(fan fic) Problem Child....Problem sister??? Just a damn Problem! - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

NancyJoJinny · 05-08-2001, 11:10 PM

I know i have others open but i can do them all!

"Uhhh... Hi." A girl about 13, 5'6" walked into the division. "Can i help you with something?" Jinny said as she sipped on her coffe. "Umm... Maybe... Im looking for my sister, i think she works here but i dont know what department" She looks like me Jinny thought to herself "Whats her name?" "Its, Jacky or Jessy, or Jenny... Jinny... Thats it Jinny Exstead. Do you know her?" Jinny choked on her coffe "Me... thats me... Who are you???" The girl looked shocked, and it took her a second to speak up "D...Dana(hahaha!) Exsted. Wow... were sisters??? We look alike." Jinny didnt understand how she could have a sister and not know. "Yeah... I was thinking the same thing." They stood in silence for a few seconds, CD angela and Magda all came through the door. "Hey Jin..." Magda waved "Whos the kid?" " SHes my sister." Magdas eyes widened. "Sister??? you know you guys look alike." Dana smiled a little, " I know." She looked jinny over "Do you eat?" "What?" Jinny wasnt exactly sure what she meant by that. "Your a stick!" she replied " Your what??? 5'6"??? You must only weigh like 110!" Jinny liked hearing that " Thanks... No matter what i eat i dont gain weight... WHere are you from?" Dana shifted around. "Jersey.... This place is much more fun... But the bars there are fun too." "What!?!" Jinny exclaimed "Bars... you what 14..." Dana felt the need to correct her "im 13" Jinny was annyed at this " 13... you cant go to bars" "Ehhm... Lets just drop is shall we? Look if you can get the day off... we need to talk" Jinny glanced into kates office and saw her talking to the DA. "Yeah lets go."

***Back at jinnys apartment***

Jinny unlocked her door and Dana just pushed on by and walked over to an open beer bottle on the coffe table. "Nice" She said as she picked it up. Realizing there was a little left she drank it and threw it into the trash. " Hey, Kid you cant drink that!" Dana rubbed her eyes "Too late i already did." Jinny picked up a bottle of liquor and stuck it in her room. Dana leaned in too see what it was. "Whats that?"
Jinny looked up at her as the bottles cliked together "Everything... But i am the only one here who can drink it!" Dana walked out. "Great!" SHe called from the other room. she looked in jinnys fridge and viewed the bottles. "Geezus woman how much do you drink!?!?!" Jinny came in and closed the refridgerator door "Not... that much." Dana laughed and then shut up. Jinny thought for a few seconds then decided to ask. " How can you be my sister anyway?" Dana just glaered "I thought you caould tell me... Mommy was single when she had me and deid when i was 2 1/2... You had no idea i was around?" " None! Im still in shock" Dana sneezed but Jinny just turned around and said nothing... And Dana didnt really give, They were so alike. Jinny sat down on the couch and Dana followed her and sat down. It took jinny about 12 seconds before she got up, got a beer and sat down. Dana bit her lip. "Can i have a sip?" Jinny raised one eyebrow. "Are you kidding? NO!" Dana leaned back "Ok,ok sorry! You are way too over protective of your beer!" Jinny took a big sip and dana just watched her. Jinny finished it off and got 2 more. She kept them far away from dana.

***About 1 hour later***

Jinny had drank qute a bit. Dana thought it was funny, but she was a little concerned. " Do you always drink like this?" Jinny took another sip and stared "Like what?" Dana grinned " Never mind" Hse sneezed again "Dana, are you sick??? You have been sneezing all day!" Danas eyes were red "I have allergies!!! Im allergic to everything!" Jinny got cockey "Well soooooorry!" "So... Where do i get too sleep?" Jinny looked around her apartment. "Right here! I dont have that much space" "I noticed that..." Dana hated this place but she wanted to get to know her family better... Right now she might as well go to sleep... It bugged her to talk to drunk people. She started to think what people thought of her when she was drunk. Who really cares? She rubbed her eyes and lyed down, the light was still on and jinny was still there. "Im exaused... Im going too sleep. Night Jinny! well talk tomorow." Jinny smiled at her " You can come too work... Meet my friends... My boyfriend... Your father and your brothers. If he is your father..." Dana cut her off. "He is... Mommy was pregnant when she moved" jinny laughed a drunk laugh "Your 13, shes dead and you still call her mommy????" Dana closed her eyes and tiredly said "And i call Daddy daddy. And you jinny. Before i go to sleep... What are my brothers names? How old are they?" Jinny was in a talkative mood, so she talked "Casey is 29 and hes gay..." Dana lauged but jinny ignored it "ANd johns 35 and hes been married 4 times and is on the brink of divorce... And daddy smokes and drinks." Dana though what a nice family then asked her last question "Your 32, and you still call him Daddy?" Jinny took a sip of her beer and finshed it and got up to go in her room, but turned back at the last second and smiled. "And i still call Mommy mommy, and you dana. Good night dana. " Dana was to tired to talk, but mumbled "Good night Jinny."

I g2g more later!!

NancyJoJinny · 05-09-2001, 09:55 AM

Ok nobodys responding but i dont care im jus gonna keep goin.

***The next morning***

Jinny came into the living room, wearing a mens button down shirt and sweat pants. Dana was awake just didnt feel like standing up. Jinny didnt exactly look very happy, her hair and makeup were all messed up but she just went into the kitchen and forgot all about Dana. Dana looked at her watch, it was exactly like Jinnys "Hey what time do you have to go to work???" Jinny came back out with some orange juice and took a sip. "Uhhh... 8." Dana was a little surprised. "Uh, stupid sister person, its 7:45!" Jinny slammed her orage juice down on the table and started for her room "I know im late...Im always late!!!" Dana laughed "Good for you!"

***At the station***

Jinny came in with Dana an hour late. Kate was not pleased "Exstead! Your late." Jinny moaned and sat down "I know im late." Dana sat on jinnys desk. Kate eyed her suspiciosly. "Whos the kid?" Dana got a littla annoyed "Kid kid kid! Everybody keeps calling me kid!!! Im dana! Dana Exstead!!!!!!" Kate licked her lips "Let me guesse... shes your daughter?" Jinny took that as an insult " NO! shes my sister!!!!!!!!" Kate didnt really care... She had way too much work to do. "Poor kid." She said as she went into her office. Dana pulled overe a chair and put her feet on it. " You two dont really like each other now do ya!?!?" Jinny looked into kates office to see if she was listening. "Shes got a bug up her a$$ for me!" Dana laughed. "Who are all these people who are stareing at me?" CD angela and Magda looked away. "They work here" Jinny said "Thats Inspector Angela Reid, Inspector CD CeLorenzo, ANd inspector Magda Ramirez." Dana waved to them "Hey ange, CD, Mag!..." She looed at kates door "And im assuming he rname is kate right?" Jinny smiled "Yes... But she hates it when you call her that... Call her, CAPTAIN!" Dana sat up straight. "OK! Im starving.... I want burito... Can i get one anywhere around here?" she asked. Jinny got up "Sure... Come with me"

I g2g bye more later!

JJ · 05-09-2001, 01:20 PM

More, this is good!

nancysbiggestfan · 05-09-2001, 03:51 PM

This is great POST MORE SOON!!!

Please?!?!

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Wild Child · 05-09-2001, 03:56 PM

This is going good so far! Post more soon.

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NewsiesGurl229 · 05-09-2001, 05:26 PM

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NancyJoJinny · 05-09-2001, 06:21 PM

OK!

***At lil' restaurant where jinny eats breakfast***

Dana and Jiny were just finishing up. Dana sat her napkin down on the table and watched as a lady with really long hair all twisted up walked by. "Interesting..." she said. Jinny just kinda sat there. She looked at jinny sharply. "When do i get to meet all of the rest of the family?" Jinny started playing with the cuff of her jacket. "Whats today?... Wednesday?" Dana nodded. "Ok tonights family poker night, you can meet them then." Dana sniffled and then sneezed. She wiped her nose and started thinking. "They all live right here?" Jinny took a sip of coffe " Their all cops. Just like me. Well dad was a cop, but, well he aint anymore. Dont you have any luggage?" Dana threw her hands in the air. "Airlines lost it all!!!!!!! Damn spirit airlines!!!" Jinny rolled her eyes "yeah... same thing happened to me... That was my favorite pair of socks... ahvent been on a plane since." Dana started biting her nails. "Do you have a TV... a VCR... DVD player? A sterio... A computer?" Jinny glared at her. "I have a TV with cable and a VCR and a cheapo radio..." Dana sighed. "Oh well... if, and thats a BIG if, i end up staying here ill have my things sent over. Ewven if i did chances are i wouldnt be staying with you." Jinny stared at her car. "I wonder how Dads gonna take this."

***That night***

"I have another what?" Jinnys dad was, one, quite surprised, and two, drunk. "Daddy, you have another daughter!" Dana waved "Her name is dana shes 13 shes from NJ and she has a big mouth and she tries too take beer." Dana did a famose Jo smile "Im jus'a lil angel aint I pops?" Jinnys dad stared at her. "I dont believe this." He siped on his beer. John and casey were sitting down at the table looking dana over, drinking beer, and Jinny was stainding next to dana drinking beer. Dana looked around, there were a few bottles scattered around. "OK!! No offese people... But is there 1 member of this family... Who drinks the beer... Then actually throws out the bottle!?!?" Jinny sat down. "Whatever!" John decided to be himself and make a rude remark. " Si sis... did you know jinnys nickname is the town slut?" Jinny slammed her beer down. "JOHN!" Dana licked her lips. "Looking at you youd never be able to figure it out... Walking aroung the streets of san fran for 6 days lookin for ya... Well thasa different story." Jinny leaned back "Oh you are... so... so his sister." Jinnys dad started to light up a cigarette. Dana bugged her eyes out like jinny." Im allergic to smoke... can you not do that?" Jinnys dad took it out of his mouth and stuck it in the ash tray "Of all the things she could be allergic to... it has to be cigarette smoke! WHAT NEXT!?!?!"

I g2g more later bye!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

[This message has been edited by NancyJoJinny (edited 05-09-2001).]

nancysbiggestfan · 05-09-2001, 07:30 PM

This is good! More and soon. PLEASE

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nancysbiggestfan · 05-09-2001, 07:52 PM

I know it has only been like an hour and 20 minutes since you last posted more, but i really like it and besides i am bored so can u pleas POST MORE?!?!?

Pwetty pwease

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NancyJoJinny · 05-09-2001, 08:38 PM

Ehhh hell yes ill post.

Jinnys dad was about to say something but Dana was already over at his sterio playing with it. She pulled out a CD and stuck it in. She went through the songs about 10 times then settled for Nelly's must be the money. She sang along to it and plopped down next to jinny. Jinny stared at her and sipped her beer. Dana stared back. "WHAT!?!?" Dana exclaimed. "You just come in here and blast you music, tell people what to do and give us no time to talk!... Im starting to like you." Jinny smiled. John just couldnt believe how much jinny was like a teenager. Dana started to say somethin... And then stopped. Jinny looked at her. "What?" Dana sneezed "Uh nevermind." she said. "I was going to ask if i could have a sip of your beer. Your not going to let me are you?" Jinny downed the rest in the last sip. "No... Not really, dont count on it, no, not likely, naver, uh uh. NO!" Dana jumped back, "OK, OK! Geez. I was only asking." Jinny broke out the cards. "Shall we?" She motioned to the chairs. Dana sat up. "Can i play!?!?" Casey laughed "Sorry, we play for real money." Dana stood up. "No shh... Uh, No duh! I got 800 bux in my pocket, and im not afraid to use it." Jinny did that thing she does when she buggs her eyes out. "Excuse me?? 800! Are you kidding?" Dana pulled over a chair. "Nope... My foster parents were filthy rich! I got a whole load uh dough in the banks back in jerzey." John grabbed the cards from jinny and started shuffleing the cards. "Lets go easy on the kid... Weel make aces and duces(sp?) wild. Is that ok huney?" He was obviosly makeing fun of Dana. "They all say that the first time." She said with a smirk.

***1 hour later***

Dana had a pile of money in front of her and Jins Dad Casey John and Jinny only had 5 bux a piece each. Dana eyed her cards and put one in the middle and Jinny handed her another. Jinny was sure she would win, she had a full house... And danas luck must run out eventially. Dana pushed all her money into the middle. Jinny put her 5 doallars in, John and Casey and her dad did the same. John layed his cards down. "Full house" Jinny slammed her cards down. "Damn you! I have one too!" Casey sat his down. "Two of a kind... Well what did you expect... it was 5 bux!" Jinys dad put his down next. "4 of a kind girl... Id like to see you beat that!" Dana smiled a mig lipped deviose looking smile, and in a voice all breathy like Janet Jacksons she read off what she had as she layed the cards down. "I have 3 queens... A 2... and an Ace... I HAVE 5 OF A KIND! HAHAHAH!!! you suck at this game!" She grabbed the money and shoved the bills into her wallet. And left casually and waited in Jinnys car. Jinny got up to leave but turned to her family. "I have just beenm beat by a 13 year old... And im broke she keeps hundreds in her back pocket... Good...BYE!"

I g2g! Moms buggin me... But more later

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 05-09-2001, 08:39 PM

More, it is GREAT!!!!

NancyJoJinny · 05-09-2001, 09:41 PM

Thanyou!

Jinny went out and got in her car. She didnt say anything to Dana until they got home.

***Jinnys Apartment***

"You play poker good kid." Jinny smiled at her, pertially embarressed she lost so badly. Dana smiled back. "Well, comes naturally." She kept thinkin, that was dumb... She was driving drunk and i got in the car... Stupid me. "Goodnight Jin." Jinny went into her room. "Goodnight."

***The next morning***

"Dana... Dana get up.... Hey kid its 7... Come on.... Ill let you have a sip of my beer." Dana sat up. "Oooh goody! Wheres the beer!" Jinny glared at her. "I was kidding." Dana sighed and layed back down. " Can i stay here?" Jinny thought for a minute "I dont know... Dont i have too feed you or something?" Dana mada a face. "Im a girl not a dog... Ill eat something!" Jinny was already dressed for work... She had to leave so she had to decide... I mean what can the kid do? She decided just to leave her there... Never phased her about all the beer and junk she had. "Look you can stay.. "She said. "Touch nothing... Take nothing... Drink nothing... And dont eat the turkey." Dana just ahd to ask. "WHy cant i eat the turkey?" Jinny stopped before leaving. "Just trusnt me DONT EAT THE TURKEY."

***At the station***

"Hi Jinny!" Angela said in her usual happyness. "Wheres your sister?" Jinny shrugged "At home... with all my beer.. Oh. ill be back." She ran out. Magd aturned to Captain who watched from the doorway. "Well i guesse we can safely assume Dana + Alcohol dont mix." Kate stared off into space. "Or maybe they do."

**Back at jinnys apartment***

Dana was lying on the couch... She reached over her head and placed the 4th bottle of beer on the side table. her stomach started to hurt, "Im so stupid... I shouldnt have ate the turkey." Jinny burst in and Dana sat up, Jinny noticed the bottles.. Dana searched for an excuse, "I... uhh.. well, i... WELL YOU SAID I COULD HAVE A SIP!" Jinny grabbed the bottles. "A SIP! not 4 bottles! your only 13 you dont need to drink!" Dana puched the pillow. "I drink, in a week, half as much as you do in a day!" Jinny was ready to throw the bottles at her "THATS STILL TOO MUCH!" she went into the kitchen "OOOOH! you ate the turkey." Dana leaned back. "Am i like gonna die now?" Jinny threw the bottles out and pulled dana off the couch. "No... Not unless i kill you... your comeing too work with me... NOW!!!"

I g2g bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye.

BlairW_1 · 05-09-2001, 11:28 PM

Great! I can't wait 4 u to write more!!!! I really, really, really can't wait 4 this!!! hehee, I just had a Sprite... :P

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nancysbiggestfan · 05-10-2001, 12:36 PM

This is soooo good! Can't wait for more!!!

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NancyJoJinny · 05-10-2001, 05:04 PM

THANK YA!!!!

***At the Station***

Jinny came in, practically dragging Dana along with her. Jinny pushed her down into a desk chair, it rolled backwards and hit Jinnys desk. "Sit there... and stay there!" Dana sneezed... Again. "AY! Look im sorry!" Kate watched form the corner. "GUYS!" She screamed. "Whats goin on here?" Jinny ignored her and leaned over the chair and put her hands on the arm rest. "Look Dana! Its one thing to drink! Its another thing to drink when your 13! But its even worse... To drink MY beer when YOUR 13! Of all the beer it had to be mine!" Dana leaped up. "Oh my gawd! So what your sayin' is that i can drink any time i wanna, i jus cant drink your beer. Is that what your trying to tell me!?!?!?!" Jinny got up in her face. "Yeah!!!! And by the way i hate your accent... You dont pronounce anything right!!!" Dana threw her arms up. "And whaddis that supposed to mean?" Jinny stared at her. "It means exactly what i said! I HATE THE WAY YOU NEW JERSIANS TALK!" "We twak just like you." Dana said in her defese... Then she realized that she was talking with a new your accent. Jinny grinnted her teeth. "WHATEVER! Just sit down and stay here... I have to... to.... I dont know your just drivin me crazy!!!!!!" Jinny ran out into the bathroom. Dana noticed how everyone was staring at her. "And whadda you starin at?"

Sorry it was so short... have dance class... bye bye bye bbye bye bye.... Buh bye now.

05-08-2001, 11:10 PM	#1
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	(fan fic) Problem Child....Problem sister??? Just a damn Problem! I know i have others open but i can do them all! "Uhhh... Hi." A girl about 13, 5'6" walked into the division. "Can i help you with something?" Jinny said as she sipped on her coffe. "Umm... Maybe... Im looking for my sister, i think she works here but i dont know what department" She looks like me Jinny thought to herself "Whats her name?" "Its, Jacky or Jessy, or Jenny... Jinny... Thats it Jinny Exstead. Do you know her?" Jinny choked on her coffe "Me... thats me... Who are you???" The girl looked shocked, and it took her a second to speak up "D...Dana(hahaha!) Exsted. Wow... were sisters??? We look alike." Jinny didnt understand how she could have a sister and not know. "Yeah... I was thinking the same thing." They stood in silence for a few seconds, CD angela and Magda all came through the door. "Hey Jin..." Magda waved "Whos the kid?" " SHes my sister." Magdas eyes widened. "Sister??? you know you guys look alike." Dana smiled a little, " I know." She looked jinny over "Do you eat?" "What?" Jinny wasnt exactly sure what she meant by that. "Your a stick!" she replied " Your what??? 5'6"??? You must only weigh like 110!" Jinny liked hearing that " Thanks... No matter what i eat i dont gain weight... WHere are you from?" Dana shifted around. "Jersey.... This place is much more fun... But the bars there are fun too." "What!?!" Jinny exclaimed "Bars... you what 14..." Dana felt the need to correct her "im 13" Jinny was annyed at this " 13... you cant go to bars" "Ehhm... Lets just drop is shall we? Look if you can get the day off... we need to talk" Jinny glanced into kates office and saw her talking to the DA. "Yeah lets go." *Back at jinnys apartment* Jinny unlocked her door and Dana just pushed on by and walked over to an open beer bottle on the coffe table. "Nice" She said as she picked it up. Realizing there was a little left she drank it and threw it into the trash. " Hey, Kid you cant drink that!" Dana rubbed her eyes "Too late i already did." Jinny picked up a bottle of liquor and stuck it in her room. Dana leaned in too see what it was. "Whats that?" Jinny looked up at her as the bottles cliked together "Everything... But i am the only one here who can drink it!" Dana walked out. "Great!" SHe called from the other room. she looked in jinnys fridge and viewed the bottles. "Geezus woman how much do you drink!?!?!" Jinny came in and closed the refridgerator door "Not... that much." Dana laughed and then shut up. Jinny thought for a few seconds then decided to ask. " How can you be my sister anyway?" Dana just glaered "I thought you caould tell me... Mommy was single when she had me and deid when i was 2 1/2... You had no idea i was around?" " None! Im still in shock" Dana sneezed but Jinny just turned around and said nothing... And Dana didnt really give, They were so alike. Jinny sat down on the couch and Dana followed her and sat down. It took jinny about 12 seconds before she got up, got a beer and sat down. Dana bit her lip. "Can i have a sip?" Jinny raised one eyebrow. "Are you kidding? NO!" Dana leaned back "Ok,ok sorry! You are way too over protective of your beer!" Jinny took a big sip and dana just watched her. Jinny finished it off and got 2 more. She kept them far away from dana. *About 1 hour later* Jinny had drank qute a bit. Dana thought it was funny, but she was a little concerned. " Do you always drink like this?" Jinny took another sip and stared "Like what?" Dana grinned " Never mind" Hse sneezed again "Dana, are you sick??? You have been sneezing all day!" Danas eyes were red "I have allergies!!! Im allergic to everything!" Jinny got cockey "Well soooooorry!" "So... Where do i get too sleep?" Jinny looked around her apartment. "Right here! I dont have that much space" "I noticed that..." Dana hated this place but she wanted to get to know her family better... Right now she might as well go to sleep... It bugged her to talk to drunk people. She started to think what people thought of her when she was drunk. Who really cares? She rubbed her eyes and lyed down, the light was still on and jinny was still there. "Im exaused... Im going too sleep. Night Jinny! well talk tomorow." Jinny smiled at her " You can come too work... Meet my friends... My boyfriend... Your father and your brothers. If he is your father..." Dana cut her off. "He is... Mommy was pregnant when she moved" jinny laughed a drunk laugh "Your 13, shes dead and you still call her mommy????" Dana closed her eyes and tiredly said "And i call Daddy daddy. And you jinny. Before i go to sleep... What are my brothers names? How old are they?" Jinny was in a talkative mood, so she talked "Casey is 29 and hes gay..." Dana lauged but jinny ignored it "ANd johns 35 and hes been married 4 times and is on the brink of divorce... And daddy smokes and drinks." Dana though what a nice family then asked her last question "Your 32, and you still call him Daddy?" Jinny took a sip of her beer and finshed it and got up to go in her room, but turned back at the last second and smiled. "And i still call Mommy mommy, and you dana. Good night dana. " Dana was to tired to talk, but mumbled "Good night Jinny." I g2g more later!!

05-09-2001, 09:55 AM	#2
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Ok nobodys responding but i dont care im jus gonna keep goin. *The next morning* Jinny came into the living room, wearing a mens button down shirt and sweat pants. Dana was awake just didnt feel like standing up. Jinny didnt exactly look very happy, her hair and makeup were all messed up but she just went into the kitchen and forgot all about Dana. Dana looked at her watch, it was exactly like Jinnys "Hey what time do you have to go to work???" Jinny came back out with some orange juice and took a sip. "Uhhh... 8." Dana was a little surprised. "Uh, stupid sister person, its 7:45!" Jinny slammed her orage juice down on the table and started for her room "I know im late...Im always late!!!" Dana laughed "Good for you!" *At the station* Jinny came in with Dana an hour late. Kate was not pleased "Exstead! Your late." Jinny moaned and sat down "I know im late." Dana sat on jinnys desk. Kate eyed her suspiciosly. "Whos the kid?" Dana got a littla annoyed "Kid kid kid! Everybody keeps calling me kid!!! Im dana! Dana Exstead!!!!!!" Kate licked her lips "Let me guesse... shes your daughter?" Jinny took that as an insult " NO! shes my sister!!!!!!!!" Kate didnt really care... She had way too much work to do. "Poor kid." She said as she went into her office. Dana pulled overe a chair and put her feet on it. " You two dont really like each other now do ya!?!?" Jinny looked into kates office to see if she was listening. "Shes got a bug up her a$$ for me!" Dana laughed. "Who are all these people who are stareing at me?" CD angela and Magda looked away. "They work here" Jinny said "Thats Inspector Angela Reid, Inspector CD CeLorenzo, ANd inspector Magda Ramirez." Dana waved to them "Hey ange, CD, Mag!..." She looed at kates door "And im assuming he rname is kate right?" Jinny smiled "Yes... But she hates it when you call her that... Call her, CAPTAIN!" Dana sat up straight. "OK! Im starving.... I want burito... Can i get one anywhere around here?" she asked. Jinny got up "Sure... Come with me" I g2g bye more later!

05-09-2001, 01:20 PM	#3
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NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	THIS ROX!!!!!!!!

05-09-2001, 06:21 PM	#7
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	OK! *At lil' restaurant where jinny eats breakfast* Dana and Jiny were just finishing up. Dana sat her napkin down on the table and watched as a lady with really long hair all twisted up walked by. "Interesting..." she said. Jinny just kinda sat there. She looked at jinny sharply. "When do i get to meet all of the rest of the family?" Jinny started playing with the cuff of her jacket. "Whats today?... Wednesday?" Dana nodded. "Ok tonights family poker night, you can meet them then." Dana sniffled and then sneezed. She wiped her nose and started thinking. "They all live right here?" Jinny took a sip of coffe " Their all cops. Just like me. Well dad was a cop, but, well he aint anymore. Dont you have any luggage?" Dana threw her hands in the air. "Airlines lost it all!!!!!!! Damn spirit airlines!!!" Jinny rolled her eyes "yeah... same thing happened to me... That was my favorite pair of socks... ahvent been on a plane since." Dana started biting her nails. "Do you have a TV... a VCR... DVD player? A sterio... A computer?" Jinny glared at her. "I have a TV with cable and a VCR and a cheapo radio..." Dana sighed. "Oh well... if, and thats a BIG if, i end up staying here ill have my things sent over. Ewven if i did chances are i wouldnt be staying with you." Jinny stared at her car. "I wonder how Dads gonna take this." *That night* "I have another what?" Jinnys dad was, one, quite surprised, and two, drunk. "Daddy, you have another daughter!" Dana waved "Her name is dana shes 13 shes from NJ and she has a big mouth and she tries too take beer." Dana did a famose Jo smile "Im jus'a lil angel aint I pops?" Jinnys dad stared at her. "I dont believe this." He siped on his beer. John and casey were sitting down at the table looking dana over, drinking beer, and Jinny was stainding next to dana drinking beer. Dana looked around, there were a few bottles scattered around. "OK!! No offese people... But is there 1 member of this family... Who drinks the beer... Then actually throws out the bottle!?!?" Jinny sat down. "Whatever!" John decided to be himself and make a rude remark. " Si sis... did you know jinnys nickname is the town slut?" Jinny slammed her beer down. "JOHN!" Dana licked her lips. "Looking at you youd never be able to figure it out... Walking aroung the streets of san fran for 6 days lookin for ya... Well thasa different story." Jinny leaned back "Oh you are... so... so his sister." Jinnys dad started to light up a cigarette. Dana bugged her eyes out like jinny." Im allergic to smoke... can you not do that?" Jinnys dad took it out of his mouth and stuck it in the ash tray "Of all the things she could be allergic to... it has to be cigarette smoke! WHAT NEXT!?!?!" I g2g more later bye! ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. [This message has been edited by NancyJoJinny (edited 05-09-2001).]

05-09-2001, 07:30 PM	#8
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	This is good! More and soon. PLEASE ------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ http://www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

05-09-2001, 07:52 PM	#9
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	I know it has only been like an hour and 20 minutes since you last posted more, but i really like it and besides i am bored so can u pleas POST MORE?!?!? Pwetty pwease ------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ http://www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

05-09-2001, 08:38 PM	#10
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Ehhh hell yes ill post. Jinnys dad was about to say something but Dana was already over at his sterio playing with it. She pulled out a CD and stuck it in. She went through the songs about 10 times then settled for Nelly's must be the money. She sang along to it and plopped down next to jinny. Jinny stared at her and sipped her beer. Dana stared back. "WHAT!?!?" Dana exclaimed. "You just come in here and blast you music, tell people what to do and give us no time to talk!... Im starting to like you." Jinny smiled. John just couldnt believe how much jinny was like a teenager. Dana started to say somethin... And then stopped. Jinny looked at her. "What?" Dana sneezed "Uh nevermind." she said. "I was going to ask if i could have a sip of your beer. Your not going to let me are you?" Jinny downed the rest in the last sip. "No... Not really, dont count on it, no, not likely, naver, uh uh. NO!" Dana jumped back, "OK, OK! Geez. I was only asking." Jinny broke out the cards. "Shall we?" She motioned to the chairs. Dana sat up. "Can i play!?!?" Casey laughed "Sorry, we play for real money." Dana stood up. "No shh... Uh, No duh! I got 800 bux in my pocket, and im not afraid to use it." Jinny did that thing she does when she buggs her eyes out. "Excuse me?? 800! Are you kidding?" Dana pulled over a chair. "Nope... My foster parents were filthy rich! I got a whole load uh dough in the banks back in jerzey." John grabbed the cards from jinny and started shuffleing the cards. "Lets go easy on the kid... Weel make aces and duces(sp?) wild. Is that ok huney?" He was obviosly makeing fun of Dana. "They all say that the first time." She said with a smirk. *1 hour later* Dana had a pile of money in front of her and Jins Dad Casey John and Jinny only had 5 bux a piece each. Dana eyed her cards and put one in the middle and Jinny handed her another. Jinny was sure she would win, she had a full house... And danas luck must run out eventially. Dana pushed all her money into the middle. Jinny put her 5 doallars in, John and Casey and her dad did the same. John layed his cards down. "Full house" Jinny slammed her cards down. "Damn you! I have one too!" Casey sat his down. "Two of a kind... Well what did you expect... it was 5 bux!" Jinys dad put his down next. "4 of a kind girl... Id like to see you beat that!" Dana smiled a mig lipped deviose looking smile, and in a voice all breathy like Janet Jacksons she read off what she had as she layed the cards down. "I have 3 queens... A 2... and an Ace... I HAVE 5 OF A KIND! HAHAHAH!!! you suck at this game!" She grabbed the money and shoved the bills into her wallet. And left casually and waited in Jinnys car. Jinny got up to leave but turned to her family. "I have just beenm beat by a 13 year old... And im broke she keeps hundreds in her back pocket... Good...BYE!" I g2g! Moms buggin me... But more later ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right.

05-09-2001, 08:39 PM	#11
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	More, it is GREAT!!!!

05-09-2001, 09:41 PM	#12
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Thanyou! Jinny went out and got in her car. She didnt say anything to Dana until they got home. *Jinnys Apartment* "You play poker good kid." Jinny smiled at her, pertially embarressed she lost so badly. Dana smiled back. "Well, comes naturally." She kept thinkin, that was dumb... She was driving drunk and i got in the car... Stupid me. "Goodnight Jin." Jinny went into her room. "Goodnight." *The next morning* "Dana... Dana get up.... Hey kid its 7... Come on.... Ill let you have a sip of my beer." Dana sat up. "Oooh goody! Wheres the beer!" Jinny glared at her. "I was kidding." Dana sighed and layed back down. " Can i stay here?" Jinny thought for a minute "I dont know... Dont i have too feed you or something?" Dana mada a face. "Im a girl not a dog... Ill eat something!" Jinny was already dressed for work... She had to leave so she had to decide... I mean what can the kid do? She decided just to leave her there... Never phased her about all the beer and junk she had. "Look you can stay.. "She said. "Touch nothing... Take nothing... Drink nothing... And dont eat the turkey." Dana just ahd to ask. "WHy cant i eat the turkey?" Jinny stopped before leaving. "Just trusnt me DONT EAT THE TURKEY." *At the station* "Hi Jinny!" Angela said in her usual happyness. "Wheres your sister?" Jinny shrugged "At home... with all my beer.. Oh. ill be back." She ran out. Magd aturned to Captain who watched from the doorway. "Well i guesse we can safely assume Dana + Alcohol dont mix." Kate stared off into space. "Or maybe they do." Back at jinnys apartment* Dana was lying on the couch... She reached over her head and placed the 4th bottle of beer on the side table. her stomach started to hurt, "Im so stupid... I shouldnt have ate the turkey." Jinny burst in and Dana sat up, Jinny noticed the bottles.. Dana searched for an excuse, "I... uhh.. well, i... WELL YOU SAID I COULD HAVE A SIP!" Jinny grabbed the bottles. "A SIP! not 4 bottles! your only 13 you dont need to drink!" Dana puched the pillow. "I drink, in a week, half as much as you do in a day!" Jinny was ready to throw the bottles at her "THATS STILL TOO MUCH!" she went into the kitchen "OOOOH! you ate the turkey." Dana leaned back. "Am i like gonna die now?" Jinny threw the bottles out and pulled dana off the couch. "No... Not unless i kill you... your comeing too work with me... NOW!!!" I g2g bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye.

05-09-2001, 11:28 PM	#13
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Great! I can't wait 4 u to write more!!!! I really, really, really can't wait 4 this!!! hehee, I just had a Sprite... :P ------------------ In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray... "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13 "For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5 "For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first. Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17 ~Danielle~

05-10-2001, 12:36 PM	#14
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	This is soooo good! Can't wait for more!!! ------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ http://www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

05-10-2001, 05:04 PM	#15
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	THANK YA!!!! *At the Station* Jinny came in, practically dragging Dana along with her. Jinny pushed her down into a desk chair, it rolled backwards and hit Jinnys desk. "Sit there... and stay there!" Dana sneezed... Again. "AY! Look im sorry!" Kate watched form the corner. "GUYS!" She screamed. "Whats goin on here?" Jinny ignored her and leaned over the chair and put her hands on the arm rest. "Look Dana! Its one thing to drink! Its another thing to drink when your 13! But its even worse... To drink MY beer when YOUR 13! Of all the beer it had to be mine!" Dana leaped up. "Oh my gawd! So what your sayin' is that i can drink any time i wanna, i jus cant drink your beer. Is that what your trying to tell me!?!?!?!" Jinny got up in her face. "Yeah!!!! And by the way i hate your accent... You dont pronounce anything right!!!" Dana threw her arms up. "And whaddis that supposed to mean?" Jinny stared at her. "It means exactly what i said! I HATE THE WAY YOU NEW JERSIANS TALK!" "We twak just like you." Dana said in her defese... Then she realized that she was talking with a new your accent. Jinny grinnted her teeth. "WHATEVER! Just sit down and stay here... I have to... to.... I dont know your just drivin me crazy!!!!!!" Jinny ran out into the bathroom. Dana noticed how everyone was staring at her. "And whadda you starin at?" Sorry it was so short... have dance class... bye bye bye bbye bye bye.... Buh bye now.