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hockeychiC518 · 05-19-2001, 11:21 PM

*NOTE: i am making this fan fic after jinny and teddy have broken up and he will play a role later if i do not get to it in this post but he will*

Its a cloudy, cold and just plain bitter, Monday morning as Jinny Exstead walked into the Division. As she approached her desk she half expected there to be flowers, or chocolates or even a note from Teddy saying how sorry he was and that he wanted her back. She looked hopelessly at her partner, Magda Ramerize, for some sympathy or some comforting words. She knew it was her fault that Teddy had dumped her but he had to understand that she had issues that needed to be delt with and a home life, still that was no excuse. She justed looked depressed as she continued to wrap up a case.

Inspector Angela Reid walked in eating a huge breakfast burito and she was offering some to her partner, Candence DeLorenzo a.k.a. CD. CD just kept rufusing and said to Angela, "That is just gross, you know Angela you have been packing on the pounds lately and if I had not known better I would have thought you were pregant." Angela just responded by giving a nervous laugh and luckily for her sack, the Captain, Kate McCafferty walked out of her office door and asked them to come into her office. "So how is the homicide case of Tristan Patterson coming along?" the captain asked. CD was the first to speak up,"We are raping up the case now." The Captain responed and said, "Thats good, do you think you can handle a robbery at the Little Peach on the corner of 6TH and 3RD street possible hostage situation. This time it was Angela's turn to speak up,"We are on it Captain" and left the captain's office and out the station.

Once more the Captain came out of her office and looked up and said, "Exstead and Ramerize in my office." They got up and walked into the captains office and Jinny closed the door behind them. The captain noticed that Jinny had not made a sarcastic comment yet, weird she thought, but it was not her place to go into her workers personal lifes, and she began to talk, "please sit, Inspectors, it seems like an old friend of yours seems like she has gotten herself into some more trouble. Jess Carter, age 14 she and another student were caught with beer in their hands as they were kissing the bathroom. This is something that is unusual at the high school so the princapal called us because of underage drinking. Please go to Adams High and check out the situation.

ok that wasnt much action but i was just trying to set everything up and i am really tired and i have a big lax game tomorrow so im goin to get some sleep, but please respond and dont worry it will get more intresting, I PROMISE!

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Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me

~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 05-19-2001, 11:26 PM

AWESOME! Can't wait 4 s'moa!

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A few things that can be found on bumper stickers that reminded me of Jinny...

1. Finally 21, and legally able to do things I've been doing since 15.

2. A hangover is the wrath of grapes.

3. They call it PMS because Mad Cow Disease was already taken.

4. POLICE STATION TOILET STOLEN -- Cops have nothing to go on.

5. I have PMS and a gun. Are there any questions?
(Number 5 was altered a little.)

E Pluribus Unum... Have a nice day!

º†º Kenzie º†º

NewsiesGurl229 · 05-20-2001, 09:52 AM

Wonderful!

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Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

Jinny_Extead · 05-20-2001, 10:33 PM

Great! Keep going!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

05-19-2001, 11:21 PM	#1
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	fan fic beginning please read and respond NOTE: i am making this fan fic after jinny and teddy have broken up and he will play a role later if i do not get to it in this post but he will Its a cloudy, cold and just plain bitter, Monday morning as Jinny Exstead walked into the Division. As she approached her desk she half expected there to be flowers, or chocolates or even a note from Teddy saying how sorry he was and that he wanted her back. She looked hopelessly at her partner, Magda Ramerize, for some sympathy or some comforting words. She knew it was her fault that Teddy had dumped her but he had to understand that she had issues that needed to be delt with and a home life, still that was no excuse. She justed looked depressed as she continued to wrap up a case. Inspector Angela Reid walked in eating a huge breakfast burito and she was offering some to her partner, Candence DeLorenzo a.k.a. CD. CD just kept rufusing and said to Angela, "That is just gross, you know Angela you have been packing on the pounds lately and if I had not known better I would have thought you were pregant." Angela just responded by giving a nervous laugh and luckily for her sack, the Captain, Kate McCafferty walked out of her office door and asked them to come into her office. "So how is the homicide case of Tristan Patterson coming along?" the captain asked. CD was the first to speak up,"We are raping up the case now." The Captain responed and said, "Thats good, do you think you can handle a robbery at the Little Peach on the corner of 6TH and 3RD street possible hostage situation. This time it was Angela's turn to speak up,"We are on it Captain" and left the captain's office and out the station. Once more the Captain came out of her office and looked up and said, "Exstead and Ramerize in my office." They got up and walked into the captains office and Jinny closed the door behind them. The captain noticed that Jinny had not made a sarcastic comment yet, weird she thought, but it was not her place to go into her workers personal lifes, and she began to talk, "please sit, Inspectors, it seems like an old friend of yours seems like she has gotten herself into some more trouble. Jess Carter, age 14 she and another student were caught with beer in their hands as they were kissing the bathroom. This is something that is unusual at the high school so the princapal called us because of underage drinking. Please go to Adams High and check out the situation. ok that wasnt much action but i was just trying to set everything up and i am really tired and i have a big lax game tomorrow so im goin to get some sleep, but please respond and dont worry it will get more intresting, I PROMISE! ------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~~~Go Red Soxs~~~

05-19-2001, 11:26 PM	#2
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	AWESOME! Can't wait 4 s'moa! ------------------ A few things that can be found on bumper stickers that reminded me of Jinny... 1. Finally 21, and legally able to do things I've been doing since 15. 2. A hangover is the wrath of grapes. 3. They call it PMS because Mad Cow Disease was already taken. 4. POLICE STATION TOILET STOLEN -- Cops have nothing to go on. 5. I have PMS and a gun. Are there any questions? (Number 5 was altered a little.) E Pluribus Unum... Have a nice day! º†º Kenzie º†º

05-20-2001, 09:52 AM	#3
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	Wonderful! ------------------ Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

05-20-2001, 10:33 PM	#4
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	Great! Keep going! ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no.