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AlexzBonner · 04-08-2001, 11:11 PM

Well... Please tell me what you think!

And Again?

Lydia Butcher clutched the phone to her ear and dialed her uncle's number. 'Uncle Teddy? It's Lydia. Mom and Dad were in an accident and they were killed. I'll arrange to fly to San Fransisco to meet you. See you soon.' She hung up.

Jinny Exstead watched as Theodore Bluementhal hung up the phone and sighed. 'What?' she asked him.
'My sister and her husband were killed in an accident. That was my 14-year-old niece, Lydia. I'm next of kin, so guess what I get from my sister's will?'

Theodore had a case at the DA's office, so he sent Jinny, Magda, and C.D. to get Lydia.
C.D. had asked Jinny, 'Do you know what she looks like?'
Jinny had replied, 'Only that she has brown hair and green eyes. Nothing else.'
Magda had kept reassuring Jinny. 'Don't worry. You'll be fine.'

Lydia paced in front of the vending machine in the airport. She had been waiting for about 10 minutes for Uncle Teddy to show up, but so far all she had seen was a Hispanic woman in her early 30's, and tall blonde also early 30's and a brunette about 5'5" who looked extremely nervous. 'God, I'm thirsty,' she thought, but she didn't have any money with her. The brunette and the Hispanic woman approached her. The brunette spoke. 'We're looking for a Lydia Elisabeth Butcher.'
'That's me.'
'I'm Jinny Exstead and this is Magda Ramirez.'
'Where's my uncle?'
'I'll tell you about in the car.'

Chapter 2

At the station, Theodore couldn't keep still. He kept thinking about Lydia. He hadn't seen her since she was five. And then all of the sudden she calls to tell him that his younger sister was killed? He wasn't sure how to handle it. He didn't have much time to ponder it, either. Because, there, in the doorway, was an exact replica of his sister at 14. 'Lydia,' he said.
'Uncle Teddy!' She ran to him and gave him a hug. 'Why weren't you there at the airport?'
'Well, I had a case. And I wanted you to get accquainted with Jinny. See, we live together. Now, you're adding to the family.'
'Yeah, whatever... Um... can we go home? I want to get my stuff organized and everything.'
'Yeah, sure. Jinny, would you take her?'
Lydia held up her hand. 'No, no! I'll wait for your lunch break, Uncle T.' She sat down in his chair. 'So, what do I do now?'
'Um... you get out of my chair and into my car! I'm on lunch.'

Around midnight, Lydia had just finished putting her clothes away. (She hadn't gotten started until 10.) She sat down on her bed to write in her journal.

'Dear Diary,
I guess I'll get used to it here. It's not at all like home. Uncle T hasn't changed much, but his new roommate? I hate her.'

Jinny came into her room. 'Hey, you. What are you doin' up?'
Lydia wasn't coy. 'I don't know. Maybe I was waiting for you and my uncle to go to sleep so I could sneak out of the window, meet a 30-year-old ma, get high on dope, and have sex all night long.'

Should I finish it?

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^~^The Division^~^
T: You're in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?
J: No, you're supposed to hide under the covers with me 'cause it's warmer! Come on!
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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 04-08-2001, 11:28 PM

Yeah,That's real great so far. Keep going! (Talk about forward..lol)

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Magda : "What would you do if a guy didnt call? "
Jinny:"Oh, they always call. They want to know me, they want to be a part of my life. They want to share."
Magda: "But if they didn't? "
Jinny: I would breathe a great big sigh of relief unless of course I liked him then i would just hunt him down and slash his tires.

NancyJoJinny · 04-08-2001, 11:55 PM

Oh that girls a bitch...keep goin.

Me,Myself and I · 04-09-2001, 07:04 AM

YES this is great!!!!!!!!!!

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BA:Roy and Trigger
B:Bingo
BA: And the Catholics
B:Right
BA:And left
B:STOP!
BA:And go
B:Please
BA:And thank you
B:Get out of here
BA:And come again oh I love this game!

Jo's Girl · 04-09-2001, 09:50 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by NancyJoJinny:
Oh that girls a bitch...keep goin.

Keep going!!!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-09-2001, 01:51 PM

Yeah, i love it!!! Keep it up!!!

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Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

KerriBerri687 · 04-09-2001, 02:30 PM

lol thatz funny what she said..hehe well definatly keep it goin!

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Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 04-13-2001, 10:43 PM

It's me, AlexzBonner, back and better than ever! Yeah, anyway, here's some more.

Jinny cleared her throat. 'Well... Lyddie--'
Lydia interrupted. 'It's LYDIA. Only my FAMILY calls me that.'
'All right, LYDIA! I used to be just like you.'
'Tell Uncle Teddy that I want to join a convent.'
'Yeah, I'll do that. Tomorrow you'll start school! Won't that be fun?'
'Yeah! But, wait! I don't have crayons or markers or anything fun like that. Oh! And what about the round tipped siscors? No kid can go to school without those!'
'Maybe I can talk your uncle into putting school off for a few days. Until after your parents' funeral.'
'It's okay. I mind very much. Can I stay home by myself tomorrow?'
'I don't see why not. You're 14, aren't you?'
'Last time I looked at my birth certificate.' Jinny stood up to leave. 'Oh, Jinny?'
She turned around. 'Hmm?'
Lydia smiled. 'Thanks.'
'Don't mention it, kid.' She walked out of the room.
As soon as Lydia was sure that Jinny and Teddy were asleep, she slipped a glass vile out of her black leather backpack. 'I know what I have to do,' she said aloud. 'Only problem is... I don't have needles.' She put the vile back in her bag and went to sleep.

The next morning, Jinny woke Lydia up at 6:30. 'Lydia... get up. You're goin' with you uncle today.' Lydia didn't stir. 'Murder case.' Still nothing. 'Free donuts?' Lydia sat upright.
'Where?' she said.
'In court! Get your butt downstairs.'
As Lydia got out of bed she grabbed the vile and her clothes and went into the bathroom.

The lawyer paced back and forth in front of the witness stand. Finally, he spoke. 'Let me tell you somethin', Bridges, you better have a d**m good alibi to where you were on the night Mrs. Smith was killed.'
Lydia stared at the judge and fingered the vile in her hand. 'This is what I'm gonna do...' she thought. She leaned over and tapped Theodore on the shoulder. 'Uncle T, what's the case?' she whispered.
'See, the plaintiff, Mr. Smith, said that the defendant, Mr. Bridges killed his wife. Nothing big.'
'Muder's not big,' Lydia whispered.
The lawyer said, 'Let's assume that you didn't kill Mrs. Smith for a moment--'
Lydia spoke. Objection, your honor. Leading the witness.'
The judge smiled at Lydia then looked sternly at Theodore. 'Well, ADA, are you gonna say anything?' Teddy shook his head. 'The child's right! Sustained. You'll make a good lawyer one day, kid.'
I g2g!

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-13-2001, 10:51 PM

This is sooo good. i am in suspence about the vile!!! More soon please!!!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 04-14-2001, 08:40 PM

Thanx for your overwhelming support! I'll post more as soon as I'm convinced that you like it.

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-14-2001, 08:44 PM

PLEASSSSE don't torture me!!! i am tring to convince you!!!!!

ssgoalie8 · 04-14-2001, 08:52 PM

yeah this is good you gotta write more soon, please!!!!!!!!!!
-colleen-

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04-08-2001, 11:11 PM	#1
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	And Again? Please tell me if I should finish it! Well... Please tell me what you think! And Again? Lydia Butcher clutched the phone to her ear and dialed her uncle's number. 'Uncle Teddy? It's Lydia. Mom and Dad were in an accident and they were killed. I'll arrange to fly to San Fransisco to meet you. See you soon.' She hung up. Jinny Exstead watched as Theodore Bluementhal hung up the phone and sighed. 'What?' she asked him. 'My sister and her husband were killed in an accident. That was my 14-year-old niece, Lydia. I'm next of kin, so guess what I get from my sister's will?' Theodore had a case at the DA's office, so he sent Jinny, Magda, and C.D. to get Lydia. C.D. had asked Jinny, 'Do you know what she looks like?' Jinny had replied, 'Only that she has brown hair and green eyes. Nothing else.' Magda had kept reassuring Jinny. 'Don't worry. You'll be fine.' Lydia paced in front of the vending machine in the airport. She had been waiting for about 10 minutes for Uncle Teddy to show up, but so far all she had seen was a Hispanic woman in her early 30's, and tall blonde also early 30's and a brunette about 5'5" who looked extremely nervous. 'God, I'm thirsty,' she thought, but she didn't have any money with her. The brunette and the Hispanic woman approached her. The brunette spoke. 'We're looking for a Lydia Elisabeth Butcher.' 'That's me.' 'I'm Jinny Exstead and this is Magda Ramirez.' 'Where's my uncle?' 'I'll tell you about in the car.' Chapter 2 At the station, Theodore couldn't keep still. He kept thinking about Lydia. He hadn't seen her since she was five. And then all of the sudden she calls to tell him that his younger sister was killed? He wasn't sure how to handle it. He didn't have much time to ponder it, either. Because, there, in the doorway, was an exact replica of his sister at 14. 'Lydia,' he said. 'Uncle Teddy!' She ran to him and gave him a hug. 'Why weren't you there at the airport?' 'Well, I had a case. And I wanted you to get accquainted with Jinny. See, we live together. Now, you're adding to the family.' 'Yeah, whatever... Um... can we go home? I want to get my stuff organized and everything.' 'Yeah, sure. Jinny, would you take her?' Lydia held up her hand. 'No, no! I'll wait for your lunch break, Uncle T.' She sat down in his chair. 'So, what do I do now?' 'Um... you get out of my chair and into my car! I'm on lunch.' Around midnight, Lydia had just finished putting her clothes away. (She hadn't gotten started until 10.) She sat down on her bed to write in her journal. 'Dear Diary, I guess I'll get used to it here. It's not at all like home. Uncle T hasn't changed much, but his new roommate? I hate her.' Jinny came into her room. 'Hey, you. What are you doin' up?' Lydia wasn't coy. 'I don't know. Maybe I was waiting for you and my uncle to go to sleep so I could sneak out of the window, meet a 30-year-old ma, get high on dope, and have sex all night long.' Should I finish it? ------------------ ^~^The Division^~^ T: You're in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet? J: No, you're supposed to hide under the covers with me 'cause it's warmer! Come on! †º† ~~<@ Kenzie @>~~ †º†

04-08-2001, 11:28 PM	#2
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Yeah,That's real great so far. Keep going! (Talk about forward..lol) ------------------ Magda : "What would you do if a guy didnt call? " Jinny:"Oh, they always call. They want to know me, they want to be a part of my life. They want to share." Magda: "But if they didn't? " Jinny: I would breathe a great big sigh of relief unless of course I liked him then i would just hunt him down and slash his tires.

04-08-2001, 11:55 PM	#3
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Oh that girls a bitch...keep goin.

04-09-2001, 07:04 AM	#4
Me,Myself and I Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 26, 2001 Location: Worc, MA US Posts: 270	YES this is great!!!!!!!!!! ------------------ B:Beverly Ann let me tell you about Jo and her bike she took it on her first date she polishes it every weekend they're inseperable, like peanut butter and jelly. BA:Roy and Trigger B:Bingo BA: And the Catholics B:Right BA:And left B:STOP! BA:And go B:Please BA:And thank you B:Get out of here BA:And come again oh I love this game!

04-09-2001, 01:51 PM	#6
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Yeah, i love it!!! Keep it up!!! ------------------ aOL SN: luckyme099 yahoo sn: nancyfan8976 email: nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me! Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men. Magda: You...give up sex? No way. Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

04-09-2001, 02:30 PM	#7
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	lol thatz funny what she said..hehe well definatly keep it goin! ------------------ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Luv yaz! ~Kerri~ Pal2125@aol.com Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

04-13-2001, 10:43 PM	#8
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	It's me, AlexzBonner, back and better than ever! Yeah, anyway, here's some more. Jinny cleared her throat. 'Well... Lyddie--' Lydia interrupted. 'It's LYDIA. Only my FAMILY calls me that.' 'All right, LYDIA! I used to be just like you.' 'Tell Uncle Teddy that I want to join a convent.' 'Yeah, I'll do that. Tomorrow you'll start school! Won't that be fun?' 'Yeah! But, wait! I don't have crayons or markers or anything fun like that. Oh! And what about the round tipped siscors? No kid can go to school without those!' 'Maybe I can talk your uncle into putting school off for a few days. Until after your parents' funeral.' 'It's okay. I mind very much. Can I stay home by myself tomorrow?' 'I don't see why not. You're 14, aren't you?' 'Last time I looked at my birth certificate.' Jinny stood up to leave. 'Oh, Jinny?' She turned around. 'Hmm?' Lydia smiled. 'Thanks.' 'Don't mention it, kid.' She walked out of the room. As soon as Lydia was sure that Jinny and Teddy were asleep, she slipped a glass vile out of her black leather backpack. 'I know what I have to do,' she said aloud. 'Only problem is... I don't have needles.' She put the vile back in her bag and went to sleep. The next morning, Jinny woke Lydia up at 6:30. 'Lydia... get up. You're goin' with you uncle today.' Lydia didn't stir. 'Murder case.' Still nothing. 'Free donuts?' Lydia sat upright. 'Where?' she said. 'In court! Get your butt downstairs.' As Lydia got out of bed she grabbed the vile and her clothes and went into the bathroom. The lawyer paced back and forth in front of the witness stand. Finally, he spoke. 'Let me tell you somethin', Bridges, you better have a d**m good alibi to where you were on the night Mrs. Smith was killed.' Lydia stared at the judge and fingered the vile in her hand. 'This is what I'm gonna do...' she thought. She leaned over and tapped Theodore on the shoulder. 'Uncle T, what's the case?' she whispered. 'See, the plaintiff, Mr. Smith, said that the defendant, Mr. Bridges killed his wife. Nothing big.' 'Muder's not big,' Lydia whispered. The lawyer said, 'Let's assume that you didn't kill Mrs. Smith for a moment--' Lydia spoke. Objection, your honor. Leading the witness.' The judge smiled at Lydia then looked sternly at Theodore. 'Well, ADA, are you gonna say anything?' Teddy shook his head. 'The child's right! Sustained. You'll make a good lawyer one day, kid.' I g2g! ------------------ God bless you one and all. ~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~ "Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend." § John 15:13 KJV §

04-13-2001, 10:51 PM	#9
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	This is sooo good. i am in suspence about the vile!!! More soon please!!!

04-14-2001, 08:40 PM	#10
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	Thanx for your overwhelming support! I'll post more as soon as I'm convinced that you like it. ------------------ God bless you one and all. ~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~ "Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend." § John 15:13 KJV §

04-14-2001, 08:44 PM	#11
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	PLEASSSSE don't torture me!!! i am tring to convince you!!!!!

04-14-2001, 08:52 PM	#12
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	yeah this is good you gotta write more soon, please!!!!!!!!!! -colleen- ------------------ jinny: who in the hell are you? ************* JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo