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Nancy McKeon is my idol!! · 04-16-2001, 05:01 PM

This is my first fan fic. Please read.

JJ · 04-16-2001, 06:45 PM

You didn't post anything

Wild Child · 04-16-2001, 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by JJ:
You didn't post anything

LOL....that might help.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!! · 04-16-2001, 07:14 PM

Captain: Okay assignments , Jinny & Madga there is a mad rapiest running around Los Angeles. ( hands them a folder)

Madga: So Jin, its looks like the last victim was a 24 year old woman. Her name was Elena.

J- Hey she lives just a couple of blocks away from me!Lets go visit her. Err.. question.

M- okay come on.

( At elena's house)

j- so tell me what happened.
E- I can't ( sniffle) It happened too fast! IT WAS HORRIBLE!!
M can you describe the guy?
E- Umm.. Brown hair, muscular. I rea;;y can't tell you too much, I"m sorry.
J- that's okay we understand. whispers to Madga, we'll come back later.

M- okay. They leave.

( 3 days later)

J- okay I talked to the other victums, they all seem to bee young and around 30. Most live around my neighborhood. I 've gootten a list of possible suspects.
M- Lets bring them in.

( Later)

J- Elena which guy is he?
E- I don't really know , let me get a closer look.
M- well...
E- Number 3
J- u sure?
E- positive.
M- Number 3 please state yourname.

Gots o go

Jo's Girl · 04-17-2001, 07:11 PM

Gr8!!

Wild Child · 04-18-2001, 10:51 AM

This is good!Keep it going.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!! · 04-18-2001, 04:18 PM

Okay

M- where's Jinny?
C- I dunno, probably drunk again!
M- maybe...
Bring( phone) Madga picks up
M- hello?
J- Madga? ( Whispers)
M- JInny?! Where are you?
J- I'm at home, I think the suspect to our rape case was just here and he...
M- he WHAT?! JIN TELL ME!!
J- he raped me! Oh Madga it was horrible!!
M- Oh my god Jinny! I"m coming over right now, I've got to get you to the hospital, what if he had HIV? OH MY GOSH!
J- hurry please..( jinny hangs up)( Madga can hear her crying.
Madga grabs her jacket and heads out the door.
c-Madga where do you think you're going?
M- Captain, come here ( whispers, Jinny was raped by the guy that was our suspect for our rape case!)
C- OH my gosh.. go get her to the hospital, what if he had..
M- THat;s what I thought!

Jinnys house.
Madga walks in and sees Jinny hunched over her bed with a towel over her crying.

M- JINNY!
J- Madga I"m so scared. ( say between sobs.)
M- lets get you to the hospital.
J- NO I don't want to.
M- NOW!!! Madga pulls JInny up and throws some clothes on her then picks her up and puts her in the car.
At the hospital

Doctor_ Are you with Jinny Exstead?
M- Yes anything on her?
D- she doesn't know yet but I"m afraid that she's...

Got to go!!!!!!

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¤Li§Ä¤

Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com

Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Have any of you written her a letter?

I did, still haven't gotten a reply!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

Jo's Girl · 04-18-2001, 05:50 PM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Would u hurry this is awesome!!! Please!!

[This message has been edited by Jo's Girl (edited 04-18-2001).]

NancyJoJinny · 04-18-2001, 08:36 PM

(crying hysterically) MORE PLEASE!??!?!?!?!

Wild Child · 04-18-2001, 08:58 PM

Aww did ya have to stop there?

Well,this is going really good.Keep it up! Hope you can get more posted soon.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!! · 04-19-2001, 06:52 PM

Dr. She's pregnet
M- oh my gosh!Have you told her?
D- Yes, I told her just a while ago, I suggest you go talk to her.
M- okay, I will, is there a phone somewhere her? I need to call her boyfriend.
D- just down the hall.
M- thankx
Magda calls Teddy, he says he'll be down right away.Then she waslks into Jinny's room

M- Jinny? Are you okay?
J- OKAY?!!I have some guys baby! I don't even know the freak!!
M- well you can always have a abortion!
J- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!!!!I ain't killing some innocent baby!
M- I was just suggesting.
Teddy walks into theroom
Teddy- JInny! Honey are you okay?
Jinny starts to bawl loudly.
Teddy- Jinny I have something to tell you.
J- what?

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¤Li§Ä¤

Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com

Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Have any of you written her a letter?

I did, still haven't gotten a reply!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

NancyJoJinny · 04-19-2001, 07:09 PM

You wanna kill me dont ya???? MORE PLEASE!

Jo's Girl · 04-20-2001, 08:45 AM

Come on are u trying to kill us or somthin?

nancysbiggestfan · 04-20-2001, 10:03 AM

You gotta keep goin. if you dont you are going to kill me. This is great!!!!

PLEASE DONT KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nancysbiggestfan

BlairW_1 · 04-21-2001, 06:21 PM

I'm DYING!!! Please post more soon!

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From Lisa Whelchel's book, "Creative Corrections"

"The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good." Proverbs 15:3

"Give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Jesus Christ." 1 Thessalonians 5:18

"A gossip betrays a confidence; so avoid a man who talks too much." Proverbs 20:19

~*^Danielle^*~
LYLAS/LYLAB!

E-mail me at Basketbaiichick@aol.com, BlairWarner33@yahoo.com, BlairWarner@gurlmail.com, MagdaRamirez1@AIM, or Magda_Ramirez_033@hotmail.com

04-16-2001, 05:01 PM	#1
Nancy McKeon is my idol!! Nancy McKeon Wannabe Senior Member Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: At my house, or anywhere, obsessing over Nancy McKeon Posts: 1,213	Help Me!( fan fic) This is my first fan fic. Please read.

04-16-2001, 06:45 PM	#2
JJ Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 14, 2001 Posts: 123	You didn't post anything

04-16-2001, 07:14 PM	#4
Nancy McKeon is my idol!! Nancy McKeon Wannabe Senior Member Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: At my house, or anywhere, obsessing over Nancy McKeon Posts: 1,213	Captain: Okay assignments , Jinny & Madga there is a mad rapiest running around Los Angeles. ( hands them a folder) Madga: So Jin, its looks like the last victim was a 24 year old woman. Her name was Elena. J- Hey she lives just a couple of blocks away from me!Lets go visit her. Err.. question. M- okay come on. ( At elena's house) j- so tell me what happened. E- I can't ( sniffle) It happened too fast! IT WAS HORRIBLE!! M can you describe the guy? E- Umm.. Brown hair, muscular. I rea;;y can't tell you too much, I"m sorry. J- that's okay we understand. whispers to Madga, we'll come back later. M- okay. They leave. ( 3 days later) J- okay I talked to the other victums, they all seem to bee young and around 30. Most live around my neighborhood. I 've gootten a list of possible suspects. M- Lets bring them in. ( Later) J- Elena which guy is he? E- I don't really know , let me get a closer look. M- well... E- Number 3 J- u sure? E- positive. M- Number 3 please state yourname. Gots o go

04-17-2001, 07:11 PM	#5
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	Gr8!!

04-18-2001, 10:51 AM	#6
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	This is good!Keep it going. ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

04-18-2001, 04:18 PM	#7
Nancy McKeon is my idol!! Nancy McKeon Wannabe Senior Member Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: At my house, or anywhere, obsessing over Nancy McKeon Posts: 1,213	Okay M- where's Jinny? C- I dunno, probably drunk again! M- maybe... Bring( phone) Madga picks up M- hello? J- Madga? ( Whispers) M- JInny?! Where are you? J- I'm at home, I think the suspect to our rape case was just here and he... M- he WHAT?! JIN TELL ME!! J- he raped me! Oh Madga it was horrible!! M- Oh my god Jinny! I"m coming over right now, I've got to get you to the hospital, what if he had HIV? OH MY GOSH! J- hurry please..( jinny hangs up)( Madga can hear her crying. Madga grabs her jacket and heads out the door. c-Madga where do you think you're going? M- Captain, come here ( whispers, Jinny was raped by the guy that was our suspect for our rape case!) C- OH my gosh.. go get her to the hospital, what if he had.. M- THat;s what I thought! Jinnys house. Madga walks in and sees Jinny hunched over her bed with a towel over her crying. M- JINNY! J- Madga I"m so scared. ( say between sobs.) M- lets get you to the hospital. J- NO I don't want to. M- NOW!!! Madga pulls JInny up and throws some clothes on her then picks her up and puts her in the car. At the hospital Doctor_ Are you with Jinny Exstead? M- Yes anything on her? D- she doesn't know yet but I"m afraid that she's... Got to go!!!!!! ------------------ ¤Li§Ä¤ Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!! Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!! Have any of you written her a letter? I did, still haven't gotten a reply! Please visit my web page; www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

04-18-2001, 05:50 PM	#8
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Would u hurry this is awesome!!! Please!! [This message has been edited by Jo's Girl (edited 04-18-2001).]

04-18-2001, 08:36 PM	#9
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	(crying hysterically) MORE PLEASE!??!?!?!?!

04-18-2001, 08:58 PM	#10
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	Aww did ya have to stop there? Well,this is going really good.Keep it up! Hope you can get more posted soon. ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

04-19-2001, 06:52 PM	#11
Nancy McKeon is my idol!! Nancy McKeon Wannabe Senior Member Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: At my house, or anywhere, obsessing over Nancy McKeon Posts: 1,213	Dr. She's pregnet M- oh my gosh!Have you told her? D- Yes, I told her just a while ago, I suggest you go talk to her. M- okay, I will, is there a phone somewhere her? I need to call her boyfriend. D- just down the hall. M- thankx Magda calls Teddy, he says he'll be down right away.Then she waslks into Jinny's room M- Jinny? Are you okay? J- OKAY?!!I have some guys baby! I don't even know the freak!! M- well you can always have a abortion! J- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!!!!I ain't killing some innocent baby! M- I was just suggesting. Teddy walks into theroom Teddy- JInny! Honey are you okay? Jinny starts to bawl loudly. Teddy- Jinny I have something to tell you. J- what? ------------------ ¤Li§Ä¤ Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!! Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!! Have any of you written her a letter? I did, still haven't gotten a reply! Please visit my web page; www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

04-19-2001, 07:09 PM	#12
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	You wanna kill me dont ya???? MORE PLEASE!

04-20-2001, 08:45 AM	#13
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	Come on are u trying to kill us or somthin?

04-20-2001, 10:03 AM	#14
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	You gotta keep goin. if you dont you are going to kill me. This is great!!!! PLEASE DONT KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! ------------------ nancysbiggestfan

04-21-2001, 06:21 PM	#15
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	I'm DYING!!! Please post more soon! ------------------ From Lisa Whelchel's book, "Creative Corrections" "The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good." Proverbs 15:3 "Give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Jesus Christ." 1 Thessalonians 5:18 "A gossip betrays a confidence; so avoid a man who talks too much." Proverbs 20:19 ~^Danielle^~ LYLAS/LYLAB! E-mail me at Basketbaiichick@aol.com, BlairWarner33@yahoo.com, BlairWarner@gurlmail.com, MagdaRamirez1@AIM, or Magda_Ramirez_033@hotmail.com