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The One and Only
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Well here's the beginning of my fan-fiction! Hope everyone enjoys it......
Series 1 - Story 1 ~So Many Reasons~ Faces In the Crowd (Part #2) **Jinny's House That Night Where they left Off** Theodore lifts his right hand up skimming over Jinny's cheek and glides it through her hair looking into her eyes the whole time..her looking back. He leans down slightly and kisses her like before. Jinny has her hand resting slightly on Theodore's chest as they stand kissing in her living room. His hand slowly runs down the top of her back and rests in the middle of her lower back. His other hand gradually wraps around her left side and locks with his right hand.Passionatly kissing. Jinny slides her hand up and runs it over Theodore's close shaven cheek. Her other hand wrapped around him resting on his back. She steps back making Theodore take a step forward. Her hand now on his shoulder. Then takes another having Theodore follow. Still kissing as before. Jinny and Theodore takes two steps together leading them into the middle of the hall.Theodore realizes what she is doing. Starts taking slow steps forward...Arrives in the bedroom. They break off their kiss. Jinny walks the rest of the way over to the bed by herself and sits down. Looks up at Theodore and smiles slightly. "Come on" Jinny says exstending her arm to Theodore. Theodore walks over to Jinny and takes her hand. Unsure. Jinny smiles at Theodore . She starts to lean back gradually pulling Theodore down on top. Jinny leans up and kisses Theodore,and starts to lay her head back having Theodore follow her lips. Kissing Passionately. He kisses from her lips to her cheek and down her neck. Jinny runs her hands up Theodore's arms to his back. Theodore kisses back up to her lips. Jinny breaks the kiss of lowly and scoots back on the bed. Theodore follows. Jinny kisses Theodore once again. His hands wonder to the top button of her shirt and undoes it. Then the next and the next. All of a sudden Jinny freezes up. Theodore glances up at Jinny's face. "What's wrong,Jinny" He says worriedly. "Uhh" Jinny shakes her head. "No,nothing." Theodore leans down and kisses her once again. Breaks it off. "You sure? Because...." Theodore says getting cut off by Jinny Shakes her head.. "Theodore,I'm fine." Kisses him reassuringly. They start to kiss more seriously now. Theodore's hand glide down Jinny's side gently. Then his hand goes up to her shirt button. Slowly Jinny stops kissing. "You know I'm really...." Jinny's voice drifts off. Theodore gets up and moves to the side of Jinny. "Look,Jinny,I'm really sorry I" Theodore gets cut off by Jin. "No,Teddy,It's not you." Jinny says sitting up next to Theodore with her shirt unbuttoned half way. "Then what?" Theodore questions softly. "It's just......" Jinny looks down at the floor. "Whatever it is,Jinny. I'm sure we can work it out." Theodore says reassuringly. Jinny glances up to Theodore and says,"This is going to sound ridiculous,but...~Jinny pauses~ I'm afraid.." Jinny's voice drifts away as she looks to the ground and shakes her head. "You're afraid of what?" Theodore says confused. "Look,Her we were" Jinny says making a hand movement, "About to you know,and I got to thinking for a second." Jinny stops. Theodore looks at Jinny puzzled. "What I'm trying to say is,This is my first significant relationship in a long time. Like I said this is going to sound ridiculous to you,but" Jinny pauses for a second. "I'm afraid,if we go through with this,this relationship will end like all the others." Jinny stops and looks at the ground. Theodore looks at Jinny and says,"So you think if we...make love..I'm not going to be her for you anymore. Or walk out?" Jinny Glances over to Theodore looks at him for a second thinking about what he said about "Making Love". She then Nods and looks back down. Theodore scoots closer to Jinny and puts his arm around her. "Jinny,Listen." Theodore looks at her. Jinny looks over at him. "If we had made love. Or when ever,if we do. That's only going to show how much you mean to me." Theodore says and smiles at Jinny. "I care about you,Jinny. I'm not going to leave." Theodore says reassuringly to Jinny. Jinny looks at him and smiles alittle. She looks down and the back at Theodore. "Look, I'm sorry about this. I shouldn't have started something I wasn't going to finish" She shakes her head. "I didn't realize this would happen" Jinny says in a low voice. "When the time is right. You'll know ,Jinny." Theodore replys and rubs his hand up and down her back. "Thanks,Theodore. Later? When the time is right." Jinny says in a low voice and leans her head on Theodore's Shoulder. Theodore nods and smiles at her and says,"Why don't we just lay her on the bed together and have a chat?" Jinny smiles and says," Great Idea" as she reaches down and button up her top. Theodore scoots to the side of the bed. Jinny scoots up and lays her head on Theodore's arm. Where they lay together until they fall asleep. Should I continue????? [This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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YES!!!! Please
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Interesting, VERY interesting DO IT!! It seems good so far what will happen next?? i am in suspence!
------------------ Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face? Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she?? |
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PLEASE FINISH! I LOVE IT!
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Jinny & Theodore Fan
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I think it is great so far. Please finish. Thanks Jeanie
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WOW thats really good!! Write more soon!
------------------ CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours. Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex! Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me. |
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smile :)
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Continue!!! I love it!
![]() ------------------ *~*~*~*~*~*~*~**~**~*~*~* "Every day has a little something. Find it!" - Anonymous *~*~*~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Great Job, go on! it is awesome!!!
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The One and Only
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Here is some more. Thanks For Responding!!
**Next Morning At Magda's House** Magda's alarm clock goes off. She turns over in her bed and looks at the alarm clock that reads 6:45 she pushes the button to shut the alarm off. She rubs her head and gets up. Ben opens the door of her room and says,"Hey Mommy". Magda looks over and says,"Good Morning Baby get ready for school and we can make your favorite." Ben looks excited and says,"Pancakes?" "Of course,Sweetheart! Just let Mommy get ready for work and I'll be right out." Magda says Smiling at Ben. "Okay!" Ben reply's and shuts Magda's Bedroom Door. **Morning at Captain's (Kate's) House** Kate gets out of bed and walks to her dresser. The shower is on in the bathroom. She opens a drawer and pulls out some nilons. Goes to the next drawer and pulls out a black skirt. Allen's voice blurts out,"You ran out of shampoo". "No I didn't" Says Kate walking into the bathroom. She leans down and opens up the little cupboard below the bathroom sink and pulls out a bottle of shampoo. Walks over to the shower and sticks her hand inside holding the shampoo bottle. "There ya go" Kate says. Allen takes the shampoo bottle and hands her the empty one. "Thanks,Kate!" He replied. Captain walks over to the garbage can and throws the empty bottle in it and says,"Yeah Sure." and walks out of the bathroom. **Morning at Angela's House** Angela is up and making breakfast in the kitchen. Daniel walks in and wraps his arms around her. Angela smiles as he kisses her on the neck,"Good Morning!" she says. Daniel slowly stops. "Morning Honey..Breakfast smells great.What did you fix?" Daniel asks. "Some scrambled eggs and sausage,You interested?" Angela says turning around and looking at Daniel. Daniel looks at the food,"Sure,Angie." Angela smiles at Daniel,turns around,and starts to put the food on two plates. "One Second" Angela says putting down the kitchen utinsils and hurrys to the bathroom. Daniel watches her leave and looks puzzled. **Morning at C.D's House** C.D's walks out of the bathroom drying off her hair. Fully dressed for work. Paul had already left 30 minutes earlier. She tosses the towel into the clothes hamper as she walks out of the room. C.D. gets to the kitchen and opens up a cupboard door and continues getting everything she needs to make a bowl of cereal. She finishes and brings the bowl of cereal to the table and sits. Glances down at her watch and notices she has to be at work in a half hour. Starts to eat the cereal. She finishes a short time later. Grabs her Gun and holster. Then walks out the door putting on her coat. **Morning at Jinny's House** The sun is gleaming into the window. Theodore turns over. Jinny opens her eyes alittle and looks at her watch. "Oh no" Jinny says and turns to Theodore and shakes him alittle. He turns over and rubs his eyes.."Wha,What ,Jinny?" Theodore says with a morning voice. "We have 25 minutes to be at work!" Jinny says anxiously and sits up on the bed. She starts unbuttoning her shirt before she even stands up "We over Slept!!" Theodore gets out of bed and grabs his bag out of the closet. "I'll be right back I need to shave!" Jinny takes off her shirt exposing her bra and says," Of Course" watching him leave the room in a hurry. Theodore is in the bathroom just beginning to shave after he put his shaving cream on. Jinny finishes getting dressed,and walks to the bathroom. The door is open. She walks in. "Hey you mind if I squeeze my way in here and brush my teeth." Jinny says looking at Theodore. "No not at all." Theodore says still looking in the mirror shaving. Jinny comes in and starts brushing her teeth. They both finish at the same time. Jinny walks out of the bathroom into her bedroom and grabs her gun and holster . She then puts it on. Theodore walks out of the bathroom in a new suit a few minutes after. Jinny looks up at him ,"Ooh,You look good" Smiles and walks toward him. Moves hair out of her face and leans up and kisses him. Breaks off the kiss and looks at her watch. "We gotta get going." Jinny says heading toward the door . Grabbing her coat on the way. "Want to get together tonight, Jinny?" Theodore questions as he walks to the door behind her. Jinny Nods and say," Yeah Sure,Theodore! Tonight!" The door closes as they leave. |
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(Kenzie stands up on her chair applauding.) Bravissimo! Sorry but I just played Für Elise for an hour non-stop and I'm speaking Italian.
BUT YES!!!! FINISH IT! ------------------ ^~^The Division^~^ T: You're in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? J: No, you're supposed to hide under the covers with me 'cause it's warmer! Come on! †ş† ~~<@ Kenzie @>~~ †ş† |
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Great job so far! I love this fanfic!
------------------ Blair: (sighs) Jo: "I hate it when you do that!" Blair: "What?" Jo: "Sigh!" Blair: "I don't sigh!" Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!" Blair: (sighs) Jo: "You did it again!" Blair: "That's called breathing." Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!" Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing." Jo: "Now there's an idea!!" ~Steph
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OMG!!! This is sooo good. i love how you tell what ech person is doing in the morning!!!!! Go on!!! FAST!
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Awesome!!! Finish it soon please.
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It's really great so far!
------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! |
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Zim
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PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep going!!!!!!! This is REALLY awesome! hurry! what happens to jin and teddy?!?!?!!? sorry, im a little bit hyper right now. KEEP going!!!!!!!
------------------ Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point. Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions? Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court. |
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