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jinny_jo_2001 · 06-09-2001, 01:58 PM

It was a normal day at the S.F.P.D.

Captain: Reide, DeLorenzo you have a homicide case on Chrissy Andre.
CD and Angela nod: Were on it Captain
The captain looks around: Exstead....Exstead
Just then Jinny walked slowly into the division. She looked pretty depressed.
Jinny: Im here captain. *goes and sits down*
Captain gives Jinny a look then says: You and Ramiraz have a case on a stolen vehicle license plate reads 415WIN3B
Magda nods: Were on it
Jinny sighs as she looks at some papers
Magda: Jinny are you okay?
Jinny looks up at Magda: Its Teddy...Last night we broke up *looks down*
Magda pats her on the back: Oh Jin, I am so sorry.
Jinny looks at Magda:not you or anybody else have to be sorry, this relationship just was never meant to be, I guess *walks away from her*

What do you think so far?
I would write more but I gotta run.

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-09-2001, 02:17 PM

Keep goin'

Jinny_Extead · 06-09-2001, 05:36 PM

Definately keep going!

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

nancysbiggestfan · 06-09-2001, 05:50 PM

Great go on!

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
*~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~**
Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
~*~**~**~*~**~***~**~*~*~
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

jinny_jo_2001 · 06-09-2001, 07:20 PM

K

Heres more

Magda walks over to Jinny: What do you mean by that?
Jinny: I never should of getten serious with anybody!
Magda: well what did you do?
Jinny: please, dont go there.
Magda thinks: You didnt?
Jinny nods: I did. I cheated on him Mag.
Magda: Jinny why did you do this to him?
Jinny: I was under a lot of pressure and I went to the bar and then from there..
Magda: no wonder why you two split.
Jinny: I always did wonder what he saw in me you know?
Magda sighs: People are attracted to different people and I guess he was attracted to you and I..
Jinny laughs a little: okay Mag, I got the point.
Just then Angela and CD come over.
Angela: We kinda overheard, Jinny....I (she gets cut off my CD)
CD grins: Jinny, do you remember that bet we, as in you and me, made when you first started dating Theodore?
Jinny: No
CD: Well I bet you $20.00 that you would cheat on him and well you did but I dont want no money. But wasnt I right?
Jinny nods: I guess you were...For the first time.
CD smirks then walks away.
Angela looks at Jinny, sighs, then walks away.
Jinny: Now even my friends wanna dump me for what I did.
Magda: Their just shook up, I wonder how Teddy feels, and anyways how did he find out about this?
Jinny: well he was coming into the bar then he saw me go with ummm forgot his name then he just stared at me and I really didnt see him, honest. Then this morning at like 4:00 he wakes me up and tells me its over.
Magda shakes her head: what a shame..

Do u like it?
I gotta stop, my fingers are killin me!! LOL

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-09-2001, 09:03 PM

OMG!!! DON"T STOP!!! are you tryin' to kill me or somethin'?

jinny_jo_2001 · 06-09-2001, 09:29 PM

LOL okay here some more

Jinny: I just wish I never had did this you know? *a tear rolls down her cheek*
Magda: Jinny, Jinny listen you didnt do it purposly did you?
Jinny nods: No of course, I would never think about cheating on Teddy. *looks down*
Magda: I have nothing else to say.
Just then the phone rings
Magda: I will get it *she picks it up*
Magda: Oh Hi Theodore *Jinny looks at Magda with a 'what?' expression on her face*
Theodore: Can I speak to Jinny I have something to tell her!
Magda: Alright *Magda looks at Jinny in the eye and hands her the phone*
Jinny: What do you want?
Theodore: I just want to say that later can you come here and pick some of your stuff up from my house?
Jinny: thats what you call me at work for?
Theodore: when else am I gonna get you?4 in the morning?
Jinny: Fine, I will be glad to give your stuff back too! *slams the phone on its hook thing*
Magda: what going on?
Jinny: He wants me to pick up my 'stuff' from his house.
Magda: and I guess he wants you to bring his stuff back to him too? *puts her hands on his hips*
Jinny nods
Then Magda grins: Why doesnt HE come and get his stuff from you?
Jinny: Are you saying not to go and get my stuff
Magda nods
Jinny: I think I got what your getting at.

BlairW_1 · 06-10-2001, 04:58 PM

You are soooooo evil! Just leave the story like that.... You know what? I feel that you should feel that it's in your best interest to write more... or... or... I don't know what I'll do yet, but I'll do it!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

jinny_jo_2001 · 06-10-2001, 06:33 PM

heres some more:

Jinnys smile has just gone to a frown: But Mag, I cant leave my stuff there. Were over. He probably doesnt wanna see any of Jinny Exsteads stuff just laying around his place!
Magda puts her hands on her hips and then sighs: well maybe your right. Anyway its your life do it however you want to.
Jinny grins: So after work I will just calmly go over there and get my stuff WITHOUT bringing his..
Magda: theres and idea

*the whole day has passed and Jinny went to Theodores*
Jinny rings the bell and Teddy answers it
Theodore looks angry: Wheres my stuff?
Jinny acts like shes innocent: Ooops! Did I forget to bring Mr. D.A's stuff back to him
Theodore: its NOT funny Jinny.
Jinny: Well I figure your a grown man, you should do things for yourself. Just like im coming here to get my stuff why dont you stop acting like a kid and got yours. WOW! Theres and idea!
Theodore: Just get your stuff and leave!
*Jinny walks through the door to see its a MESS!*
Jinny: What the h*** happened here!
Theodore: Oh, havnt got to cleaning it up yet.
Jinny: How am I gonna find my stuff like this?
Theodore: I dont know, your an adult, figure it out.
Jinny looks at Theodore madly as she starts to pick up some stuff. She comes across something that does not belong to her nor is it Theodores. It looks like its for a woman but who?
Jinny looks at Theodore madly: What..whats this? *she picks the thing up*
Theodore grabs it away from her: Its nothing!!
Jinny: Its something! Now who does this belong too?
Theodore: Its...its my sisters!
Jinny: You dont have a sister!
Theodore sighs: Cant get past you, can I?
Jinny nods: Please, tell me.
Theodore: well that same night I felt so bad I kinda did what you did.
Jinny suddenly drops all of her things and her mouth drops open: what?
Theodore: I didnt know what came over me i felt so angry and all I.....
Jinny just looks at him then snaps outta it: But now that were through it doesnt matter right?
Theodore looks away: No of course not..
Jinny bends down to pick up all of her things. When she has everything gathered in her arms she looks at Theodore.
Theodore: when can I come to get my things?
Jinny shrugs: Maybe when your free. Theres a thought *she walks out of his place*

XoVanillaRain90oX · 06-16-2001, 11:38 AM

occ this is jinny_jo_2001 I am gonna finish this.

Jinny walked out of his door for good. When she got home she noticed all of his stuff WAS gone. Maybe she was imagining it, she didnt really know what was happening.
From that day on neither heard of or spoke to eachother
Theodore got married and had 2 kids and well Jinny lets just say she didnt have such a great ending to this story. She went back to being her usual self, slepping around, getting drunk and all that.
Jinny and Theodore Will Never Be Again.

BlairW_1 · 06-16-2001, 03:00 PM

D: (Mouth open, lip trembling.) I... but... (Tears form in eyes.) Teddy... Why? Okay, I'm like, seriously crying now, so I'm gonna stop typing soon. Or maybe not. The story was really good for peepz that didn't like the Jinny/Teddy thing, and really good for peepz that did, itz just a lil sad... (Tear rolls down cheek, sniffs.) Okay, 'nuff typing, need a tissue now.

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~*Danielle*~

NewsiesGurl229 · 06-16-2001, 03:25 PM

Why huh? teddy NOOOOOOOO!!!! I'm gonna cry. NO MORE TEDDY!!! Why do they, ahhhhhh. Why do they need to break up on the show. WAAAAA WHAAAAAA WHAAAAAA!!!! Wha Wha wwhWHAAAA WHA!!! OK gonna stop rambling on now.

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

XoVanillaRain90oX · 06-16-2001, 06:35 PM

yeah, that would of been a great thing w/ Magda/Jinny but I was more concerned about the whole Jinny/Teddy thing

-Lisa

06-09-2001, 01:58 PM	#1
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	Lonely @ Heart It was a normal day at the S.F.P.D. Captain: Reide, DeLorenzo you have a homicide case on Chrissy Andre. CD and Angela nod: Were on it Captain The captain looks around: Exstead....Exstead Just then Jinny walked slowly into the division. She looked pretty depressed. Jinny: Im here captain. goes and sits down Captain gives Jinny a look then says: You and Ramiraz have a case on a stolen vehicle license plate reads 415WIN3B Magda nods: Were on it Jinny sighs as she looks at some papers Magda: Jinny are you okay? Jinny looks up at Magda: Its Teddy...Last night we broke up looks down Magda pats her on the back: Oh Jin, I am so sorry. Jinny looks at Magda:not you or anybody else have to be sorry, this relationship just was never meant to be, I guess walks away from her What do you think so far? I would write more but I gotta run.

06-09-2001, 02:17 PM	#2
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Keep goin'

06-09-2001, 05:36 PM	#3
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	Definately keep going! ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

06-09-2001, 05:50 PM	#4
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Great go on! ------------------ § Tiffany § Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!! Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions!?! ~~*~~~~*~~*~~** Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. ~~~~~~~~~*~ Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no. IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

06-09-2001, 07:20 PM	#5
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	K Heres more Magda walks over to Jinny: What do you mean by that? Jinny: I never should of getten serious with anybody! Magda: well what did you do? Jinny: please, dont go there. Magda thinks: You didnt? Jinny nods: I did. I cheated on him Mag. Magda: Jinny why did you do this to him? Jinny: I was under a lot of pressure and I went to the bar and then from there.. Magda: no wonder why you two split. Jinny: I always did wonder what he saw in me you know? Magda sighs: People are attracted to different people and I guess he was attracted to you and I.. Jinny laughs a little: okay Mag, I got the point. Just then Angela and CD come over. Angela: We kinda overheard, Jinny....I (she gets cut off my CD) CD grins: Jinny, do you remember that bet we, as in you and me, made when you first started dating Theodore? Jinny: No CD: Well I bet you $20.00 that you would cheat on him and well you did but I dont want no money. But wasnt I right? Jinny nods: I guess you were...For the first time. CD smirks then walks away. Angela looks at Jinny, sighs, then walks away. Jinny: Now even my friends wanna dump me for what I did. Magda: Their just shook up, I wonder how Teddy feels, and anyways how did he find out about this? Jinny: well he was coming into the bar then he saw me go with ummm forgot his name then he just stared at me and I really didnt see him, honest. Then this morning at like 4:00 he wakes me up and tells me its over. Magda shakes her head: what a shame.. Do u like it? I gotta stop, my fingers are killin me!! LOL

06-09-2001, 09:03 PM	#6
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	OMG!!! DON"T STOP!!! are you tryin' to kill me or somethin'?

06-09-2001, 09:29 PM	#7
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	LOL okay here some more Jinny: I just wish I never had did this you know? a tear rolls down her cheek Magda: Jinny, Jinny listen you didnt do it purposly did you? Jinny nods: No of course, I would never think about cheating on Teddy. looks down Magda: I have nothing else to say. Just then the phone rings Magda: I will get it she picks it up Magda: Oh Hi Theodore Jinny looks at Magda with a 'what?' expression on her face Theodore: Can I speak to Jinny I have something to tell her! Magda: Alright Magda looks at Jinny in the eye and hands her the phone Jinny: What do you want? Theodore: I just want to say that later can you come here and pick some of your stuff up from my house? Jinny: thats what you call me at work for? Theodore: when else am I gonna get you?4 in the morning? Jinny: Fine, I will be glad to give your stuff back too! slams the phone on its hook thing Magda: what going on? Jinny: He wants me to pick up my 'stuff' from his house. Magda: and I guess he wants you to bring his stuff back to him too? puts her hands on his hips Jinny nods Then Magda grins: Why doesnt HE come and get his stuff from you? Jinny: Are you saying not to go and get my stuff Magda nods Jinny: I think I got what your getting at.

06-10-2001, 04:58 PM	#8
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	You are soooooo evil! Just leave the story like that.... You know what? I feel that you should feel that it's in your best interest to write more... or... or... I don't know what I'll do yet, but I'll do it! ------------------ My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone. If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly. ~Danielle~

06-10-2001, 06:33 PM	#9
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	heres some more: Jinnys smile has just gone to a frown: But Mag, I cant leave my stuff there. Were over. He probably doesnt wanna see any of Jinny Exsteads stuff just laying around his place! Magda puts her hands on her hips and then sighs: well maybe your right. Anyway its your life do it however you want to. Jinny grins: So after work I will just calmly go over there and get my stuff WITHOUT bringing his.. Magda: theres and idea the whole day has passed and Jinny went to Theodores Jinny rings the bell and Teddy answers it Theodore looks angry: Wheres my stuff? Jinny acts like shes innocent: Ooops! Did I forget to bring Mr. D.A's stuff back to him Theodore: its NOT funny Jinny. Jinny: Well I figure your a grown man, you should do things for yourself. Just like im coming here to get my stuff why dont you stop acting like a kid and got yours. WOW! Theres and idea! Theodore: Just get your stuff and leave! Jinny walks through the door to see its a MESS! Jinny: What the h*** happened here! Theodore: Oh, havnt got to cleaning it up yet. Jinny: How am I gonna find my stuff like this? Theodore: I dont know, your an adult, figure it out. Jinny looks at Theodore madly as she starts to pick up some stuff. She comes across something that does not belong to her nor is it Theodores. It looks like its for a woman but who? Jinny looks at Theodore madly: What..whats this? she picks the thing up Theodore grabs it away from her: Its nothing!! Jinny: Its something! Now who does this belong too? Theodore: Its...its my sisters! Jinny: You dont have a sister! Theodore sighs: Cant get past you, can I? Jinny nods: Please, tell me. Theodore: well that same night I felt so bad I kinda did what you did. Jinny suddenly drops all of her things and her mouth drops open: what? Theodore: I didnt know what came over me i felt so angry and all I..... Jinny just looks at him then snaps outta it: But now that were through it doesnt matter right? Theodore looks away: No of course not.. Jinny bends down to pick up all of her things. When she has everything gathered in her arms she looks at Theodore. Theodore: when can I come to get my things? Jinny shrugs: Maybe when your free. Theres a thought she walks out of his place

06-16-2001, 11:38 AM	#10
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	occ this is jinny_jo_2001 I am gonna finish this. Jinny walked out of his door for good. When she got home she noticed all of his stuff WAS gone. Maybe she was imagining it, she didnt really know what was happening. From that day on neither heard of or spoke to eachother Theodore got married and had 2 kids and well Jinny lets just say she didnt have such a great ending to this story. She went back to being her usual self, slepping around, getting drunk and all that. Jinny and Theodore Will Never Be Again.

06-16-2001, 03:00 PM	#11
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	D: (Mouth open, lip trembling.) I... but... (Tears form in eyes.) Teddy... Why? Okay, I'm like, seriously crying now, so I'm gonna stop typing soon. Or maybe not. The story was really good for peepz that didn't like the Jinny/Teddy thing, and really good for peepz that did, itz just a lil sad... (Tear rolls down cheek, sniffs.) Okay, 'nuff typing, need a tissue now. ------------------ ~Danielle~

06-16-2001, 03:25 PM	#12
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Why huh? teddy NOOOOOOOO!!!! I'm gonna cry. NO MORE TEDDY!!! Why do they, ahhhhhh. Why do they need to break up on the show. WAAAAA WHAAAAAA WHAAAAAA!!!! Wha Wha wwhWHAAAA WHA!!! OK gonna stop rambling on now. ------------------ From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice "We need some help, down here on earth, a thousand prayers, a million words, but one voice was heard." From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am "I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan." And last but not least, From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma "Suitcase packed with all his things, Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home." Can't Wait for their concert here! ~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

06-16-2001, 06:35 PM	#13
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	yeah, that would of been a great thing w/ Magda/Jinny but I was more concerned about the whole Jinny/Teddy thing -Lisa