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BlairW_4 · 02-13-2001, 06:25 PM

((A freeway))
(Jinny is on a police chase chasing two drunk drivers who are both in the same car.)
J: (Going over the speed limit very fast) You drunks are gonna regreat this entire case after I get ya in the slammer.
((The drunk driver's car))
Drunk1: (Everything is blurry and he can't see very well)
Drunk2: (Not as drunk, but still cant see correcly) Ya think we gunna be caught?
Drunk1: Uh..wha?? Nah....
((Jinny's car))
J: Alright that's it..I just about had it with ya drunks. (Speeds as fast as she could)
(The drunk's car sworves on the rode, going from one side of the lane to another)
(Jinny's car catches up to the drunks car)
(The drunks car, unaware that Jinny's car is right next to them sworves right, smashing into Jinny's car. The windows and front sheilds shatter and Jinny's car flips over onto its back. The drunks car goes in the oppostie direction smashing into a tree)
((The hospital))
K: (Runs into it and sees C.D., Angela and Madga in the waiting room) What happened?
C: (Gets up) She was in a crash. During a chase with two drunks.
A: There still isn't any news about how she is.
K: I sure hope she'll be alright. (Sits down)
(The Docter comes out)
C: (Gets up) Any news??
DR: Yes, there is.
K: What is it??
DR: Well..the crash was really bad. Jinny is suffering from a broken arm, leg, and trauma.
M: (Gulps) And...
DR: Currently she is in a coma.
K: (Looks at Madga)
M: (Looks at C.D.)
C: (Gulps)
DR: That's all the news for now. (Leaves)

Sorry guys -- but I gotta go!

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 · 02-13-2001, 07:20 PM

great!!!!!!!!!!!!

80skid · 02-13-2001, 07:25 PM

keep it going pleeeeease!

DivisionFan_Jinny · 02-17-2001, 09:08 PM

keep it going! it's good so far!

BlairW_4 · 02-18-2001, 09:21 PM

Guys I am posting some today..so you will get more soon.

[This message has been edited by BlairW_4 (edited 02-18-2001).]

BlairW_4 · 02-18-2001, 09:21 PM

M: I hope she'll be okay...
K: We all do...
M: ..What if she doesn't make it?
C: What do you mean?
M: What if she dies??
A: Madga..she isn't gonna die.
M: But what if she DOES die Angela?
A: She is not going to die!!!!
K: Well..I hope not...
A: She isn't gonna die!!!
C: (Yells) ANGELA WILL YOU SHUT UP AND STOP ACTING LIKE YOU KNOW EVERYTHING?!?! YOU DON'T KNOW EVERYTHING! NOBODY KNOWS IF JINNY IS GONNA DIE EXCEPT GOD! SO STOP MAKING CONCLUSIONS ALRIGHT?!
A: OH SHUT UP CD!!!
C: NO!! IF YOUR GOING TO KEEP ACTING LIKE YOU KNOW EVERYTHING THEN LEAVE!
K: (Yells) THIS IS NOT THE TIME TO BE SCREAMING YOUR LUNGS OUT AT EACH OTHER! (Calms down) Yelling is not going to help get us through this tough time!
M: I just wanna kill the drunk drivers who did this to her...
(All of the sudden the doctor comes out again)
C: More news??
DR: (Nods head and sits down on the seats)
K: (Long pause) It isn't good is it??
DR: (Puts head and brings it up, as tears form) No.

Guys I gotta go..sorry!! Do you like it??

80skid · 02-20-2001, 07:16 PM

keep it going!! it's great sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo far!

02-20-2001, 11:42 PM

Awwwwwwwwwwww. this is so sad(sniff, sniff).It's so great. kepp up the good work

J Polniaczek · 02-26-2001, 05:50 PM

This is great! I can't wait to read more!

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Blair: I can't believe this! My parents are spending a fortune so I can get frostbite!
Nat: It's not that bad.
Blair: Maybe not to you, but a Warner is like a delicate souffle.
Jo: Yeah, light and empty.

Captain: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once. It didn't make it.

BlairW_1 · 02-27-2001, 06:56 PM

Eeeekkk!!!!! I have to have more!!!! Must... go... on... Need more... fanfic!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

02-28-2001, 09:11 PM

Excellent! Write more!

Polniaczek-Bonner · 03-01-2001, 05:46 PM

u gotta rite more, thats really good!!!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-02-2001, 04:37 PM

great!!! cant wait to find out what happens next....so write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me!
*~Katie~*

ssgoalie8 · 03-18-2001, 01:23 AM

hey c'mon, don't leave me hanging
-colleen-

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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8

BlairandJo · 03-18-2001, 03:51 PM

What happens next post more soon please!!!!!!!!!

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The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:Can you keep it down over there I'm tring to watch this.
J:Take a hike!!!!

02-13-2001, 06:25 PM	#1
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	Wrecked Soul (A New Fan Fiction) ((A freeway)) (Jinny is on a police chase chasing two drunk drivers who are both in the same car.) J: (Going over the speed limit very fast) You drunks are gonna regreat this entire case after I get ya in the slammer. ((The drunk driver's car)) Drunk1: (Everything is blurry and he can't see very well) Drunk2: (Not as drunk, but still cant see correcly) Ya think we gunna be caught? Drunk1: Uh..wha?? Nah.... ((Jinny's car)) J: Alright that's it..I just about had it with ya drunks. (Speeds as fast as she could) (The drunk's car sworves on the rode, going from one side of the lane to another) (Jinny's car catches up to the drunks car) (The drunks car, unaware that Jinny's car is right next to them sworves right, smashing into Jinny's car. The windows and front sheilds shatter and Jinny's car flips over onto its back. The drunks car goes in the oppostie direction smashing into a tree) ((The hospital)) K: (Runs into it and sees C.D., Angela and Madga in the waiting room) What happened? C: (Gets up) She was in a crash. During a chase with two drunks. A: There still isn't any news about how she is. K: I sure hope she'll be alright. (Sits down) (The Docter comes out) C: (Gets up) Any news?? DR: Yes, there is. K: What is it?? DR: Well..the crash was really bad. Jinny is suffering from a broken arm, leg, and trauma. M: (Gulps) And... DR: Currently she is in a coma. K: (Looks at Madga) M: (Looks at C.D.) C: (Gulps) DR: That's all the news for now. (Leaves) Sorry guys -- but I gotta go!

02-20-2001, 11:42 PM	#8
ILuvJo&Blair Guest Posts: n/a	Awwwwwwwwwwww. this is so sad(sniff, sniff).It's so great. kepp up the good work
ILuvJo&Blair Guest Posts: n/a

02-28-2001, 09:11 PM	#11
Jo (thaz my real name) Guest Posts: n/a	Excellent! Write more!
Jo (thaz my real name) Guest Posts: n/a

02-13-2001, 07:20 PM	#2
Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 174	great!!!!!!!!!!!!

02-13-2001, 07:25 PM	#3
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	keep it going pleeeeease!

02-17-2001, 09:08 PM	#4
DivisionFan_Jinny Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 20, 2001 Location: Bristol, CT (Home of the ESPN headquarters!) Posts: 69	keep it going! it's good so far!

02-18-2001, 09:21 PM	#5
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	Guys I am posting some today..so you will get more soon. [This message has been edited by BlairW_4 (edited 02-18-2001).]

02-20-2001, 07:16 PM	#7
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	keep it going!! it's great sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo far!

02-26-2001, 05:50 PM	#9
J Polniaczek Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Location: Peekskill, NY, U.S.A. Posts: 120	This is great! I can't wait to read more! ------------------ Blair: I can't believe this! My parents are spending a fortune so I can get frostbite! Nat: It's not that bad. Blair: Maybe not to you, but a Warner is like a delicate souffle. Jo: Yeah, light and empty. Captain: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny? Jinny: I had a plant once. It didn't make it.

02-27-2001, 06:56 PM	#10
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Eeeekkk!!!!! I have to have more!!!! Must... go... on... Need more... fanfic! ------------------ "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." ~Danielle~ Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

03-01-2001, 05:46 PM	#12
Polniaczek-Bonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 07, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 265	u gotta rite more, thats really good!!!

03-02-2001, 04:37 PM	#13
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	great!!! cant wait to find out what happens next....so write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ------------------ Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me! ~Katie~

03-18-2001, 01:23 AM	#14
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	hey c'mon, don't leave me hanging -colleen- ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! ************* J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8

03-18-2001, 03:51 PM	#15
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	What happens next post more soon please!!!!!!!!! ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Facts Of Life Rules!! ************************* N:I can't belive it! J:Well you did'nt have to yell! N:Well I was mad!!! J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!! B:Can you keep it down over there I'm tring to watch this. J:Take a hike!!!!