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Old 06-16-2001, 10:08 PM   #1
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This is kinda a seqeul to last sundays eppie.

It starts the next morning and this is a FAN FIC, so lets just say Jinny got sober real fast.

Jinny walked into The Division looking both tired and depressed. She went and sat down
at her desk and put her face in her hands. *Why... Why Did I do that?* she kept repeating
in her head. The captain walked out of her office. “CD, Angela, we’ve got the body of a
young girl found on Maple and 3rd get on it now.” she said handing CD a folder. CD and
Angela headed out the door. “Jinny, Magda, there was a man found dead, in a dumpster,
on Gwen Drive.” “OK Captain.” Magda said, Jinny didn’t look up. The Captain went
into her office. “Hello?, We’ve got a case Jinny..” Magda said taping Jinny on the
shoulder. “Oh, Yeah, Right, Sorry.” Jinny said really fast. Magda gave her a weird look
and they left.

CD and Angela arrived at the shooting scene a small park. Steve was standing over the
body of a girl, about eleven or twelve. After studying it for a minute CD asked, “ How
long?” “Days..” Steven said, shaking his head.. “One gun shot wound to the lower back..”
He said pointing out the area. “Thanks Stave.” CD said. “We’ll Check the missing
persons files back at the office first.” “Do I get any say I this at all?” Angela asked
although CD and her had become friends she still hated the was CD ran EVERYTHING.
“OK, we’ll do it your way. What should we do ‘general’?” CD asked saluting Angela.
“Well.. “ She opened her mouth to say something and then stopped herself. “Guess we
should check the missing persons files shouldn’t we?” CD just grinned and they got into
the car.

Magda and Jinny stood at the crime, "Wallet says John Hanley, 28, any evidence over
there?”Magda asked and looked at Jinny. “Jinny.. Hello?” “What!?” Jinny said startled.
Magda pulled Jinny over to the side. “Spill it.” she demanded. Jinny stared at her for a
moment and then looked away. “Come on Jin, what’s wrong?” Jinny sighed “ You know
I had dinner with Teddy’s parents..” (Magda nods.)
“Let’s just say it didn’t go so well..” Jinny put her head down.
“What happened ?”
“I had to much to drink and..” Magda interrupted her.
“Jinny! Don’t you think this has gone to far?”
“What Has!?” Jinny asked not liking were this conversation was going.

“Your...” Magda really didn’t want to hurt Jinny’s feelings.
“Problem?” Jinny said with a sassy tone in her voice.
Magda just looked down.
“I don’t have a problem.! I get a alittle drunk sometimes! No big Deal!”
“Your ruining your relationship with Teddy!” ”G-D Jinny he loves you so much, and you
love him.. Your face lights up everytime you talk about him.”
“Can we get back to work. This is my business!”
Magda looked down.
“Fine, Jinny.”

MORE?

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From the musical "Gypsy"

Rose: Herbie he he he! He tried too-

Herbie: Again?

Rose: Herbie, don't your DARE apoligize to him!

Baby June: Honesly Louise!

Baby Louise: Mama, how come I have four fathers?
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He's a horses ass, but he's got a point.~Jinny

Teddy: I don't like this.

Jinny: I know but I like you.
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I'm not A bitch I'm THE Bitch and that's MISS bitch to you!

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Old 06-16-2001, 10:14 PM   #2
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great, post more soon

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality
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Old 06-16-2001, 10:20 PM   #3
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This is good! Post more soon.

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Tiffany

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

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Old 06-16-2001, 10:49 PM   #4
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Lets shorten up those signatures ok???? Thanx!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!
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Old 06-16-2001, 10:57 PM   #5
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This Rox!!! Can't wait for more!

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)
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Old 06-16-2001, 11:48 PM   #6
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I'd difinately like to read more of this story!
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Old 06-17-2001, 09:20 AM   #7
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More!!!! Hahahahahahahaha! Muahahahahahahahaha! I don't know why I just did that, good fanfics get me re-energyerized.

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

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Old 06-17-2001, 12:15 PM   #8
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Thanx for the compliments. Here's more.

Note: I don't know how much of this stuff really cops would do.


CD and Angela were sitting at CD’s desk looking at the computer, when CD’s phone
rang. “S.F.P.D, Delerenzo,Really? OK. Fine. Thanks Steven” CD hung up the phone.
Autopsy reveals she’s been raped. Angela shook her head and they went back to the
computer. “ I think we’ve got a match!,Amanda Sublosa, red hair,green eyes, reported
missing four days ago.” CD said writing down the phone number of the girls family.
“Great, lets call them and see if they can identify the body.” Angela said getting up.

Magda and Jinny walked up to the broken down apartment, and knocked on the door. A
lady late 20’s comes to the door. “Hello, I’m Inspector Ramirez, this is Inspector
Exstead”- Magda started “What’s this about!?” the lady said starting to panic. “ Do you
know a Mr.John Hanley?” Magda asked “He’s my fiancé.” the lady said. “I’m afraid we
have some bad news, he was found dead this morning.” Magda said she hated having to
do that. The lady teared up, “Oh my god..” “We’re very sorry, may we come in? We have
a few questions for you.” The lady didn’t say anything she just let them in.


CD hung up the phone, and looked at Angela, “ They want to meet us at one, we can go
get lunch and then go straight to the morgue..” “I was suppose to meet Daniel, but I don’t
think I’ll have time. Can we stop by my house so I can tell him.Angela asked “Can’t you
call him?” CD asked. “I could but he’s going to be upset as it is I’d rather apologize to
him in person.” They both got there coats and headed out the door.

“Is there anyone who would have wanted to hurt you fiancé?” Magda asked as she sat on
the couch. “No, he was... So kind and-” the lady was interrupted by Magda’s cell phone
ringing. “Remirez. Great! OK We’ll be right down”

Sorry that was kinda boring, and sorry for the typo's I couldn't spell to save my life I'll post more later but it's hard for me to concentrate right now, I just found out I was cast in a show I auditioned for months ago so I'm boncing off the walls
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Old 06-18-2001, 04:27 PM   #9
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Hey, this rules. What show? I audition for a lot of shows...never get the funny parts I try for! Always the sad parts. HEHE

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)
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Old 06-18-2001, 06:47 PM   #10
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I LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
it post more soon;o)

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

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Old 06-29-2001, 04:38 PM   #11
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Sorry I havn't posted more.

Do you guys want me to post it in more parts or finnish it all and then post it?

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From the musical "Gypsy"

Rose: Herbie he he he! He tried too-

Herbie: Again?

Rose: Herbie, don't your DARE apoligize to him!

Baby June: Honesly Louise!

Baby Louise: Mama, how come I have four fathers?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

He's a horses ass, but he's got a point.~Jinny

Teddy: I don't like this.

Jinny: I know but I like you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm not A bitch I'm THE Bitch and that's MISS bitch to you!

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Don't really care, I just want more!!!!!

What shows do you audition for???????

I am in parts for my comunity play house, I get to teach an acting class there and I'm only 12 well in six months I'll be 13 so I usually say I'm 13! LOL!

Well I got to go. The class I teach starts in five minutes, CRAP I'M GONNA BE LATE.
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Old 06-29-2001, 10:42 PM   #13
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wow i just had a great day/night, so please post more and good luck with trying out for those shows!

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Old 06-29-2001, 11:27 PM   #14
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Originally posted by Hug-A-Tree:
Don't really care, I just want more!!!!!

What shows do you audition for???????

I am in parts for my comunity play house, I get to teach an acting class there and I'm only 12 well in six months I'll be 13 so I usually say I'm 13! LOL!

Well I got to go. The class I teach starts in five minutes, CRAP I'M GONNA BE LATE.
Ummm My current stuff..

I'm a counsler at a theater camp.

I'm Rizzo in Grease.

I'm Anne in Anne Of Green Gables

I just got a the part of Dinah in "High Society" (SP?)

PLUS

I'm doing two indepentend films

and

I just finnished a commersial.

Hey you asked! LOL All of the actors on here: NEVER BITE OFF MORE THEN YOU CAN CHEW! I'm doing so much right now I'm barely home I leave my computer on the internet so I can run home get a drink check my email and leave to my next activity. Plus I ice skate play the piano and take voice lessons all the time.

I'm really excited I just joined SAG (Screen Actors Guild.) I get to celebrate tommorow. Hopefully I'll get more of this done tommorow. It's really hard to wright with everything on my mind.
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:::SCREAMS!!!!::: AAAAAHHHHH!!!!! You're my kindred spirit! Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver... Why, you ask?
1. You're Anne in AOGG
2. You take voice lessons
3. You take piano lessons

Just tell me you like basketball, we'll be total kindred spirits!!! What kind of commercial, which films? I really wanna act, but my scedule's so busy I can't even be in drama clinic at school... Email me some time, PLEASE!!! This story is soooooo good! I can imagine it as a real ep! T2YL, hopefully!

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