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Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 06-09-2001, 09:43 PM

Ko, you asked for it! You got it...

NOTE: This is a little bit different it's told as if they were in high school now. At the beginning of each chapter, you'll see the chapter number and who's telling it. I had to change some of the character's personalities around just a little to make it fit, but in the long run, I think it's okay. So, sit back, relax, and enjoy... Modest Intentions!!

Chapter 1: Jinny

Monday, September 10, 2001 8:30 am

I walked down the hall of Tillman high school in San Francisco, California and up to my best friend's locker. "Hi, Magda!" I said, cheerfully.
Magda shut her locker door and stared at me. "Why, Jinny Exstead, I do believe you're wearing color today," she stated, and motioned to my red v-neck sweater.
I laughed. "Well, it was burning a hole in my closet and-- Ooo!" A very cute boy walked past us and smiled in our direction. I had never seen him before and, believe me, with my reputation, you know every boy in the student body, very well, if you know what I mean. "Cute!" I exclaimed. "Who's that, Mag?" I twirled a string of my hair around my finger.
Magda smiled. "That's Theodore Bluementhal. He transferred. Apparently, his father's the president of some big company and he was the star quarterback at his last school. I think coach is getting ready to make him first string. That'll knock John out, won't it?"
I smiled. "Yeah, but, oh, well! So, tell me more about this Teddy guy." We started walking towards first period.

"So..." I said, after we sat down in geography. "Go ahead, tell me more."
Magda rolled her eyes. "Well, from what I heard, he's interested in someone that you loathe."
"Hmm... Well, that narrows down the field." I joked.
Just then, Teddy Bluementhal waltzed in and sat next to me. Magda shot me a look that said, 'Way to go!' and I non-chalantly pushed my pencil off my desk. He bent down to pick it up. "Here. I think you dropped this." He handed my pencil to me.
I put a hand to my chest. "Why, did I drop this? Oops!" I took my pencil from him and started planning a way to get him, without him knowing what had hit him.

I g2g. How is it so far?

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 06-09-2001).]

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 06-09-2001, 09:56 PM

lol...Cute! I like it. The whole twirling her hair around her finger reminded me of Blair,but yes please go on. It's real good so far. Just something to get used to.

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Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort."
Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop."
Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary."
Angela: "Did you see his face?"
Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him."

ISmellFine · 06-09-2001, 10:02 PM

This is awesome! Write more!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are gonna meet Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest]! We're gonna handcuff ourselves to her car... or better yet, to her! And you're not! And we're also gonna handcuff ourselves to Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest].

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Jinny: God, she's got a bug up her ass for me.
C.D.: Why?
Jinny: Oh, how should I know? Maybe, I am not her idea of what a lady cop should
look and act like.
C.D.: Did she tell you that?
Jinny: No, everytime she looks at me I get this flashback of my Aunt Irene's expression
when I showed up at my sweet 16 wearing cut offs and a t-shirt saying ,"Got any lately?"

Magda: What is that?
Jinny: It's a list of guys that I've slept with, ones I can remember anyway. Our delightful
Captian's idea.
Magda: You're gonna need a bigger book.
Jinny: *looks at Magda* What do we really know about anybody, ya know? Any cop or Jinny haters here today?! Raise your hand!

Jinny: Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work, but you gotta admire the effort.
Teddy: My whole life was on that laptop.
Jinny: Ooh, sad commentary.
Angela: Did you see his face?
Teddy: White male, 18 to 22, shaved head, dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean, he caught me by surprise, I could've taken him.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon

JoExstead · 06-09-2001, 10:25 PM

This is really cool. It's different! And that's a good thing. Post more soon.

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 06-09-2001, 11:23 PM

Ko! I'm glad your like it!

Chapter 2: Magda

Well, you gotta hand it to her, I thought. I'll bet Jinny Exstead will have him by the end of second period. I watched as she pulled out a stick of Big Red and put it into her mouth. She leaned over and whispered, "To quote Cher from the movie, 'Clueless', anything you can do to draw attention to your mouth is good." She chewed it for awhile and started pulling it out and twirling it around her finger. Typical Jinny. She blew a gigantic bubble and made it pop loudly. Teddy looked over at her and whispered something in her ear. She giggled and shook her head.
I ripped a sheet of paper out of my notebook and grabbed my pen. 'What did he say?' I wrote and tossed it over to her desk.
She read it and wrote back, 'I'll tell you next hour.'
I nodded and our teacher came in. He stood there and surveyed our class a moment. He took his pen out of his pocket and pointed it at Jinny. "You!" he bellowed. "What's your name?"
Jinny blew another bubble and said, "Jinny Exstead."
"Ah, yes. I had your brother last year. John, wasn't it?"
Jinny nodded and replied, "Yes, and next year you'll have my other brother, Casey."
"Yes, of course." He turned and pointed the pen at me. "You! Who are you?"
I sat up straight. "Magda Ramirez, sir." I emphasized the 'sir' because, knowing Jinny, she call him Pig-Brain or Butt-Hole or something like that. Actually, all things considered, Mr. Fair was actually really nice. Jinny just had a certain way of making everybody hate her. Except when she played hard to get like she was now. Okay, you're probably thinking, 'That's not hard to get!', but, believe me, if you know Jinny, that's hard to get. I sighed as she twirled her gum again and dropped her pencil again.
Teddy retrieved it once again and handed it to her. "You know, you should be careful. I only do so many good deads a day." He smiled and she took her pencil.
"Gosh, there must be a magnet or something down there!"
It was working. Theodore Bluementhal had fallen for Jinny Exstead, and in less than 15 minutes.

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

NancyJoJinny · 06-09-2001, 11:33 PM

MWAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! More!!!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 06-09-2001, 11:41 PM

Chapter 3: C.D.

"Hey you guys! Wait!" I called to Magda Ramirez and Jinny Exstead. They turned around and waved. "It's hard to run with a 10 pound chemistry book. Oh, and you won't believe this! I have a new chem partner."
Magda's mouth dropped. "Dick changed partners?"
"No, he moved. Anyway, there's this new girl, Angela Smith*, and she couldn't be more preppy, and--"
I was cut off by Jinny sighing. "What's with her?" I asked Magda.
Magda rolled her eyes. "She's in love... again."
We walked over to the track where we had gym that period. "Really? With who?"
"With whom," Magda corrected me. "With the new boy, Teddy Bluementhal."
"Yeah, I saw him in the hall. He's cute."
"She played hard to get in geography."
I laughed. "The gum thing?"
Magda looked bewildered that I could laugh at that. "Yes, the gum thing! And it's not funny, C.D.! It's my gum!"
Jinny snapped out of her trance. "Nuh-uh! Today it was [i]my[i/] gum! So there!" She stuck her tongue out at us.
I put a hand to my chest. "Oh, I'm pained, really!"
"Oh, no!" Jinny stopped in her tracks.
"What?" Magda and I asked at the same time.
"No!"
"What?" We said again.
"Boys' athletics is this hour!"
"So?" Magda asked.
"So, Teddy's in boys' athletics! I can't see him like that!"
"Why not? You will before you're through with him." I stated.
"That is true." Jinny said. "Oh, well. I still can't see him like that."
"You'll survive," Magda said, and we led Jinny to the track.

*Guessing at last names!

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

hockeychiC518 · 06-10-2001, 10:39 AM

AWEsome!!! post more soon!

hockeychiC518 · 06-10-2001, 10:39 AM

AWEsome!!! post more soon!

WildChildJinny · 06-10-2001, 10:49 AM

It's Angela Reide, but great story btw!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-10-2001, 11:06 AM

AWESOME!!!! You wanna know something, I can just picture each of the girls acting that way!

Wild Child · 06-10-2001, 12:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by WildChildJinny:
It's Angela Reide, but great story btw!

She probably made up Smith because in the show she's married....and in high school...well,she's not so she just changed her name.

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

VoLLeYBaLLQT · 06-10-2001, 12:18 PM

Post more I really like it!

-=*VoLLeYBaLLQT*=-

Nancy McKeon is my idol!! · 06-10-2001, 01:40 PM

AWESOME!!

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¤Li§Ä¤

Please e-mail me anytime at NancyMcKeonFan2006@hotmail.com
Im Me any time- nancymckeonfan01

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

JO- You are what you are and that's good enough for me!

JINNY- Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven

NATALIE_ Nothing's wrong with a little HEALTHY IDOL worship!

nancysbiggestfan · 06-10-2001, 04:43 PM

I really like this fan fic!! Its great! Post more soon

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
*~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~**
Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
~*~**~**~*~**~***~**~*~*~
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

06-09-2001, 09:43 PM	#1
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	Modest Intentions (Pleasant Seduction) Ko, you asked for it! You got it... NOTE: This is a little bit different it's told as if they were in high school now. At the beginning of each chapter, you'll see the chapter number and who's telling it. I had to change some of the character's personalities around just a little to make it fit, but in the long run, I think it's okay. So, sit back, relax, and enjoy... Modest Intentions!! Chapter 1: Jinny Monday, September 10, 2001 8:30 am I walked down the hall of Tillman high school in San Francisco, California and up to my best friend's locker. "Hi, Magda!" I said, cheerfully. Magda shut her locker door and stared at me. "Why, Jinny Exstead, I do believe you're wearing color today," she stated, and motioned to my red v-neck sweater. I laughed. "Well, it was burning a hole in my closet and-- Ooo!" A very cute boy walked past us and smiled in our direction. I had never seen him before and, believe me, with my reputation, you know every boy in the student body, very well, if you know what I mean. "Cute!" I exclaimed. "Who's that, Mag?" I twirled a string of my hair around my finger. Magda smiled. "That's Theodore Bluementhal. He transferred. Apparently, his father's the president of some big company and he was the star quarterback at his last school. I think coach is getting ready to make him first string. That'll knock John out, won't it?" I smiled. "Yeah, but, oh, well! So, tell me more about this Teddy guy." We started walking towards first period. "So..." I said, after we sat down in geography. "Go ahead, tell me more." Magda rolled her eyes. "Well, from what I heard, he's interested in someone that you loathe." "Hmm... Well, that narrows down the field." I joked. Just then, Teddy Bluementhal waltzed in and sat next to me. Magda shot me a look that said, 'Way to go!' and I non-chalantly pushed my pencil off my desk. He bent down to pick it up. "Here. I think you dropped this." He handed my pencil to me. I put a hand to my chest. "Why, did I drop this? Oops!" I took my pencil from him and started planning a way to get him, without him knowing what had hit him. I g2g. How is it so far? ------------------ §º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§ [This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 06-09-2001).]

06-09-2001, 09:56 PM	#2
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	lol...Cute! I like it. The whole twirling her hair around her finger reminded me of Blair,but yes please go on. It's real good so far. Just something to get used to. ------------------ Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort." Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop." Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary." Angela: "Did you see his face?" Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him."

06-09-2001, 10:02 PM	#3
ISmellFine Zim Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Apr 13, 2001 Posts: 4,886	This is awesome! Write more! ------------------ ~~NMRox~~ On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are gonna meet Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest]! We're gonna handcuff ourselves to her car... or better yet, to her! And you're not! And we're also gonna handcuff ourselves to Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest]. Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions!? Jinny: You're a peach. Jinny: God, she's got a bug up her ass for me. C.D.: Why? Jinny: Oh, how should I know? Maybe, I am not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like. C.D.: Did she tell you that? Jinny: No, everytime she looks at me I get this flashback of my Aunt Irene's expression when I showed up at my sweet 16 wearing cut offs and a t-shirt saying ,"Got any lately?" Magda: What is that? Jinny: It's a list of guys that I've slept with, ones I can remember anyway. Our delightful Captian's idea. Magda: You're gonna need a bigger book. Jinny: looks at Magda What do we really know about anybody, ya know? Any cop or Jinny haters here today?! Raise your hand! Jinny: Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work, but you gotta admire the effort. Teddy: My whole life was on that laptop. Jinny: Ooh, sad commentary. Angela: Did you see his face? Teddy: White male, 18 to 22, shaved head, dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean, he caught me by surprise, I could've taken him. Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon

06-09-2001, 10:25 PM	#4
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	This is really cool. It's different! And that's a good thing. Post more soon.

06-09-2001, 11:23 PM	#5
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	Ko! I'm glad your like it! Chapter 2: Magda Well, you gotta hand it to her, I thought. I'll bet Jinny Exstead will have him by the end of second period. I watched as she pulled out a stick of Big Red and put it into her mouth. She leaned over and whispered, "To quote Cher from the movie, 'Clueless', anything you can do to draw attention to your mouth is good." She chewed it for awhile and started pulling it out and twirling it around her finger. Typical Jinny. She blew a gigantic bubble and made it pop loudly. Teddy looked over at her and whispered something in her ear. She giggled and shook her head. I ripped a sheet of paper out of my notebook and grabbed my pen. 'What did he say?' I wrote and tossed it over to her desk. She read it and wrote back, 'I'll tell you next hour.' I nodded and our teacher came in. He stood there and surveyed our class a moment. He took his pen out of his pocket and pointed it at Jinny. "You!" he bellowed. "What's your name?" Jinny blew another bubble and said, "Jinny Exstead." "Ah, yes. I had your brother last year. John, wasn't it?" Jinny nodded and replied, "Yes, and next year you'll have my other brother, Casey." "Yes, of course." He turned and pointed the pen at me. "You! Who are you?" I sat up straight. "Magda Ramirez, sir." I emphasized the 'sir' because, knowing Jinny, she call him Pig-Brain or Butt-Hole or something like that. Actually, all things considered, Mr. Fair was actually really nice. Jinny just had a certain way of making everybody hate her. Except when she played hard to get like she was now. Okay, you're probably thinking, 'That's not hard to get!', but, believe me, if you know Jinny, that's hard to get. I sighed as she twirled her gum again and dropped her pencil again. Teddy retrieved it once again and handed it to her. "You know, you should be careful. I only do so many good deads a day." He smiled and she took her pencil. "Gosh, there must be a magnet or something down there!" It was working. Theodore Bluementhal had fallen for Jinny Exstead, and in less than 15 minutes. ------------------ §º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

06-09-2001, 11:33 PM	#6
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	MWAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! More!!!! ------------------ On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too. Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home! Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us? ~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~ The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

06-09-2001, 11:41 PM	#7
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	Chapter 3: C.D. "Hey you guys! Wait!" I called to Magda Ramirez and Jinny Exstead. They turned around and waved. "It's hard to run with a 10 pound chemistry book. Oh, and you won't believe this! I have a new chem partner." Magda's mouth dropped. "Dick changed partners?" "No, he moved. Anyway, there's this new girl, Angela Smith, and she couldn't be more preppy, and--" I was cut off by Jinny sighing. "What's with her?" I asked Magda. Magda rolled her eyes. "She's in love... again." We walked over to the track where we had gym that period. "Really? With who?" "With whom," Magda corrected me. "With the new boy, Teddy Bluementhal." "Yeah, I saw him in the hall. He's cute." "She played hard to get in geography." I laughed. "The gum thing?" Magda looked bewildered that I could laugh at that. "Yes, the gum thing! And it's not funny, C.D.! It's my gum!" Jinny snapped out of her trance. "Nuh-uh! Today it was [i]my[i/] gum! So there!" She stuck her tongue out at us. I put a hand to my chest. "Oh, I'm pained, really!" "Oh, no!" Jinny stopped in her tracks. "What?" Magda and I asked at the same time. "No!" "What?" We said again. "Boys' athletics is this hour!" "So?" Magda asked. "So, Teddy's in boys' athletics! I can't see him like that!" "Why not? You will before you're through with him." I stated. "That is true." Jinny said. "Oh, well. I still can't see him like that." "You'll survive," Magda said, and we led Jinny to the track. Guessing at last names! ------------------ §º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

06-10-2001, 10:39 AM	#8
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	AWEsome!!! post more soon!

06-10-2001, 10:49 AM	#10
WildChildJinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 22, 2001 Location: MaSsAcHuSeTtS Posts: 355	It's Angela Reide, but great story btw! ------------------ ~<3~Caitlin~<3~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jo On Hefself: " You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One Of Jinny's Many Quotes: " Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

06-10-2001, 11:06 AM	#11
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	AWESOME!!!! You wanna know something, I can just picture each of the girls acting that way!

06-10-2001, 12:18 PM	#13
VoLLeYBaLLQT Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 04, 2001 Location: New York Posts: 99	Post more I really like it! -=VoLLeYBaLLQT=-

06-10-2001, 01:40 PM	#14
Nancy McKeon is my idol!! Nancy McKeon Wannabe Senior Member Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: At my house, or anywhere, obsessing over Nancy McKeon Posts: 1,213	AWESOME!! ------------------ ¤Li§Ä¤ Please e-mail me anytime at NancyMcKeonFan2006@hotmail.com Im Me any time- nancymckeonfan01 Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!! Please visit my web page; www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html JO- You are what you are and that's good enough for me! JINNY- Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven NATALIE_ Nothing's wrong with a little HEALTHY IDOL worship!

06-10-2001, 04:43 PM	#15
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	I really like this fan fic!! Its great! Post more soon ------------------ § Tiffany § Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!! Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions!?! ~~*~~~~*~~*~~** Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. ~~~~~~~~~*~ Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no. IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!