A Familiar Darkness (Fan-Fiction)

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Here is my Most Recent Fan-Fiction.

A Familiar Darkness: Electricity Cut
Series 1, Story 6.

Jinny walks up to the station angry at Theodore and pushes the door open carelessly. "Hey Jinny" one of the Officers say. Jinny glances over, "Hi." she says without stopping. She arrives at the Elevator and pushed the button to go to the Second Floor. Looks up then back down to the Elevator Door, "Damn Hurry up. I don't got all day." she says looking at her watch. Magda comes up from behind her. "Hey Jin." she says as she arrives beside her. Waiting for the elevator aswell. "Yeah Hi." Jinny says looking over to Magda then back to the Elevator who's door opens. A few men in Suits walk out as Jinny and Magda walk in. Mag steps forward and pushes the button to go to the Second floor where the Division is located. The door to the elevator closes and it begins to go up. Still not a word from Jinny. The Elevator Dings as the door opens once Again. Both Inspectors walk out into the Hall. As they walk down the Hall the lights flicker. Magda looks up,"Probably another one of those black out we've been having." she says. "Yeah" Jinny says solemnly. Jinny pushes the door open to the Womans Restroom and walks in Followed by Magda. C.D. looks over from her locker, "Hey Guys." she says putting on her gun holster. "Hey" Magda says walking in. Jinny walks straight to her locker without saying a word and opens it. C.D. looks at Jinny and puts her over-coat on. Magda looks at C.D. and shrugs. C.D. looks at Magda, "Well I'll see you guys later." She says closing her locker and walking out. Magda nods, "Okay." as she makes her way to her locker and opens it. Jinny sets her bag on the bench,opens it up and puts her scarf,etc in it. Magda does the same as her. Jinny finishes and goes to put her bag into the locker,but it doesn't seem to fit. "Damn it, Stupid thing won't fit in." she says stuffing it in her locker. Then slamming the door closed quickly. "What's up with you Jinny? You've hardly said a word this morning,and when you do. You aren't exactly Friendly." Jinny nods,"Yeah I'm fine. JUST fine." she says walking to the Sink then turning back around walking to the bench and sits. "Come on,Jin. Somethings a matter." Magda says. Jinny's voice lowers, "Teddy and I had a fight." she says to Magda. "You and him okay?" Magda asks sitting down beside Jinny. "Yeah,fine. Besides for the fight." Jinny shakes her head. "He makes me so damn mad. I could just spit." Jinny says standing up. "What was the fight about?" she asks looking up to Jinny. She crosses her arms, "Theodore,Casey,and John were over at my house last night. We rented a few movies. You know. And well. Casey and John got into it again. About god knows what." Jinny shakes her head. " I just wish they would knock their crap off. Especially John. He can't control himself." Jinny says getting mad again. "Oh,but uh how does that make Theodore mad at you?" Magda asks confused. "Well, when Casey and John were leaving they. Began to physically fight in the hallway. John started it,Yet again. I got in the middle of it to break them up." Jinny says. "I got a couple bruises,but Theodore totally flipped! He got mad at me for getting involved. I mean after all they are my brothers." she finishes. "Yeah,He was just worried about you ,Jin." Magda says getting up from the bench. "Yeah,but still. I'm not a little girl I can take care of myself!" Jinny reply's. "Can we get to work?" Jinny asks looking at Magda. "Sure." she reply's following Jinny out the restroom door.

So what do you think,So far?



[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 06-08-2001).]

[Jeanie]

I think that you should continue. This is very good. I like your fan fictions very much. Thanks.


Jeanie

[ks]

Please continue, it is really good. Your fics are always awesome, and I can't wait to read more!

ks

[Teddys_Angel_Jinny]

Ditto! Dittto! Ditto! Please, you know, write more.

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[jinny_jo_2001]

cool! write more!

[NancyJoJinny]

I love it! I couldnt help laughing when she said "He makes me so mad i culd just, spit!" LOL!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Thanks You Guys!!

**The Division**
Magda and Jinny walk in. Captain comes out of her office, "What time you two have to go to court,today?" Captain asks looking at the two. Jinny reply's, "11:45." she reply's walking past Captain to her desk. Taking her coat off and putting it on the back of her chair. "Okay,Everything ready to go?" Captain says looking from Jinny to Magda. "Yeah,We just have to go over the case folder and gets prepared." Jinny says. "Plus we'll run home and get changed before court. Other than that we're set." Magda adds. "Okay,So everything is worked out." Captain says with a nod. Magda nods back to Cap and sits down. "C.D. Angela..May I see you for a moment?" Captain asks pointing at her office and walking in. C.D. and Angela look up at eachother. Then make there way to Captain's office. "Any leads on that Kethern case?" Captain asks sitting down and putting on her glasses. "No leads yet." Angela says sitting down at the chair directly in front of Captain's Desk and hands her the case folder. "We have two witnesses so far. That can validate that Mr. Kethern the Ex husband came to Mrs. Kethern's house and they got into a verbal arguement." C.D. reply's. Captain looks at the two and nods. "No one see him hit her, to back up Carrie's Case?" she asks looking through the folder. Angela reply's," No one that we found yet." Captain slowly takes off her glasses, "Well you better find something or Mrs. Kethern's case is going to go belly up." she reply's. "We're on it,Cap." C.D. says turning the corner and leaving the office close behind is Angela.

Magda sitting at her desk looks over to Jinny that is having a hard time concentrating. "You alright ,Jinny?" Magda asks concerned. Jinny glances behind her, "Yeah fine. Thanks,Mag." Jinny says putting her elbow on her desk and rests her head in her hand as she reads a paper pertaining to the case they have to go to court for. "So uh what do you think will happen with this case?" Jinny says just loud enough for Magda to hear from her desk, looking down at the papers. "I think it's as good as ours. Everything was done by the book. We're just going in case they bring our names into it." Magda reply's. "Yeah. That's right." Jinny says solemnly.

[NewsiesGurl229]

I LUV IT!!!!! YAY (sarcastically) GRAND PRACTICE IN 30 minutes.

[Jinny_Extead]

I Luv it!!! Post more ASAP!!!!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[nancysbiggestfan]

This is great! Post more SOON.

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

C.D.'s telephone rings, "DeLorenzo" she answers. Angela looks across to C.D. "Yeah, Great. Can you come in today? Thank You very much. You've been very helpful. Yes now is fine. Ok. Bye." C.D. hangs up. "What was that?" Angela asks. "We got a witness." C.D. reply's. "Witness to what?" Angela asks. "A witness that says Carrie Kethern isn't exactly telling the truth." C.D. smirks.

Magda looks around her desk, "Where's the folder,Jin?" she asks picking up paper and looking under them for the Folder for the case. "What folder?" Jinny asks looking back at Magda. "The one for the case we're going to today." Magda reply's. "Oh,that." Jinny says finally understanding what Mag was talking about. She turns back to her desk and looks around for it. "Not over here." Jinny reply's. "Where did it go?" Magda asks. "I'll go down and check in the Archives,Mag. It may have got taken down there." Jinny reply's. "Yeah okay. Want some help?" Magda asks. "No, I'll be fine. I'd like to be alone. Anyway." Jinny says getting up from her desk and walking out of the Division. C.D. looks over,"What's wrong with,Jinny?" she asks. "Her and Teddy had a fight." Magda reply's. "Oh,That explains it." she reply's with a nod.

Jinny pushes the button on the Elevator a moment passes and she walks into the empty elevator. Walks to one side pushes the button for the bottom floor. Which was the basement where the archives were located. She leans back on the side of the elevator as the door closes and begins to go down. When they reach the main Station floor the elevator stops to let people on. The door opens and in steps Theodore. He walks in,turns around and realizes Jinny is there. Jinny looks over at him and says, "Great." sarcastically. "You know what. I can just wait for another elevator." Theodore says putting his hand out as the doors begin to close. They open once again. "No, I'm just going down anyway. I think we can stand eachother for a whole 10 seconds." Jinny reply's. Theodore nods and steps back into the elevator holding his breifcase in his right hand. "I think we can manage that." he says as the doors begin to close and the two are alone. Jinny on her side of the elevator and Theodore on his.

(lol..Mean Place to Leave off,Huh?)

[JJ]

OMG! That is not a nice place to leave off!!! More!!! More!!!

[NewsiesGurl229]

I DON"T LIKE YOU!!! Okay so maybe I do. But that's mean I want to know more!!

[jinny_jo_2001]

this is too too cool! Please post more soon!

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Okay,Sorry I had to leave it off at that last part. And also this one aswell. haha.. I'm just copy and pasting it as I go along. I have most of it written already. Just posting it slowly I can keep up with Writing it because I'm also writing two other fan-fictions at the moment aswell. Here you go:

A moment passes and they feel the elevator begin to go down. Everything is fine until it stops and the lights go out. "What the Hell?" Jinny remarks. "What happened?" Theodore says looking around. "What did you do to the elevator?" Jinny says angryly. "Not a damn thing. You're the one by the buttons,Jinny!!" Theodore shoots back.He drops his suitcase and stuff scatters all on the floor. Which it was dark so he couldn't see so he leans down and and begins feeling around on the ground for his stuff and stuffing it back in his breifcase. "Yeah well...What did you just do?" Jinny asks Theodore. "I dropped my breifcase." Theodore says stopping for a second and looking at the Direction he heard Jinny's voice come from. "Oh" she says still in her corner with her arms crossed.

Captain walks out of her office and looks around the Division that is only lit by the light from outside. "What happened?" she asks. "Must have been another blackout." C.D. reply's. Captain looks around, "Where is Jinny?" she asks. Magda looks up and reply's, "She was going down to the archives to get the folder for court today." Captain nods walks into her office and comes back out with a folder, "This one?" she asks dropping it to Magda's desk. "Yeah. That's the one Captain." she reply's opening it up. "Uh-huh." Captain says with a nod.

A few moments go by with Theodore still feeling around for his stuff on the ground. Jinny sighs and leans over to help him. Theodore hears her lean down and reply's, "No Jinny you don't have to help." "It's okay." Jinny reply's feeling around on the floor. Her hand bumps into Theodore's, "Sorry." she reply's quietly. She picks up a couple papers and feels around for Theodore's breifcase, "Right here" he reply's moving it over where Jinny can feel it beside her. "Okay." she says opening it up and putting the papers in. Theodore goes to put some papers into the breifcase aswell when one slides across Jinny's finger giving her a slight cut. "Ouch." she says pulling her hand back. "What's wrong?" Theodore says as he stops what he was doing. "Papercut." Jinny reply's holding her finger. "Let me see." he reply's reaching for her hand. Both of them stop and laugh slightly. "I don't think that will happen." Jinny says with a laugh. Theodore moves directly in front of Jinny still kneeling, "Are you okay?" "Yeah, I'm fine." she says. Theodore reaches out and fumbles around for her hand. He finally finds it and brings it to his lips and gives it a quick peck. A small smile comes to Jinny's face as he does so,but she doesn't say a word. "How's that?" he asks letting down her hand. "Better." Jinny says in a low voice. "I do my best." he reply's to her with a smile that slowly fades because he knows they are still argueing..