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lil_Miss_actress · 04-09-2001, 06:10 AM

This is my Fanfic about Jinny's sister.. It has alot in common with Polniaczek-Bonner's (Jinny grandparents get killed ect.)

This is just a qoute from it-

Kate: May I help you?

Christine: Uh, I’m looking for Inspector Exstead..

Jinny: (Looks VERY confused) Uh, are you sure?

Christine: (Looks at Jinny like she knows her) Yeah.

Jinny: Why don’t we go out there? (Motions toward the door.) (Jinny and Magda
exchange confused glances.)

((Outside))

Jinny: Umm this may sound odd..But who are you!?

Christine: (Takes deep a breath) I’m your sister..

(Jinny freezes)

Should I post it?

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Teddy: How do you think that makes me feel? Your in danger and I'm soppose to hide in the closet?
Jinny: Well, uh- come hide under the covers with me, its warmer.. Come on!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Just don't go putting me down and then tell me what great friends we are!
Magda: I'm sorry! I didn't to put you down! It won't happen again! That doesn't mean that the conerns I have are not valed Jin!
Jinny: Ya Know what this is my turn!!!
Magda: Ok, alright, what else?
Jinny: Ugh, nothing else that's it.

[This message has been edited by lil_Miss_actress (edited 04-09-2001).]

[This message has been edited by lil_Miss_actress (edited 04-09-2001).]

Me,Myself and I · 04-09-2001, 07:07 AM

POST IT and post it soon kay kuz I hate abandoned fanfictions.

lil_Miss_actress · 04-09-2001, 07:45 AM

OK here's the first part..
((Station))

Jinny: (Comes in) Hey guys!

CD: Hey.

Magda: Hey Jin.

Angela: You look tired?

Jinny: I didn’t get much sleep last night.. I don’t really want to talk about it..

(Everyone nods and goes back to work except for Magda who stares at Jinny)

Jinny: (Sighs)

Magda: Jinny, come here. (Motions Jinny outside of The Division, they both go out)
Anything you want to talk about?

Jinny: My mothers parents, are (Looks down) gone..

Magda: Gone?

Jinny: Dead!

Magda: Oh.. How? who? Where?

Jinny: It was murder.. I think.. It’s still being investigated..

Magda: God, I’m so sorry..

Jinny: I wasn’t that close to them.. It’s just.. Ya know what about he rest of my family? I
mean what if who ever did it, has something aganist, my whole family?

Magda: It’ll be OK..

Jinny: Yeah.. Well we better get back in there..

Magda: Yeah..

((They both go back in))

Kate: Gather ‘round guys.. Busy day!

(A young girl about 13 comes in The Division she has light brown hair, sparkling green
eyes, and she is carrying a backpack.)

Kate: May I help you?

Christine: Uh, I’m looking for Inspector Exstead..

Jinny: (Looks VERY confused) Uh, are you sure?

Christine: (Looks at Jinny like she knows her) Yeah.

Jinny: Why don’t we go out there? (Motions toward the door.) (Jinny and Magda
exchange confused glances.)

((Outside))

Jinny: Umm this may sound odd..But who are you!?

Christine: (Takes deep a breath) I’m your sister..

(Jinny freezes)

Jinny: You must have the wrong person... I don’t have a sister. . I’m old enough to be
your mother..

Christine: (Takes out wallet and takes out a picture
of Jinny at about 3) Is this you?

Jinny: (Looks at it) Oh my god... Yes.. (Still unsure) Whats your name?

Christine: Christine, or Christi..

Jinny: (Looks very shocked) But your dead...

Christine: Uh, I’m standing here ain’t I?

Jinny: My mother.. Umm OUR mother died in birth.. So did her daughter.. Umm
soon-to-be daughter. She was going to name her Christine.

Christine: You need to get your facts straight..

Jinny: (Cuts her off) Grampa.. He called and told me you were dead...

Christine: Oh.. (Not very surprised)

Jinny: You don’t seem very shocked about this at all...

Christine: I’ve known about you my whole life.. I never thought I’d want to see you until
Grama and Grampa were killed..

Jinny: Umm it’s alomost time for my lunch break, if you come in and wait we can go to
lunch.

Christine: OK.

((Christine and Jinny go back inside))

I know its kinda boreing but it's going to get into how Jinny and Christine's grandparents were killed, why Jinny's grandfather told Jinny Christine was dead, and where Christine is going to live.
I'll post more later!~
Jessica

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Teddy: How do you think that makes me feel? Your in danger and I'm soppose to hide in the closet?
Jinny: Well, uh- come hide under the covers with me, its warmer.. Come on!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Just don't go putting me down and then tell me what great friends we are!
Magda: I'm sorry! I didn't to put you down! It won't happen again! That doesn't mean that the conerns I have are not valed Jin!
Jinny: Ya Know what this is my turn!!!
Magda: Ok, alright, what else?
Jinny: Ugh, nothing else that's it.

Jo's Girl · 04-09-2001, 09:53 AM

Good Fan-fic!!!!

KerriBerri687 · 04-09-2001, 10:45 AM

great! post more soon

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-09-2001, 01:55 PM

MORE!!! This is awesome!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 04-10-2001, 05:06 PM

Continue..don't leave us hanging!!!!

lil_Miss_actress · 04-10-2001, 09:58 PM

Sorry it's taking so long I'm doing 3 plays and a student film so I'm going from rehersal to rehersal. I have a feeling I'll be up all night (I slept all day.) so I'll try to work on it, and get somemore posted in the morning. Hope you understand~
Jessica

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Teddy: How do you think that makes me feel? Your in danger and I'm soppose to hide in the closet?
Jinny: Well, uh- come hide under the covers with me, its warmer.. Come on!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Just don't go putting me down and then tell me what great friends we are!
Magda: I'm sorry! I didn't to put you down! It won't happen again! That doesn't mean that the conerns I have are not valed Jin!
Jinny: Ya Know what this is my turn!!!
Magda: Ok, alright, what else?
Jinny: Ugh, nothing else that's it.

04-09-2001, 06:10 AM	#1
lil_Miss_actress Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2001 Location: Boyton Beach FL usa Posts: 72	Preview for: Sisters? (I know FOL title) This is my Fanfic about Jinny's sister.. It has alot in common with Polniaczek-Bonner's (Jinny grandparents get killed ect.) This is just a qoute from it- Kate: May I help you? Christine: Uh, I’m looking for Inspector Exstead.. Jinny: (Looks VERY confused) Uh, are you sure? Christine: (Looks at Jinny like she knows her) Yeah. Jinny: Why don’t we go out there? (Motions toward the door.) (Jinny and Magda exchange confused glances.) ((Outside)) Jinny: Umm this may sound odd..But who are you!? Christine: (Takes deep a breath) I’m your sister.. (Jinny freezes) Should I post it? ------------------ Teddy: How do you think that makes me feel? Your in danger and I'm soppose to hide in the closet? Jinny: Well, uh- come hide under the covers with me, its warmer.. Come on! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Just don't go putting me down and then tell me what great friends we are! Magda: I'm sorry! I didn't to put you down! It won't happen again! That doesn't mean that the conerns I have are not valed Jin! Jinny: Ya Know what this is my turn!!! Magda: Ok, alright, what else? Jinny: Ugh, nothing else that's it. [This message has been edited by lil_Miss_actress (edited 04-09-2001).] [This message has been edited by lil_Miss_actress (edited 04-09-2001).]

04-09-2001, 07:07 AM	#2
Me,Myself and I Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 26, 2001 Location: Worc, MA US Posts: 270	POST IT and post it soon kay kuz I hate abandoned fanfictions.

04-09-2001, 07:45 AM	#3
lil_Miss_actress Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2001 Location: Boyton Beach FL usa Posts: 72	OK here's the first part.. ((Station)) Jinny: (Comes in) Hey guys! CD: Hey. Magda: Hey Jin. Angela: You look tired? Jinny: I didn’t get much sleep last night.. I don’t really want to talk about it.. (Everyone nods and goes back to work except for Magda who stares at Jinny) Jinny: (Sighs) Magda: Jinny, come here. (Motions Jinny outside of The Division, they both go out) Anything you want to talk about? Jinny: My mothers parents, are (Looks down) gone.. Magda: Gone? Jinny: Dead! Magda: Oh.. How? who? Where? Jinny: It was murder.. I think.. It’s still being investigated.. Magda: God, I’m so sorry.. Jinny: I wasn’t that close to them.. It’s just.. Ya know what about he rest of my family? I mean what if who ever did it, has something aganist, my whole family? Magda: It’ll be OK.. Jinny: Yeah.. Well we better get back in there.. Magda: Yeah.. ((They both go back in)) Kate: Gather ‘round guys.. Busy day! (A young girl about 13 comes in The Division she has light brown hair, sparkling green eyes, and she is carrying a backpack.) Kate: May I help you? Christine: Uh, I’m looking for Inspector Exstead.. Jinny: (Looks VERY confused) Uh, are you sure? Christine: (Looks at Jinny like she knows her) Yeah. Jinny: Why don’t we go out there? (Motions toward the door.) (Jinny and Magda exchange confused glances.) ((Outside)) Jinny: Umm this may sound odd..But who are you!? Christine: (Takes deep a breath) I’m your sister.. (Jinny freezes) Jinny: You must have the wrong person... I don’t have a sister. . I’m old enough to be your mother.. Christine: (Takes out wallet and takes out a picture of Jinny at about 3) Is this you? Jinny: (Looks at it) Oh my god... Yes.. (Still unsure) Whats your name? Christine: Christine, or Christi.. Jinny: (Looks very shocked) But your dead... Christine: Uh, I’m standing here ain’t I? Jinny: My mother.. Umm OUR mother died in birth.. So did her daughter.. Umm soon-to-be daughter. She was going to name her Christine. Christine: You need to get your facts straight.. Jinny: (Cuts her off) Grampa.. He called and told me you were dead... Christine: Oh.. (Not very surprised) Jinny: You don’t seem very shocked about this at all... Christine: I’ve known about you my whole life.. I never thought I’d want to see you until Grama and Grampa were killed.. Jinny: Umm it’s alomost time for my lunch break, if you come in and wait we can go to lunch. Christine: OK. ((Christine and Jinny go back inside)) I know its kinda boreing but it's going to get into how Jinny and Christine's grandparents were killed, why Jinny's grandfather told Jinny Christine was dead, and where Christine is going to live. I'll post more later!~ Jessica ------------------ Teddy: How do you think that makes me feel? Your in danger and I'm soppose to hide in the closet? Jinny: Well, uh- come hide under the covers with me, its warmer.. Come on! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Just don't go putting me down and then tell me what great friends we are! Magda: I'm sorry! I didn't to put you down! It won't happen again! That doesn't mean that the conerns I have are not valed Jin! Jinny: Ya Know what this is my turn!!! Magda: Ok, alright, what else? Jinny: Ugh, nothing else that's it.

04-09-2001, 09:53 AM	#4
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	Good Fan-fic!!!!

04-09-2001, 10:45 AM	#5
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	great! post more soon

04-09-2001, 01:55 PM	#6
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	MORE!!! This is awesome!!! ------------------ aOL SN: luckyme099 yahoo sn: nancyfan8976 email: nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me! Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men. Magda: You...give up sex? No way. Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

04-10-2001, 05:06 PM	#7
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Continue..don't leave us hanging!!!!

04-10-2001, 09:58 PM	#8
lil_Miss_actress Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2001 Location: Boyton Beach FL usa Posts: 72	Sorry it's taking so long I'm doing 3 plays and a student film so I'm going from rehersal to rehersal. I have a feeling I'll be up all night (I slept all day.) so I'll try to work on it, and get somemore posted in the morning. Hope you understand~ Jessica ------------------ Teddy: How do you think that makes me feel? Your in danger and I'm soppose to hide in the closet? Jinny: Well, uh- come hide under the covers with me, its warmer.. Come on! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Just don't go putting me down and then tell me what great friends we are! Magda: I'm sorry! I didn't to put you down! It won't happen again! That doesn't mean that the conerns I have are not valed Jin! Jinny: Ya Know what this is my turn!!! Magda: Ok, alright, what else? Jinny: Ugh, nothing else that's it.