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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 05-18-2001, 05:48 AM

Getting Through
Series 1, Story 3.

C.D. walks toward a building. She pauses a moment once her hand touches the door. Takes a deep breath and walks inside. "May I help you?" the receptionist asks. "Yeah, I am uh Candace De Lorenzo. I talked to my Lawyer Mr. John Oblack earlier this week. He told me to come in today and pick up some papers he was printing out for me." C.D. says to the woman behind the desk. "Yes, De Lorenzo." the receptionist says as she leans over and looks through her file cabinet. "Here we go." she says pulling out a folder that's labeled " De Lorenzo , Candace". C.D. smiles alittle and reaches over and takes the papers from the woman who is handing them to her. "Thanks." she says as she turns around and exits the building. On her way to work.

**Station**
Magda is sitting on Jinny's desk. "So you and Theodore are pretty serious." Magda comments. A grin comes over Jinny's faces as she nods and says,"Yeah we are. It's actually really different." Magda gives Jinny a look. "In a good way,Mag." Jinny laughs. Magda smiles and puts her hand on Jinny's back. "I'm really happy for ya, Jin." she says as Captain walks out of her office. C.D. walks in. "Hey sorry I'm late had some business to tend to." she says as she walks to her desk. "Well Magda Jinny you have to babysit a witness that testifies Friday." Captain says looking at them. "Gail Cooper?" Magda asks.
Captain nods and looks over toward C.D. and Angela and is about to say something when a woman comes in. Captain glances over, "Hello..Do you need assistance. Or do you have an apointment?" she asks. "I-I'd like to report a crime." The woman says. Jinny glances over at the woman. Captain then looks at C.D. and Angela. They nod and both get up. "Hello, I'm Inspector Candace De Lorenzo but you can call me C.D. and this is my Partner Inspector Angela Reide." C.D. says as Angela scoots a chair over to their desks. Both Inspectors sit back down. So does the woman. "So Ma'am what is the crime you would like to report?" Angela asks taking out a pad of paper and a pen. "My house was ran-sacked earlier this morning." the woman says reluctantly. "What's your name?" C.D. asks. "Faith Goldstein." She reply's. C.D. looks across to Angela writing down the information. "To your knowledge right now. Was anything at all stolen?" C.D. asks. Faith nods, "Yeah some of my jewelry and my Grandfathers antique watch." "Ma'am do you have an estimated value?" Angela asks taking a second from her writing. "Yes, around $52,000" Faith says. Angela and C.D. both look at eachother.

So what do you think???

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 05-18-2001, 10:50 AM

AWESOME! I needed a break from semester tests!

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A few things that can be found on bumper stickers that reminded me of Jinny...

1. Finally 21, and legally able to do things I've been doing since 15.

2. A hangover is the wrath of grapes.

3. They call it PMS because Mad Cow Disease was already taken.

4. POLICE STATION TOILET STOLEN -- Cops have nothing to go on.

5. I have PMS and a gun. Are there any questions?
(Number 5 was altered a little.)

E Pluribus Unum... Have a nice day!

º†º Kenzie º†º

Jeanie · 05-18-2001, 12:51 PM

I think that it is good. More please.

Jeanie

JoExstead · 05-18-2001, 05:02 PM

this is cool keep going

Jinny_Extead · 05-18-2001, 05:23 PM

This is great... keep going

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

NancyJoJinny · 05-18-2001, 06:19 PM

OH! PLEASE MORE!!! I just got my braces tightened and im dying... But i get them off in 6 days!!! MAKE ME EVEN HAPPIER!!! POAT MORE! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 05-19-2001, 04:57 AM

Thanks Guys!! Here is some more! Enjoy

Magda gets up from Jinny's desk and goes to her own. She opens the folder on her desk revealing Gail's phone number on the top paper. "I'm going to call and Check up on Ms. Cooper." Magda says to Jinny as she reaches for the phone. Jin turns her chair around and nods at Magda. "Go for it." Jin reply's turning back toward her desk. Magda dials the number and puts the phone to her ear. Jinny looks back behind her. Mag shrugs with the phone to her ear when Jinny looks at her. She then hangs the phone up. "Let's go check it out." Magda comments. Jinny nods and gets up.

**In Jinny's Car**
Jinny's cell phone rings. She digs her hand into her coat pocket. It isn't there. She then begins to look around for it as she keeps glancing back at the road. Magda leans over and picks the phone up from beside Jinny on the seat. "Right here, Jin." "Riiight." Jinny says with a smile. As she takes the phone from Magda and answers it. "Exstead." a smile grows across her face. "Hi Theodore." Magda looks over at Jinny,laughs alittle and shakes her head. "No I'm not busy tonight, Why?" Jinny says light heartedly. All of a sudden her voice gets more seriously, "Uh, Your parents? Tonight? " Jinny asks tucking her hair behind her ear. The traffic light turns red alittle ahead and Jin starts to slow the car. "Yeah, but uh Teddy I'm not sure that's a good idea." Jinny nods alittle. "Right,but you know" Jinny laughs alittle. "Okay okay,Theodore. What time?" Jinny smiles. "Sure, I get off work at 6:45...Uh-huh Okay see you later." Jinny smiles alittle and hangs up. She puts her phone beside her on the seat again and glances at Magda. Magda looks away from the Window, toward Jinny. "What's Up,Jin? " Jinny watches the light then looks over at Mag again, "I'm uh meeting his-" Jinny gets cut off by her phone ringing again. She reaches down and picks it up again. "Exstead" she answers. After a second she replys, "I love you too." She smiles and hangs up. Magda's eyes widen. "Ooh Really,Jin?" she Smiles. Jinny grins and drives off when the light turns green. She then nods, "Yeah well." "Jinny, I want details. When did this all happen?" Jin laughs, "What happen?" she asks,knowing what Magda means. Magda motions with her hands, "You know." Jinny glances at Magda with a smirk on her face. "About a week ago." Magda looks stunned, "And I'm hearing about it now?" Jinny laughs, "Remembers Jinny Exstead's law of Nature?" Magda nods at Jin and laughs, "Riight well that's great,Jin." she says with a smile. "Thanks,Mag. It was too." Jinny laughs.

Jeanie · 05-19-2001, 07:41 AM

I think this is very good. Please continue.

Jeanie

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 05-19-2001, 10:08 AM

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! And Dana, you're lucky I have to keep mine on for 3 more years!!!!!!! But that just puts me closer and closer to Teddy-Look-A-Like! Anyway, PLEASE MORE SOON!

hockeychiC518 · 05-19-2001, 10:41 AM

this is awesome, please continue!

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Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me

~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~

Jobie Girl 4ever · 05-19-2001, 12:43 PM

Okay this is really Hug-A-Tree, but me is grounded from the internet til wednesday. And my parents know my name. (Except this one!!!!!) sooooo I really really like it!

------------------
Hey,
Quotes(These are commonly said things in my Jobie bethel):
Geez and were bustin our butts to get here on time, well even the Honered Queen is late.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Girls Doug is going to tell us stuff we should improve on, so if he says anything that effects you, DEAL WITH IT! Doug please go ahead.
*************
For you new girls Dianne was our gaurdian for 5 years and she is very near to us. Now during this ceremony we honor her and if some of the older girls cry just ignore it.

Luv ya,
Jobie Girl 4ever

Jinny_Extead · 05-19-2001, 12:49 PM

This is really great! Keep going!

------------------
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 05-20-2001, 03:45 AM

Thanks Everyone!! Here is some more. I won't be posting anymore for a week or two because I'm going to California and won't be back until then,but be assured I will post a lot when I get back!!! Thanks again:

**Station**
C.D. and Angela are talking over the lady who had just left's case. "Well her apartment was ransacked." Angela says. "Yeah,but there's just something not right." C.D. replys. "C.D. how'd you act if your house was ransacked and your belongings taken?" Angela comments. "Nevermind,Forget it." C.D. says rubbing her forehead. It was hard for C.D. to keep her mind on her job when she had the papers in her desk. That once she filled out and dropped them off, She'd be legally seperated from Paul. The next step was for her divorce to be final. Angela interupts C.D. thinking ,"We better run this by Captain. What do you say?" "Yeah uh fine." C.D. says picking up the file, getting up and walking behind Angela to Captain's office. Angela leans in and Knocks on the open door. "May we come in,Captain?" she asks politely. Captain look at them with the phone to her ear, motions for them to come in, and puts up one finger. "We should have anticipated this. Okay,grab some lunch and get back there. She may just be out. " Captain hangs the phone up and looks at Angela and C.D. "What's Up?" C.D. tosses the file onto Captain's desk. "The woman that was just in here, Faith Goldstein. This morning her place was ransacked the burglars when through everything she owned." Angela explained. Captain nods as she is looking through there notes about the case. She looks up and says, "Anything stolen?" Angela about to says something,but C.D. cuts her off, "Fact there was. Some of her jewelry and her Grandfather's Antique watch. That she happens to have insurance on. Estimate value of about $52,000." "Wow, That's a lot of money. Go see her again. Check out her house." Cap says as she closes the files and slides it back towards the two Inspectors. "We're on it, Captain." Angela says grabbing the file off her desk. C.D. remains leaning on the wall about to turn out of the office. "C.D. can I talk to you for a moment?" Captain asks before C.D. could get out of the office. "Sure" C.D. replys. "I'll be right out." she says to Angela. Ang leaves the office. "Thanks" Captain says motioning C.D. to close the door. C.D. closes the door behind her and sits down. "I'm concerned about you, C.D. You haven't been yourself lately. " Kate says. "I just have a lot on my mind. That's all." C.D. replys back. "Well you know if you need to talk-" Cap gets interupted by C.D., "Really I'm fine." "I" the phone rings cutting Kate off yet again. "You may go" Captain says before she answers the phone. C.D. nods and leaves.

**Jinny & Magda**
Jinny and Magda walk into the corner store. "Hey Wong" Jinny says. "Hey Inspectors." Both woman walk to the back of the store to the Refrigerator Section. "Hmm that sounds good." Magda says opening the glass door and grabbing a Roast Beef Sandwich. "Yeah,Grab me one too,Mag." Jinny reply's. "Sure" Magda says handing the other sandwich to Jinny and grabbing another. "Thanks" Jin says walking over to the Fountain Soda Dispenser,grabs one of the bigger sizes of cups,and begins to fill it with soda. Magda comes over and joins her after she had grabbed a bottle of water. Jinny finishes,puts a lid on the soda,and Both Inspectors walk up to the counter to pay.

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 05-20-2001, 09:56 PM

awesome, can't wait to hear more when u get back!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 05-21-2001, 04:31 AM

Long Story. We didn't go to California,yet. So Here is some more!!

**C.D. & Angela**
C.D. parks beside the curb in front of Faith's house. "This the place?" she Asks her partner. Angela double checks the address, "Yeah, 1215 Grove Point." They both look at the address on the house. "Okay,Let's go." C.D. says getting out of the car. Angela does the same and both Inspectors walk up to the door. Angela steps forward and Rings the doorbell. After a moment and no answer. She knocks on the door. "Coming" a voice in the house says from a distance. The woman from earlier opens the door. "Oh uh Hi" the woman says opening the door. "Hello. We'd like to ask you a few more questions." C.D. says. "Sure,Come in." the womans says opening the door for them to come in. The two walk in and look around the front room. Which is remarkably clean for just being ransacked hours before. "Please,Sit down." Faith motions to them as she takes a seat on the paino bench near the couch. C.D. and Angela both walk to the couch and sit. Angela looks down and opens the folder. "How'd you get this place so clean? In so little time." C.D. asks suspiciously. "Oh well the living room wasn't ransacked." Faith says looking around the room then to C.D. "Well, Ms. Goldstein in this statement you said the whole place was ransacked." Angela points out. "Yeah and telling from what I see in front of me. Nothing is out of place." C.D. adds in. "What, I resent this. You come into my house and start insinuating that I wasn't telling the truth. Just look. Come here." Faith says getting up from the bench and walking down the well lit hallway. The two Inspectors get up and follow her. They walk through the hallway past many closed doors to the room at the end of the hall. Both walk in and look around. "Just what do you call this? Nice and tidy?" Faith says defensive. "You know what. I would appreciate it if you both leave right now." The says walking back toward the door bedroom door motioning for them to leave.

05-18-2001, 05:48 AM	#1
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Getting Through (Fan-Fiction) Getting Through Series 1, Story 3. C.D. walks toward a building. She pauses a moment once her hand touches the door. Takes a deep breath and walks inside. "May I help you?" the receptionist asks. "Yeah, I am uh Candace De Lorenzo. I talked to my Lawyer Mr. John Oblack earlier this week. He told me to come in today and pick up some papers he was printing out for me." C.D. says to the woman behind the desk. "Yes, De Lorenzo." the receptionist says as she leans over and looks through her file cabinet. "Here we go." she says pulling out a folder that's labeled " De Lorenzo , Candace". C.D. smiles alittle and reaches over and takes the papers from the woman who is handing them to her. "Thanks." she says as she turns around and exits the building. On her way to work. Station Magda is sitting on Jinny's desk. "So you and Theodore are pretty serious." Magda comments. A grin comes over Jinny's faces as she nods and says,"Yeah we are. It's actually really different." Magda gives Jinny a look. "In a good way,Mag." Jinny laughs. Magda smiles and puts her hand on Jinny's back. "I'm really happy for ya, Jin." she says as Captain walks out of her office. C.D. walks in. "Hey sorry I'm late had some business to tend to." she says as she walks to her desk. "Well Magda Jinny you have to babysit a witness that testifies Friday." Captain says looking at them. "Gail Cooper?" Magda asks. Captain nods and looks over toward C.D. and Angela and is about to say something when a woman comes in. Captain glances over, "Hello..Do you need assistance. Or do you have an apointment?" she asks. "I-I'd like to report a crime." The woman says. Jinny glances over at the woman. Captain then looks at C.D. and Angela. They nod and both get up. "Hello, I'm Inspector Candace De Lorenzo but you can call me C.D. and this is my Partner Inspector Angela Reide." C.D. says as Angela scoots a chair over to their desks. Both Inspectors sit back down. So does the woman. "So Ma'am what is the crime you would like to report?" Angela asks taking out a pad of paper and a pen. "My house was ran-sacked earlier this morning." the woman says reluctantly. "What's your name?" C.D. asks. "Faith Goldstein." She reply's. C.D. looks across to Angela writing down the information. "To your knowledge right now. Was anything at all stolen?" C.D. asks. Faith nods, "Yeah some of my jewelry and my Grandfathers antique watch." "Ma'am do you have an estimated value?" Angela asks taking a second from her writing. "Yes, around $52,000" Faith says. Angela and C.D. both look at eachother. So what do you think???

05-18-2001, 10:50 AM	#2
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	AWESOME! I needed a break from semester tests! ------------------ A few things that can be found on bumper stickers that reminded me of Jinny... 1. Finally 21, and legally able to do things I've been doing since 15. 2. A hangover is the wrath of grapes. 3. They call it PMS because Mad Cow Disease was already taken. 4. POLICE STATION TOILET STOLEN -- Cops have nothing to go on. 5. I have PMS and a gun. Are there any questions? (Number 5 was altered a little.) E Pluribus Unum... Have a nice day! º†º Kenzie º†º

05-18-2001, 12:51 PM	#3
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	I think that it is good. More please. Jeanie

05-18-2001, 05:02 PM	#4
JoExstead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 07, 2001 Location: Meford, MA (very boring town) Posts: 334	this is cool keep going

05-18-2001, 05:23 PM	#5
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	This is great... keep going ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

05-18-2001, 06:19 PM	#6
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	OH! PLEASE MORE!!! I just got my braces tightened and im dying... But i get them off in 6 days!!! MAKE ME EVEN HAPPIER!!! POAT MORE! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more! ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. ~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&* The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

05-19-2001, 04:57 AM	#7
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks Guys!! Here is some more! Enjoy Magda gets up from Jinny's desk and goes to her own. She opens the folder on her desk revealing Gail's phone number on the top paper. "I'm going to call and Check up on Ms. Cooper." Magda says to Jinny as she reaches for the phone. Jin turns her chair around and nods at Magda. "Go for it." Jin reply's turning back toward her desk. Magda dials the number and puts the phone to her ear. Jinny looks back behind her. Mag shrugs with the phone to her ear when Jinny looks at her. She then hangs the phone up. "Let's go check it out." Magda comments. Jinny nods and gets up. In Jinny's Car Jinny's cell phone rings. She digs her hand into her coat pocket. It isn't there. She then begins to look around for it as she keeps glancing back at the road. Magda leans over and picks the phone up from beside Jinny on the seat. "Right here, Jin." "Riiight." Jinny says with a smile. As she takes the phone from Magda and answers it. "Exstead." a smile grows across her face. "Hi Theodore." Magda looks over at Jinny,laughs alittle and shakes her head. "No I'm not busy tonight, Why?" Jinny says light heartedly. All of a sudden her voice gets more seriously, "Uh, Your parents? Tonight? " Jinny asks tucking her hair behind her ear. The traffic light turns red alittle ahead and Jin starts to slow the car. "Yeah, but uh Teddy I'm not sure that's a good idea." Jinny nods alittle. "Right,but you know" Jinny laughs alittle. "Okay okay,Theodore. What time?" Jinny smiles. "Sure, I get off work at 6:45...Uh-huh Okay see you later." Jinny smiles alittle and hangs up. She puts her phone beside her on the seat again and glances at Magda. Magda looks away from the Window, toward Jinny. "What's Up,Jin? " Jinny watches the light then looks over at Mag again, "I'm uh meeting his-" Jinny gets cut off by her phone ringing again. She reaches down and picks it up again. "Exstead" she answers. After a second she replys, "I love you too." She smiles and hangs up. Magda's eyes widen. "Ooh Really,Jin?" she Smiles. Jinny grins and drives off when the light turns green. She then nods, "Yeah well." "Jinny, I want details. When did this all happen?" Jin laughs, "What happen?" she asks,knowing what Magda means. Magda motions with her hands, "You know." Jinny glances at Magda with a smirk on her face. "About a week ago." Magda looks stunned, "And I'm hearing about it now?" Jinny laughs, "Remembers Jinny Exstead's law of Nature?" Magda nods at Jin and laughs, "Riight well that's great,Jin." she says with a smile. "Thanks,Mag. It was too." Jinny laughs.

05-19-2001, 07:41 AM	#8
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	I think this is very good. Please continue. Jeanie

05-19-2001, 10:08 AM	#9
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! And Dana, you're lucky I have to keep mine on for 3 more years!!!!!!! But that just puts me closer and closer to Teddy-Look-A-Like! Anyway, PLEASE MORE SOON!

05-19-2001, 10:41 AM	#10
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	this is awesome, please continue! ------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~~~Go Red Soxs~~~

05-19-2001, 12:43 PM	#11
Jobie Girl 4ever Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 18, 2001 Posts: 11	Okay this is really Hug-A-Tree, but me is grounded from the internet til wednesday. And my parents know my name. (Except this one!!!!!) sooooo I really really like it! ------------------ Hey, Quotes(These are commonly said things in my Jobie bethel): Geez and were bustin our butts to get here on time, well even the Honered Queen is late. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Girls Doug is going to tell us stuff we should improve on, so if he says anything that effects you, DEAL WITH IT! Doug please go ahead. ************* For you new girls Dianne was our gaurdian for 5 years and she is very near to us. Now during this ceremony we honor her and if some of the older girls cry just ignore it. Luv ya, Jobie Girl 4ever

05-19-2001, 12:49 PM	#12
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	This is really great! Keep going! ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

05-20-2001, 03:45 AM	#13
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks Everyone!! Here is some more. I won't be posting anymore for a week or two because I'm going to California and won't be back until then,but be assured I will post a lot when I get back!!! Thanks again: Station C.D. and Angela are talking over the lady who had just left's case. "Well her apartment was ransacked." Angela says. "Yeah,but there's just something not right." C.D. replys. "C.D. how'd you act if your house was ransacked and your belongings taken?" Angela comments. "Nevermind,Forget it." C.D. says rubbing her forehead. It was hard for C.D. to keep her mind on her job when she had the papers in her desk. That once she filled out and dropped them off, She'd be legally seperated from Paul. The next step was for her divorce to be final. Angela interupts C.D. thinking ,"We better run this by Captain. What do you say?" "Yeah uh fine." C.D. says picking up the file, getting up and walking behind Angela to Captain's office. Angela leans in and Knocks on the open door. "May we come in,Captain?" she asks politely. Captain look at them with the phone to her ear, motions for them to come in, and puts up one finger. "We should have anticipated this. Okay,grab some lunch and get back there. She may just be out. " Captain hangs the phone up and looks at Angela and C.D. "What's Up?" C.D. tosses the file onto Captain's desk. "The woman that was just in here, Faith Goldstein. This morning her place was ransacked the burglars when through everything she owned." Angela explained. Captain nods as she is looking through there notes about the case. She looks up and says, "Anything stolen?" Angela about to says something,but C.D. cuts her off, "Fact there was. Some of her jewelry and her Grandfather's Antique watch. That she happens to have insurance on. Estimate value of about $52,000." "Wow, That's a lot of money. Go see her again. Check out her house." Cap says as she closes the files and slides it back towards the two Inspectors. "We're on it, Captain." Angela says grabbing the file off her desk. C.D. remains leaning on the wall about to turn out of the office. "C.D. can I talk to you for a moment?" Captain asks before C.D. could get out of the office. "Sure" C.D. replys. "I'll be right out." she says to Angela. Ang leaves the office. "Thanks" Captain says motioning C.D. to close the door. C.D. closes the door behind her and sits down. "I'm concerned about you, C.D. You haven't been yourself lately. " Kate says. "I just have a lot on my mind. That's all." C.D. replys back. "Well you know if you need to talk-" Cap gets interupted by C.D., "Really I'm fine." "I" the phone rings cutting Kate off yet again. "You may go" Captain says before she answers the phone. C.D. nods and leaves. Jinny & Magda Jinny and Magda walk into the corner store. "Hey Wong" Jinny says. "Hey Inspectors." Both woman walk to the back of the store to the Refrigerator Section. "Hmm that sounds good." Magda says opening the glass door and grabbing a Roast Beef Sandwich. "Yeah,Grab me one too,Mag." Jinny reply's. "Sure" Magda says handing the other sandwich to Jinny and grabbing another. "Thanks" Jin says walking over to the Fountain Soda Dispenser,grabs one of the bigger sizes of cups,and begins to fill it with soda. Magda comes over and joins her after she had grabbed a bottle of water. Jinny finishes,puts a lid on the soda,and Both Inspectors walk up to the counter to pay.

05-20-2001, 09:56 PM	#14
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	awesome, can't wait to hear more when u get back!

05-21-2001, 04:31 AM	#15
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Long Story. We didn't go to California,yet. So Here is some more!! C.D. & Angela C.D. parks beside the curb in front of Faith's house. "This the place?" she Asks her partner. Angela double checks the address, "Yeah, 1215 Grove Point." They both look at the address on the house. "Okay,Let's go." C.D. says getting out of the car. Angela does the same and both Inspectors walk up to the door. Angela steps forward and Rings the doorbell. After a moment and no answer. She knocks on the door. "Coming" a voice in the house says from a distance. The woman from earlier opens the door. "Oh uh Hi" the woman says opening the door. "Hello. We'd like to ask you a few more questions." C.D. says. "Sure,Come in." the womans says opening the door for them to come in. The two walk in and look around the front room. Which is remarkably clean for just being ransacked hours before. "Please,Sit down." Faith motions to them as she takes a seat on the paino bench near the couch. C.D. and Angela both walk to the couch and sit. Angela looks down and opens the folder. "How'd you get this place so clean? In so little time." C.D. asks suspiciously. "Oh well the living room wasn't ransacked." Faith says looking around the room then to C.D. "Well, Ms. Goldstein in this statement you said the whole place was ransacked." Angela points out. "Yeah and telling from what I see in front of me. Nothing is out of place." C.D. adds in. "What, I resent this. You come into my house and start insinuating that I wasn't telling the truth. Just look. Come here." Faith says getting up from the bench and walking down the well lit hallway. The two Inspectors get up and follow her. They walk through the hallway past many closed doors to the room at the end of the hall. Both walk in and look around. "Just what do you call this? Nice and tidy?" Faith says defensive. "You know what. I would appreciate it if you both leave right now." The says walking back toward the door bedroom door motioning for them to leave.