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NewsiesGurl229 · 05-08-2001, 07:43 PM

Okay...

Kate: Cases uh one everybody, Murder out at Camp Kitaki. 13 yr old girl named Shelly Knobel. Her counceler, Jackie Bencken, is in college and knows nothing. Let's Go.
Angela: Geez a kid can't even go to camp without the threat of being killed.
CD: Shut-up and let's go, NOW!
Angela: Got it.
(Camp Kitaki, The five women go to see Shelly's Counciler)
Kate: Hi I'm Captain Kate McCafferty, SFPD.
Jackie: Hi I'm Jackie, I honestly don't know what happened to Shelly.
Angela: That's Okay, I'm inspector Reide, this is Inspector DeLorenzo.
Magda: I'm inspector Ramirez, and this is Inspector Exstead.
Jinny: So you don't know what happened to Shelly.
Jackie: Right.
Kate: I have this little understanding that the kids that come here are required to be w/ a counciler or SK (Senior Kitaki Kid) at all times. Am I right?
Jackie: Yes unless they are switching clubs, going to the pool house, or they have other permission. Shelly being in Ranch Camp could have permission for many things.
CD: Thanks we may need to talk to you later.
Jackie: Okay.

Okay how is it?

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~~~Kate~~~

I'm Jo's Girl as many of you know me! I had to get a new name cuz this is my nick-name at school. It's easier to use.

"I just finished a case today where two guys are dead because they were afraid people would find out the truth about them. You want that to happen to Casey, huh? He's your brother."-Jinny in "Don't Ask"

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-08-2001, 07:44 PM

OMG Sry bout the double post.

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-08-2001, 09:17 PM

okay a lil' more

Jinny: Hold it so what may she have had permission for?
Jackie: Well at that time a horse was sick and they needed someone who was close to her and had ridden her a lot to go and keep her calm. We have this horse owning program here and that was her horse. She was probably with the horse. that's all I can think of.
Jinny: Okay whatever.
Magda: Jackie you seem nervous, is there something your not telling us?
Jackie: no, why?
Magda: Just checkin.
Kate: Well guys there's a body here and we need to look at it.
Angela: Okay Jackie thanx for ur time.

Okay g2g.

hockeychiC518 · 05-08-2001, 10:23 PM

add more soon!

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Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me

~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 05-12-2001, 12:12 AM

More....grrrrrrreat!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-12-2001, 11:28 AM

Okay, I'm really tired, no sleep.

(In the stables where Shelly was murdered)
Jinny: Geez it smells in here.
Magda: Shut-up. Hey she's over here.
(The girls walk over to Shelly)
CD: Multiple blows to the head.
Angela: How can you tell that?
CD: Look Angela, I've been on this job 14 years, don't ask me that. You eventually see so many of these things that you get used to it.
Kate: Well, we know that she was hit on the head sevral times.
Magda: Now by who?

Sry this story will lead up to something.

NancyJoJinny · 05-12-2001, 12:23 PM

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In english... Oooooh,Wow, more please.

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-12-2001, 05:09 PM

Hey it'll be til at least tomarrow when I get out of the hospital. It may not even be tomarrow depending on how well i'm doing.

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Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-13-2001, 12:40 AM

Okay well I can't sleep 'cause of these stupid meds!

Jinny: Uh Magda we're here to find that out!
Magda: No really!
CD: Would both of you just SHUT-UP!
Jinny: Fine, We should talk to the wranglers, and the barn SKs.
Kate: Jinny's right. So Magda Jinny that's your job.
Magda: But I don't really want to question everyone in this camp!
Kate: your not.
Jinny: COME ON!
Magda: Coming mother.
(Magda And Jinny go to the dining hall)
Kate: Now you to, call her parents and get everything you possibly can out of Jackie.
CD: Fine.

Okay got to go KUNKEE"S HERE!

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Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-26-2001, 02:32 AM

(CD&ANGELA)
CD: Hi I"m Inspector DeLorenzo and this is inspector reide with the SFPD. We're investigating ur daughters murder.
(Shelly's mom, Amy, and her dad, Brian start talking.)
Amy: Shelly had a little sister, Kellie she's seven and at school right now.
CD: Do you know of anyone Shelly didn't get along with at camp? Probably a wrangler or someone who worked in the barn.
Brian: Josie, she worked in the barn. I'm not sure though. Shelly just wasn't as crazy about her as she was Tom and Tyler. But She was 13.
Amy: You know that "Boy Crazy" stage.
(Magda&Jinny w/ tom)
Jinny: SO Tom do you know anyone shelly didn't really get along w/?

PLEASE RESPOND!

05-08-2001, 07:43 PM	#1
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	New Fan-Fic...It needs a name Okay... Kate: Cases uh one everybody, Murder out at Camp Kitaki. 13 yr old girl named Shelly Knobel. Her counceler, Jackie Bencken, is in college and knows nothing. Let's Go. Angela: Geez a kid can't even go to camp without the threat of being killed. CD: Shut-up and let's go, NOW! Angela: Got it. (Camp Kitaki, The five women go to see Shelly's Counciler) Kate: Hi I'm Captain Kate McCafferty, SFPD. Jackie: Hi I'm Jackie, I honestly don't know what happened to Shelly. Angela: That's Okay, I'm inspector Reide, this is Inspector DeLorenzo. Magda: I'm inspector Ramirez, and this is Inspector Exstead. Jinny: So you don't know what happened to Shelly. Jackie: Right. Kate: I have this little understanding that the kids that come here are required to be w/ a counciler or SK (Senior Kitaki Kid) at all times. Am I right? Jackie: Yes unless they are switching clubs, going to the pool house, or they have other permission. Shelly being in Ranch Camp could have permission for many things. CD: Thanks we may need to talk to you later. Jackie: Okay. Okay how is it? ------------------ ~~~Kate~~~ I'm Jo's Girl as many of you know me! I had to get a new name cuz this is my nick-name at school. It's easier to use. "I just finished a case today where two guys are dead because they were afraid people would find out the truth about them. You want that to happen to Casey, huh? He's your brother."-Jinny in "Don't Ask"

05-08-2001, 07:44 PM	#2
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	OMG Sry bout the double post.

05-08-2001, 09:17 PM	#3
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	okay a lil' more Jinny: Hold it so what may she have had permission for? Jackie: Well at that time a horse was sick and they needed someone who was close to her and had ridden her a lot to go and keep her calm. We have this horse owning program here and that was her horse. She was probably with the horse. that's all I can think of. Jinny: Okay whatever. Magda: Jackie you seem nervous, is there something your not telling us? Jackie: no, why? Magda: Just checkin. Kate: Well guys there's a body here and we need to look at it. Angela: Okay Jackie thanx for ur time. Okay g2g.

05-08-2001, 10:23 PM	#4
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	add more soon! ------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~~~Go Red Soxs~~~

05-12-2001, 12:12 AM	#5
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	More....grrrrrrreat! ------------------ aOL SN: nancymckeonfan8976 yahoo sn: nancyfan8976 email/mca messanger:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men. Magda: You...give up sex? No way. Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

05-12-2001, 11:28 AM	#6
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Okay, I'm really tired, no sleep. (In the stables where Shelly was murdered) Jinny: Geez it smells in here. Magda: Shut-up. Hey she's over here. (The girls walk over to Shelly) CD: Multiple blows to the head. Angela: How can you tell that? CD: Look Angela, I've been on this job 14 years, don't ask me that. You eventually see so many of these things that you get used to it. Kate: Well, we know that she was hit on the head sevral times. Magda: Now by who? Sry this story will lead up to something.

05-12-2001, 12:23 PM	#7
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	OOOOOOOoooh OOOOOOOOOoooh OOOOoooh ohohohohohohohohohohoooooooooooooooh!!! OoOoooooOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOooH WoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWoWOWowOw! MoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoReMoRe!!!!! PlEaSePlEaSe!!!! OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoHhHhHhHhHhhhHhHhHhH! In english... Oooooh,Wow, more please.

05-12-2001, 05:09 PM	#8
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Hey it'll be til at least tomarrow when I get out of the hospital. It may not even be tomarrow depending on how well i'm doing. ------------------ Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

05-13-2001, 12:40 AM	#9
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Okay well I can't sleep 'cause of these stupid meds! Jinny: Uh Magda we're here to find that out! Magda: No really! CD: Would both of you just SHUT-UP! Jinny: Fine, We should talk to the wranglers, and the barn SKs. Kate: Jinny's right. So Magda Jinny that's your job. Magda: But I don't really want to question everyone in this camp! Kate: your not. Jinny: COME ON! Magda: Coming mother. (Magda And Jinny go to the dining hall) Kate: Now you to, call her parents and get everything you possibly can out of Jackie. CD: Fine. Okay got to go KUNKEE"S HERE! ------------------ Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

05-26-2001, 02:32 AM	#10
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	(CD&ANGELA) CD: Hi I"m Inspector DeLorenzo and this is inspector reide with the SFPD. We're investigating ur daughters murder. (Shelly's mom, Amy, and her dad, Brian start talking.) Amy: Shelly had a little sister, Kellie she's seven and at school right now. CD: Do you know of anyone Shelly didn't get along with at camp? Probably a wrangler or someone who worked in the barn. Brian: Josie, she worked in the barn. I'm not sure though. Shelly just wasn't as crazy about her as she was Tom and Tyler. But She was 13. Amy: You know that "Boy Crazy" stage. (Magda&Jinny w/ tom) Jinny: SO Tom do you know anyone shelly didn't really get along w/? PLEASE RESPOND!