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Jinny is a major hottie · 04-14-2001, 02:19 PM

Hey i am new to this board and i have just started watching the show because my older sis NancyMcKeonFan8976 made me! This is my first fan fic and i hope you all like it!!!!!

(Station)
Kate: Amanda signed me up for this stupid makeover contest at teh salon, i hope i lose.

(Jinny walks in tooking terribly tired and drops in to her seat.)

Magda: Jinny whats wrong you look horrible?

Jinny: Must you always rub it in. Last night while i was at the bar and drunk some guy ran up and stole my favorite leather jacket off of my seat.

( in a very ligth whisper Jinny say's ...
Jinny: that son of a bitch...

Kate: on the other hand, C.D we are finding more information and we think that we finally have the guy that killed your old partner Dick. I am going to court this Friday, would you like to join me there?

C.D: Yes, yes i would.

( phone on Kate's desk rings, Kate pick's it up)
Kate: Hello, what Amanda why are you calling me?

Amanda: Mom, you won, you won the contest you have to get your stuff ready, your leaving early today. i'll meat you at the salon in a half an hour. Love ya, bye.
(hangs up phone)

Kate: Well i guess i must go to the salon unfortanitly. When i get abck you all had better be moving. C.D you and Angela go to see the police at the park in 15 minutes. Jinny your in charge until i get back, Magda your in charge too.

Jinny: hey i can take care of this place alone.

Kate: Magda please make sure when i get back this place is exactly how i left it.

( Jinny sits in kate's chair and rolls herself to Kate's desk)

Jinny: not half bad comfy chair, Picture of family, wallet full of duh, very expensive clock, tons of bills and paper work, mmm. Hey Magda throw me my NEW leather jacket.

(Magda throws jinny her jacket and Jinny doesnt catch it and it flies adn knocks over Kates very expensive clock and breaks into many pieces!)

Angela: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Jinny: Angela shut up! What are we goign to do?

Magda: dont look at me this ur falt you didnt catch it!

Jinny: Well guess what u through the jacket so tis half your fault.

(Teddy runs in)
Teddy: Jinny, Magda we have a hostige taker on Main Street lets go.
(Jinny, Magda, and Teddy leave the office in a hurry to get there in time)

Angela: Come on Candy we have to go and see the police.

C.D: Angela my name is C.D ok, lets go.

(at the salon)
Amanda: colm down mom.

Kate: why dont you get the make over, besides your wedding is coming up you could use it more than me. besides i really have to get back to the station i stupidly left Jinny in charge adn if i stay for this maek over by the time i get back the station will be full of stripers and beer!

(At Main street)
Hostige Taker: you'll never get me because i have hostiges and if you get any closer she gets it!

Woman: ahhhhhhhh!

Magda: Jinny you and Teddy go to the right side of the building me and i will go wiht some others to teh left if we all split up we can get him, lets go!

(Teddy adn Jinny silently run to the side of teh building and here above them..
Hostige taker: Hello.
(Suddenly a net is thrown over them and the are pulled to the top of the building)
( the police try to climb up the walls to get him adn are shooting at him.
Hostige taker: stop stay away. now i have even more hostiges.
(He grads there wallets and opens them)
Hostige taker: i have Jennie and tedie? so if you try to shot or get me then they'll get it! And...

(at the salon)
Hair designer; i am done it is perfect!

(her turns Kate around to look at her self in the mirror. Her hair had been cut to the legnth of her eyes, she was wearing blue lipstick, and pink eye liner and...

(at the park)
Police man: the guy that killed your partner is in this very building get your gun because we are going in.

C.D: ok, Angela go into my glove compartment to get my gun, GO!

(Angela runs to C.D's car and opens the glove compartment. she gets the gun but then a note fell out, teh suicide note and...

(at the station)

Magda: Kate is goign to kill us what do we do maybe we can by her a new one, na to expensive, maybe we could...
(phone rings on Magda's desk, and she pick's it up)
Magda: hello, what my son, whta are you talkign about Ben where is he is he ok. wait what a hit adn run, on his bike riding home from school, where is he is he still alive, wait hello, hello are you still there?...

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Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it.

Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope...

Hope :Why mother, WHY?

NancyJoJinny · 04-14-2001, 03:11 PM

Hilarious! Write more! MORE MORE MORE!

Jo's Girl · 04-14-2001, 04:18 PM

write more soon!!! Please

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-14-2001, 09:14 PM

Good job!!! and i am not just saying that because i am "unfortonitly" your sister. lol j/k

Jinny is a major hottie · 04-15-2001, 11:30 AM

i will be going away w/ NancyMcKeonFan8976 on a family vacation so i will be back when she is back. We will fight for the computer when we return. i WILL win! lol, sh eporbubly will, cuz she is older, but oh well! later

Jinny is a major hottie · 04-25-2001, 10:12 PM

hi its me, dont be mad but im willing to finish my script if u dont hate me? ok here goes...

(at station)
Magda: hello are you still there, hello, i have to get to the hostpital, but wait i still have to call in reinforcements for Jinny and Teddy.

(at hostpital)
Magda: is he alright can i see him, is he dead, who did this, why would someone do this, hello, are you even listening to me.

Doctor walks away with a folder of medical files.

Magda sits down in a chair and noticed that Captain Kate was sitting right next to her.
Magda: Captain what are you doign here, why are you here, and what in the hell happened to you.
Kate: ohh this is all Amandas doing wiht thta stupid contest. She is at teh orphanige adopting because of her choch porblem. ya, well, im here because i was so mad at Amanda that i was driving mad and i hit some little freak on his bike in the road.
Magda: well Kate that little freak is my son and might have killed him and im sewing you horrible fat, ugly, bitch sent from hell!...

(On roftop)

Jinny: hey u ******* get out of my purse!
Jinny Kicks Hostige taker.
Hostige woman: ahhhhhhhh!
Teddy: will you ever shut up!
Jinny is madly shaking her hands behind her back.
Teddy: adn how far is shakign your own hands goign to help?
Jinny: Shut up i've almost.. got it im free i have to wait until he isnt looking and i'll...
HOstige taker leans over top of building when JInny grabs her purse, pulls out a Bud Light and hits him over the head with it and he is knocked on conshus.
Jinny: there goes lunch.

(at court)
Judge: and so he is found guilty!
Angela: C.D, im sorry i have to do this.
C.D: what are you talking about.
Angela stands up at teh judge and holds up the note.
Angela: Judge you cant arrest this man he is not guilty. i found this note in C.D's car thta she has been hiding the whole time. it is a suicide note, from Dick.
Judge: Well this changes every thing, Miss Candy you are arrested for lying under owth and will be staying in jail until we have a ferther court date to talk about this.

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Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it.

Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope...

Hope :Why mother, WHY?

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-26-2001, 08:29 PM

LOL!!! omg, this is sooooo funny! i love what you did to Kate!

Jinny is a major hottie · 05-20-2001, 03:30 PM

Sorry i have been grounded 4 2 weeks from the internet for bidding to high on e-bay!

Jinny: Well it turns out that the hostige takers only hostige was his ex. she broke up with him and he went crazy,... so how was court did u win?

Magda: ya, and for once i am happy, i have my coffy(gives a wink), i am finally siting down and they're putting that evil little hore were she belongs, speak of the devil....

2 police men walk n holding Kate back

Kate: Hold on i need to talk to Jinny,...

Jinny jumps up and runs out the door.

Kate:...hey where did she go i mean,...

Kate looks down nad sees her clock.

Kate:...JJJJJJJJIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!?!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!

in jail

C.D: well i hope she is happy because whne i get out of here i am goign to...

THE END!

What u think? should i do other fan fics?

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Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it.

Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope...

Hope :Why mother, WHY?

Jinny is a major hottie · 05-21-2001, 04:39 PM

GUESS NOT!!!!!

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Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it.

Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope...

Hope :Why mother, WHY?

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 05-26-2001, 09:38 PM

did neone ever read this? cuz no one liked it i think....i am sooo sad

Jinny is a major hottie · 05-26-2001, 09:39 PM

sorry that was me!

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-26-2001, 10:21 PM

I read it! IT was awesome! do other fan fics!

04-14-2001, 02:19 PM	#1
Jinny is a major hottie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 14, 2001 Location: New Jerz Posts: 17	(FanFic) The day our lives changed Hey i am new to this board and i have just started watching the show because my older sis NancyMcKeonFan8976 made me! This is my first fan fic and i hope you all like it!!!!! (Station) Kate: Amanda signed me up for this stupid makeover contest at teh salon, i hope i lose. (Jinny walks in tooking terribly tired and drops in to her seat.) Magda: Jinny whats wrong you look horrible? Jinny: Must you always rub it in. Last night while i was at the bar and drunk some guy ran up and stole my favorite leather jacket off of my seat. ( in a very ligth whisper Jinny say's ... Jinny: that son of a bitch... Kate: on the other hand, C.D we are finding more information and we think that we finally have the guy that killed your old partner Dick. I am going to court this Friday, would you like to join me there? C.D: Yes, yes i would. ( phone on Kate's desk rings, Kate pick's it up) Kate: Hello, what Amanda why are you calling me? Amanda: Mom, you won, you won the contest you have to get your stuff ready, your leaving early today. i'll meat you at the salon in a half an hour. Love ya, bye. (hangs up phone) Kate: Well i guess i must go to the salon unfortanitly. When i get abck you all had better be moving. C.D you and Angela go to see the police at the park in 15 minutes. Jinny your in charge until i get back, Magda your in charge too. Jinny: hey i can take care of this place alone. Kate: Magda please make sure when i get back this place is exactly how i left it. ( Jinny sits in kate's chair and rolls herself to Kate's desk) Jinny: not half bad comfy chair, Picture of family, wallet full of duh, very expensive clock, tons of bills and paper work, mmm. Hey Magda throw me my NEW leather jacket. (Magda throws jinny her jacket and Jinny doesnt catch it and it flies adn knocks over Kates very expensive clock and breaks into many pieces!) Angela: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Jinny: Angela shut up! What are we goign to do? Magda: dont look at me this ur falt you didnt catch it! Jinny: Well guess what u through the jacket so tis half your fault. (Teddy runs in) Teddy: Jinny, Magda we have a hostige taker on Main Street lets go. (Jinny, Magda, and Teddy leave the office in a hurry to get there in time) Angela: Come on Candy we have to go and see the police. C.D: Angela my name is C.D ok, lets go. (at the salon) Amanda: colm down mom. Kate: why dont you get the make over, besides your wedding is coming up you could use it more than me. besides i really have to get back to the station i stupidly left Jinny in charge adn if i stay for this maek over by the time i get back the station will be full of stripers and beer! (At Main street) Hostige Taker: you'll never get me because i have hostiges and if you get any closer she gets it! Woman: ahhhhhhhh! Magda: Jinny you and Teddy go to the right side of the building me and i will go wiht some others to teh left if we all split up we can get him, lets go! (Teddy adn Jinny silently run to the side of teh building and here above them.. Hostige taker: Hello. (Suddenly a net is thrown over them and the are pulled to the top of the building) ( the police try to climb up the walls to get him adn are shooting at him. Hostige taker: stop stay away. now i have even more hostiges. (He grads there wallets and opens them) Hostige taker: i have Jennie and tedie? so if you try to shot or get me then they'll get it! And... (at the salon) Hair designer; i am done it is perfect! (her turns Kate around to look at her self in the mirror. Her hair had been cut to the legnth of her eyes, she was wearing blue lipstick, and pink eye liner and... (at the park) Police man: the guy that killed your partner is in this very building get your gun because we are going in. C.D: ok, Angela go into my glove compartment to get my gun, GO! (Angela runs to C.D's car and opens the glove compartment. she gets the gun but then a note fell out, teh suicide note and... (at the station) Magda: Kate is goign to kill us what do we do maybe we can by her a new one, na to expensive, maybe we could... (phone rings on Magda's desk, and she pick's it up) Magda: hello, what my son, whta are you talkign about Ben where is he is he ok. wait what a hit adn run, on his bike riding home from school, where is he is he still alive, wait hello, hello are you still there?... ------------------ Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny? Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it. Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope... Hope :Why mother, WHY?

04-14-2001, 03:11 PM	#2
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Hilarious! Write more! MORE MORE MORE!

04-14-2001, 04:18 PM	#3
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	write more soon!!! Please

04-14-2001, 09:14 PM	#4
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Good job!!! and i am not just saying that because i am "unfortonitly" your sister. lol j/k

04-15-2001, 11:30 AM	#5
Jinny is a major hottie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 14, 2001 Location: New Jerz Posts: 17	i will be going away w/ NancyMcKeonFan8976 on a family vacation so i will be back when she is back. We will fight for the computer when we return. i WILL win! lol, sh eporbubly will, cuz she is older, but oh well! later

04-25-2001, 10:12 PM	#6
Jinny is a major hottie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 14, 2001 Location: New Jerz Posts: 17	hi its me, dont be mad but im willing to finish my script if u dont hate me? ok here goes... (at station) Magda: hello are you still there, hello, i have to get to the hostpital, but wait i still have to call in reinforcements for Jinny and Teddy. (at hostpital) Magda: is he alright can i see him, is he dead, who did this, why would someone do this, hello, are you even listening to me. Doctor walks away with a folder of medical files. Magda sits down in a chair and noticed that Captain Kate was sitting right next to her. Magda: Captain what are you doign here, why are you here, and what in the hell happened to you. Kate: ohh this is all Amandas doing wiht thta stupid contest. She is at teh orphanige adopting because of her choch porblem. ya, well, im here because i was so mad at Amanda that i was driving mad and i hit some little freak on his bike in the road. Magda: well Kate that little freak is my son and might have killed him and im sewing you horrible fat, ugly, bitch sent from hell!... (On roftop) Jinny: hey u ******* get out of my purse! Jinny Kicks Hostige taker. Hostige woman: ahhhhhhhh! Teddy: will you ever shut up! Jinny is madly shaking her hands behind her back. Teddy: adn how far is shakign your own hands goign to help? Jinny: Shut up i've almost.. got it im free i have to wait until he isnt looking and i'll... HOstige taker leans over top of building when JInny grabs her purse, pulls out a Bud Light and hits him over the head with it and he is knocked on conshus. Jinny: there goes lunch. (at court) Judge: and so he is found guilty! Angela: C.D, im sorry i have to do this. C.D: what are you talking about. Angela stands up at teh judge and holds up the note. Angela: Judge you cant arrest this man he is not guilty. i found this note in C.D's car thta she has been hiding the whole time. it is a suicide note, from Dick. Judge: Well this changes every thing, Miss Candy you are arrested for lying under owth and will be staying in jail until we have a ferther court date to talk about this. ------------------ Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny? Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it. Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope... Hope :Why mother, WHY?

04-26-2001, 08:29 PM	#7
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	LOL!!! omg, this is sooooo funny! i love what you did to Kate!

05-20-2001, 03:30 PM	#8
Jinny is a major hottie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 14, 2001 Location: New Jerz Posts: 17	Sorry i have been grounded 4 2 weeks from the internet for bidding to high on e-bay! Jinny: Well it turns out that the hostige takers only hostige was his ex. she broke up with him and he went crazy,... so how was court did u win? Magda: ya, and for once i am happy, i have my coffy(gives a wink), i am finally siting down and they're putting that evil little hore were she belongs, speak of the devil.... 2 police men walk n holding Kate back Kate: Hold on i need to talk to Jinny,... Jinny jumps up and runs out the door. Kate:...hey where did she go i mean,... Kate looks down nad sees her clock. Kate:...JJJJJJJJIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!?!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!! in jail C.D: well i hope she is happy because whne i get out of here i am goign to... THE END! What u think? should i do other fan fics? ------------------ Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny? Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it. Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope... Hope :Why mother, WHY?

05-21-2001, 04:39 PM	#9
Jinny is a major hottie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 14, 2001 Location: New Jerz Posts: 17	GUESS NOT!!!!! ------------------ Kate: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny? Jinny: I had a plant once... it didn't make it. Gabrielle: We just kept falling straight for lava. I hit a nitch in the wall, but Hope... Hope :Why mother, WHY?

05-26-2001, 09:38 PM	#10
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	did neone ever read this? cuz no one liked it i think....i am sooo sad

05-26-2001, 09:39 PM	#11
Jinny is a major hottie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 14, 2001 Location: New Jerz Posts: 17	sorry that was me!

05-26-2001, 10:21 PM	#12
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	I read it! IT was awesome! do other fan fics!