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jinny_jo_2001 · 04-10-2001, 07:57 PM

Okay here is like a little "intro" of what it's gonna be about

*at the station*

Jinny walks in looking kind of tired: Hi guys
Magda walks up to her: Jinny you look beat!!
CD: yeah girl you alright??
Jinny: I was up all night
Angela: may I ask why??
Jinny: I think I have found something about my mom....

So what do you think? Its okay if ya dont like It i need some opinions if I should wirte it.. please respond!!

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

Jo's Girl · 04-10-2001, 07:58 PM

NOW!!! IT sounds awesome!!!

NancyJoJinny · 04-10-2001, 08:23 PM

DO IT!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! DO IT!

jinny_jo_2001 · 04-10-2001, 09:24 PM

OKay the title is "Intersting-Finds"

*at Jinnys apartment*

Jinny is going through her moms old filing box. she remembered that her mom said if something ever happened to her to go look through her files and stuffthat time has come.. while she was flipping through the "W" section she found some wedding plans.
Whats this?? *as Jinny reads a little more she soon finds out her mom was married with 2 kids* what the... I... I dont believe this!! Mom married?? soon she went to her room tossed and turned thinking about those papers she didnt fall asleep that night..

*at the station*

Jinny walks in looking kind of tired: Hi guys
Magda walks up to her: Jinny you look beat!!
CD: yeah girl you alright??
Jinny: I was up all night
Angela: may I ask why??
Jinny: I think I have found something about my mom....
Magda: well
Jinny: my mom.....
CD: yes yes?
Jinny: she was married while still with my dad. she left because she loved the other guy more..
Magda: how did you find out??
Jinny: I was looking through some of her files....
Magda: wow thats tough...
Jinny: ya think?? she even has TWO kids!! Alice and Tod..
Angela: oh my... that means....
Jinny: yep...I have a step sister and a brother...

Well what do you think?? this is my first FF so it might not be as Great but its the best I can do for now...

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-10-2001, 09:32 PM

i like it!!! Keep up the good work!!!

jinny_jo_2001 · 04-18-2001, 05:38 PM

after I posted it I was like that is kinda boring. LOL

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-21-2001, 11:18 PM

No, it isn't boring! i really am enjoying it!!! Keep going!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

hockeychiC518 · 04-22-2001, 12:06 PM

this is awesome so far, please continue!

jinny_jo_2001 · 04-22-2001, 04:34 PM

okay okay here is more:

*still at the station*
Angela: thats not so bad!
Jinny: What would you do if you found out you have another brother PLUS a sister?
Angela: I would.....probably freak out!
Jinny: there you go now you know how I feel.
C.D.: You should track them down, see if you can meet them.
Jinny: All I know is their first names not their last. She's not going to be Exstead if she got married again!
Magda: good point their.
C.D.: Maybe you could give this to the captain as a case or something.
Jinny: then for sure she will think I'm going looney!
Magda: we could always...... no never mind.
Jinny: What?
Magda: well DO you know her OTHER husbands name?
Jinny: It DID say something about a Mr. Donald Webber.
Magda: there you go.
Jinny: but he could be dead. he was older than my mother! I read that he was born 1927.
Angela: I don't know what to do.
Jinny: you dont have to do anything its my family and I am going to try to crack this case!
Angela: fine.
Jinny: listen should I tell my father?
Magda: I think you should clue him in about this.
Jinny: but you know how he is! He will go nuts!
Magda: he has to know!!

Should I continue?

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

80skid · 04-22-2001, 06:53 PM

Yes!!
Keep it going I love it!! And it's not boring!!

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"Every day has a little something. Find it!" - Anonymous

Allison: Driving up the Eastland gates give me goosebumps.
Jo: Really? They give me a rash.

jinny_jo_2001 · 04-22-2001, 07:24 PM

Alright heres more:

*at Jinny's dads house*

Jinny: Listen Dad I need to talk to you.
Jinny's Dad: Listen I'm not in the mood right now!
Jinny: this is important!
Jinny's Dad: Fine but this better be worth my time!
Jinny: its about mom.
Jinny's Dad: oh really what about her?
Jinny: well she...uh..she
Jinny's Dad: spit it oput already!
Jinny: she was married and has two kids.
Jinny's Dad: Your joking right? (he starts to laugh then sees the look on Jinny's face) Your not?
Jinny: no look Dad I found these in Moms old filing cabinet (she takes the wedding plans out of her coat pocket and hands them to him)
Jinny's Dad: thats probably why she left!
Jinny: I am sorry PLEASE dont tell Kasey or Jon yet okay? (just then Kasey comes in and then Jon after)
Jon: tell us what?
Jinny: sit down you too Kasey.(says really quickly) MOM is married to a MR. Donald Webber and has two kids bye (she gets up and trys to walk out)
Jon: hold it Jinny. what was that?
Jinny: you heard me Mom left becuase she was married!
Kasey: wow I never knew that about her.
Jinny: know we all do I told all of my friends. I am trying to track down their siblings.The boy HAS to be Tod Webber.
Kasey: you should look him up in the white pages.
Jinny's Dad: how about we do nothing!!
Jinny: calm down!
Jinny's Dad: I have to get out of here. (he goes into the kitchen)
Jinny: I think I AM going to look him up!

Should I continue

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

04-10-2001, 07:57 PM	#1
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	Fan-Fic should I do it?? Okay here is like a little "intro" of what it's gonna be about at the station Jinny walks in looking kind of tired: Hi guys Magda walks up to her: Jinny you look beat!! CD: yeah girl you alright?? Jinny: I was up all night Angela: may I ask why?? Jinny: I think I have found something about my mom.... So what do you think? Its okay if ya dont like It i need some opinions if I should wirte it.. please respond!! ------------------ Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face? Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

04-10-2001, 07:58 PM	#2
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	NOW!!! IT sounds awesome!!!

04-10-2001, 08:23 PM	#3
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	DO IT!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! DO IT!

04-10-2001, 09:24 PM	#4
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	OKay the title is "Intersting-Finds" at Jinnys apartment Jinny is going through her moms old filing box. she remembered that her mom said if something ever happened to her to go look through her files and stuffthat time has come.. while she was flipping through the "W" section she found some wedding plans. Whats this?? as Jinny reads a little more she soon finds out her mom was married with 2 kids what the... I... I dont believe this!! Mom married?? soon she went to her room tossed and turned thinking about those papers she didnt fall asleep that night.. at the station Jinny walks in looking kind of tired: Hi guys Magda walks up to her: Jinny you look beat!! CD: yeah girl you alright?? Jinny: I was up all night Angela: may I ask why?? Jinny: I think I have found something about my mom.... Magda: well Jinny: my mom..... CD: yes yes? Jinny: she was married while still with my dad. she left because she loved the other guy more.. Magda: how did you find out?? Jinny: I was looking through some of her files.... Magda: wow thats tough... Jinny: ya think?? she even has TWO kids!! Alice and Tod.. Angela: oh my... that means.... Jinny: yep...I have a step sister and a brother... Well what do you think?? this is my first FF so it might not be as Great but its the best I can do for now... ------------------ Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face? Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

04-10-2001, 09:32 PM	#5
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	i like it!!! Keep up the good work!!!

04-18-2001, 05:38 PM	#6
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	after I posted it I was like that is kinda boring. LOL ------------------ Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face? Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

04-21-2001, 11:18 PM	#7
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	No, it isn't boring! i really am enjoying it!!! Keep going! ------------------ aOL SN: luckyme099 yahoo sn: nancyfan8976 email:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men. Magda: You...give up sex? No way. Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

04-22-2001, 12:06 PM	#8
hockeychiC518 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 06, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 539	this is awesome so far, please continue!

04-22-2001, 04:34 PM	#9
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	okay okay here is more: still at the station Angela: thats not so bad! Jinny: What would you do if you found out you have another brother PLUS a sister? Angela: I would.....probably freak out! Jinny: there you go now you know how I feel. C.D.: You should track them down, see if you can meet them. Jinny: All I know is their first names not their last. She's not going to be Exstead if she got married again! Magda: good point their. C.D.: Maybe you could give this to the captain as a case or something. Jinny: then for sure she will think I'm going looney! Magda: we could always...... no never mind. Jinny: What? Magda: well DO you know her OTHER husbands name? Jinny: It DID say something about a Mr. Donald Webber. Magda: there you go. Jinny: but he could be dead. he was older than my mother! I read that he was born 1927. Angela: I don't know what to do. Jinny: you dont have to do anything its my family and I am going to try to crack this case! Angela: fine. Jinny: listen should I tell my father? Magda: I think you should clue him in about this. Jinny: but you know how he is! He will go nuts! Magda: he has to know!! Should I continue? ------------------ Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face? Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

04-22-2001, 06:53 PM	#10
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	Yes!! Keep it going I love it!! And it's not boring!! ------------------ ^^^^^^^^^^^^* "Every day has a little something. Find it!" - Anonymous Allison: Driving up the Eastland gates give me goosebumps. Jo: Really? They give me a rash.

04-22-2001, 07:24 PM	#11
jinny_jo_2001 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 162	Alright heres more: at Jinny's dads house Jinny: Listen Dad I need to talk to you. Jinny's Dad: Listen I'm not in the mood right now! Jinny: this is important! Jinny's Dad: Fine but this better be worth my time! Jinny: its about mom. Jinny's Dad: oh really what about her? Jinny: well she...uh..she Jinny's Dad: spit it oput already! Jinny: she was married and has two kids. Jinny's Dad: Your joking right? (he starts to laugh then sees the look on Jinny's face) Your not? Jinny: no look Dad I found these in Moms old filing cabinet (she takes the wedding plans out of her coat pocket and hands them to him) Jinny's Dad: thats probably why she left! Jinny: I am sorry PLEASE dont tell Kasey or Jon yet okay? (just then Kasey comes in and then Jon after) Jon: tell us what? Jinny: sit down you too Kasey.(says really quickly) MOM is married to a MR. Donald Webber and has two kids bye (she gets up and trys to walk out) Jon: hold it Jinny. what was that? Jinny: you heard me Mom left becuase she was married! Kasey: wow I never knew that about her. Jinny: know we all do I told all of my friends. I am trying to track down their siblings.The boy HAS to be Tod Webber. Kasey: you should look him up in the white pages. Jinny's Dad: how about we do nothing!! Jinny: calm down! Jinny's Dad: I have to get out of here. (he goes into the kitchen) Jinny: I think I AM going to look him up! Should I continue ------------------ Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face? Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??