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background info: this is when they are in high school and even though it is not likely kate is playing the captain... yea so anyways here we go!
Virgina, a.k.a. "jinny" Exstead woke up and stared at her surroundings...where am i? she thought to herself? o sh** if john finds out that i didnt go home last night hes going to kill me! She looked at the clock which read 7:45- her next thought o _________ school! There was no one home at the place she was but she the area of town of which she was in. She had a spliting headache and she knew why..she drank a little to much last night, but she ignored that and quickly gathered her things. She ran to home, hoping not to be spotted by any of her neighbors, as she ran in the back door grabbed her stuff and made record timing to school, dispite how much her head was pounding. She had missed all of first period-science she thought to her self, how is science going help me? its not! She ran through the halls and into her American History class and right as she burst through the door the teacher said Ms. Exstead how nice of you to join us. She just responded with a yea whatever expression on her face and took her seat next to her best friend, Magda Ramerize and infront of CD DeLorenzo another close friend. Next to CD sat the almost perfect Angela Reide(i know she is married but i am keeping that name, same with cd) Magda justed glared at Jinny and said I didnt think you would be in class again. Jinny just responded with hey whats that suppose to mean? Magda was not very happy with Jinny's drinking problem but she understood why she did it-her homelife was unbelivebly harsh. Her mother about a year ago commited suicide, her father at least smokes a pack a day or more, her oldest brother John was a homophobic and did not approve of anything Jinny did. And Casey, Jinny's younger brother, poor Casey, hes one of the nicest people I know and not to bad on the eyes either Magda thought. CD just taoed jinny and said hey have a good night last night? Just then the bell rang and the teacher asked if he could see Jinny after class. "Hey teach whats up? Jinny I am worried about you? What do you mean worried? Jinny responded..."well Jinny you havent been showing up to class on time and grades are slipping, if you ever need to talk bout anything I am here and I know it is useless to give you a detention because I know you will never go" Jinny just stared at him in disbelife-well not really, she knew this was coming but all she managed to say was, "can i go now?" and he just nodded. In the hallway outside the classroom Magda, CD, and Angela were waiting for her. Ignorintly(sp..o well) Angela asked her, "does it ever bother you not knowing where you are when you wake up? or how you got there?" Ok by this time Jinny was trying to remain cool she just said, "yea, you see that might be an issue, but you see i knew where i was last night, i slept over a friends house and i over slept-thats it end of story." CD and Magda just looked at her and said "right..." as if they didnt believe her, well they didnt. Just then Jinny's next object of the eye she wanted was Theodore Blumenthal(sp) she just causully waved and gave a little smile and said hey" As Theodore walked by he flashed his choir boy smile and she just melted. Teddy(for short) was the captain and shortstop of the schools baseball team and did not fit the dumb jock sterotype-in fact he was high honors student and proabley the guy Jinny wanted that she didnt have...what jinny felt for teddy was differnt and the longest she had ever been with a guy was a couple of weeks but if she were ever to get with teddy she knew it would be a lot longer. Right as he walked by John Exstead, came storming up to Jinny... ok yea so nothing intresting happened but theres a little thing i like to call sleep and i wanna get some this morning...sry i will continue later this morning! after i wake up, but could someone be nice and please respond how u like the boring set up so far! thanks that would make my day! ------------------ Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!" Thoedore: "Why?" Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend.... "one time at band camp..."-American Pie "im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality [This message has been edited by hockeychiC518 (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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It's so ungodly for you to leave us hanging right here! What happens?? More more more!
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smile :)
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keep it up!!!!!!!
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This is great!!! Please post more ASAP!
------------------ Tiffany Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night? Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean. Teddy: Come on, Jinny. Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress. Teddy: You did? Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it. Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic. Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway? Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do? Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!! Teddy: Jinny, my God. Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE! ~Jo Polniaczek IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan |
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Sweet scaredy cat
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MORE!!!
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youre RAD <3<3
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this is so cool MORE!
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Definately post more!!!
![]() ------------------ *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff. |
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I've been waiting for this! Post more ASAP!
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ok thanks, all those replys made my day and the good o-town concert tickets too but anyways heres more!
Just as John came storming through the halls to Jinny, Magda, CD and Angela whispered to Jinny, "I think now would be a good time to leave" All Jinny did was simply nod. John finally approched Jinny and said, "where the h____ where you? you have not be home for the past two days- wait stupid question, I know exactly where you- getting drunk and laid" Jinny just looked down at the floor embarresed and finally stamered out, "I was at a friends house thats it" John gave her a long hard stare in disbelife and said, "Dont you know that you have people who care and love you at home, we were worried sick about you!" Jinny was dumbstruck by this comment but without even thinking she said, "Yea right, you mean Casey, you wouldnt have even noticed that i was gone if he did not mention it, now if u mind, i have a class to go too.." Her words trailed off and by this time John was soooooo mad you cant even express in words and he raised his fist back as if he was about to punch jinny. Just then his fist came flying at jinny and she ducked and his hand rammed into the lockers. She responded with a trip and they were rolling on the ground when Casey what was going on and he became involved. After a few minuets of fighting as luck might have it the princapal came strolling through the halls and noticed the commotion. He got to them and through them off each other and sternly yelled, "Exstead, Exstead, Exstead... my office NOW!!!" OK I KNow thats not much but i promise i will add more later ------------------ Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!" Thoedore: "Why?" Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend.... "one time at band camp..."-American Pie "im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality |
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Please do! This story is really great so far and I can't wait for more!
------------------ "You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! |
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Sweet scaredy cat
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THIS RULES! please post more!
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This Rox! Post more ASAP.
------------------ Tiffany Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night? Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean. Teddy: Come on, Jinny. Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress. Teddy: You did? Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it. Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic. Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway? Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do? Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!! Teddy: Jinny, my God. Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE! ~Jo Polniaczek IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan |
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thank you everyone whom responded and heres a little more-i am wicked tired and i lost all feeling in my legs and i swear i have a sun burn on my toe..anyways heres more~
The princapal stared coldly into each of the Exstead's eyes, its not like the princapals office was an unfamilar place for them-even Casey who seemed to occasionally get into trouble. Finally he said,"What is the meaning of this, fighting in our halls, you are bro- siblings arent you supposed to fight at home?" John was the one who was stupid enough to speak up and said, "well you see sir we have to fight here because this slut here..i mean jinny never comes home and if she does shes half drunk..therefore this is where we fight" The princpal was sorta shocked that someone spoke up but he decided to change the subject and said, "Casey I thought you had more sense to be fighting" You could tell that Casey was very nervous and squirrmed in his seat when he finally spoke, "you see sir this is my family and I was just doing what i should be doing protecting jinny" John looked at him very coldly and retorted,"Ive seen you fight, you couldnt protect a rats ________" The princpal looked at Casey's eyes and gave him a little sympathy and said, "Ok Casey you may be dismissed and you have detention for 10 days, that is all" Next the princpal gazed into John's angry expression and could tell that his behavior wasnt going to rapidly improve so he just gave him a week suspension and finally told him that he could leave. Next the princpal took a stare at Jinny eyes. He looked at the tough extorior and knew it was not all that made up Jinny. He knew that inside she was kind and a good person but right now she was going through so much and had so much emotions and anger bottled up inside her. He opened his mouth to speak and suddenly words began to flow out, "Jinny I am worried about you, you are fighting in halls, showing up late for classes and sometimes just plain skipping. You were once caught drinking behind the school, although that was not during school and something needs to be done to stop this behavior, even though you grades are not dropping if you continue on this path they will surely fall" Jinny really didnt know what to say, but she knew he was right, she just wasnt going to let herself admit that though. She was preety much speechless until she said,"Can I go now?" after he had given a phone to her father and 2 week suspenion. Jinny started to walk home and on her way home she was passing the gym fields. The boys in her grade were in gym right now-which included teddy(sigh...). Just then a baseball rolled towards her feet and jogging towards her was Teddy. He said hey and asked her if she was going to be at Mike DeLorenzo's(CD's fictional older brother) party on friday after the baseball game and she told him that she would see him there. She left school feeling happy, yet depressed and had a terrible feeling in her stomach when she arrived home... ------------------ Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!" Thoedore: "Why?" Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend.... "one time at band camp..."-American Pie "im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality |
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AWESOME! More... and soon, please?
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Zim
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Why did you stop?!?!? Don't do this to me!!
------------------ Luff, NmRoX [But you can just call me Jinny Exstead] JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!! On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! ![]() Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic. Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!! Teddy: Jinny, my God. Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter. Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon |
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