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nancysbiggestfan · 04-28-2001, 03:38 PM

Okay this may not be the best fan-fic in the world but i am goin to post it anyway. See i am really really bored and just thought of this and if i wrote it i wouldnt be so bored.
Here we go:

[Jinny is leaving her house for work and a strange man approches her, yet she thinks she has seen him somewhere, his name is Larry]

L-[He grabs her by the arm] Where do you think you are goin?
J-Let me go! What did i do to you?
L-Oh you know. Dont play dumb.
J-No, what?
L-The last time i saw you, you blew me off, and no one and i mean no one does that to me!
J-That gives you no right to...
[He puts a gun to her head]
L-Say your last prayer.
[Jinny's cell phone rings and it is Magda]
L-Who is that?
J-How should i know? Let me answer it.
L-Fine, but keep your mouth SHUT!!
J-Yea, whatever.[Answers phone]Hello?
Magda-Kate wants to know why you are late.
J-Oh its nothin. I will be there soon.
[Magda hears Larry telling Jinny to hang up]
M-Who is that Jinny?
J-[yells]He is trying to kill me!!!!
M-Who is?!? Jinny? Jinny are you okay?
[Larry had already grabbed the phone and turned it off]

[Magda at the SFPD Division]
M- [Magda bursts into Kates office]Kate! Kate! Someone is trying to kill Jinny!
K-What? Who is it
M-I dont know/ But we have got ot hurry!!
K-[Yells] CD, Angela get back up.
Angela-What is wrong?
K-Someone is trying to kill Jinny.
CD-OMG! [She picks up the phone to call back up to Jinnys house]
*********************************************

[At Jinnys house before everyone arrives]
L-I am sorry but i have to do this.
J-No, you dont. Just put the gun down. Someone will be here in just a minute and you will get caught anyway.
L-No! I cant turn back now.
[He fires the gun as everyone rushes in and missed cause they made him Jerk]

M-OMG! He shot her![runs over to Jinny]
Kate! He missed. He missed her head but got her arm. Thank God! Kate get some emergency crew over here before we lose her!!
K-We need someone over here immediatly!! Looks like a gun shot wound to the arm.
M-[Whispers to herself, while she is holding Jinnys head up]Thank you God for letting him miss.
[A police officer gets Larry and takes him to a police car]
M-OMG She is losing conciousness, HURRY get someone over here now.
[They rush her to the hospital in an ambulance]
*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~**~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*
What did you guys think? Let me know if i should keep goin

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny

BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

Rules!!

hockeychiC518 · 04-28-2001, 03:43 PM

yea, please continue, it is great so far~

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Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me

~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~

ISmellFine · 04-28-2001, 04:12 PM

keep goin!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jo's Girl · 04-28-2001, 05:58 PM

This Rox!!!

Jo_Po · 04-28-2001, 08:03 PM

KEEP GOING! I love it so far!

~Steph

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-28-2001, 10:57 PM

Great, go on! hurry!

Nancy Exstead · 04-30-2001, 10:15 PM

Please, post more soon. I can't wait, it's really good.

nancysbiggestfan · 05-01-2001, 04:38 PM

Here is more.

[At the hospital. Magda, Kate, CD, and Angela are there]

**Magda is pacing in the waiting room, while CD the captain and Angela are sitting down**

CD-Come on stop pacing. You are making me even more nervous. She will be okay.
Angela-Yea, she will be fine
M-I hope so.
Kate-Those doctors are so slow there...**Magda breaks her off**
M-OMG!! We never told Teddy. I'm going to call him right now. Be back in a minute.[On the phone] Teddy? This is Magda, I have some bad news. Jinny was shot.
T-What?!
M-Yea, no word from the doctors yet. Could you come down here?
T-DEFINATELY!! I will be there as soon as possible. Bye.

[In the waiting room]
M-Teddy said he would be here soon.
K-Good. It is untelling what Jinny would do if he wasnt. She loves him so much.
M-Yea i know. And he is a great guy for her.
[doctor comes in]
Doc-Exstead?
All-Yes!!
Doc-Okay, umm she is going to be fine. She is still not awake, but I think she wil be fine. I am going to keep her in here for a day, unless something goes wrong. So she is fine. If you want to visit no more than 2 at a time.
[Teddy just walks in behind the Doc]
T-Good! I want to go first.
M-And i will go with you.
[They enter Jinnys room]
[You can here the heart monitor going beep, beep, beep.]
[Teddy goes over to her bed]
T-Jinny you have to pull htrough for me. I dont know what i would do without you.
[Jinny opens her eyes then closes them]
T-Jinny? Are you okay/
J-Yea, Teddy i am fine. Is that Mgda over there.
M-Yea, it is me Jin. Everyone else is out side waiting. How are you feelin?
J-A little tired, but okay considering what happened.[laughs a little]

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

nancysbiggestfan · 05-01-2001, 08:27 PM

Does anybody like it or do you want me to stop??

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

NancyJoJinny · 05-01-2001, 08:33 PM

No, no... keep going.

Jo's Girl · 05-01-2001, 08:35 PM

I luv it!

nancysbiggestfan · 05-02-2001, 03:18 PM

[Teddy sits at Jinny's bed side holding her hands in his]
T-You're gonna be okay Jin.
J-I hope so.
M-Well, i am gonna go, but if you need anything call me.
J-Bye.
M-Bye, Jin.
[Magda starts to walk out of the room]
J-And Magda, Thanks for comin'.
M-Don't mention it.
[Magda walks out of the room and into the waiting room,she was going to leave but couldn't so she just waited with the others.]
***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~*

J-Teddy, could you stay with me/
T-Sure. Whatever you want.
J-Thanks. I am a little tired so i am going to rest, okay.

There was complete silence in the room except for the beeping of the heart monitor.
Teddy sat there praying to himself.
T-God, please let her be okay. I could not live with out her. Please. And...

He was inturrupted be the heart monitor.
he looks up and sees the monitor.
T-On no!!

Her heart beets were getting shallow.
Teddy stuck his head out the door and said,
T-Get a doctor in here immediately!! She is dying!!

Magda comes running.
M-What? What is wrong?
T-I was just sitting there and her heart beets started getting shallow.

A doctor comes. He sees what has happened. He tells Magda and Teddy they have to leave the room. The doctor has to shock Jinny.
Magda and Teddy tell the others what had happened.
As Teddy and Magda watched her being shocked Magda burried her head in his shoulder and started crying.
M-Teddy, why? Why is this happening to her? It just is not fair.
T-I know, i know.
***~*****************~*******************~***
In the waiting room

Kate sits there with her head burried in her hands. While Angela And CD sit there looking at each other not knowing what to do or say. You could tell by the look on both of thier faces they were frightened about what may happen. Kate started praying.
Kate-God don't let her die, Please. Just let her be okay.

The doctor comes out and tells them what had happened.Everyone gathered around to hear what happened.
Doc-Well, she had actually lost more blood than we had thought.
Magda-yea, but will she be okay?
Doc-We think so, but we do need to keep her in the hospital for at least 2 more days.
Kate-You think so, so there is still a possibility that what may happen.
Doc-Well she could hae a mild heart attack
T-What?! Well, is that likely to happen?
D-We don't think so. But we did have to give her a half a pint of blood.
T-Is she concious?
D-Unfortunately, No.
M-Well that is just great you're setting here telling us she will be okay and she is not even concious!
T-Can i see her?
D-Sure, stay as long as you like.
*********************************************
In her room.
Teddy is setting on her bedside.
he whispers.
T-Come on Jin wake up for me. I can't live without you. Please you just have to.
He sits there patiently for 1 hour and a half.
He rubs her arm gentally(sp).
J-[grougy(sp)Like]Teddy? Is that you?
T-Yeah, it is me. How are you feelin'?
J-Tired.
T-Hold on just a second so i can tell the others.
He goes to the waiting room and tells them she is awake.
*********************************************

I got to go. Let me know how you like it and i will try to finish later.
Bye.

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

Jo's Girl · 05-02-2001, 05:14 PM

THIS RULES!!!!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 03-10-2002, 01:15 AM

DID THIS EVER GET FINISHED? I WAS JUST GOING THROUGH THE OLD FAN FICS CAUSE I'M BORED

NewsiesGurl229 · 03-12-2002, 06:18 PM

um...yeah i think it would be kewl if someone would finish this...

04-28-2001, 03:38 PM	#1
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Just another FAN-FIC [Please READ] Okay this may not be the best fan-fic in the world but i am goin to post it anyway. See i am really really bored and just thought of this and if i wrote it i wouldnt be so bored. Here we go: [Jinny is leaving her house for work and a strange man approches her, yet she thinks she has seen him somewhere, his name is Larry] L-[He grabs her by the arm] Where do you think you are goin? J-Let me go! What did i do to you? L-Oh you know. Dont play dumb. J-No, what? L-The last time i saw you, you blew me off, and no one and i mean no one does that to me! J-That gives you no right to... [He puts a gun to her head] L-Say your last prayer. [Jinny's cell phone rings and it is Magda] L-Who is that? J-How should i know? Let me answer it. L-Fine, but keep your mouth SHUT!! J-Yea, whatever.[Answers phone]Hello? Magda-Kate wants to know why you are late. J-Oh its nothin. I will be there soon. [Magda hears Larry telling Jinny to hang up] M-Who is that Jinny? J-[yells]He is trying to kill me!!!! M-Who is?!? Jinny? Jinny are you okay? [Larry had already grabbed the phone and turned it off] [Magda at the SFPD Division] M- [Magda bursts into Kates office]Kate! Kate! Someone is trying to kill Jinny! K-What? Who is it M-I dont know/ But we have got ot hurry!! K-[Yells] CD, Angela get back up. Angela-What is wrong? K-Someone is trying to kill Jinny. CD-OMG! [She picks up the phone to call back up to Jinnys house] ********************************************* [At Jinnys house before everyone arrives] L-I am sorry but i have to do this. J-No, you dont. Just put the gun down. Someone will be here in just a minute and you will get caught anyway. L-No! I cant turn back now. [He fires the gun as everyone rushes in and missed cause they made him Jerk] M-OMG! He shot her![runs over to Jinny] Kate! He missed. He missed her head but got her arm. Thank God! Kate get some emergency crew over here before we lose her!! K-We need someone over here immediatly!! Looks like a gun shot wound to the arm. M-[Whispers to herself, while she is holding Jinnys head up]Thank you God for letting him miss. [A police officer gets Larry and takes him to a police car] M-OMG She is losing conciousness, HURRY get someone over here now. [They rush her to the hospital in an ambulance] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What did you guys think? Let me know if i should keep goin ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!! Rules!!

03-10-2002, 01:15 AM	#14
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03-12-2002, 06:18 PM	#15
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04-28-2001, 03:43 PM	#2
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	yea, please continue, it is great so far~ ------------------ Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me ~~~Go Red Soxs~~~

04-28-2001, 04:12 PM	#3
ISmellFine Zim Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Apr 13, 2001 Posts: 4,886	keep goin! ------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

04-28-2001, 05:58 PM	#4
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	This Rox!!!

04-28-2001, 08:03 PM	#5
Jo_Po Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 29, 2000 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 96	KEEP GOING! I love it so far! ~Steph

04-28-2001, 10:57 PM	#6
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Great, go on! hurry!

04-30-2001, 10:15 PM	#7
Nancy Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 09, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 42	Please, post more soon. I can't wait, it's really good.

05-01-2001, 04:38 PM	#8
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Here is more. [At the hospital. Magda, Kate, CD, and Angela are there] Magda is pacing in the waiting room, while CD the captain and Angela are sitting down CD-Come on stop pacing. You are making me even more nervous. She will be okay. Angela-Yea, she will be fine M-I hope so. Kate-Those doctors are so slow there...Magda breaks her off M-OMG!! We never told Teddy. I'm going to call him right now. Be back in a minute.[On the phone] Teddy? This is Magda, I have some bad news. Jinny was shot. T-What?! M-Yea, no word from the doctors yet. Could you come down here? T-DEFINATELY!! I will be there as soon as possible. Bye. [In the waiting room] M-Teddy said he would be here soon. K-Good. It is untelling what Jinny would do if he wasnt. She loves him so much. M-Yea i know. And he is a great guy for her. [doctor comes in] Doc-Exstead? All-Yes!! Doc-Okay, umm she is going to be fine. She is still not awake, but I think she wil be fine. I am going to keep her in here for a day, unless something goes wrong. So she is fine. If you want to visit no more than 2 at a time. [Teddy just walks in behind the Doc] T-Good! I want to go first. M-And i will go with you. [They enter Jinnys room] [You can here the heart monitor going beep, beep, beep.] [Teddy goes over to her bed] T-Jinny you have to pull htrough for me. I dont know what i would do without you. [Jinny opens her eyes then closes them] T-Jinny? Are you okay/ J-Yea, Teddy i am fine. Is that Mgda over there. M-Yea, it is me Jin. Everyone else is out side waiting. How are you feelin? J-A little tired, but okay considering what happened.[laughs a little] ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

05-01-2001, 08:27 PM	#9
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Does anybody like it or do you want me to stop?? ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

05-01-2001, 08:33 PM	#10
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	No, no... keep going.

05-01-2001, 08:35 PM	#11
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	I luv it!

05-02-2001, 03:18 PM	#12
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	[Teddy sits at Jinny's bed side holding her hands in his] T-You're gonna be okay Jin. J-I hope so. M-Well, i am gonna go, but if you need anything call me. J-Bye. M-Bye, Jin. [Magda starts to walk out of the room] J-And Magda, Thanks for comin'. M-Don't mention it. [Magda walks out of the room and into the waiting room,she was going to leave but couldn't so she just waited with the others.] *~~~~~~~~~~*~ J-Teddy, could you stay with me/ T-Sure. Whatever you want. J-Thanks. I am a little tired so i am going to rest, okay. There was complete silence in the room except for the beeping of the heart monitor. Teddy sat there praying to himself. T-God, please let her be okay. I could not live with out her. Please. And... He was inturrupted be the heart monitor. he looks up and sees the monitor. T-On no!! Her heart beets were getting shallow. Teddy stuck his head out the door and said, T-Get a doctor in here immediately!! She is dying!! Magda comes running. M-What? What is wrong? T-I was just sitting there and her heart beets started getting shallow. A doctor comes. He sees what has happened. He tells Magda and Teddy they have to leave the room. The doctor has to shock Jinny. Magda and Teddy tell the others what had happened. As Teddy and Magda watched her being shocked Magda burried her head in his shoulder and started crying. M-Teddy, why? Why is this happening to her? It just is not fair. T-I know, i know. *~*************~***************~* In the waiting room Kate sits there with her head burried in her hands. While Angela And CD sit there looking at each other not knowing what to do or say. You could tell by the look on both of thier faces they were frightened about what may happen. Kate started praying. Kate-God don't let her die, Please. Just let her be okay. The doctor comes out and tells them what had happened.Everyone gathered around to hear what happened. Doc-Well, she had actually lost more blood than we had thought. Magda-yea, but will she be okay? Doc-We think so, but we do need to keep her in the hospital for at least 2 more days. Kate-You think so, so there is still a possibility that what may happen. Doc-Well she could hae a mild heart attack T-What?! Well, is that likely to happen? D-We don't think so. But we did have to give her a half a pint of blood. T-Is she concious? D-Unfortunately, No. M-Well that is just great you're setting here telling us she will be okay and she is not even concious! T-Can i see her? D-Sure, stay as long as you like. ******************************************* In her room. Teddy is setting on her bedside. he whispers. T-Come on Jin wake up for me. I can't live without you. Please you just have to. He sits there patiently for 1 hour and a half. He rubs her arm gentally(sp). J-[grougy(sp)Like]Teddy? Is that you? T-Yeah, it is me. How are you feelin'? J-Tired. T-Hold on just a second so i can tell the others. He goes to the waiting room and tells them she is awake. ******************************************* I got to go. Let me know how you like it and i will try to finish later. Bye. ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

05-02-2001, 05:14 PM	#13
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	THIS RULES!!!!