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ok.. this is my second division fanfic...so tell me what you think (hint...you would have to read my first one to know whats happening..i think.)
Jinny took the day off from work..to get Jessy settled at a school.it's 3:00 pm, and Jessy comes in. "How was..." Jinny started, as she walked out of the kitchen. "Don't ask" Jessy inturrupted as she threw her backpack on the couch, and sat next to it. "You didn't like it?" Jinny asked, not surprised. "No! I want to go back to New York!" Jessy said as she watched Jinny take a gulp of her beer. "Well you can't" Jinny said when she was done. "You'll get used to it...don't worry" Jessy sighed and leaned back on the couch. She looked around for a second, then had a worried look on her face. "Where's your TV?" She asked...very worried that Jinny didn't have one. "It's in my bedroom" Jinny said as she had another big gulp of her beer. "Don't worry, I'll get one for in here, ok?" "Ya..fine" Jessy said, now not worried about the tv, but about her sister. She watched Jinny finish the beer in two more gulps, and then go in the kitchen, and come out with another one. "What do you got to drink?" Jessy asked, as she got up and went to the fridge in the kitchen. She opened it to see the two bottom shelves filled with beer and alcohol drinks. The top self had milk, orange jucie, some fruit, some cheese, and 3 week old bologna. "See anything good?" Jinny asked...knowing there was nothing. "Is there a McDonalds or Burger King around here?" Jessy asked as she waled back to the living room...with a sick look on her face from the smell of the bologna. "Ya, around the block...Do you need money?" Jinny asked as she took out her wallet. "Nah..I have a few bucks." Jessy said as she grabbed her coat..which was leather. "I'll be back in a few minutes" And with that Jessy left, and Jinny sat..drinking her beer. i got to go...hope u like it! |
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Please keep goin'!! This is good!
Come on HURRY. Sorry, i guess i should not be so pushy. I guess i just like it. ------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!! |
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AWESOME!!! okay yeppers you might want to read her other one but if you don;t get it I'll try to explain it.
Jinny's grandparents live in NY and killed themselves. She finds out she has a little sister named Jessy. She finds out her grandparents were killed and that it was Jessy's boyfriend who did it. Jessy then came to live w/ Jinny. Okay that was a sumerization (SP) if u didnt read it i hope that help ~~~Kate~~~ |
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Hey write more... My cousin ran over a deer (shes fine) I have a book report due tomorow but i cant do it becase its my moms b-day, i spilled soda on my white pants... Please write more and cheer me up!
------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. |
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i got tickets to concerts but my mom wont let me go cuz i need parental supervison wtf?? ok yea there a bunch of phsycopaths at those boy band concerts...no! AND all my friends are going with out a grown up and im older then them life is so not fair!!! SO U BETTER HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE SOON!!
------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~ |
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------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!! |
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well i was going (key word going) to see nsync and then there is another concert a few days later that im going to that has many artist performing(its from a radio station) but some of the people off the top of my head is barenaked ladies, O-town, aerosmith, even and jaron, dream, joey macIntyre, and like a lot of other people but i forget, there some other good bands-singers going but i forget them
------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~ |
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I'm sorry you guys are having such bad days...so to cheer u up..i'll write more.
About five minutes later there was a knock at the door. Jinny finished off her 3rd beer, got up, and opened the door. "Hi, Ms Exstead?" A lady asked as she pushed through Jinny and into the apartment. "Ya, who are you and what do you want" Jinny asked as she shut the door and walked over to the lady. The lady waved her hand infront of her face...disgusted by the beer smell. Then she stuck out her hand. "I'm Mrs.McCarthy from DSS" She said as both her and Jinny frowned. "What?" Jinny asked...not liking what she heard. "Don't you people usually call before you come?" Jinny was annoyed...and ran around picking up the beer bottles that were around. The DSS lady saw her...and wrote something in her notebook she had. Jinny went in the kitchen to put the bottles away..and when she came back to the living room...the lady was gone. "Oh god!" The lady said from inside Jinny's bedroom. Jinny ran in there to see her looking at her wine and beer bottles...and her two guns laying on the floor. "I'm a cop" Jinny reassured her...so she wouldn't get worried about the guns. "I see" the Dss lady said as she wrote more in her little notebook. Then she walked back out the the living room...and into the kitchen. Jinny followed her close behind. She opened the fridge and gasped. "I havent been shopping latly" Jinny said...getting worried. "What do you want?" The DSS lady just made notes...and after five minutes...spole up. "Where is she?" The lady asked...staring at Jinny...who was partly drunk. Jinny looked at the woman. "Huh?" Jinny asked not knowing who she was talking about. "The girl...your sister." The lady said with disgust. Jinny laughed a drunk kind of laugh...but then looked serious. "Oh..ya..she went to McDonalds" Jinny answered..then giggled a little. "I wonder why" The dss lady mumbled as she walked to the door. "WEll..you can count on hearing from us" She said as she opened the door...but when she started to leave..she walked into Jessy. "Watch it!" Jessy said meanly...as she bent over to pick up the McDonalds bag she dropped. "You must be Jessy" The lady asked as she fixed her eyes on her. "Ya..and you are?" Jessy asked as she stood up. "Mrs McCArthey. I'm with DSS" she said very proudly. "Wonderful" Jessy said sarcastically...with a unhappy smirk. She pushed her way past the lady...and went and layed on the couch. the dss lady looked at her for a second. "Where do you sleep?" she asked as she turned and went back into the apartment. "Oh god!" Jinny mumbled queitly to herslef. "Right here" Jessy said as she sat up and patted the couch. "hmmmm" The lady said as she wrote something else down and walked over to the door. "You'll be hearinf from foster care" She said as she turned around and left. Jinny and Jessy looked silently at another. ok i got to go....but tell me what you think |
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awesome, please post more soon!
------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~ |
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I love it!! MORE!
------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ http://www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!! |
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"What?" Jessy asked madly. Jinny sat on the couch with a "what the hell" look on her face. Jessy leaned over to her and smelled her breath. "Damn you!" she said as she backed away from the smell.
"What?" Jinny asked..like she had no clue. "Your frigin' drunk!!" Jessy yelled as she jumped up from the couch. "Now wait a damn minute" Jinny started as she jumped off the couch too. "I...." Then she stopped...she cupped her hands and smelled her breath. She looked a Jessy sadly..."I'm sorry" She sat down on the couch...and looked down. "Jinny..." Jessy said as she sat next to her sister. "I didn't mean it like that..." "No...your right. I...I...I.." Jinny tried to say it but she couldnt' "You want?" Jessy asked...very concered. "I..I agree with Mrs McCarthy" Jinny finally said as she looked up at Jessy. "Who?" Jessy asked "The DSS lady...i think you should go into a foster home" Jinny said as she got up and looked down at Jessy. Jessy just looked madly at Jinny. She got up, picked up her McDonalds bag...and ran out of the aparmtent, slaming the door behind her. "Good move Jinny. Good move" Jinny said sadly to her self as she ran out of the apartment after Jessy. ok...so what you think? |
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I want more! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! [This message has been edited by NancyJoJinny (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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More!!! pwease
------------------ ~~<nancysbiggestfan>~~ Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! The Wrong Woman on Lifetime @ 2:00 eastern time May 12 Please visit my site @ http://www.justfor-nancymckeonfans.cityslide.com Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!! |
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Jinny ran down the stairs..worried she wouldnt be able to find Jessy. If Jessy was anything like her..which she was...she would be long gone. But when she got to the enterance of her building, she was surprised to see Jessy sitting on the front stairs. Jinny went and sat next to Jessy. Jessy seemed to be staring at something..so Jinny looked. It was two sisters. They were talking and laughing with eachother. Jessy looked sad.
"Look at them" Jessy said as she tilted her head..still looking at the sisters. "They're so happy, and they get along with each other. They dont drink or send the other one away" Jessy finally looked At Jinny. Jinny was still looking at the two sisters. "I have a problem" Jinny said..still staring at the girls. "A drinking problem" Jinny added as she finally looked at Jessy. "I'm not resbonsable, and i cant even take care off my self...let alone you" Jinny looked down "Hey!" Jessy snapped "I'm not a little kid, I can take care of myself!" "I dont care...i would feel better if I knew you were alive" Jinny snapped back "Ya...well I'd feel better if i knew you werent drunk!" Jessy yelled and she got up and stomped up the stairs. Jinny just sat there and continued to watch the sisters. ok so what you think? |
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