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Okay this is currently untitled.
Jinny and Magda both walked into the division, and sat down in their usual manner. CD and Angela were already there, fighting about God knows what.
“Angela I already”
“CD just shut up, I know what you told me already” she told her in a snotty little voice. Then Kate walks out of her office.
“CD, Angela” She said “We’ve got a homicide at 2420 S. Street. A Rachel Ricker, nineteen.”
“Are there any suspects?” CD asked.
“Not that we know of.”
“Okay” CD told her.
“Jinny, Magda, there’s a missing person report that I’m giving to you two. Her name is Dehnia Herrick. She’s a fifteen year old girl, been missing for forty-eight hours now.”
”Are there any leads on where she may be?” Magda asked her.
“Well I can tell you one thing, she’s involved in a gang. So that may add on to your problems. Here’s her picture, she was last seen wearing blue jeans and a baggy white t-shirt.”
“Alright.” Jinny said.

CD and Angela drive up to the to the house.
“Here it is, 2420 S. Street.” CD said.
“Okay let’s go see what they’ve got.”
CD and Angela walked into the house. They went into the bedroom and saw Rachel Ricker lying on the bed, with her throat cut open.
“Oh my God” Angela said.
“Geez. Okay well let’s see here. Hi Steven, well it’s pretty obvious what happened here.” CD said
“Hi CD, yeah well she was obviously stabbed.”
“How long?” CD asked him.
“Uh, probably between 5:00 am and 8:00 am. Since its nine now.”
“Geez, when are people going to learn, this is wrong.” Angela Said.

Magda and Jinny are looking over the file. Dehnia Herrick’s mother had died in a car accident when Dehnia was only ten.
“Man, losing her mom when she was ten, that wouldn’t be so good.” Magda remarked.
“Yeah well.” Jinny said.
“Jinny what is with you today? You’re not yourself.”
“Nothing Mag, nothing.”
“Why don’t I believe that?”
“Just shut up, okay. I’ll tell you later.”
“Whatever.”
“Let’s go talk to her Dad.”
At Mr. Herrick’s house you could tell he was a wreck. He hadn’t slept much and had been drinking a lot.
“Mr. Herrick, you lost your wife 5 years ago, is that right?” Magda asked
It was clear to both of them he had a drinking problem. They were looking around the house and had found a lot of beer bottles. You could tell that seeing this made Jinny uptight.
“Yes. She died in a car accident.” He said.
“Thank you Mr. Herrick. If we find anything we’ll call you immediately.” Jinny told him.

In the car Magda was trying to get Jinny to talk.
“Jinny, something’s wrong. You know it, I know it, and if you don’t start acting like yourself the captain’s going to know it.”
“Magda, listen I don’t want to talk about it.”
“C’mon Jinny, keeping it bottled up inside of you ain’t going to help any.”
“Listen Mag, I said I don’t want to talk about it. So I’m not going to talk about it.”
“I feel sorry for Dehnia, the girls dad obviously has a drinking problem, and loosing her mom when she was ten.”
“Magda, several years ago today, when I was fourteen, my mother killed herself. There, ya happy, I told you.”
“Jinny, I’m sorry I didn’t know.”
“Yeah well then I was lucky I wasn’t stupid enough to join a gang.”

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Tiffany

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE!
~Jo Polniaczek

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

[NewsiesGurl229]

Okay, I am like really really busy. So if I don't post much I"m really sorry. I can guarantee you I won't be postingon June 20 to the 23. I'm sorry, but I have to go to practices and other things.

[NewsiesGurl229]

PART TWO

Magda just sits there in astonishment.
”Jinny, I’m so sorry. I didn’t realize that it was, well today.” Magda tells her.
“Mag, just drop it. I don’t want you telling CD, Angela, or Captain.”
“Whatever.”
CD and Angela are at Rachel’s house.
“Well if our information is right Rachel was here going to college. Maybe a teacher or friend could help.”
“Sure, maybe.”
CD and Angela head back to the station. Jinny and Magda are there looking through files.
“Hey.” CD says
“Hi.” Magda and Jinny respond.
Then John and Casey came in. You could tell that they were both distracted today, like Jinny.
“Hey Jinny.” Casey said
“Hey guys. Uh want to go for lunch?” Jinny asked them.
“Sure” they both say.

Out at lunch Jinny, Casey and John are sitting at a restaurant.
“God I miss her.” Jinny said.
“Yeah, me too.” Casey responded.
“Ya know she wasn’t too bad.” John said.
“Uh huh, well you didn’t have to go through growing up, and being a girl, with out a mother.”
“We both had to grow up without a mom Jinny.” John remarked.
Then Jinny’s cell phone rings.
”Exstead, hey Magda. You did. Sure I’ll be right there.” She hangs up “Hey guys sorry to bail, but Magda thinks she’s found the kid. Don’t even ask.”

Okay I know, it was boring. Please respond.

Oh and one more thing, this story will lead up to something.

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

[lil_Miss_actress]

*Screams* MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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From the musical "Gypsy"

Rose: Herbie he he he! He tried too-

Herbie: Again?

Rose: Herbie, don't your DARE apoligize to him!

Baby June: Honesly Louise!

Baby Louise: Mama, how come I have four fathers?
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He's a horses ass, but he's got a point.~Jinny

Teddy: I don't like this.

Jinny: I know but I like you.
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I'm not A bitch I'm THE Bitch and that's MISS bitch to you!

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[Jinny_Extead]

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

[NewsiesGurl229]

PART THREE

CD and Angela are heading to the college that Rachel was attending. You could tell that CD had a lot on her mind and wasn’t really concentrating on the case. Angela could tell that something was wrong, but figured that CD would or will tell her when she’s ready.
“So who are we talking to first?” Angela asked CD.
“A girl named Annie Morris. From what we’ve found out she was Rachel’s best friend.”
CD and Angela arrive at the college. They walk into the office.
“Hi, where would I find a Ms. Annie Morris?” CD asked
“Why would you like to see her?” The receptionist asked her.
“SFPD, we need to ask her a couple of questions.” CD said in a polite, but strait forward matter.
“Room 224. Chemistry Lab.” She said.
“Thank you.” Angela told her.

Jinny and Magda are outside of a diner. There’s a girl inside with the same description as Dehnia.
“So what’s going on in there?” Jinny asked.
“Well Dehnia has threatened to shoot anyone who leaves the building, or anyone who enters it.” Magda explained. Jinny could tell something was bothering her.
“Okay, I know this isn’t the time to ask, but what’s wrong?”
“Ben and Ma are in there, see.”
Jinny looks through the window and sees Dehnia in there with a gun. Then she looks around and sees Ben and Magda’s mom.
“Oh my God.”
“Yeah, Oh my God.” Magda says.

CD and Angela are walking through the halls at the college.
”There it is, room 224. Chemistry Lab.” CD says, “Let’s go.”
CD and Angela walk in the room.
“Hi um, we need to talk to a Annie Morris.” CD says.
“That’s me.” A young girl with blonde hair and blue eyes stands up, “You want to talk with me.”
”Yeah.” Angela tells her the three girls step into the hall.
“So you are you guys?” Annie asks the two Inspectors.
“I’m Inspector DeLorenzo, and this is Inspector Reide. We want to ask you some questions about Rachel Ricker.”
“Why is she in trouble or something?”
”No, Annie Rachel was murdered last night. You didn’t know that.” CD said, kind of amazed no one had told her.
“Nobody told me. Who, how?” She asked. Kind of amazed.
“We are trying to find out that right now. Now we understand that you and Rachel were quite close.” Angela said to the Annie, who still had a look of astonishment on her face.
“Yeah, we were like sisters. We had been friends since first grade.” Annie told them.
“Listen, Annie, we’re going to take you to the station and ask you some questions.” CD told her calmly.
“Alright.” Annie said. Still looking as if she didn’t believe them or know what to say.


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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

[NewsiesGurl229]

PART FOUR

Outside of the little diner where Dehnia is not letting anybody in or out, Magda and Jinny just stand there wondering what to do. Magda was sitting there, quite uptight, and Jinny was trying to comfort Mag yet figure out how to get Dehnia, and everyone else, out of there, alive.
“Magda, Ben and your mom will be okay.” Jinny said, in a reassuring voice. But Magda could tell that Jinny was hesitant.
“I hope so. Now how do we get her out of there, or get ourselves in there?” She said.
“Well we could send someone in, like they don’t realize what’s going on.” Jinny said, knowing it wouldn’t work, but it’s a possibility.
“Jinny, she knows we’re out here, no one would be allowed to enter.” Magda told her.
“Yeah, your right. So how do we do this?”
”Well I think there’s a window in the bathroom, it doesn’t lock. It’s big enough for me to go through, get behind her…”
Cutting Magda off “Uh you better let me go. Ben’s in there, and your mom.
“No Jinny, I’m going to go. I’ll get behind her, and have her drop her weapon and the whole thing so forth.” Magda told her. “I’ll be okay.”
“Are you sure?” Jinny asked her hoping she’d say no.
“Yeah. I’m sure. This is something that I’m going to do.” Magda said it strait forward.
“Body armor.” Jinny told her.
Magda put it on and went around to the back of the building. She saw the window and climbed through. She carefully went through the door being as quiet as possible. She got behind Dehnia and quickly said “SFPD Drop your gun now.”
Dehnia turned around and saw her. She shot at Magda, Jinny saw Magda fall to the ground. Jinny put on her body armor really fast, and ran in. Dehnia was just looking at Magda; she had a blank expression on her face.
Jinny arrested her, and read her, her rites. “Oh my god, Magda.”
Ben and Magda’s mom walk up behind Jinny, “Jinny is my mom okay?” Ben asked her.
Jinny just turned around, looked at him and said “I don’t know Ben, I honestly don’t know.”

Meantime, CD and Angela are in talking to Annie. “So Annie, you’re saying that Rachel was very liked in college.” Angela said
“Yeah, Rachel was very likeable. She didn’t have any enemies.” Annie told them.
The captain walks in and asked if she could see CD and Angela in the hall for a minute.
“Girls, I’ve got to go, I’ll be back as soon as I can. For now, you two are in charge. Don’t throw any wild parties.” She said
“Sure captain, what’s wrong?” CD asked her.
“Uh I’ll tell you later.” She said and walked off in a hurry.

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

[NewsiesGurl229]

PART FIVE

Kate walks into the hospital, she sees Jinny sitting there.
“Hey Jinny, any news?” She asks her.
“Nope.”
“Jinny, I know about your mom, and I think that’s why you aren’t quite yourself today.” She said, approaching the subject hesitantly.
“Please say Magda didn’t tell you.”
”No. I remember hearing about it when your dad was still on the force.” She stated, “I just want you to know, if you want to talk about it I’ll be there.”
“I’m fine, okay.” Jinny just says it, strait forward, trying to keep from crying.
“Whatever suits you best Jinny.”

CD and Angela had just finished talking to Annie.
“So the only person Annie could think of that may have had something against Rachel was Tommy Highs, her ex-boyfriend.” Angela said, “CD?”
”Yeah sorry, right. Tommy Highs is what she thought.” CD said with her mind on something else. CD’s cell phone rings. “DeLorenzo” she said “hey captain, what? Yeah we’ll be there soon. Bye.”
“Was that the captain?” Angela asked.
“Yeah, Magda was shot.”

[Jinny_Extead]

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

[BlairW_1]

more!!! Aak, I can only have 1 hour of internet all this summer, I'm gonna die! But that doesn't include phones... *evil grin* Please post more soon, I gotta have more!

~*Danielle*~
<3 ya!

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PART SIX

Angela just looks at CD in astonishment; “Are you serious?” was all she could say.
“Yeah, I guess they found the girl they were looking for. Magda went in, not thinking, and the girl shot her. But don’t quote me on that.”
“Is she okay?”
“I don’t know, why do you think we’re going there?” CD said in a sarcastic voice.
“CD, this is some thing you should probably take seriously.”
”Okay…I know that.”

CD and Angela fought all the way to the hospital, like that wasn’t expected. They enter see Jinny is a nervous wreck, and Kate sitting there, not knowing what to do. CD walks over to Jin and tries to comfort her.
“Jinny, Mag will be fine. I promise.” She said in a reassuring voice.
“You can’t be sure about that. Geez, this is all my fault, I shouldn’t have let her go in there in the first place.”
“I don’t follow.”
“Well I tried to talk Magda out of it, and go in, in her place. I reminded her about Ben, and she may want to be alive to see her son grow up. But she didn’t listen.”
”Jinny you tried, and that’s all you could do.” Angela told her.
A doctor walked out and looked through a file. “Ramirez” he called out. The four other women responded. “Well she was shot in the head, and the bullet is in the middle of the brain.”
Jinny looked at him with disbelief. “Are you serious?” she asked him, hoping that he wasn’t.
“Yes I am, she has a low chance of survival, and if she does survive she only has five percent chance of making it without brain damage.” He told them, solemnly, but still strait forward. “I’m sorry.”
“Oh my God.” Jinny said, and started crying like a baby.
“Yeah okay, so this girl, please tell me your charging her with something.” CD said, you could tell she wanted to cry, but also wanted to keep her image. CD never cries, and she didn’t want to start now.
“Yeah, depending on what happens to Magda. If she dies, the homicide of a police officer, if she doesn’t then attempted homicide of a police officer.” Captain said.
“Jinny calm down.” CD said, trying to comfort her, but not knowing what to say. “Yes and shouldn’t someone call her mom and Ben, so they don’t freak out?”
“Probably,” the captain responded, “You want to do the honors?”
“No not really.” CD told her.
“Fine then I will.” Kate said.

After she had called Magda’s mom, her and Ben were heading strait to the hospital. Jinny was a wreck, was ignoring everyone, and crying. CD had been trying to comfort her and get her to talk, with some help from Angela. Kate as well as the other two knew that if they let Jinny out of site for one second, she would go strait to Anchorside, and the rest is history.

Magda’s mom and Ben came through the door, and Jinny knew she had to pull herself together, for Ben, and for herself. She knew what was happening couldn’t be good for her health.

[BlairW_1]

Aah, this is too good! You gotta write more soon, ya hear? (I just watched Where the Red Fern Grows, pt 2 with Lisa Whelchel, and I'm in touch with my hick side. She has her original Texas accent in it!)

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!