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nancysbiggestfan · 04-26-2001, 04:27 PM

Hey guys here is hopefully a good fan fic.
Let me know when to stop and if it is good or not.

BY THE WAY TEDDY IS IN IT!!

STATION
Magda-(says as Jinny walks in) Hi.
Jinny- Yea, whatever.
M-Whats wrong?
J-Nothin. Just lave me alone.
M-Somethin is wrong.
(Kate is standing near by)
J-Come in the bathroom and i will tell you.
(They go in the bathroom)
M-Yea so whats wrong?
J-Me and Teddy had a big fight last night. He was going to stay there for the night and my brother called to see what i was doin.
M-Yea.
J-Teddy heard a guys voice and went balistic(sp)! I tied to tell him and when i finally got that in between all his yelling i just was so mad i told hime to leave and well he did.
M-Did he call.
J- Well that is the bad thing. He never said a word as he left and never called. You think i should call him? I am sure not appologizing!
M-you have nothin to say your sorry about.

WHAT SO YOU GUYS THINK? SHOULD I POST MORE??
TELL THE TRUTH CAUSE I DONT WANT TO WRITE MORE IF IT IS NO GOOD. I WOULD WRITE MORE BUT MY HANDS ARE KILLING ME!!!

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

For He sent his only begotten Son that whosoever that believeth on Him might have eternal life.
John 3:16

Jo's Girl · 04-26-2001, 05:29 PM

I LUV IT!!!!! i have learned to like Teddy!

WildChildJinny · 04-26-2001, 05:55 PM

Hey I LUV IT! Keep writing!

nancysbiggestfan · 04-26-2001, 06:25 PM

Okay here we go.

M-You have nothin to say your sorry about.\
J-Yeah I know but...
M-BUT what?
J-Oh nothin
M-It is somethin!
J-Well... Well what if i never see him again?
M-He will call.
J-Hope so.
(Leave bathroom and go to the office)
CD-What is up with Jinny, Magda?
(Jinny looks at Magda and M knows not to tell CD)
M-Oh its nothin.
Angela-You sure she didnt look good?
M-Yea.

Kate-Okay guys Jinny Magda go to the local high school some guys were spotted using pot.
J-We're on it Cap'n.
M-Com'n Jin.
(In the car on the way to the high school)
M-Jinny...(interrupted by the phone ringing)
(Jinny looks at Magda)
J-You think it is him?
M-could be. But you'll never know if you dont answer it.
(Jinny picks up the phone)

What do you guys think??
Dont you just love it when i leave you hanging like this? LOL

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

Jo's Girl · 04-26-2001, 07:03 PM

GRRRRRRR!!! don't stop!!!!

nancysbiggestfan · 04-26-2001, 07:45 PM

J-hello
Kate-Jin, it is Kate let me speak to Magda.
(Jinny with her hand over the phone)
J-It is Kate she wants to talk to you.
(magda hangs up the phone)
M-She said to cancel that case.
J-What? Why?
M-Oh, cause the lady that reported him told her friend about it who was a cop and he took care of it.
J-Well good i didn't feel like handling the case anyway.
M-She said for us to take the day off. So what do you want to do?
J-What? The captian letting us have the day off, This is a once in a lifetime chance.
Just drop me off at my house.
M-You sure you don't want to do anything?
J-Yea, i just want to take a nap. I didn't get any sleep last night.
M-Jin, forget about him if he doesn't call he doesn't deserve you.
J-Yea yea yea. You're givin me the usual "he doesnt deserve you thing" But i will be okay.
(Jinny walks in her bedroom and plops on the bed and cries)
(she rambles through one dresser drour(sp) and takes a gulp of liquer(sp)

**~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~**
**Next morning at SFPD Division**
(Cd whispers to Angela)
CD-Whats wrong with her?
Angela-I DON'T know.
(Magda pulls Jinny aside)
M-What is wrong with you?
J-(says slured) Theres nothin wrong with me.
(Magda smells liquer on her breath)
M-Jinny you're DRUNK!! I cant believe it.
J-Hey, hey iam fine.
M-No you're not fine! Stay here.
(She picks up the phone and calls Teddy)
M-Hello, Teddy? this is Magda.
T-Oh Hi.
M-Yea, you have got to come down to the office.
T-Why?
M-Well.... Jinny is drunk. She got really upset abut what happened the other night.
T-I will be right there! Bye.
(Magda hangs up the phone as Jinny runs toward the bathroom. Magda chases after her)
M-Jinny what...
(Jinny throws up)
M-Jinny are you going to be okay?
J-Yea i will...will..
(throws up again)

SORRY TO LEAVE YOU HANGIN BUT I HAVE GOT TO GO. IF YOU LIKE IT SAY SO AND I WILL FINISH UP THE STORY LATER.
BYE.

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

WildChildJinny · 04-26-2001, 08:01 PM

DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING!!!!!!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-26-2001, 09:59 PM

Don't stop!!! i love it!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Jo's Girl · 04-27-2001, 08:46 AM

THIS ROX!!!!!

nancysbiggestfan · 04-27-2001, 02:32 PM

(after she throws up)
M-Jin you okay?
J-Yea, I feel better now. But who were you talking to on the phone?
M-Well... It was... was Teddy
J-I cant believe it! Why did you call him?
M-Because you two need to talk. This whole misunderstanding can be cleared up.
J-Well, at least you didnt tell him to come down,(Magda gives Jinny a funny look)did you?
M-Weeeell, sorta.
J-When will he be here? I cant believe you!
M-Anytime know. He said he was leaving as soon as we got off of the phone.
J-Magda i am sorry i yelled at you. I just just cant handle it.[starts crying] What if we dont make up?
M-you will. Look...[Jinny interrupts]
J-I hear Teddys voice. I am goin to talk to him.
M-Okay[hugs Jinny]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Teddy takes Jinny out to his car to talk in private]
T-I am so sorry about what happened thhe other day. I shouldnt have jumped the gun like that.
J-Yea and i shouldnt have told you to leave.
T-I couldnt stand it when you told me to leave. It... it just about killed me cause i love you so much.
J-Oh Teddy i love you to. Lets just forget about the fight.
T-Okay, that is just fine w/ me.[They kiss]
[Jinny pulls away]
J-I should get back to work.
T-Couldnt you just ask for the day off?
J-I will try, but you know the Captian.
^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^
[At the office]
J-Kate i know i havent been here lately but i have had some problems could i have the day off? I promise I will be here tomorrow.
K-Sure.
J-Really?
K-Yea, just go before i change my mind.
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><
[at Teddys care]
T-You want to go to the Anchorside bar?
J-No, actually. I have had enough.
T-That is a surprise![he says jokingly]
J-Hey watch it! But what about this new place in town then we can go to my house.
T-That sounds great.
[They drive off]
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What did ya think? i will just leave the story at that and you can dream about the rest!

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

Jo's Girl · 04-27-2001, 06:25 PM

AWESOME!!!! ur fan fic rocked!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-27-2001, 11:51 PM

cute, but short! i liked it alot though!

Wild Child · 05-02-2001, 04:24 PM

that was really good!

I enjoyed it.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

04-26-2001, 04:27 PM	#1
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	The Big 1st Big Fight (by nancysbiggestfan) Hey guys here is hopefully a good fan fic. Let me know when to stop and if it is good or not. BY THE WAY TEDDY IS IN IT!! STATION Magda-(says as Jinny walks in) Hi. Jinny- Yea, whatever. M-Whats wrong? J-Nothin. Just lave me alone. M-Somethin is wrong. (Kate is standing near by) J-Come in the bathroom and i will tell you. (They go in the bathroom) M-Yea so whats wrong? J-Me and Teddy had a big fight last night. He was going to stay there for the night and my brother called to see what i was doin. M-Yea. J-Teddy heard a guys voice and went balistic(sp)! I tied to tell him and when i finally got that in between all his yelling i just was so mad i told hime to leave and well he did. M-Did he call. J- Well that is the bad thing. He never said a word as he left and never called. You think i should call him? I am sure not appologizing! M-you have nothin to say your sorry about. WHAT SO YOU GUYS THINK? SHOULD I POST MORE?? TELL THE TRUTH CAUSE I DONT WANT TO WRITE MORE IF IT IS NO GOOD. I WOULD WRITE MORE BUT MY HANDS ARE KILLING ME!!! ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!! For He sent his only begotten Son that whosoever that believeth on Him might have eternal life. John 3:16

04-26-2001, 05:29 PM	#2
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	I LUV IT!!!!! i have learned to like Teddy!

04-26-2001, 05:55 PM	#3
WildChildJinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 22, 2001 Location: MaSsAcHuSeTtS Posts: 355	Hey I LUV IT! Keep writing!

04-26-2001, 06:25 PM	#4
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Okay here we go. M-You have nothin to say your sorry about.\ J-Yeah I know but... M-BUT what? J-Oh nothin M-It is somethin! J-Well... Well what if i never see him again? M-He will call. J-Hope so. (Leave bathroom and go to the office) CD-What is up with Jinny, Magda? (Jinny looks at Magda and M knows not to tell CD) M-Oh its nothin. Angela-You sure she didnt look good? M-Yea. Kate-Okay guys Jinny Magda go to the local high school some guys were spotted using pot. J-We're on it Cap'n. M-Com'n Jin. (In the car on the way to the high school) M-Jinny...(interrupted by the phone ringing) (Jinny looks at Magda) J-You think it is him? M-could be. But you'll never know if you dont answer it. (Jinny picks up the phone) What do you guys think?? Dont you just love it when i leave you hanging like this? LOL ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

04-26-2001, 07:03 PM	#5
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	GRRRRRRR!!! don't stop!!!!

04-26-2001, 07:45 PM	#6
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	J-hello Kate-Jin, it is Kate let me speak to Magda. (Jinny with her hand over the phone) J-It is Kate she wants to talk to you. (magda hangs up the phone) M-She said to cancel that case. J-What? Why? M-Oh, cause the lady that reported him told her friend about it who was a cop and he took care of it. J-Well good i didn't feel like handling the case anyway. M-She said for us to take the day off. So what do you want to do? J-What? The captian letting us have the day off, This is a once in a lifetime chance. Just drop me off at my house. M-You sure you don't want to do anything? J-Yea, i just want to take a nap. I didn't get any sleep last night. M-Jin, forget about him if he doesn't call he doesn't deserve you. J-Yea yea yea. You're givin me the usual "he doesnt deserve you thing" But i will be okay. (Jinny walks in her bedroom and plops on the bed and cries) (she rambles through one dresser drour(sp) and takes a gulp of liquer(sp) *~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Next morning at SFPD Division** (Cd whispers to Angela) CD-Whats wrong with her? Angela-I DON'T know. (Magda pulls Jinny aside) M-What is wrong with you? J-(says slured) Theres nothin wrong with me. (Magda smells liquer on her breath) M-Jinny you're DRUNK!! I cant believe it. J-Hey, hey iam fine. M-No you're not fine! Stay here. (She picks up the phone and calls Teddy) M-Hello, Teddy? this is Magda. T-Oh Hi. M-Yea, you have got to come down to the office. T-Why? M-Well.... Jinny is drunk. She got really upset abut what happened the other night. T-I will be right there! Bye. (Magda hangs up the phone as Jinny runs toward the bathroom. Magda chases after her) M-Jinny what... (Jinny throws up) M-Jinny are you going to be okay? J-Yea i will...will.. (throws up again) SORRY TO LEAVE YOU HANGIN BUT I HAVE GOT TO GO. IF YOU LIKE IT SAY SO AND I WILL FINISH UP THE STORY LATER. BYE. ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

04-26-2001, 08:01 PM	#7
WildChildJinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 22, 2001 Location: MaSsAcHuSeTtS Posts: 355	DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING!!!!!!

04-26-2001, 09:59 PM	#8
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Don't stop!!! i love it! ------------------ aOL SN: nancymckeonfan8976 yahoo sn: nancyfan8976 email/mca messanger:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men. Magda: You...give up sex? No way. Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

04-27-2001, 08:46 AM	#9
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	THIS ROX!!!!!

04-27-2001, 02:32 PM	#10
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	(after she throws up) M-Jin you okay? J-Yea, I feel better now. But who were you talking to on the phone? M-Well... It was... was Teddy J-I cant believe it! Why did you call him? M-Because you two need to talk. This whole misunderstanding can be cleared up. J-Well, at least you didnt tell him to come down,(Magda gives Jinny a funny look)did you? M-Weeeell, sorta. J-When will he be here? I cant believe you! M-Anytime know. He said he was leaving as soon as we got off of the phone. J-Magda i am sorry i yelled at you. I just just cant handle it.[starts crying] What if we dont make up? M-you will. Look...[Jinny interrupts] J-I hear Teddys voice. I am goin to talk to him. M-Okay[hugs Jinny] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [Teddy takes Jinny out to his car to talk in private] T-I am so sorry about what happened thhe other day. I shouldnt have jumped the gun like that. J-Yea and i shouldnt have told you to leave. T-I couldnt stand it when you told me to leave. It... it just about killed me cause i love you so much. J-Oh Teddy i love you to. Lets just forget about the fight. T-Okay, that is just fine w/ me.[They kiss] [Jinny pulls away] J-I should get back to work. T-Couldnt you just ask for the day off? J-I will try, but you know the Captian. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ [At the office] J-Kate i know i havent been here lately but i have had some problems could i have the day off? I promise I will be here tomorrow. K-Sure. J-Really? K-Yea, just go before i change my mind. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>< [at Teddys care] T-You want to go to the Anchorside bar? J-No, actually. I have had enough. T-That is a surprise![he says jokingly] J-Hey watch it! But what about this new place in town then we can go to my house. T-That sounds great. [They drive off] <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>* What did ya think? i will just leave the story at that and you can dream about the rest! ------------------ nancysbiggestfan Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

04-27-2001, 06:25 PM	#11
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	AWESOME!!!! ur fan fic rocked!

04-27-2001, 11:51 PM	#12
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	cute, but short! i liked it alot though!

05-02-2001, 04:24 PM	#13
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	that was really good! I enjoyed it. ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!