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05-04-2001, 10:39 PM
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Ok another fan fic by Me and Nancy McKeon Rox
Ok well god knows this will be extremely long, so enjoy!
Angela: So where is Jinny anyway? CD: She said something about getting her hair done for her birthday.... She was getting it cut or something. Magda: Yeah, her birthdays tomorow right? I completely forgot... But dont tell her i said that!*phone rings* Ramirez? Oh hi jin! Hows the hair? Jinny: Ehhh... its different. Magda: A good way or a bad way? Jinny: Well, (runs hand over like 100 little braids they put in her hair) I like it! But im afraid of what people will say. Magda: Well what did they do??? Jinny: I have a bunch of itty bitty braids all over my head! Magda: AAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! AHAHAHA! Jinny: Its not that funny.... I dont know if i like it.... Im not used to it! Magda: Well come down here and show us PLEASE? Jinny: Alright... But promise me youll give me the wildest party ever ok??? Magda: As long as your there itle be a wild party... Ok, bye. *giggles* CD: And what is so funny? Magda: Jinny has those braids all over her hair.... This should be interesting! Angela: Be nice to her! Its her birthday... (snickers) Magda: What? Angela: Well after you have little brads in, when you take them out, your hair frizzes out like this (holds hands up) big! Magda: Hehe... Ok, ok, not funny. *jinny comes in, wearing a hat* WHOA! that was quick! Jinny; I called you from my car. CD: Jinny, that hat must be hot, why dont youtake it off? Jinny: hehheheh. no. Angela: Please we wont laugh. (jinny takes it off) HAHAH! You didnt tell us you get bright red highlights!!!!!!!!! Jinny: Uhhhhhhh! I didnt ask for it... they just did it! CD: You knew what they were doing. Jinny: OK! so i like it. SO what shall we do for my birthday? Magda: Anchorside, where else? Jinny: Satifying... (kate comes out) Cases, nice hair, Jinny and Magda, Dog abuse case. CD angela, murder of a bank owner. Jinny: NO! Not another dog case! Kate: Sorry i have to give it to someone! Jinny: Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat! Kate: What did you do to your hair any way? Jinny: Long story... Like? Kate: It looks ok on you... of course, i wouldnt be coagt dead in it. (goes into office) Magda: Well, lets go investigate. Jiny: Oh whoopdi deeedle! Your turn... tell me if you like it... no it has nothing to do with anyother TV show. |
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05-05-2001, 07:28 AM
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I love it and those little braids are called dreadlocks...Im sorry I had to say that
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05-05-2001, 09:05 AM
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this should be an interesting one...hehe please continue!!!
------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~ |
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05-05-2001, 10:56 AM
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This sounds good so far.Keep going!!
------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!! |
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05-05-2001, 01:45 PM
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Magda: I can't believe we got stuck on another "dog case".
Jinny: Really, one's enough. [Magda starts staring at Jinny's hair.] What?!?!?! Magda: Uhh... has "Teddy-poo" seen your hair? Jinny: No, not yet... [They start to walk out of The Division, but guess who the bump into... <drumroll, please>] Teddy: Jinny, is that you? Jinny: Um, No! *she runs to the door and Magda is standing beside Teddy* Teddy: *points at his hair* Uhh... Magda: She got it done for her birthday... Teddy: Why does she have on a hat? Magda: She's afraid of what people will say... Teddy: Jinny? AFRAID?!?!? I don't know about that. Magda: Yeah, well... We've gotta case to work on. See ya later. Teddy: Bye! Tell Jinny, "Hey!" for me, OK? Magda: Alright. [Jinny's sitting impatiently in the car, waiting on Magda. Mag walks to the car and gets in.] Jinny: What took you so long? Magda: I was talking to Teddy for you. Jinny: What do you mean you were talking to him for me? Magda: You ran out, so... Jinny: SO... Magda: He wanted me to tell you hey for him. Jinny: Oh. Kay. Magda: So, where's this case at, anyways? Jinny: 122 Court Street. Pine Ridge Apartments, apartment 7-A. Magda: Greaaaaaaaaat... Your turn!!! ------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. |
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05-05-2001, 02:02 PM
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hehe...hehehe...he.
(inside apartment building) Jinny: SFPD! Open up! Guy: Why? Magda: Were investigating a dog abuse case! Let us in! Guy: I dont have to! Jinny: (sticks eye up to peep hole) Oh, yes, i think you do. Guy: Fine. (opens door) Magda: Are you Guy Peterson? Guy: Uh huh... Look i dont know what your talking about! Jinny: Yeah, ok, right, well... We have had reports of you, beating your dog... and not feeding him. This IS the only apartment building that will allow you too keep pets around here. Guy: Well you know what....(jinny and magda just walk on by) Wait! Dont... (jinny opens door. Inside theres a germain shepard... It is REALLY skinny and limps over) Jinny: Oh poor baby! Guy: This isnt what it looks like... Magda: Your under arrest for animal abuse , (guy starts too run away) Jinny: HEY!!! HEY!!! (stat too chase him) Your turn! |
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05-05-2001, 03:14 PM
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[Jinny grabs him by the shirt puts her arm around his neck while Magda puts on the hand cuffs. They take him back to the station and Kate is standing there.]
Kate: Wow, that was FAST! Jinny: I know, thanks! Kate: *raises her eyebrow* Well... since you two did such a good jod, I'm gonna let you have the rest of the day off. Magda: Wow, Cap. Are you sure about this? Kate: Hurry, just leave before I make you stay. Oh, and Jinny... you might wanna do something about that hair doo of yours while your off... Jinny: Yeah, yeah, yeah, whatever... [Jinny and Magda grab their coats and head dor their cars. They bump into Teddy again. HAHA!!!] Teddy: Jinny, don't run off again! Jinny: *pulls the hat down far on her head* Why?!!? Teddy: Because I need to talk to you! Jinny: About what? Youre turn!!! ------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. |
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05-05-2001, 07:03 PM
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Ok!!!!!!
Teddy: Well you misteriosely dissapeered last night... AGAIN! Jinny: I was um.... Pre Birthday celebrational time! Teddy: That doesnt make sense! Jinny: Wel i was out. Teddy: You have used that already! Jinny: Are you saying you dont trust me??? Magda: Im just gonna go ove there... Jinny: No stay! Well are you? Teddy: No... Its just i think your lying to me! Jinny: Which means you dont trust me! Teddy: Something just isnt right. Look just forget this happened. Jinny: Yeaj ill do that! Teddy: Can i see your hair? Jinny: Nnnno. Teddy: Please? Magda: Yeah c'mon jin! Jinny: (pulls hat off) You hate it dont you? Teddy: No its(giggles) Cute. Jinny: Cute, cute... i hate cute. Teddy: Its.... very... hip hoppy. Jinny: Hip hoppy??? Hmmm.... Is that a good thing? Teddy: I dont know... why dont you tell me? Jinny: Yes, hip hop is good. Teddy: Hey see you later k? Jinny: See ya (teddy leavs) Magda: Jinny where were you last night? Jinny: What is this??? Questioning??? Magda: No but... where? Jinny: I was...was...um... YOUR TURN! |
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05-05-2001, 10:53 PM
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Great Job guys! MORE ASAP
------------------ aOL SN: nancymckeonfan8976 yahoo sn: nancyfan8976 email/mca messanger:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men. Magda: You...give up sex? No way. Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery |
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05-06-2001, 05:08 PM
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Jinny: ... um... I've got the rest of the day off, so I'm gonna go. Bye!!!
[Jinny runs out the door, putting her hat on and she goes home.] ((At Jin's Apartment)) Jinny: Home at last... [She sits her coat on the chair and sits on the couch and sighs. Somebody knocks on the door.] Jinny: Who is it? Teddy: It's me! Jinny: Nobody's here! Go 'way! Teddy: If nobody's there, then who's talking to me? Jinny: I... umm... THE TOILET!!! Teddy: OK then toilet... when Jinny comes home, tell her to call me. Jinny: OK! [Teddy unlocks the door.] Teddy: Toilet, huh? Jinny: You got me. Teddy: What's the matter with you? Jinny: Nothing! I'm fine! Just peachy! Teddy: When you say, "Just peachy!" something has to be wrong. So, spit it out. Jinny: Well... I... Your turn, DANA!!!! ------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. |
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05-06-2001, 05:19 PM
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Jinny: You have reached 123-4567 leave a message afeter the honk and I Jinny Exstead will get back to you ASAP! HOOOOONK!!
Teddy: JINNY! Jinny: Uh.... ok,ok I met this guy... ehhm... in the...uh bar.. and i uhh.... i... went with him... to his apartment. Teddy: How could you do this to me!?!?! Jinny: It, iitit, it meant nothing.... I was drunk, i didnt mean to... IM SORRY. (teddy starts too leave) No wait please wait! Teddy: Why??? Jinny: (crying) Please... im sorry... I promise i wont.... Teddy: I cant do this... Was that the case last time??? Thats not a realationship... its just a big lie! Jinny: NO!!! Dont... i cant loose you... I LOVE YOU! Teddy: If you loved me then why did you cheat??? Jinny: I didnt love those guys... And ill probably never see them again! Teddy: But there will me others! Jinny: No there wont. YOUR TURN!! [This message has been edited by NancyJoJinny (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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05-06-2001, 05:43 PM
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Jinny: Please Teddy, don't leave me! I was drunk!!!
Teddy: And that's supposed to be an excuse? Jinny: Teddy! [Jinny sits on her knees on the floor and outs her hands in her face and starts to cry and Teddy leaves.] What have I done!?!?!? [Jinny goes to her bedroom any lies on her bed, curled up in a ball. She's not exactally crying, but you know what I mean...] **The phone rings** [Jinny doesn't answer it, so it just rings...] ----- The Next Day [Jinny's an hour late for work. She looks bad, and she's just dragging her feet. She can't pick them up.] Kate: Exstead, your late again. Jinny: Yeah, yeah, yeah... [Jinny sits down at her desk and Magda walks over to her.] Magda: Jin, what's the matter? Jinny: I... I... uh... just didn't get much sleep last night. Magda: *laughs* Were you out with Teddy? Jinny: CUT IT OUT! JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!! Magda: What did I say?!? Jinny: Just *points at Magda's desk* go! Magda: Alright, alright... [Jinny gently runs her fingers through her hair and sighs.] Your turn!!! ------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. |
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05-06-2001, 05:53 PM
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Jinny: (gets all teary but sucks up)
Magda: Jinny... Whats wrong? Jinny: (starts playing with one of the braids) I... Just... Can we talk in private? Magda: Yeah sure. (bathroom) Magda: Now whats wrong with you??? Jinny: Well for starters i forgot my hat! Magda: and???... Jinny: The other night... id did pre celebrate for my partie... But i went home with another guy a... and teddy knows now and we broke up (not really crying but crying...does that make sense) Magda: Did you try talking too him?? Jinny: I begged him to forgive me but he wont... He doesnt trust me... I dont deserve to be trused! (runs out of room) Magda: Jinny... Jinny wait! YOUR TURN! |
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05-06-2001, 07:27 PM
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Great job! I can't wait 4 s'moa!
------------------ In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray... "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13 "For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5 "For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first. Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17 ~*Danielle*~ |
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05-07-2001, 05:58 PM
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[Jinny runs out to her desk and grabs her coat. She stars to walk out of The Division, but she bumps into Kate.]
Kate: Where do you think your going? Jinny: I gotta go. [Jinny goes out to her car.] Kate: Where is she going? Magda: I don't know. Kate: Don't just stand there! Follow her! [Magda follows Jinny to the bar. She's sitting on a stool sipping on a beer.] Magda: Jin, I think you'd better go back to The Division. Jinny: Why? Magda: Kate made me follow you here and I think she's kinda mad. Jinny: That's not my problem! Magda: Well, it WILL be, let's go. Jinny: Hey bartender! [Throws a ten on the bar as Magda drags her out of the bar and back to The Division.] Kate: So... I see you decided to come back. Jinny: Not willingly. Kate: Yeah, whatever. Anyways... you've got some work to do, so I suggest you so it. Jinny: Fine. [Teddy walks in, but he goes into Kate's office. When he comes out, he stops by Jinny's desk.] Teddy: Hey... Jinny: What? Teddy: Well... I... uh... Your turn!!!!!! ------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. |
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