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all those people were going to do sumthing like this....go right ahead! Any way here's the start of my fanfic
Jinny walked in the door from a hard days work. She sat on the couch and took her jacket off. she leaned back and sighed. Just then there was a knock at the door. "What" Jinny asked with her stubborn additude. Teddy walked in the door. "I wanted to see you?" he questioned, making sure it was a good answer. Jinny smiled and motioned him to come on the couch. "Come here" Jinny continued smiling until Teddy sat on the couch. The minute he did, Jinny jumped on him. The started kissing, and Teddy layed back to get comfortable. Jinny started to unbutton his shirt when the phone rang. "Damit!" She yelled as she rolled of the couch and got the phone. "Ya" She said as she answered it. "What?" She paused and continued to listen "Ya ya I'll be there as soon as I can" She hung up the phone and grabbed her coat. "What?" Teddy asked very worried. He got up and put his arms around her stomach. "My...my mothers parents killed themselves." She said a little surprised. "I have to go down there." "Do you want me to come" Teddy aske worried. "No..The last time i saw them was 15 years ago. Then a year later my mother died." Jinny answered as she walked to the door the best she could with Teddy around her. "Listen, you can stay here for a while, but i got to fly to New York." She said as she opened the door. "New York!" Teddy yelled. "I wont see you for a week" "I love you, but I got to go." she kissed him and left. ------------------ CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours. Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex! Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me. |
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Keep going please!!!!!
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ok Here's some more
Jinny slowly walked up the stairs to her grandparents house. There were police cars outside, and police men inside. She walked in and looked around "Can I help you?" A inspector said as he walked up to Jinny. "I'm inspector Jinny Exstead" She said. Then she looked around. "This is my grandparents house." "Oh, ok. you can look around." The man said as he walked away. Jinny walked into the very bright livingroom. She went over to the banaster, and looked at the pictures. She saw her mother and father's picture, her grandparents picture, then a picture of a 14 year old girl. Jinny looked at it for a while. She had hair about the length of Jinny's, and the same color. Jinny stared at the picture for a while, then picked it up and walked over to the inspector she had talked too before. "Who's this?" Jinny asked showing the man the picture. "Oh, this is their granddaughter" He said pointing to the picture "Jessy. She lives here with them. Her mother is dead and the rest of her family, or your family, lives in San fransico. I think your gandmother said she had 2 brothers and a sister." "Did she mention any names." |
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OMG!!!!!!! KEEP GOING THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! Oh yes Pwease!!!!
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defying gravity
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MOOOOORE PLEEEEEEASE! hehe
------------------ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Luv yaz! ~Kerri~ Pal2125@aol.com Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man! |
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SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOL MOR MOR MORE!
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ok, sorry to cut it short last time, but my cuzin with cancer came over. Anyway here's some more.
"No, but she did mention something about them being cops. And Jessy father was a cop too, but he retired. I think her fathers name is John." "Oh my god!" Jinny said as she kind of fell back. "Where is Jessy?" She asked as she stood back up straight. "She doesn't know about your grandparents yet. She's still in school. We are going to send someone to tell....." He was interupted by Jinny "No! I'll go tell her." Jinny said quickly "Where's the school." "It's down the block. Are you sure." the inspector said un sure about what she was doing. "Ya, I wanna meet my little sister." Jinny said quietly as she walked out the door. At the School There was the girl in the picture. She sitting talking to her frineds when their was an annoucment throught the school "Whould Jessy Exstead please come to the office. There is someone here to see you." Jessy looked confused, but slowly went downstairs. When she got to the office, Jinny was standing there. Jinny looked over, saw Jessy, and almost fell over again. "Are you lookin' for me?" Jessy asked Jinny, who took a few minutes to answer. "Ya, I'm inspector..." She paused. She didnt want Jessy to know that they were sisters yet. "Inspector Rameriez" She said after a long pause. "I'm afraid I have some bad news...your grandparents are dead" Jinny walked closer to Jessy, and just wanted to hug her. "How?" Jessy said, not very sad. "They killed them selves" Jinny said as she walked next to Jessy. "Do you want to talk this over outside?" "Ya, lets get the hell out of here!" Jessy said as she ran out the door. Jinny followed her, and they walked down the street. "No they didn't" Jessy told Jinny as they continued walking. "What?" Jinny asked, very confused. "My grandparents didn't kill themselves." Jessy said, very sure of herslef. "What do you mean?" Jinny asked, now even more confused. "You don't know how my grandparents are! Everyday they go to church. They used to tell me all the time that God would takes us when he wants to take us, not when we want to be takin. They wouldn't kill themselves. They were murdered." Jinny slowed down and looked at Jessy. She almost smiled, but didn't want to look weird smiling, after just hearing what she heard. "You don't seem to upset over this." Jinny said, as they both walked over to a bench and sat down. "Ya well...I lost my mother a long time ago. She died in labor, but I was saved. She was to old to have a child, but she didn't want to kill me. I've never seen my father, and he doesn't eve know about me. I have two brothers and a sister that live near him too. I figured it wasnt long until i lost the rest of my family." Jessy said as she put her head down. ------------------ CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours. Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex! Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me. |
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OMG!! Write more!!! i love it sooo much!
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this is awesome so far, cant wait for more!!!
by the way this is LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815, but i changed my online name and email address, just wanted to let u all know! |
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aaaaaaaaah write more soon! this is grrrrr8! (there go my frosted flakes again-lol)
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ok here's some more:
After a while, Jessy picked her head back up, and stood up. "I'm hungry" She said as she turned around and looked at Jinny. "Lets go grab something a Dino's down the street" She said as she started walking. Jinny stood up and followed her "Dino's?" Jinny asked "Ya, it's a pizza place. You do like pizza, don't you?" "Ya" Jinny said, laughing at Jessy's sarcasim "Lets go" Later, after they had eatin, Jinny took Jessy back home. All the police men were gone, and her grandparents body's had been takin for an autopsy (sp). "So, where you going to stay?" Jinny asked as they went over and sat on the couch. "Here." Jessy said as she put her feet on the coffee table. "I live her, don't I" "Ya, but you need a guardian" Jinny said. "So.." Jessy said, not getting the point "You don't have one" Jinny said sarcasticly "Who are you, and why do you care so much" Jessy said angrerly, changing the subject. "I don't know you, and believe me, I know every cop in New England" "I..I..I don't know" Jinny said questioning herself. "You don't know who you are?" Jessy said sarcasticly. "No! Never mind" Jinny said as she got up. "I'm coming to get you in the morning, and your coming with me." Jinny walked out to her car, without letting Jessy say anything. Jessy just stood near the door, very surprised. When Jinny drove off, Jessy went and sat on the couch. She felt like she new Jinny, and had seen her before. Then she remembered she had. Her grandparents kept every news paper for the year. Jessy went and looked through out the news papers. It was then she saw a picture of Jinny, next to John and Casey, and a picture of Darrel Sunstrem (the man the tried to kill jinny). Jessy read the article, which said: Darrel Sunstrem was arrested last night in San Fransico for attempted murder of Inspector Jinny Exstead. Jinny and her brothers (look to picture at left) who are also cops, caught him in the action, before he could do anything.... Jessy was shocked. Jinny was her sister! Jessy stood up, and walked over to the couch with the news paper. "Thats why she cared so much. But why didn't she tell me?" Jessy said quietly outloud. Jessy just sat there and continued to wonder. Then she picked up a pair of sissors, which were on the table, cut out the picture of Jinny, John, and Casey, and put it in her wallet. The next morning, Jessy was sitting on the front steps when Jinny's rented car drove up. Jessy walked over, and got in the car. "It's Thursday, you know" Jessy said, knowing she was supposed to be in school. "Thanks for the 411" Jinny said as she laughed quietly to herself. Jessy had decided that she would not tell Jinny she knew about them being sisters. She would wait for Jinny to tell her, because she knew that Jinny knew about it. (sorry if that didn't make sense) "So..where are we going?" Jessy asked, looking out the window" "Home" Jinny answered with a smile. ok i g2g i have a boaring dance...o well, hope you like it ------------------ CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours. Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex! Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me. |
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OMG OMG OMG!!!! MOR MOR MORE!
Oh BTW i dont think that NY is in new england....Is it??? I know NJ isnt. |
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OMG!!!! This is beyond awesome!!!! Please post more ASAP!!!!!
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I'm glad you like it. here's some more
"Home?" Jessy questioned as she turned to look at Jinny "What do you mean by home?" "I mean to our house" Jinny said sarcasticly "OUR house? Where exactly is OUR house?" Jessy questioned, having a feeling she was going to San Fransico. "At MY house" Jinny said, mocking Jessy. "I don't want to move to California!!" She yelled, then realized that she wasn't supposed to say that. "How did you know I lived in California?" Jinny questioned nervously. Jessy took out her wallet and showed Jinny the picture of Jinny, John, and Casey. "I dunno...Jinny Exstead" Jessy said madly. Jinny looked at the picture and realized that Jessy knew. "I'm sorry, but I didn't know how to tell you." Jinny said sadly. "You know ..Hey Jessy I'm your sister Jinny...would have been fine." Jessy said, talking with her hands, just like Jinny. Jinny just looked at Jessy, and didn't say anthing. after a while, she finaly spoke up. "Hey Jessy, I'm your sister Jinny." Jinny said, hoping to get a smile out of Jessy. "It's a little late!" Jessy said, looking back out the window. "Why are you so stu..." Jinny paused and realized she was just lik her. "Stuborn" "Ya, well..." Jessy said, still looking out the window. "I don't want to move to California. All my friends are here. My boyfriend is here..my teachers and neighbors are here! Why are you making me move. I don't want to live with dad! I don't even know him." Jessy argued, while Jinny just listened. "First of all..." Jinny started "Your moving because I said so. Second of all your not living with dad, your living with me." Jinny looked over at Jessy, waiting for a response. "What about my stuff?" Jessy asked? "Is there anything you want back at the house?" Jinny said. "No" Jessy said "as long as you buy me clothes...I'll survive." Jessy said, not sounding so mad. "Good, because our plane leaves in two hours" Jinny said as she pulled the car into the rent-a-car place. "You'll like it in Cali" Jinny said, just getting a mad look from Jessy. ------------------ CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours. Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex! Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me. |
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