Mine and NancyJonJinny's Fan-Fic

[WildChildJinny]

OK This is my first shot at writing a fan-fic so I hope that you enjoy!

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Scene 1: Outside Jinny's apartment. Jinny and Teddy had just come back from their date.

Jinny: Can't you stay? ( in a whining kind of tone)
Teddy: Sorry Jin, I don't think that I can.
Jinny: How can I change your mind? ( Jinny smirks.She opens the door to her apartment and walks in but Teddy is still out in the hall.)
Teddy: You can't, I'm sorry but... ( He gets inturrupted when Jinny starts kissing him)
Jinny: You sure you can't stay? (She starts to kiss Teddy again)
Teddy: No Jin, (she kisses him) sorry...(again she kisses him) Well...maybe for a little bit.
Jinny smiles, pulls him inside from out in the hall, kisses him and then she shuts the door.

Scene 2: Next day at the Station,

Magda notices Jinny's smile and walks over to her.
Madga: So Jinny what's with the smile?
Jinny: Teddy spent the night last night.
Magda laughs) Yup that'll do it every time!

Just then Kate walks out of her office.
Kate: Okay, cases people. Ramerize,(sp?) Exstead I got a special case just for you two.

OK, sorry I'm stuck on ideas for the case so here you go!

[This message has been edited by WildChildJinny (edited 05-28-2001).]

[Jinny_Extead]

great job so far.. keep up the great work!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[NancyJoJinny]

Hehe. Oh BTW its Ramirez.

Jinny: *sarcastically* Oh Joy! And may i ask? What is this special little case you have picked out for us?
Kate: Dont get all sarcastic with me! iLL STICK YOU WITH ANOTHER DOG CASE!
Jinny: Ok! Ok, ill be nice. *smiles*
Kate: Thank you.
Magda: So what is this special case you picked out for us?
Kate: Bar fight, 2 people were shot and killed. Bar tender and a guy known only as, Bob.
Jinny: Oh no. Wait when did this happen?
Kate: Last night.
Jinny: Oh damn! I missed all the action. It was at the Anchorside right?
Kate: Yup. well no offense Jin, but you know pretty much everybody who goes there, so i though you would be the best choice for this assignment.
Jinny: None taken. Well, come on Mag, lets go investigate this whole nasty incedent!
Magda: Alright.

*Scene 3 Anchorside*

*talking too witnesses*

Magda: Were you here when the fight took place?
Lisa: Yeah, well outside but i saw the whole thing.
Jinny: Uhhh... Could you tell us what happened?
Lisa: Its simple, this guy was drunk, and he started arguing with the bartender, when he tried too kick him out the bob guy pushed him into somebody then everybody started hitting everybody and when shots were fired, people ran out here.
Jinny: Recognize any of them?
Lisa: My friends were here.
Magda: Names?
Lisa: Shannon Benson, Frank Caruso, and Chelsea Keegan.
Jinny: Thanks.

Your turn!


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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[WildChildJinny]

Uh Oh this is gonna suck cuz I have no clue what to write but w/e so here goes...

Scene 4: Back at the Station

Kate: So how's the case going?
Magda: We got three witnesses that we need to get a statement from.
Kate" Well what's stopping you? Get back out there and find them.
Madga: Come on Jinny you heard the captain let's go.
Jinny lost in thought but then comes back ot earth(lol) Huh? Oh, OK let's go.
Magda: Jin what's up? You've been acting weird since we left the bar.
Jinny: It's just that one of the witnesses, Frank Caruso.... well, his name sounds really familiar.

Scene 5: Outside Shannon Benson's house.

Madga knocks on the door and Shannon answers.
Jinny: Are you Shannon Benson?
Shannon: Yes. Why?
Jinny: I'm Inspector Exstead and this is my partner, Inspector Ramirez, we're here to ask you a few questions about what happened at the Anchorside Bar last night.
Shannon: (she looks sort of scared) Um.. sure come in. (She opens the door and Magda and Jinny go inside)

K here you go...

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[NancyJoJinny]

Just for the sake of it, i shall add a physical description of Shannon Benson- 5', Blond, Skinny. Now back too the story.

Magda: We understand that you were at the Anchorside when the fight took place.
Shannon: Yeah... Umm, i was there.
Jinny: Just describe what happened please?
Shannon: Well... What i can remember, i was kind of drunk. But there was this guy, him and the bartender were arguing and a fight broke out. Then shots went off and... I blacked out.
Magda: Do you know who fired the shots?
Shannon: No... I dont know the guy who was fighting with the bartender. If that is who shot him.
Jinny: You seem a little nervose? And you dont look 21.
Shannon: Ok.. Your cops questioning me about the bar i was in and im only 18. And have you ever had too witness something like that?
Magda: Thatle be all for now. If you have ne additional information call(hands her card)
Shannon: Thanks.

***Outside Frank Carusos Apartment***

Jinny: This place is awfull familiar. OMG!!! I know this guy!
Magda: You do?
Jinny: I slept with him 5 months ago.
Magda: Figures.

Your turn.



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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[ISmellFine]

Hahha!!! This is t=really good!!! post more!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon

Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

[WildChildJinny]

I was thinking the same thing, of course she would've slept w/ him! lol.

Magda starts to walk up the stairs to Frank's apartment but then she notices that Jinny is not behind her.
Magda: Come on Jinny, what's wrong?
Jinny: What do think is wrong?!?! I don't wanna see him again it's too weird.
Magda: Jinny shut up and follow me.
Jinny sighs gives in and she follows Magda up the stairs. Magda knocks on the door but no1 answers so she knocks again.
Magda: Open up it's the police.
The door slowly opens and Frank sticks his head out.
Magda: You Frank Caruso? I'm Inspector Ramireze and we need to talk. Oh, this is my partner Jin..(Magda looks behind her and again Jinny isn't behind her. Jinny then slowly walks up the stairs and then walks to the door)
Frank: Jinny?
Jinny: Ya hi, now back to business Magda and I are here to ask you a few questions about what happened last night at Anchorside, so can we come in?
They walk in his apartment.

Outside Frank's building

Jinny: OK that was too weird, when I dump a guy I plan never to see them again.
Magda: Well that didn't work this time but Jinny come on we got our statement so lets go.
Jinny: Ya sure, OH ****!
Magda: What?
Jinny: I forgot my notebook ( you know how police write stuff down all the time in those little book things? But w/e I just made that up does it make ne sense?) in Frank's apartment, I'll be right back.

Jinny runs up the stairs and is about to knock on the door but it opens be4 she can.
Frank: Well, well Jinny it's been a long time hasn't it?
Jinny: Look, I forgot my notebook so can I just grab it and go?
Frank: I don't think so (Frank puts his hand over Jinny's mouth and pulls her inside his apartment)

OK did the last part make sense I know that Jinny is like a black belt and cccould have easily kicked Frank's butt, she didn't here but w/e if you think that this section sucks you can write over it!



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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[NancyJoJinny]

Lets say frank was a black belt too... And he was one of those macho guys and Jinny couldnt beat him.

***Outside Building 20 mins later***

Magda: (Cell phone rings) Ramirez?
Captain: Anything?
Magda: No... Jinny knows one of the guys and she left her little pad up there... Went too get it and never came back.
Captain: Whats the guys name
Magda: Frank Caruso.
Captain: R U sure?
Magda: Yeah!
Captain: Hes a convicted rapist.
Magda: WHAT!!??
Captain: Get up there.
Magda: Bye. *hangs up*(mumbles into air) Frank, you mess with Jinny... You mess with me.

***In his apartment, Jinnys not in the same room***

Magda: *runs in* Where is Jinny?
Frank: She aint here.
Magda: Dont lie. Shes here... Did you hurt her?
Frank: Hhehe... It doesnt matter. She deserved everything!
Magda: Where is she?
Frank: In there *poins too room*

***In room***

Magda: Jinny?
Jinny: *shirts all buttoned up wrong, hairs screwed up... Looks fairly beat up.* Mag?
Magda: OMG what did he do?
Jinny: He raped me... That SOB!!
Magda: Im calling 911.
Jinny: Be my guest

Ur turn!



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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[WildChildJinny]

Jinny: Mgada. You gonna call 911?
Magda: Didn't I just say that?
Jinny: Ya, but..uh.. we're cops!
Magda: Oh ya, right.
(Magda and Jinny walk out of the room and Jinny grabs Frank's hands and puts them behing his back but he starts moving around and making it hard for Jinny to hold him still enough to get the handcuffs on him)
Jinny: Uh Magda call for backup and hurry now!
Magda: (calls the station) OK, this is Magda Ramirize I'm at 915 High Street apartment 12 I need backup NOW!

Sorry I g2g but I'll be back to post more as soon as I can!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[NancyJoJinny]

Guy gets away from jinny and runs out the door.

Jinny: FOLLOW HIM!!!!!! *starts too go but stops* My stomach is killing me.
Magda: You need a doctor.
Jinny: NO! Get the guy and arrest him! Ill get a doctor later this is more important!
Magda: Are you sure?
Jinny: Hurry hes getting away!! *sirens outside, Magda watches out a window as 2 big cops arrest him*
Magda: Not anymore.
Jinny: Thank you god!
Magda: Now come on... Im takeing you too the hospital.
Jinny: Really im... ok.
Magda: I dont care... I want to make sure your OK. Come on.
Jinny: *sighs* Im fine now. But if it will make you happy!
Magda: Thank you im happy now.

Your turn.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[WildChildJinny]

At the Hospital:

(Jinny was in with a doctor. Magda had called Teddy and now both of them were in the waiting room wating for news on Jinny)
Teddy: I can't believe what that SOB did to her.
Magda: Teddy, calm down everything's fine and don't worry the doctor will tell us what's wrong with Jinny.
(Kate, CD and Angela come in)
Kate: How is she?
Magda: We don't know she's in there right now.
Angela: Oh God, how come in her life she deals with so many obstacles and bad things?
(But just then the doctor comes up)
Dr: Exstead?
Everyone: YES!
Dr: Big crowd, well we had to run a few tests on her but....
Teddy: What kind of tests?
Dr: Well she was raped so pregnancy tests, AIDs and HIV tests and stuf like that.
Magda: Well how is she?
Dr: I'm afraid she's sort of not herself. We gave her some news that she didn't want to hear.
Teddy: WHAT? WHAT NEWS? WHAT IS WRONG WITH JINNY?
Kate: Teddy, SHUT the H*** UP and let the doctor talk!
Dr:Thanks. Sir, Ms. Exstead is.....

HAHA Ok your turn..

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[Teddys_Angel_Jinny]

AAHHH! You can't stop there! It should be illegal. I'll arrest you (lil Angela head motion thingy.) This is awesome though!

[Jinny_Extead]

Ahhh... you're killing me.... it should be illegal just to leave someone hanging there like that! LOL... anyways it's great so keep going!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[NancyJoJinny]

Well... If you look at the grammer.. Theres only one possibility that could fit with the word "is". So she didnt leave you in that much suspese... Holy.. Im overanalyzing here!!!! Nevermind... Im a know it all.

Teddy: WHAT?
Dr: OMG do you ever shut up?
Teddy: Im sorry now get on with it!
Dr: Thankyou Theodore.
Teddy: U know my name?
Dr: Let me finish. Shes pregnant.
Teddy: O.... Ok.. Im gonna go die now.
Angela: How far along?
Dr: 2 months.
Teddy: That means its... mine? O boy.
Dr: Yeah. You can see her now. I think it would be a good idea if the Daddy goes first.

*** Room 24(my luckey #)***

Teddy: How you feeling?
Jinny: Uh... Fine I guesse.
Teddy: The, uh, doctor talked too us.
Jinny: Im assuming she told you im pregnant?
Teddy: Yeah.
Jinny: Its yours.
Teddy: I know.
Jinny: What do you want too do about it?
Teddy: Keep it! Abortion is just mean, killing an innocent child!
Jinny: Calm down! Geez! I wasnt planning on one anyway!

Your turn.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[Jinny_Extead]

Sorry for saying you were leaving me in suspense.... I didn't realize since there was a "is" it had to be that she IS pregnant... I mean you could've said, she IS dying... well you know what I mean! Anyway your story is great so keep it up and I'll work on my grammer okay.

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.