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05-31-2001, 09:48 PM
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The One Night That You Wished Never Happened.
Ok, this is my second Division Fan-Fic. I'm not sure if NancyJoJinny was planiing to team up with me to write this but if she does then this script belongs to both of us. So here goes.....Oh ya let's say that this story took place befor Jinny met Teddy.
Anchorside Bar one night at about 11 P.M. (Jinny is quietly sipping like her 100th drink, well not quite but she's had alot) Jinny: Bartender! How bout another one. Bartender: I think you've had enough lady. No More! Jinny: Oh come on. Just one more, please? (Just then a dark haired man came up from behind Jinny.) Guy: Hey, I know where you can get more to drink. Come with me. Jinny: (smiles) OK. (she grabs her jacket and leaves with out paying her bill.) Bartender: (yells to the guy at the casheir) Hey Dave, add another $40 to Ms. Exstead's tab! (Later Jinny and the "Guy" get out of his car infront of an apartment building.) Guy: Well this is my place. Wanna come in for a beer? Jinny: Ya sure. (This guy is pretty good looking she thinks) Next Morning: (Jinny wakes up to see her "mystery man" sleeping next to her and she smiles.) Jinny: I like this guy. *she says quietly to herself) Guy: (wakes up and sees Jinny staring at him) Hey. Jinny: Good morning. What time is it? Guy: Umm.. it's 8:45 (he looks at his watch) Jinny: Oh S*** I gotta be at work at 9:15. Guy: Don't worry I'll drive you. Jinny: (she jumps out of bed and starts to get dress ed) Thanks. OK please read+respond ------------------ ~<3~Caitlin~<3~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Jo On Hefself: " You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. " ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ One Of Jinny's Many Quotes: " Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? " |
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05-31-2001, 11:02 PM
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oooh... write more! it's good.. i like it
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06-01-2001, 11:51 AM
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Write more!!! This is good!!!
------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. Jinny: Here comes the other shoe. Jinny: I can coddle. Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any. Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you? Jinny: You're a peach. Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com. Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see. Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1. |
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06-01-2001, 03:41 PM
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I read the preview, this look like ti could be a soap! As the Division Churns! Do you like it?
 Great story, write more before Sunday!------------------ My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone. ~*Danielle*~ |
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06-01-2001, 04:00 PM
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Ill team up!
***At the division, guy drove her there*** Jinny: Guys, wanna go get some lunch? CD: Pauls gonna drop by and pick me up for lunch. Jinny: Alright. Magda: Yeah, lets go... Im starved... Angela: Well, i havent eaten breakfast in like 10 years, come on... ***Anchorside*** CD: *Comes in with paul and sits at other side off room and Jinny sees them* Jinny: I thought she was going with paul. Magda: That is paul. Jinny: O..... Wait... thats paul????? Angela: Yeah why?? Jinny: Oh god... CD's gonna kill me... Shell never find out... What if she does!? Magda: Find out what? Jinny: Nothing. Find out what? *nevosely* Nothing wrong, hehe? Magda: Whats with you? Somethings wrong... TELL ME! Your turn... and yes i know my part sucked ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home! Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us? ~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~ The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun. |
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06-01-2001, 04:04 PM
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------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. Jinny: Here comes the other shoe. Jinny: I can coddle. Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any. Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you? Jinny: You're a peach. Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com. Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see. Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1. |
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06-01-2001, 04:09 PM
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A soap? well maybe. Here's a little bit more!
(The Guy went to get his car keys and as Jinny was getting dressed she bumped into the nightstant and knocked over a picture) Jinny: Great (she bends down to pick up the picture and sees two people in it.) Hello! Who's this? (One of the people is Jinny's "friend" and the other is a women that looks like...) CD! Oh no don't tell me that I met Paul last night! Guy: (enters room) You ready to go? Jinny: Ya, uh who's the lady in the picture with you? (She hands the photo to the guy) Guy: (looks at picture) Oh, she is my sister, so lets go. (Jinny can tell that he is lying but she doesn't say anything. Jinny and the guy leave his apartment) At the Station: Kate: Where is Exstead? I she doesn't get here soon I'm gonna.. Magda: (looks out window and sees Jinny getting out of a car) Oh Cap. she's here. Kate: Good, as soon as she gets here send her inot my office. OK? Magda: (still looking out the window) Ya sure. Kate: Thanks (she walks into her office) Magda: (she says this quietly to herself) That's Paul, CD's husband. Uh oh Jinny girl you're in big trouble now! (Jinny gets out of the car and starts walking up the steps to the station) Guy: (leans out off the window) Hey how bout 8 at Anchorside tonight? Jinny: (gives him a quick kiss) Ya sure bye. (Jinny walks into the Station and Magda pulls her aside) Magda: Answer me this Jinny. What were you doing with CD's husband? I'll post more later! ------------------ ~<3~Caitlin~<3~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Jo On Hefself: " You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. " ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ One Of Jinny's Many Quotes: " Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? " |
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06-01-2001, 04:10 PM
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OMG! I'm sorry Somehow I didn't see your post so you can forget what I just wrote! Sorry!
------------------ ~<3~Caitlin~<3~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Jo On Hefself: " You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. " ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ One Of Jinny's Many Quotes: " Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? " |
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06-01-2001, 04:21 PM
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Again I'm sorry bout hwat I posted before I'll just add on to what you wrote so here it is...
Jinny: Magda, I don't feel to good I'll be right back (Jinny quickly runs towards the bathroom) In Bathroom: (Jinny looks ot see if anyone is in there, but no one is so she says outloud...) Jinny: OMG! OMG! What am I going to do? What am I going to do? Alright, calm down. Just forget bout last night he's taken and, and, and Oh God why do I like him so much? HE'S MARRIED TO CD!! Well (sighs and says calmly) that's out of my system I better go back to Magda now. (Jinny leaves but on her way out she bumps into Paul) Paul: Hey! Jinny: Uh... Hi I got to go bye. Paul: (grabs Jinny's arm) Where you going? (He pulls her to him and he kisses her) (Just them CD comes up looking for Paul) CD: Oh there you are I was...(she stops when she sees Jinny and Paul, Jinny breaks off the kiss and turns her back to CD so she can't see her face) OMG! I should have known better than to get back with you. You always cheat on me! So who's this..this.. slut(she points to Jinny, Jinny turns around, CD gasps) JINNY! OK your turn! ------------------ ~<3~Caitlin~<3~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Jo On Hefself: " You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. " ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ One Of Jinny's Many Quotes: " Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? " |
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06-01-2001, 04:26 PM
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thisis gettin juicy... hehehe. i neeeeeeed more!!!
------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. Jinny: Here comes the other shoe. Jinny: I can coddle. Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any. Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you? Jinny: You're a peach. Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com. Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see. Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1. |
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06-01-2001, 04:46 PM
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Jinny: CD... I swaer... I didnt know he was married too you!
CD: Liar!!!!! I know you saw us like 5 minuites ago!! Jinny: He kissed me.... I didnt kiss him!!!!!! CD: It looked like you were kissing him! Paul: CD, honey, it only happened once... it meant nothing! CD: You two had sex!?!? How dare you... Jinny, i thought you were my friend.... And paul... I hate both of you! Jinny: U just had too tell her we slept together! CD: So you were planning on lying too me!?!? Jinny: Look... CD... *CD slaps her then stroms off* Wait! CD! Please!!!! Im sorry! Paul: Now... Jinny: Just please leave me alone? *goes back too magda* Magda: Jinny, whats going on??? Jinny: *moans* O god... Im a terrible friend! How could i let this happen? Im such a slut. Magda: Stop saying that... your not a slut, what happened? Jinny: I.... Paul and me... We slept together. I really didnt know it was him... Last night... and now CD hates me... AH! I dont know what to do!!! Your turn! ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home! Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us? ~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~ The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun. |
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06-01-2001, 04:46 PM
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Jinny: CD... I swaer... I didnt know he was married too you!
CD: Liar!!!!! I know you saw us like 5 minuites ago!! Jinny: He kissed me.... I didnt kiss him!!!!!! CD: It looked like you were kissing him! Paul: CD, honey, it only happened once... it meant nothing! CD: You two had sex!?!? How dare you... Jinny, i thought you were my friend.... And paul... I hate both of you! Jinny: U just had too tell her we slept together! CD: So you were planning on lying too me!?!? Jinny: Look... CD... *CD slaps her then stroms off* Wait! CD! Please!!!! Im sorry! Paul: Now... Jinny: Just please leave me alone? *goes back too magda* Magda: Jinny, whats going on??? Jinny: *moans* O god... Im a terrible friend! How could i let this happen? Im such a slut. Magda: Stop saying that... your not a slut, what happened? Jinny: I.... Paul and me... We slept together. I really didnt know it was him... Last night... and now CD hates me... AH! I dont know what to do!!! Your turn! ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home! Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us? ~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~ The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun. |
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06-01-2001, 05:23 PM
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MORE!!! MORE!!!
O R E [This message has been edited by jinny_jo_2001 (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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06-01-2001, 05:45 PM
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Awesome!
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06-01-2001, 06:00 PM
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