Every Moment (Fan-Fiction)

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Here is Another Fan-Fiction I have been working on.

Engagement: Every Moment
Series 1,Story 4

**Jinny's Car**
Magda and Jinny are stopped at a red light on their way back to the station from lunch. Both Laughing at what the bumper sticker on the car in front of them reads, " Men are proof that women have a sense of humor." Laughing Jin says, "I've never seen that one before!!" Magda laughing aswell shakes her head, "Me either." A message comes over the dispatch radio," *Resites some numbers* O'Conner Law Offices" Both woman stop laughing when they hear the words, "O'Conner Law Offices." Jinny looks at Magda frightened, "You think-" as she tightens her grip on the stearing wheel. Magda looks at her watch then to Jinny and says, "Let's go check it out,Jin." knowing Jinny is worried. Jinny nods and pulls out of the lane she's in. Puts the viser down revealing the police lights and turns them on. She makes sure it's clear to make a U-Turn and then does. She's now heading toward the direction of the law offices. Magda's phone rings. "Ramirez" she answers. "On our way there now. Yes,Captain. Okay,See ya there." Magda hangs up. "Captains meeting us there." Magda says looking over to Jinny. Jinny just nods keeping her eyes steadly on the road.

**C.D. & Angela**
Both Inspector's walk through a Bar. They arrive at the hallway that leads to the Restrooms. Which is bound by Yellow Police Tape. They lifts it up and go underneith it to the other side,and walks toward the Men's Restroom. "Hey Inspectors." Steven says looking up from the Dead body of a man that he is hovering over. "Hey" Angela says. "Hey Steven, What do ya got?" C.D. asks looking from Steven to the man lying on the ground. "Uh Jack Balbadero 37. Stabbed at the base of the spine. Causing him to be paralized. Looks like that didn't stop whome ever did this to him. Because after that he was beaten up until the last breath left his body. " Steven says pointing to the bruises and blood over the man's body. C.D. nods, "How long?" Steven looks at his notepad, "Around 9:00-10:30 this morning." "Okay,Thanks Steven." C.D. says as she and Angela walk toward an Officer on the scene. "Who found him?" Angela asks. The officer points to the left of him to a man sitting on a bench in the hallway and says," George Prestoff." Angela and C.D. looks over to the man,"Thanks" C.D. says as she and Angela walk toward the man.

Should I go On? (I have a lot more Written Actually..lol)

[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 05-21-2001).]

[Jinny_Extead]

POST MORE!!!! Your Killing me!!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

lol..Okay okay. Thanks for Reading. Here is somemore!

**O'Conner Law Offices**
The building is on fire. Jinny pulls up into the parking lot. Both Inspectors get out of the car. "Oh my God." Magda says to herself as she closes the car door. Jinny looks around for Theodore. She doesn't see him. Jinny runs to one of the nearest Firefighters on the scene. She flashes her badge to him. "What's going on? Anyone still inside?" Jinny asks hopeful that no one will be. The Firefighter nods. "Yes,We estimate there is around 5 people still inside. Over there are the people who have gotten out. So far." the man says pointing over at an Ambulance with a few people sitting at the back of it. "Thanks" Jinny runs over to the Ambulance. "Hello, I'm Inspector Jinny Exstead. Do any of you know Theodore Blumenthal?" A woman looks at Jinny, "Yes I know him. I work in the Office aswell." she reply's. "Great. Do you know where he is? Have you seen him today?" Jinny asks. The woman nods,"Yeah,actually I did. I seen him when he came to work this morning. He past by my desk on the way to his office like every morning." "Okay? Was he in the building when it caught on fire? Did he get out?" Jinny asks looking around some more. "No um the last time I seen him he was in the Building. About 5 minutes before the Alarm went off. He asked me if I had received a fax yet." The Woman says. "Okay thanks." Jinny walks alittle away from the ambulance. Then stops. She closes her eyes for a moment then brushes away a tear,and takes a deep breath. She feels a hand touch her shoulder. Jinny opens her eyes and looks. The woman she had just been talking to was standing beside her. "Did you say your name was Jinny?" "Yes" Jinny nods and runs her finger underneith her eye. "So you're the one." The lady smiles. "I don't know what you're talking about." Jinny reply's. "You're the one Theodore is always mentioning." the Woman says putting out her hand. "Penny Jacob. I work in the office. I hope it helps you to know he is always talking about you." A slight smiles come over Jinny's face as tears come steaming down her face as she nods. The woman puts her hand on Jinny's back. "I'll leave you be,Jinny. Nice meeting you. I wish it could have been under better circumstances." the lady says and she walks away. Jinny wipes her face and walks closer to the Fire Engines. Just then some firefighters come out of the burning building helping three people out. None which was Theodore.

**Station**
C.D. and Angela are sitting at there Desks across from eachother. Angela is on the computer typing up the information they collected earlier. C.D. looks up from their file to Angela. "Steven estimates this happened around 9:00-10:30 this morning. We have three people who tried to use the restroom and couldn't get in. None could give us an exact time." C.D. says as she leans back. "Someone would have had to see the person who did this exit the restroom." she adds. "But Who? and What was there motive?" Angela says shaking her head still typing. C.D.'s phone rings, "De Lorenzo" she answers. "Uh-huh. I see. Edward Hanson?" C.D. nods and writes some stuff down. "Okay. Thanks a lot. Bye."she hangs up the telephone. Angela looks up,"What was that?" "Looks like our murdered was sloppy. Some fibers were found on the victim. Matching" looks at the notepad. "Edward Hanson." C.D. says glancing back at Angela.

[ks]

DON'T STOP THERE! ...CONTINUE ON...

PLEEZE


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[Jeanie]

MORE MORE PLEASE Can't wait to read more. You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work.

Jeanie

[NancyJoJinny]

AHHH!!! Teddy!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!! Ok just write more and ill shut up.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Here is some more!

**O' Conner Law Offices**
Two officers open an enterance so a car can pass through. The Car stops and Captain gets out. She spots Jinny and walks over. "Hey Jinny." she says. "Oh Hi." Jinny says wiping away her tears real fast. "You Okay?" Captain asks. Jinny shakes her head as puts her hand to her face covering her eyes. As she trys and hide the tears. Cap puts her hand on Jinny's back. "Jinny everything-" Captain begins to say. Jinny throws her hand down and begins walking closer toward the fire engines. "Jinny what are you doing?" Kate says hurrying after her. "I have to find him." Jinny says seriously as she still is walking. Kate catches up and grabs ahold of Jinny's arm. "Are you crazy? You can't go in there." Jinny stops and looks at her Captain. "I-" Jinny exhales and thinks for a moment. "I know." she says as she looks toward the ground and tears begin to flow once again.

**C.D. and Angela**
C.D. and Angela walk into the room and closes the door behind them. "Hello, Edward." Angela says looking into the file. "I'm Inspector Reide. This is my Partner Inspector De Lorenzo. We'd like to ask you some questions." "Yeah,Okay. Shoot." Edward says leaning back in his chair and glances at his lawyer. C.D. sits down across from Edward. "Where were you this morning between 8:00 -10:00?" "I was.....uh, on the other side of town. Visiting my parents." Hanson says. "We'll have to validate that." C.D. says. "Do you know someone by the name of Jack Balbadero?" Angela says walking over toward the Table. "Jack Balbadero?" Edwards asks. "Yes" C.D. says. "I don't recall." Edward comments. "We'll be right back." C.D. says standing up and walking to the door with her partner.

[NancyJoJinny]

AHHHH!!!!! Poor teddy! Oh who gives a ****, write more please!?!?

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[WildChildJinny]

I HATE WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT!!! They write a story that is SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo (sorry I like doing that) great and you keep reading it and they you scroll to the bottom of the screen and it says.." I'll post more later, I g2g" I HATE THAT!!!!! OK this story is really reall REALLY good so please write more a.s.a.p.!!!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

[Jinny_Extead]

OMG!!! You've got to post more!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Sorry Guys I didn't mean to just cut it off like that! hehe Sorry,Anyway, I wouldn't write where Theodore got badly badly injured or died. That's one thing you won't see in any of my Fan-Fictions. hehe I'm a Theodore Fan!! Okay here is more. Thanks For Reading!!

**O'Conner Law Offices**
Magda walks over to Jinny who was leaning against the car still watching the building hopeful. "Hey Jin. Are you okay?" Magda asks. "Well what do you think?" Jinny looks at Magda. "I'm sorry. Jinny." Magda reply's. "No I'm just really on edge. I mean. I don't even know well you know." Jinny's voice drifts off. "I know." Magda says standing beside Jinny. Two Firefighters walk out of the building carrying a woman. Jinny looks at the building then to the ground. Magda still watching the building sees someone walking inside the building building through the smoke. "Jinny" she says excited. Jinny looks up and to the building. She sees the figure walking in the thick smoke. The person walks out coughing. Jinny says running toward him. A Firefighter steps out. "Sorry Ma'am You can't go any closer." "Listen Pal. I'm a police officer" Jinny says taking out her badge. The Firefighter looks at her, "I'm sorry" Theodore sees Jinny and limps toward her. They meet and hug , Theodore kisses the top of her head. "I-I didn't know" Jinny begins to say. Theodore puts his finger to her lip and says, "I know" and kisses her. They break of the kiss. "Don't ever do that to me again. You got that?" Jinny says. Jinny reaches up and runs her hand across his cheek smearing the soot and smiles at him. "All I could think about was to get out. I couldn't give up. I couldn't give up on us." Theodore says. "I finally got my chance. I can't forget that." He says running his hand down her arm. Jinny smiles at him and looks down for a second then back at him, "What is that? Are you okay?" Jinny says refuring to the burn on the side of his leg. "Yeah, It's just uh alittle burn. I'll be fine"

**C.D. & Angela**
C.D. is looking through the window into the room where Edward is sitting. Angela comes down the hallway. "His alibi check out?" Angela shakes her head, "Nope. His parents said they haven't spoken more less seen him for over 3 weeks." C.D. nods and looks back into the room. "So how are we goin' to play this?" Angela asks. "Give him the facts and scare him." C.D. says with a smirk walking toward the door.

[JoExstead]

YAY!!! Teddy didn't die!!! This is really good....post more.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Thanks, Here is some more!

**O'Conner Law Offices**
Captain walks over to Magda. "Hey" she says. "Hey Cap" Magda says. "Where's Jinny?" Captain asks. With a smile lifts her hand up points to Jinny and Theodore by the fire engine and drops her arm again. Kate looks over and she nods with a slight smile. Right then there is a big crash as the roof of O' Conner Law Office comes collapsing down. Jinny and Theodore both look. "My god." Theodore says looks back at Jinny. The Fire chief comes over, "You two should move back some,and You young Man. Are very lucky. We anticipated that roof to cave in 5 minutes ago." He says as he walks off. "Close Call." Theodore says to himself. "Too close." Jinny says with her arm around Theodore as they begin to walk toward Captain and Magda. "Hey Teddy" Magda says. "Hey" he says after he coughs. "Hey Theodore. You okay?" Cap asks. "Yeah." Theodore says. "Teddy,shouldn't you see a doctor?" Magda asks. "Yeah,but first I'd really like to catch this guy." Theodore reply's. Jinny looks at him,"What?" "This fire didn't just happen. *coughs* Someone set it." Theodore says. "Do you think you could identify him?" Captain asks. "Yeah,sure. I recognized him he was in the other day talking to Allen." Teddy explains. " O'Conner?" Cap asks. "Yeah." Theodore says nodding.

**Station**
Angela typing on the computer looks up at C.D. "Did you see Edwards face? It was like he had no sympathy what so ever." Angela comments. "Some people are like that. Don't give a damn about anyone besides themself. Selfish." C.D. looks down at her desk. Trying to change the subject Angela asks, "How do you think everything is doing down at the law offices?" "Well hopefully everything turns out for the better." C.D. says looking back at Angela.
Then Captain pushes the Division door open and walks through. Following is Theodore,Magda,and Jinny. "Hey Theodore" C.D. says. "You okay?" Angela asks. "Hey, Yeah I'll be fine" Theodore says sitting in a chair Jinny rolled to the side of her desk. Jinny sits down aswell. Magda does the same and slides over to Jinny's desk. Captain walks to her office then comes back out and stands near Jinny's desk. Magda hands Jinny an empty folder. Jinny begins to fill it out when Captain asks, "So did this man have any motive to start this fire?" Teddy shakes his head, "I really don't know. You'd have to ask Allen. He was the one who had worked with him the other day. I just recognized him." Magda, "Wait you seen the guy start the fire?" Jinny looks over to Theodore. "Yeah I did. I remember I walked out of my office and saw something I thought was water on the floor leading around the hall. So I followed the line and when i got around the corner I saw the guy from the other day bend down and toss a match to it." Theodore coughs, "Then a line of fire came toward me in a flash and I hardly got out of the way of it. " Theodore looks down at his leg. "That's how I got burned." "Theodore, I'm going to hook you up with a sketch artist and see what you can work out." Captain comments as she walks into her office. Theodore just nods.


[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 05-23-2001).]

[NewsiesGurl229]

HEY!!!! I GOT INTERNET PRIVILIGES BACK!! I hate school! I love ur fan fic!

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Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

[NancyJoJinny]

cant wait for morE!!!!!!!!!!!!!1