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04-23-2001, 08:36 PM
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Jo's Girl and my fan fic
(CD is sleeping her bed and Paul comes into the bedroom he was sleeping on the couch and starts to go on the bed)
Paul: Hey Candy CD: Paul stop it, we are over (Paul starts to try to kiss her) CD: Paul do I have to tell you time and time again we are over and you are the one who wreaked the marriage and i am not taking you back this time, you dont love me! Paul: I do love you Candy: How come you kept cheating on me then, i am sick of this (Paul once again trys to kiss her) CD: Paul get off of me!! Paul: Candy baby how can I love you if you keep pushing me away (CD gets up from the bed and gets a bag from the closet and is like crying is throwing close into the bag) Paul: Candy hun where are you going? CD: Paul its through I am going... JO'S Girl u pick up from here ------------------ ~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~ |
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04-23-2001, 08:43 PM
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(CD doesn't know where to go so she goes to the first and last place that u would think CD would go Jinny's place, she's asleep)
**Doorbell** Jinny-Who could that be? (Answers the door) CD what do u want? CD-(Trying to hide tears)Paul and I are over can I stay here tonight? Jinny-Sure come on in oh and go ahead and cry I won't tell anyone I promise. CD-Thanks and i'm not gonna cry. Jinny-fine u get the couch. CD-Thanks Jinny. |
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04-23-2001, 08:52 PM
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ok heres a little more
(CD goes over to the couch but theres all this crap over it and dosent look like a couch) CD: uhh..Jinny Jinny: what...?? CD: is there a couch under there somewhere... (Jinny goes over to the couch and drops everything on to the floor) CD: uhh thanks Jinny...i think... (CD wakes up a little later and she and Jinny are already late) CD: Jinny!! get up we are late... Jinny: calm down, its alright to be late once in your lifetime (CD and jinny arrive at the office) Kate: Exstead your late, need i say again? DeLerenzo your late... (Goes to her desk and its covered with flowers and candy) Sry if it wasnt that intresting yet... |
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04-23-2001, 09:06 PM
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Oh trust me it was interesting!
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04-23-2001, 09:07 PM
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CD-OK if this is from Paul UGH!!!!!!!!! Ok i'm calling him right now no better yet i'm gonna talk to him in person.
Angela-Hold it CD what are u talking about? CD-tell the Captain i have a family emergency. Angela-OK (CD leaves everyone looks at Jinny)Ok Jinn spill it. Jinny-uh what do u mean spill it? Magda-Jinny she came in w/ u, so u must know what this is about. Jinny-I promised her i wouldn't tell i'm keeping my promise. Angela-JINNY!!!! SPILL IT NOW!!! Jinnt-(yelling)ANGELA SHUT-UP I"M NOT TELLING GET OVER IT!!! Kate-what is going on out here? Where is DeLorenzo? Angela-Jinny? Jinny-She had a family emergency. Magda-OK Jinny spill it. Jinny-I don't know anything. How is it? Ur turn. |
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04-23-2001, 09:40 PM
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AWESOME!!! LOl, i love how Jinnys couch is covered in Carpt...it is sooo true!!!
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04-24-2001, 07:57 PM
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Magda: Come on Jinny were all friends here you can tell us...
Angela: Jinny i am her partner I have a right to know what is going on Jinny: just forget it huh? Magda: Jinny hun...spill it or i will tell about the time in junior high when you... Angela: ooo I wanna hear that... Jinny: ok she and paul got in a fight, actully they are over, and she came over to my place in the middle of the night crying..is that wht you wanted to hear? (CD returns and Angela and Magda just stare in disbelife) CD: so i take it as jinny told you Angela: its ok we completely understand and we are here for you CD: jinny i should have known better to trust you not to tell Jinny: CD i am sry, they cornered me (CD starts to cry a little) CD: yea whatever just tell the captain... Kate: tell the captain wht... CD: that I do not feel well and i am going to take the rest of the afternoon off Kate: CD, I have no clue what is going on in your personal life and thats your business not mine but I just want you to know that if you ever need anything just knock, you may go (CD leaves but as soon as she leaves that office she gets to her car and slids down the side of her car and starts balling in tears) please respond and say wht u think so far ------------------ ~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~ |
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04-24-2001, 08:29 PM
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i am!!!! I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!
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04-24-2001, 09:26 PM
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Jinny-There ya happy I told ya and now CD will never trust me again!
Magda-Jinny we're sorry. Jinny-Sorry doesn't help Mag CD's having serious problems in her personel life trusts me not to tell and i spill it. Angela-Hey it's our fault we egged you on. Jinny-Hey Magda tell the Captain I'm sick also. I've got to go. (Jinny walks out to the parking lot and sees CD) Jinny-CD hey it's okay, i'm sorry i told i shouldn't of. CD-It's okay i just don't know what to do he's a dirty rat and i don't know what to do. Jinny-dump him. listen why don't we go back to my place. CD-thanks Jinny. Hey please respond. |
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04-25-2001, 08:48 PM
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ok sorry i havent post for a while but i have been brain dead(and still am) so sry if this is not intresting
Jinny: Hey come on CD i will drive us back to my apartment CD: ok and Jinny, thanks a lot for everything, it really means a lot to me because it is a hard time for me Jinny  trys to cheer her up a little) Now dont get all mushy on me, come on lets go..(once inside Jinny's apartment they see the window is open, the same one that had the broken lock) CD: uhh Jinny i thought you fixed... Jinny: so did i, i guesse Teddy has to work on it again hehe (nervously laughs) (they check around sort of to see if anything is missing... but then as they enter Jinny's bedroom they see Paul standing there waiting with a gun pointed at them) CD: (shocked) Paul wht are you doing here and how did you find out where I was? Paul: I am here to get back wht I love most and if she dosent love me she most die married to me... Jinny: Paul just calm down now, you didnt anwser the questions how did you know she was here and how did you get a gun Paul: Process of elimination and if Candy baby wasnt her when you got back well I just have to find out where she was(evil laugh) and jinny hun you should really keep those hidden guns better hid! Now CD are you coming with me or not... CD: No Paul sry I dont want to be hurt again.. Paul: (pulls back trigger) I am sorry candy baby you dont know how much this hurts me... |
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04-25-2001, 09:21 PM
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OMG!!! MOERE! this is sooo good!!!!
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04-27-2001, 06:43 PM
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Ok sry i've been like super busy. heres more.
Jinny-OMG!!! PAUL STOP (CD falls to the ground) Paul ur under arrest for attempted homicide u have the right to remain silent (finishes rights calls 911, then for backup, then the captain and everyone else and gets a ride w/ magda. Hospital) Jinny-Oh i should have done something...i could've prevented this. Kate-Oh Jinny it's not ur fault. Jinny-Yes it is...if i would've hidden my guns better this never would've happened. Magda-Jinn it's not ur fault it's Paul's. Angela-Yeah How would u know that Paul would find out CD was staying at ur place. Jinny-I've g2g someone call me when there's any news. Magda-okay Jinn... (later that day at jinny's house she get's a gun out of the closet...) Ok u go... |
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04-27-2001, 07:34 PM
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(Jinny goes over and sits on her bed and starts to cry and starts talking out loud to herself)
J: why did I stop this, I could of stoped this!! maybe if i had hid my gun better maybe he would not have shot her...why why did it have to be CD, she was a great cop and a great person she had such a good life ahead of her more then I could say... (goes over to the draw takes out some sleeping pills and liquior and takes a handful of sleeping pills, way to many, and swallows them with the liquior) (next morning at the office) Kate: Has anybody seen Jinny today? Magda: no I havent seen her since yesterday, but it is not like her not to call in if shes not going to be here...I am worried I am going to call her (Magda calls and no one answers) Kate: So what happened... Magda: no one anwsered the phone, i am going to go check it out Captain... Kate: ok but hurry back (Magda goes to jinny's room and sees her lying in her bed unconcious.. and calls kate) Kate: McCafferty speaking, yes Magda shes unconsiouss ok and the paramedics are on the way...ok meet you at the hosptial Angela: Captaoin whats with Jinny? Kate: She is uncounious.. |
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04-27-2001, 11:56 PM
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MMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEE NNNNNNOOOOWWWW!
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04-28-2001, 07:49 AM
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more you cant do this to mke Im dying here
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