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Jinny sighed and plopped down on the bed. "Everything all right?" Teddy asked worried. "Yeah, yeah. Fine and dandy," She smiled, "Just had a long day at work." "Oh," Teddy said quite relieved. "See, we had this homicide case, only it turned out to be suicide. A lady turned herself in for homicide of the man by giving him drugs, later we found a suicide note in the guy’s apartment explaining it all. Turns out the lady just wanted to get away from her husband and children. They were driving her up the wall," Jinny chuckled. Teddy laughed, "She really wanted to get away from home that bad? There's easier ways to do that.. You sure she was completely sober?" Jinny laughed and turned off the light.
The next day Jinny had off work. She thought she would do a bit of shopping. As she walked out of Leather N' Nice she saw what she least expected to ever see. Her heart was broken. She didn’t stick around to see any more of this. She could feel her heart pounding as her feet hit the pavement. Finally she stopped, in an alley. She stood by a wall, slid down, and began crying her heart out. Why? How could he do that?! That SOB, I trusted him! He told me he loved me… - Sorry, I had to edit it. I HATED it!! ![]() [This message has been edited by Jo_Polniaczek (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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O yea keep it rollin baby!!!!!!!!!!
------------------ (After the fake motorcycle accident) Jo:My head hurtz a lil Nat: A Concusion!!!!!! Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing! Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw! |
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MORE!!!!!!!
O R E!!!!!!! ------------------ Jinny:This Is Who I am. *YeeHaw!* |
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YES! Please continue! Its great so far.
------------------ ²Tiffany² Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night? Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean. Teddy: Come on, Jinny. Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress. Teddy: You did? Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it. Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic. Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway? Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do? Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents! Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!! Teddy: Jinny, my God. Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names. Teddy: Stop. Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!...It doesnt change anything...Yea thats what I thought. A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE! ~Jo Polniaczek IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan |
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keep it goin!
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She sat there, just crying for a while. “Jinny, thank God I found you! I came to tell you it wasn’t me fault. See-,” and with that, Jinny cut him off. “I don’t really care! You let me down! And to think I actually loved you!” Jinny glared. “I shouldn’t have loved you in the first place! This is why I was afraid to get so close.” Teddy tried to speak again. “Teddy, look, just nevermind! Nevermind about the whole thing! Pretend this whole relationship never happened!” Again, she didn’t stick around.
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Join Date: Dec 21, 2000
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LA, get on and write more soon!
Are ya gonna put the root beer thing??? :P I would if I were you, that'd get a lot of laughs!------------------ I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me! Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful! I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob! ~*Danielle*~ <3 y'all! |
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Its GREAT! Post more soon. K.
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D, don't have a cow!! We wouldn't wanna see one in the middle of the floor now, would we? I'm kinda stuck.. hehe, I dunno what to write. I only wrote a bit last night so I'll post it. (I hope you guys don't mind this being in itty bitty peices. LOL)
Warning: This peice of the fic does include some swearing. (I just thought I'd let ya know, so I don't get complaints, hehe) Damn, that Teddy… Why the hell would he do that? I really did love him! Jinny sighed. Damnit! Why did I choose him to love? There’s plenty of other choices.. Although I have to admit.. He was pretty good. Aww, hell with this! I gotta take a walk. She just walked, and walked.. Finally, she reached her destination. She sat down at the stool. “Eh, Sean. Gimme the usual..,” she said smiling. Again, I'm sorry.. I'm trying to get un-blocked. (Do ya think mountain dew un-blocks ya? Oh well, I'll try it anyways.. )
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youre RAD <3<3
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Please post more!!
------------------ !~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'* Check out my Division Website! http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001 "My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals. |
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ditto
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Well maybe we DO mind it being in little bitty pieces!!! {:> Hey, why wouldn't you talk to me at 5:32, 6:32 your time? Was it Daniel again??? Gr... And don't say, "Don't grr..., be happy!" (To y'all other peepz: she actually said that to me once, can you believe it???) Oh, do the root beer thing, PLZ!!!!!! That'll be hilarious!!! KO, 'nuff talkin, y'all. Adios, mi chicas!
------------------ I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me! *¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ * <3 ya!
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