas Dinners
J jinny getting a little teary eyed) umm.... no she doesn't
TM h that's a shame
T: Ummm..... mom can we drop this
TM: I'm sure if you would like too
T: Sweetie you wanna put on the radio, lets listen to some christmas music to get you in a better mood (They walk to the radio and Teddy turns the sation-The Christmas Shoes Song comes on)
(Lyrics)
*It was almost Christmas time, there I stood in another line tryin to buy that last gift or two not really in a christmas mood, Standing right in front of me was a little boy waiting anxiously pacing around like little boys do, and in his hands he held a pair of shoes, and his cloths were worn and old, and he was dirty from head to toe, and when it came his time to pay, I couldn't believe what i heard him say sir I wanna buy these shoes for my momma please it's christmas eve and these shoes are just her size, can you hurry sir daddy says there's not much time you see she's been sick for quit a while and I know these shoes will make her smile and I wanna to look beautiful when momma meets jesus tonight,he counted pennies for what seemed like years, and the cashier said son there's not a enough here, he searched his pockets frantically then he turned and he looked at me he said momma meant christmas good in our house most years she just did without tell me sir what am i gonna do somehow I've gotta guy her these christmas shoes so I layed the money down I just ahd to help him out, and I'll never forgot the look on his face when he said momma's gonna look sooo great, sir I wanna buy these shoes for my momma please, it's christmas eve and these shoes are just her size, could you hurry sir daddy says these not much time you see she's been sick for quit a while and I know these shoes will make her smile and I want her to look beautiful if momma meets jesus tonight, I knew I caught a glimps of heavens love as he thanked me and ran out I know that god had sent that little boy to remind me what christmas was all about*
(Jinny couldn't listen it it any longer and ran out of the house crying)(A few people saw but not a lot, and Teddy chased after her)
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(jinny couldn't listen to it any longer and ran out of the house crying, a few people but now a lot saw,and teddy chased after her)
T:jin hun
J cyrying)what.....
T:jin come here (hugs jin, and she holds on not wanthing to let go of his confort) it's ok sweetie I'm her for you, you can talk to me I love you
J:I love you too, I can't lsiten to that song ever again, i just can't it reminds me of my mom way to much, and how she wasn't there for christmas that year, and never was after that and never will be anymore, and when youy mom asked about the home cooked dinner, christmas used to be my favorite time of year, because that's exactly what my family would do, we would get together and actually be civil, and loving, but after mom died it all fell apart. I've never had a real christmas ever . Since the day after she killed herself was the day I kissed my childhood goodybye, and became a serious adult
T h jin i don't know what to say
J:don't say anyting just hold me (teddy sat ther with his arms around jinny for a few minutes not even realizing how cold it was outside until about 10 minutes jinny snaps out of her tance) alright I'm better you wanna go back inside now
T:sure but only if you think you're ready
J:I am sweetie
T:alrighty (kisses the top of her head-) let's go
(they sit down at the table)
T:you want something to eat
J:yeah but I'll go up with you (afraid of someone asking her question about why she ran out, so she stayed close to teddy)
-at mag's-
the movie is over mag and g abare laying on the couch cuddled together, and ben is on the floor in front of them sleeping as well
-back at party-
(they're in a love seat(lol)talking with teddy's cuz's matt, and julia
ju jin do you like being a cop
J:I love my job I don't know what I would do if I didn't have it
M h that's cool......so how long have you 2 been together
T:a year and a week
M h really taht's a long time
T:yeah the best year and a week of my life
(looks at in with a loving smile)
TD: alright everyone gather around the tree it's time to open up the presents
T:alrighty jin let's go
J:alrighty i jsut wana let you know I don't know if you're going to like what i got you because I'm not good at these gift things
T:Jin you don't have to worry, you didn't even have to get me somthing just being with you and having you in my life is the best present you could ever give me
aww thanks(quick kiss-go into den where's teddy's huge family is)
(teddy motions jin to sit down on his lap)
(kids open presents and thanks teddy)
J h they love you so much that's so cute
T:yeah they're my little buddies, they're awesome
J:well here's what I got you(hands him box)
T:thanks jin(opens it, and finds a colateral (SP) ring,w/hands)omg I love it thanks so much(puts it on)
T:here's what I got you
J open box to find a silver braclet)
T:read what's wiritten inside of it it's my favprite part
(braclet reads- Jinny ddearst i love you more than words can say you're amazing love teddy always and forever
J mg you're to much I love you so much teddy I can't even describe it
(lays back against teddy's chest so her head is right up his,and he rests his chin on top of her head)


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I'm being 100% honest when I say that I Luv It!!!! Keep going!

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